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Old November 25th, 2009 (1:02 PM). Edited November 25th, 2009 by FinalEclipse.
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    This is my new game Pokemon Kanto Capers!

    Intro:
    I am ~Divine~. I used to be a hacker but moved to game development recently. Today I present to you my first game, Pokemon Kanto Capers.

    Story:
    4 years ago, Red was defeated by Johto champion, Jimmy. He returned home to find he had a little brother now, who was born not long after he became Kanto champion. 3 years later his brother begins his journey, with one main goal. To find his big brother. You live in a separate house brother as you need more than 1 room. Go to Professor Oak, and get a Pokemon. Suddenly, Prof. Rowan is there as well. He gives you the choice of either of the Sinnoh starters. Oak says you may have a Kanto Starter if you become the champion.

    During your journey, you come across Team Galantica, a devastatingly evil organization that aims for world domination. With help from Team Rocket, they plan to find Red. In the wake of a dominated world, your brother comes out of hiding, ready to take down the Galantica Boss, Arctic. With his help you destroy Team Galantica and it is time for you to face the Elite 4. After becoming champion, travel to the Johto Region and try to become the champion there, with Johto's upgraded Elite 4!

    More challenges await you as Team Glantica return. This time they have their eyes on destroying you after what happened last time in Kanto. With Red off in Sinnoh, you are all alone. Is anything going to save you? Its up to your skills as a trainer to defeat and destroy Arctic once and for all and save the world from a deadly fate, one of destroyal and domination!

    But what comes after your adventures through the two regions? Another region of course! Go through my custom region Fuuba, where you meet Riku Wikabower, the greatest trainer to have ever lived after you finish your Fuuba journey head to Digi City, a digital world where anything is possible and finish your journey off.

    (I know this will take a very long time, but the game will be released in demos, then each region will be released in parts. If anyone is willing to help I would appreciate it.)

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    A spriter with experience in RPG Maker XP. (I need custom heroes and Pokemon)
    (Any help is gladly apprecitated.)

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    Old November 25th, 2009 (1:10 PM).
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      Wow, this game looks...horrible. You need to improve on some things.

      1) The maps. Take a look at the actual FRLG Pallet Town, then look at yours.
      2) The story. It's kind of weak, and doesn't fit in with the actual Pokemon Storyline.
      3) Graphics. If you like FRLG graphics, then keep them. But make them work. Don't use the default Player Character from PE. Use some other custom character.

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      Old November 25th, 2009 (10:06 PM).
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        thats why i need a spriter.
        im really bad at frames and crap like that

        thanks for your crticism though its gonna help me out

        id just like to ask. why doesnt it fit in with the real pokemon storyline.
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        Old November 25th, 2009 (11:01 PM).
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          Here's for constuctive crit:

          Wrong forum, bro. This either belongs in Plot ideas, or in the Games Showcase.

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          Old November 26th, 2009 (12:12 AM).
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            Well its good apart from one thing gets me, his little brother is 7 when he leaves on his journey, isn't that a little young?
            Apart from that nice work

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            Old November 26th, 2009 (12:32 AM). Edited November 26th, 2009 by FinalEclipse.
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              no his brother is 10 its 4 years since red lost to jimmy and he became champion 3 years before that.

              then the story takes place 3 years ofter the 4 years

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              Old November 26th, 2009 (8:21 AM).
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                Ah right, guess i didnt read properly then

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                Old November 26th, 2009 (11:17 PM).
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                  could a mod please move this to the appropriate fourm?

                  btw the game is currently in the stage of doing pallet town events, and a dependant event system is included

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                  Old December 11th, 2009 (4:25 PM).
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                    Quote:
                    Originally Posted by VarietyVidsnet View Post
                    Wow, this game looks...horrible. You need to improve on some things.

                    1) The maps. Take a look at the actual FRLG Pallet Town, then look at yours.
                    2) The story. It's kind of weak, and doesn't fit in with the actual Pokemon Storyline.
                    3) Graphics. If you like FRLG graphics, then keep them. But make them work. Don't use the default Player Character from PE. Use some other custom character.

                    im am now using curts region starter kit so i dont have to worry any longer about bad maps

                    credit to curt for his starter kit

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