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Old November 4th, 2004 (5:08 PM).
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    Well I've always meant to do this, but it's been taking a while. Anyway, essentially the players should exercise their brainsin things other than just building decks and playing cards: design your own cards! Remember, people may be rating the cards and criticizing the cards from their own opinions, and quite frankly I'll be checking for overly brokenness (no matter how much you argue, this is the most common mistake among rookie card desginers, it's a habit to break out of).

    All cards need a layout, and we usually follow the same layout to remain consistent. Here are the layouts for the cards:

    For YGO:

    (Name of Card)
    (Card Type: ie. trap, spell, continuous trap, etc.)
    (Level/Type/Attribute)
    (Effects)
    (ATK/DEF)
    (Rarity)

    The above layout works for all types of YGO cards, but you apply level/type/attribute and ATK/DEF for monsters only.

    Example Effect monster:

    Undine
    Monster
    4/Aqua/Water
    During your standby phase, you may gain 1000 life if Undine is on the field.
    200/1500
    Rare

    For Duel Masters:

    (Name of Card) (cost #) (Colour/element of card)
    (Card Type: i.e. creature, spell, etc.) (Sub type for creatures: i.e. Elf, etc.)
    (Effects)
    (Flavour Text)
    (Power: i.e. 4000)
    (Rarity)

    Example:

    Giant Worm 8 Darkness/Black
    Creature - parasite worm
    Whenever Giant Worm attacks, the defending player discards 2 cards.
    "Nobody ever sees this and walk out sane." - Jack
    5000
    Rare

    For Magic:

    (Name of Card) (Cost: we use WGUBRfor the colour symbols for white, green, blue, black, red)
    (Card type: i.e. Sorcery, creature) (Card sub-type: i.e. elf, arcane, etc.)
    (Effects)
    (Flavour Text)
    (POW/TOUGH)
    (Rarity)

    *note, from the casting cost, we automatically know the card's colour.

    Example card:

    Lobelia, Angel of Paradise 3WWW
    Legendary Creature - Angel
    Flying, Protection from all colours
    "Perfection of Paradise."
    4/4
    Rare
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    Old November 4th, 2004 (7:34 PM).
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      Cheesinator of the Cheeses that mice likes to eat
      1 colorless
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      20/20
      when Cheesinator of the Cheeses that mice likes to eat comes into play you lose 20 life.
      [I]"Gasp" said Larry as he munched on his cheese
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      Old November 4th, 2004 (8:31 PM).
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      oh no...more cheeses XD

      Inspired by legacy weapon:

      Legacy Weapon: Final Blow 15
      Legendary Artifact
      WWUUBBRRGG: Remove all permanents from the game
      If Legacy Weapon: Final Blow is put into a graveyard from anywhere, you may reveal it and shuffle it into your library
      "Give them the final blow, leave none standing" - Gerrard Capashen
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      Old November 4th, 2004 (9:06 PM). Edited November 4th, 2004 by MiNuN*.
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        YGO

        Spell Card [EQ]
        Secret Foil
        Estreledge
        This card can only be equipped to Warrior or Beast-Warrior monsters. The equipped monster increases its ATK by 2100, and decreases its defence by 1500. If This card gets destroyed, the equiped monster gets destroyed.

        Trap Card [CON]
        Secret Foil
        Materia Blade
        This allows you to equip Ultima Sword to a Warrior-type Monster.

        Spell Card [EQ]
        Ultra Rare
        Ultima Sword
        This card can only be activated once Materia Blade is active on the field, if Materia Blade gets destroyed, so does Ultima Sword.
        This card cannot be negated once it is activated. This can only be equipped to a Warrior-type monster on your side of the field. Increase its ATK by 1500. You choose what trap, magic or effect can be used on the equipped monster. The equipped monster cannot attack your opponent's life points directly.

        Trap Card [CON]
        Ultra Rare
        Farcry Apocalypse
        Pay 1000 life points. Negate the effect of face-up effect monsters on your opponent's side of the field. All monsters on the field loses 200 ATK and DEF points each Standby Phase. When this card is destroyed, return the ATK and DEF on your side of the field to the original value.

        Trap Card [NOR]
        Super Rare
        Timeless Trap Hole
        You can only activate this card when your opponent Normal Summons (Including Flip & Tribute summon) or Ritual Summons a monster that is 4 star or higher on the field and has another monster (regardless of position) on his/her side of the field. Return the summoned monster to your opponent's hand and destroy another monster on your opponent's side of the field. (by your opponent's choice)

        Effect Monster
        None
        Guilt - Legion of the Sword LV 1
        Warrior
        Level: 3
        ATK: 1500
        DEF: 1300
        EFFECT:
        This card can attack twice in a turn. Whenever an equip card is played, equip to this card, if it doesn't fit, destroy the equip card.

        Effect Monster
        Rare
        Guilt - Legion of the Sword LV 2
        Warrior
        Level: 5
        ATK: 2000
        DEF: 1600
        EFFECT:
        This card can only be Special Summoned by removing one Guilt - Legion of the Sword LV 1 from play. This card can attack twice in a turn. Whenever an equip is played, equip it to this card, if it doesn't fit, destroy the equip card. Increase the DEF of this card by 500 when it is attacked in defence position.

        Effect Monster
        Super Rare
        Guilt - Legion of the Sword LV 5
        Warrior
        Level: 7
        ATK: 2700
        DEF: 2000
        EFFECT:
        This card can only be Special Summoned by removing one Guilt - Legion of the Sword LV 2 from play. When this card destroys a monster on your opponent's side of the field and your opponent still has more monsters, this can continue to attack. If all of your opponent's monsters are face-down, this may attack life poitns directly. Increase the DEF of this card by 700 when it is attacked in defence position. Whenever an equip card is played, equip to this card, if it doesn't fit, destroy the equip card.


        Effect Monster
        Ultra Rare
        Guilt - Legion of the Sword LV 10
        Warrior
        Level: 9
        ATK: 3600
        DEF: 2900
        EFFECT:
        This card can only be Special Summoned by removing one Guilt - Legion of the Sword LV 5 and another level 7 or higher Warrior-type monster from play. This card can keep attack your opponent in one turn until it attacks his/her life points directly. If all of your opponent's monsters are face-down, this may attack life points directly. increase the DEF of this card by 1000 each time its attacked in defence position. Whenever an equip card is played, equip to this card, if it doesn't fit, destroy the equip card. When this card is destroyed as a sresult of battle, discard 5 cards from your hand. If you don't have 5 cards in your hand, pay 5000 life points to put this back on the field.

        Effect monster
        None
        Malice - Legion of the Arrow LV1
        Sea Serpent
        Level: 3
        ATK: 800
        DEF: 1450
        EFFECT:
        This card can attack your opponent's life points directly. This card cannot be equipped.

        Effect Monster
        Rare
        Malice - Legion of the Arriow LV 3
        Sea Serpent
        Level: 5
        ATK: 1100
        DEF: 1900
        EFFECT:
        This card can only be special summoned by removing one Malice - Legion of the Arrow LV1 from play. This card can attack your opponent's life points directly. This card cannot be equipped.

        Effect monster
        Super Rare
        Malice - Legion of the Arrow LV 8
        Sea Serpent
        Level: 7
        ATK: 1500
        DEF: 2400
        EFFECT:
        This card can only be special summoned by removing one Malice - Legion of the Arrow LV3 from play. This card can attack your opponent's lfie points directly. This card cannot be equipped. Whenever this inflicts battle damage to your opponent, half of the battle damage is inflicted to your opponent's life points. When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, it is immediately put in defense position.

        Effect Monster
        Ultra Rare
        Malice - Legion of the Arrow LV 15
        Sea Serpent
        Level: 9
        ATK: 2300
        DEF: 3450
        EFFECT:
        This card can only be special summoned by removing one Malice - Legion of the Arrow LV8 and another level 7 or more sea serpent-type monster from play. This card cannot be equipped. This card gains 100 ATK and DEF points when you inflict battle damage to your opponent. When This card is destroyed, discard 2 cards from your hand.


        Theres waAYYYAYAYAYQAYAYAYWQERYSARA!!!~!~SHIFT+1``1!!@# more..
        But i'll post it later.
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        Old November 5th, 2004 (9:44 AM). Edited November 5th, 2004 by Yamichi.
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          I've got a few! n_n

          Green-Eyes White Dragon
          Fusion/Effect Monster
          Lvl. 9/Dragon/LIGHT
          FUSION: Blue-Eyes White Dragon + Dragon Sorceror
          EFFECT: During your Main Phase, you may return this card to your fusion deck to summon 'White Magician' from your Fusion Deck. (This can only be used once per turn). In addition, when a Trap Card is activated, you may negate and destroy that trap card.
          ATK 3200/DEF 2600
          Ultra Rare

          White Magician
          Fusion/Effect Monster
          Lvl. 9/Spellcaster/LIGHT
          FUSION: Dragon Sorceror + Dark Magician
          EFFECT: During your Main Phase, you may return this card to your fusion deck to summon 'Green-Eyes White Dragon' from your Fusion Deck. (This can only be used once per turn). In addition, when a Spell Card is activated, you may negate and destroy that spell card.
          ATK 3200/DEF 2600
          Ultra Rare

          Dragon Sorceror
          Effect Monster
          Lvl. 6/Spellcaster/LIGHT
          EFFECT: Once per turn, during your standby phase, you may place or remove one Spell Counter on this card (max. 1). If this card has 1 Spell Counter on it, treat this card as a Dragon sub-type. If this card is a Dragon sub-type, increase it's ATK by 400, decrease it's DEF by 400.
          ATK 2000/DEF 1600
          Rare

          Legendary Dragon Hakuryu
          Fusion/Effect Monster
          Lvl. 12/Dragon/LIGHT
          FUSION: Green-Eyes White Dragon + White Magician
          EFFECT: You use "Ancient Prophecy", not "Polymerization", to Special Summon this card from your Fusion Deck. At the End Phase of the turn this monster was involved in Battle, remove this card from play, return the above monsters to your Fusion Deck and Special Summon "Dragon Sorceror" from your hand, deck or Graveyard.
          ATK 5000/DEF 5000
          Secret Rare

          Ancient Prophecy
          Spell (Normal)
          You may use this card to Special Summon a Fusion Monster with 10 or more Level Stars to your side of the field by tributing the correct Fusion-Material Monsters. You may pay 500 Life Points to make the ATK of that card equal to the combined ATK of the Fusion-Material Monsters used to summon it until your next Standby Phase.
          Rare

          What do you think? I kinda need to work on names huh?

          EDIT: Just for a little fun, I done 2 fun-cards based on Shaman King.

          Yoh Asakura
          Normal Monster
          Lvl. 3/Spellcaster/LIGHT
          As a shaman, he can merge with spirits and work together with them to reach a goal.
          ATK 1300/DEF 800
          Common

          Amidamaru
          Effect (Union) Monster
          Lvl. 9/Warrior/LIGHT
          Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to your "Yoh Asakura" as an Equip Spell Card, OR change it back to a monster in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster's ATK/DEF is increased by 2000. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the monster this card is equipped to is destroyed in battle, this card is destroyed instead.)
          ATK 2700/DEF 2400
          Ultra Rare
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          Old November 5th, 2004 (4:44 PM).
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            Dude Where's My Cheese?
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            Pay 7 life: you may choose to whack your opponent 7 times on the head and than make him get you some cheese.
            errata:you pay for the cheese
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            Old November 6th, 2004 (10:32 PM).
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              Cheese... Why not Ham? XD

              Duelmasters
              NOTE: Some of my cards may somewhat/somehow relate to some video games.
              Sieg, Dark Knight of the Gylphs
              Dark Lord
              Cost: 6
              Element: Darkness
              Creature
              > Double Breaker (This creature breaks 2 shields)
              > Whenever this creature attacks, choose one of the cards in your hand and discard it to the discard pile.
              > Whenever this card is blocked by a Blocker and this card loses the battle. All other creatures you summon must attack the Blocker.
              6000

              Victor Delacroix, Death Messenger
              Dark Lord
              Cost: 8
              Element: Darkness
              Creature
              > Whenever this card faces 'Sieg, Dark Knight of the Gylphs' in battle, increase this cards attack by 4000 on that turn.
              > Once in a turn, you may take one of your opponent's mana (in range of 1-4 mana count) and put it as your mana.
              4000

              Thanatos, Ultimate Legion
              Demon Command
              Cost: 8
              Element: Darkness
              Creature
              > When attacked, this cards attack increases by 2000 on that turn.
              > Double Breaker (This creature breaks 2 shields)
              10000

              Ham Warrior
              Guardian
              Cost: 4
              Element: Light
              Creature
              > This card cant be blocked.
              > This card can attack when untapped.
              2000
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              Old November 7th, 2004 (10:05 AM).
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                Let's look at some of the common rookie mistakes that I've posted on the column and is shown here:

                Minun: I don't know, I personally think YGO has less space for effects text than Duel Master and Magic (and pokemon), so the average length of the effects text is shorter. Fir you'd be saying stuff about Black Luster Soldier and the like that has 4 font that crams every single bit of info into the tiny little box: does it really look that good?

                Quote:
                > Whenever this card faces 'Sieg, Dark Knight of the Gylphs' in battle, increase this cards attack by 4000 on that turn.
                This is what we call "add-on" or "random hosing" (hosing means essentially being really good against something). Generally we like to avoid this all together unless it's a REALLY big hoser (i.e. colour/element hoser).

                O, and Ham warrior has a weird text that needs some clearing up on.

                Overall, it's a very good start and I'd like to see some more stuff from you.

                Yamichi: Excellent effort, I did notice that you can most likely shorten your wording here and there to make your cards sharper and more concise. Aside from the long wording issues, I don't seem to see may blindingly horrific problems (I do know the probability of getting the combo itself out, so I let it off some slack).

                Digivirus (whoa, cool name if you shorten it): The Legacy Weapon EH. lol I don't thinkg mounting up 25 mana is going to be easy, and with the mana requirements too for its activation. I have a concern of it being too...costly and nobody will even take a look at it, tho.

                KLS: No...comment (aka stupid unglued cards. lol).

                Okay, here's another card of mine for magique: the gathering

                Seascraper 3UU
                Creature - Merfolk
                Seascraper is unblockable
                3/3
                Uncommon

                It's an interesting setup, and I'm debating on whether it should be shockable or not. This is the "not" version, the other would be 3/2. I've tried testing it in this format, and I think the power level might be a little high (blue standards for creatures). Further testing might be required.
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                Old November 8th, 2004 (1:19 AM).
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                  Er, okay I guess XD
                  My cousins said some thing like that also. =n

                  YGO
                  NOTE: Cards may be "strange."
                  Apokalypsie
                  Effect Monster
                  2 / Dark / Fiend
                  If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you may Special Summon a level 5 Dark-type monster from your deck to the field.
                  ATK/600 DEF/1100

                  Capital City
                  Field Spell
                  This card cannot be negated once it is activated. Increase the ATK and DEF of all face up monsters on the field by 800. In addition, once per turn you or your opponent may pay 1000 life points to destroy a card on the field.

                  Apokalypsal Knight
                  Effect Monster
                  5 / Dark / Fiend
                  This card can only be Special Summoned by removing one Apokalypsie on the field from play. When this card attacks a defense position monster with 1600 defence or higher, destroy the defending monster without any ddamage calculation.
                  ATK/1950 DEF/1700

                  Lord of the Apokalypse
                  Effect Monster
                  8 / Dark / Fiend
                  This card can only be Special Summone by removing one Apokalypsie and Apokalypsal knight on the field from play. You may offer one monster on your side of the field as a tribute to increase this card's ATK and DEF by the number of stars x100. You must pay 500 life points each turn to be able to keep this on the field, if not, this card is destroyed.
                  ATK/2600 DEF/2550

                  Konnexien's Heavy
                  Normal Monster
                  3 / Earth / Fiend
                  "The exquisite swordsmanship of this beast is formidable."
                  ATK/900 DEF/900

                  Axurin the Black Dragon
                  Effect Monster
                  7 / Dark / Dragon
                  This monster cannot be Set or Special Summoned in defense mode. Once per turn, you may pay 200 life points to destroy one Spell/Trap card on the field. In addition, if you target an Equip Spell Card that can be equipped to Axurin the Black Dragon, you may equip it.
                  ATK/2400 DEF/2800

                  Ermageddon the Red Dragon
                  Effect Monster
                  7 / Fire / Dragon
                  This monster cannot be Special Summoned in attack position. Once per turn, you may pay 1000 life points when this card is being attacked to attacking to increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 1500 on that turn, also, if you attack an attack position monster with 2500 ATK points or higher, you may remove 5 cards in your graveyard from play to destroy the attacked monster before applying any damage calculations to replace your attack.
                  ATK/2600 DEF/2100

                  Frostbitten the Blue Dragon
                  Effect Monster
                  7 / Water / Dragon
                  This monster cannot be Special Summoned from the graveyard. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, increase your life points by 700 each turn. When a Spell Counter is placed on the field, you may destroy a card on the field.
                  ATK/2500 DEF/2550

                  Thorovin the YEllow Dragon
                  Effect Monster
                  7 / Thunder(if there is such thing) or Earth / Dragon or Thunder
                  This monster can only be Special Summoned. This card cannot be attacked unless your opponent pays 500 life points. In addition, once per turn, you may pay 1000 life points to destroy every card on the field except for Thorovin the yellow dragon.
                  ATK/2200 DEF/3000

                  Meleas the Death Dragon
                  Effect Monster
                  9 / Dark / Dragon
                  This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 dark-type monsters in your graveyard from play. When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, you may destroy a Spell/trap card on the field. In addition, once per turn, you may pay 1500 life points to increase this monster's ATK and DEF by 3000 on that turn.
                  ATK/3000 DEF/2950

                  Exielica the Golden Dragon
                  Effect Monster
                  9 / Light / Dragon
                  This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 ligt-type monsters in your graveyard from play. This card can only attack when you pay 500 life points. if you negate the effect of the activation of a spell or trap card, this card's ATK and DEF increases by 500.
                  ATK/2500 DEF/3500
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                  Old November 8th, 2004 (8:25 AM). Edited November 8th, 2004 by Yamichi.
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                    I've got some new ones! n_n Again I think the name itself could use some work n__n

                    Seth the Desert Storms Warrior Lvl. 4
                    Monster (Effect)
                    Lvl. 4/EARTH/Warrior
                    If this card is the only monster on your side of the field during your Standby Phase, you may increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 until the End Phase. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster as a result of battle, send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Seth the Desert Storms Warrior Lvl. 6" from your hand or deck.
                    1400/1100
                    Rare

                    Seth the Desert Storms Warrior Lvl. 6
                    Monster (Effect)
                    Lvl. 6/EARTH/Warrior
                    As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, it is unaffected by any Monster Effects. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster as a result of battle, remove this card and 1 other Lvl. 6 or higher Warrior-Type Monster from play to Special Summon 1 "Seth the Desert Storms Warrior Lvl. 8" from your hand or deck.
                    2000/1700
                    Ultra Rare

                    Seth the Desert Storms Warrior Lvl. 8
                    Monster (Effect)
                    Lvl. 8/EARTH/Warrior
                    This card can not be Normal or Flip Summoned. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Seth the Desert Storms Warrior Lvl. 6". As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, you may negate the activation and effect of any Effect Monsters.
                    3000/2700
                    Secret Rare
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                    Old November 8th, 2004 (3:54 PM).
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                      Mr.Cheese
                      3
                      artifact
                      all cheese gets +1/+1

                      0, sacrifice:and for each cheese in play you can deal one damage to your opponent or make them eat 6 pounds of cheese, if they fail to eat 6 pounds of cheese you win the game if the do then you lose the game, rip this card after you sacrificed it
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                      Old November 8th, 2004 (11:31 PM).
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                        Eh, more cheese. >.0;;;

                        NOTE: The cards dont relate to anything (except for the "Excalibur" that I stole from a game that stole from a movie that stole from a game etc etc etc)
                        The Excalibur
                        Equip Spell Card
                        This card can only be equipped to 'Divine Paladin - Ichizen.' Increase the ATK and DEF of that card by 1000.

                        Diamond Mythril Armor
                        Equip Spell Card
                        This card can only be equipped to 'Divine Paladin - Ichizen.' Increase the DEF of that card by 1500.

                        Divinity Arision
                        Spell Card
                        This card is used to Special Summon 'Divine Paladin - Ichizen' on the field.

                        Divine Paladin - Ichizen
                        Effect Monster
                        8 / Light / Warrior
                        This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of Divinity Arision. When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, your opponent randomly discards a card from his/her hand. As long as this card remains face up on the field with the Equip Spell Card "The Excalibur" attached to it, this card may attack twice.
                        ATK/2800 DEF/2900

                        A Million Years
                        Continuous Spell Card
                        This card is destroyed on the 10th turn its activated. You may remove this card in your Main Phase to decrease the ATK and DEF of all monsters on your opponent's side of the field by 1000. This card cannot be negated by a Trap Card or a monster effect.

                        Kenny's Advice (card dedicated to kenny_c.002)
                        Continous Spell Card
                        Whenever you activate a Spell or Trap Card (not including this one) or summon a monster and your opponent negates the activation of the SPell/trap or destroys the summoned monster, you may draw 2 cards from your deck and re-play the cards destroyed by your opponent.
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                          you may only play Kenny's Cheese if you have KLS's Cheese
                          2,sacrifice:you may slap your opponent silly and if your playing a guy named KLS, you may choose to slap KLS with cheese until they get knocked out, if you knock your opponent out by slapping them, you win the game if you do not complete this task in 1 hour you lose the game.

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                          3,sacrifice: you may slap your opponent silly, and if your playing a guy named Kenny, you may choose to slap Kenny with cheese until they get knocked out, if you knock your opponent out by slapping them, you win the game if you do not complete this task in 1 hour you lose the game.
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                            Minun's first batch: Nothing too fancy. I like that. Most idiots try to be fancy and stuff and..yeah. Just to point out, I don't think capital city, Axurin, Frostbitten might not work under the current YGO "technology".

                            Power problems: Thorovin (not sure, but this one would require testing)

                            Yamichi: I don't see much problems with this. Good.

                            Minun batch 2: Not bad. Divinity Arision does require specification that it's from hand, tho. And the card you're dedicating to me is actually quite broken (is that intentional?). lol

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                              Oh okay. >.0;; What cant be broken..
                              NOTE: Some of these cards might be too crap to be looked at.

                              Zero Broadsword
                              Equip Spell Card
                              Increase the ATK of a Warrior-Type monster by 100.

                              Cant-cast-crap Staff
                              Equip Spell card
                              Increase the ATK of a Spellcaster-Type monster by 100.

                              Poisonous Crap
                              Continous Spell Card
                              All monsters on the field are now treated as Zombie-type Monsters.

                              NOTE: No more now.

                              Diamond Knight
                              Effect Monster
                              4 / Light / warrior
                              This card can only be Special Summoned when 'Blade Knight' is face-up on your side of the field. When 'Blade Knight' is targetted or destroyed, you may replace 'Blade Knight' with this card.
                              ATK/1500 DEF/1600

                              Kenny Might Be Mind-Reading (A picture of Kenny's Mind)
                              Effect Monster
                              1 / Earth / Spellcaster
                              Right before your opponent's draw phase each turn, you may pay 100 life points to look at the top card of your opponent's deck.
                              ATK/100 DEF/0

                              Instant Checkmate
                              Spell Card
                              If you have 30 cards or more in your graveyard and 10 or less cards in your deck, you win the duel.

                              Disappearing Time
                              Continous Spell Card
                              At each standby phase, you and your opponent loses 500 life points and remove a card in each of both of your respective graveyards. Whoevers graveyard runs out first loses the duel.

                              NOTE: The following cards are just for some fun.

                              We can get Lemon & Turn it to Lemonade People!
                              Continous Trap Card
                              Your fusion deck is now in your hand. When this card is destroyed, so are the fusion monsters.

                              Now Im Gonna Make You Dance
                              Spell Card
                              You may pay 500 life points to play 'Eminem - Just LOse It' in your MP3 player or computer.

                              Joe
                              Normal monster
                              2 / Earth / Zombie
                              A person named "Joe" accidentally went into the "A Million Years" spell card... **** for him.
                              ATK/0 DEF/700

                              Kenny
                              Effect Monster (monster? =p)
                              3 / Earth / Warrior
                              This card can take the attributes of another card on the field. (INcluding ATK/DEF)
                              ATK/0 DEF/0
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                                KLS's cheese is so much cooler than Kenny's Cheese
                                i mean so cooler!
                                The wall of cheese
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                                unless your opponent gets slapped by cheese you win the game, if your opponent doesn't get slapped by cheese you lose the game. You have 5 turns to complete this.
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                                  Sheercannon Skyterror
                                  Creature
                                  Armored Dragon
                                  Mana cost: 6
                                  Power: 9000
                                  When this creature is put into your battle zone, send one card in your mana zone to the graveyard.
                                  While your opponent has no shields, this creature can't attack.
                                  Double breaker
                                  "My cannons are long enough to reach inside the walls of your kingdom."

                                  Tetrarazor Skyterror
                                  Creature
                                  Armored Wyvern
                                  Mana cost: 10
                                  Power: 6500
                                  When this creature is put into the battle zone, destroy all creatures that have 5000 power or less.
                                  "Wow you almost cut me in half!" --Bolshack Dragon

                                  Crystal Samurai
                                  Evolution
                                  Liquid People
                                  Mana Cost: 7
                                  Power: 7000
                                  Evolution-put on one of your Liquid People.
                                  When this creature is sent to the graveyard, destroy all of your opponent's creatures that have 3000 power or less.
                                  Double breaker
                                  When Samurai die, the soul of the dragon plagues the murderer.
                                  When Crystal Samurai die, everyone around it dies.

                                  Extacy Worm
                                  Creature
                                  Parasite Worm
                                  Mana Cost: 6
                                  Power: 10000
                                  This creature can't attack players.
                                  "Ahaharhahrhahrarhahahahahahah!"

                                  Pure Frag
                                  Spell
                                  Mana Cost: 5
                                  Destroy one of your opponent's creatures that have 3000 power or less.

                                  Sharpshoot Frag
                                  Spell
                                  Mana Cost: 8
                                  Destroy one of your opponent's creatures.
                                  Send one card in your opponent's mana zone to the graveyard.

                                  Wallet Frag
                                  Spell
                                  Mana Cost: 10
                                  Destroy one of your opponent's creatures.
                                  Your opponent discards his whole hand.
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                                    3 mana cost
                                    1 mana generator
                                    2000
                                    When you put this creature into the battle zone, you may discard a creature from your hand to destroy an opponent's creature with teh same mana cost.

                                    Flavor Text: They like to burn. And they like to throw what they burn too.
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                                      Legendary Creature - Red Dragon
                                      Flying, Rage 1 (When this creature is blocked, it gains +2/+2 until end of next turn)
                                      "My professional opinion of this dragon? Run. Like hell."
                                      -The Draconomicon
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                                      Old December 2nd, 2004 (5:41 PM).
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                                        Minun:
                                        Zero Broadsword
                                        Equip Spell Card
                                        Increase the ATK of a Warrior-Type monster by 100.

                                        Maybe make it a field card instead? Right now it's REALLY crappy.

                                        Cant-cast-crap Staff
                                        Equip Spell card
                                        Increase the ATK of a Spellcaster-Type monster by 100.

                                        see above

                                        Poisonous Crap
                                        Continous Spell Card
                                        All monsters on the field are now treated as Zombie-type Monsters.

                                        I'd say make it a field card and it'll be perfect.

                                        Diamond Knight
                                        Effect Monster
                                        4 / Light / warrior
                                        This card can only be Special Summoned when 'Blade Knight' is face-up on your side of the field. When 'Blade Knight' is targetted or destroyed, you may replace 'Blade Knight' with this card.
                                        ATK/1500 DEF/1600

                                        Interesting. I'm not into these types of rulings, but I'll let it go.

                                        Kenny Might Be Mind-Reading (A picture of Kenny's Mind)
                                        Effect Monster
                                        1 / Earth / Spellcaster
                                        Right before your opponent's draw phase each turn, you may pay 100 life points to look at the top card of your opponent's deck.
                                        ATK/100 DEF/0

                                        O_O

                                        Instant Checkmate
                                        Spell Card
                                        If you have 30 cards or more in your graveyard and 10 or less cards in your deck, you win the duel.

                                        May I suggest making it continuous and make its "activation" during your standby phase?

                                        Disappearing Time
                                        Continous Spell Card
                                        At each standby phase, you and your opponent loses 500 life points and remove a card in each of both of your respective graveyards. If a player cannot remove a card from the graveyard, that player loses.

                                        Aside from the correction, it's good


                                        NOTE: The following cards are just for some fun.

                                        We can get Lemon & Turn it to Lemonade People!
                                        Continous Trap Card
                                        Your fusion deck is now in your hand. When this card is destroyed, so are the fusion monsters.

                                        Uhhh...sure?

                                        Now Im Gonna Make You Dance
                                        Spell Card
                                        You may pay 500 life points to play 'Eminem - Just LOse It' in your MP3 player or computer.

                                        Nice.

                                        Joe
                                        Normal monster
                                        2 / Earth / Zombie
                                        A person named "Joe" accidentally went into the "A Million Years" spell card... **** for him.
                                        ATK/0 DEF/700

                                        Kenny
                                        Effect Monster (monster? =p)
                                        3 / Earth / Warrior
                                        This card can take the attributes of another card on the field. (INcluding ATK/DEF)
                                        ATK/0 DEF/0

                                        O_O me again?

                                        Overall this set of cards has some good ideas in there, but some really bad stuff that you can work with. Very do-able, these changes.


                                        Pastaslap 4W
                                        Enchantment
                                        At the beginning of your upkeep, you may pastaslap KLS. If you do, say, "Kenny pastaslapped KLS!"
                                        Rare
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                                        Old December 2nd, 2004 (5:55 PM).
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                                          More of Minun!:

                                          Sheercannon Skyterror Fire?
                                          Creature
                                          Armored Dragon
                                          Mana cost: 6
                                          Power: 9000
                                          When this creature is put into your battle zone, send one card in your mana zone to the graveyard.
                                          While your opponent has no shields, this creature can't attack.
                                          Double breaker
                                          "My cannons are long enough to reach inside the walls of your kingdom."

                                          Interesting card. Again something like this is okay with Duel Masters, but any conversion to other TCGs would instantly make this card a no-no. lol

                                          Tetrarazor Skyterror Fire?
                                          Creature
                                          Armored Wyvern
                                          Mana cost: 10
                                          Power: 6500
                                          When this creature is put into the battle zone, destroy all creatures that have 5000 power or less.
                                          "Wow you almost cut me in half!" --Bolshack Dragon

                                          Very good card. I can see many ways to abuse that (mainly from bouncing. I'm still waiting for bouncing!!!!

                                          Crystal Samurai Water?
                                          Evolution
                                          Liquid People
                                          Mana Cost: 7
                                          Power: 7000
                                          Evolution-put on one of your Liquid People.
                                          When this creature is sent to the graveyard, destroy all of your opponent's creatures that have 3000 power or less.
                                          Double breaker
                                          When Samurai die, the soul of the dragon plagues the murderer.
                                          When Crystal Samurai die, everyone around it dies.

                                          As a rule of thumb, water can't kill (Forget Pogi, civilization wheel restrictions make the game much better). They can only bounce. With that said, change it to bouncing and it'll be good! I suggest to get rid of flavour text for cards with long lines of ruling text.

                                          Extacy Worm Dark?
                                          Creature
                                          Parasite Worm
                                          Mana Cost: 6
                                          Power: 10000
                                          This creature can't attack players.
                                          "Ahaharhahrhahrarhahahahahahah!"

                                          hmmm. It might be borderlined in terms of power. Should be okay tho.

                                          Pure Frag Dark?
                                          Spell
                                          Mana Cost: 5
                                          Destroy one of your opponent's creatures that have 3000 power or less.

                                          This is okay if it's dark civ. or fire. Not good for anything else.

                                          Sharpshoot Frag Dark?
                                          Spell
                                          Mana Cost: 8
                                          Destroy one of your opponent's creatures.
                                          Send one card in your opponent's mana zone to the graveyard.

                                          It's either dark or fire again. Looks more dark for the first ability (fire has restrictions). Looks alright.

                                          Wallet Frag Dark?
                                          Spell
                                          Mana Cost: 10
                                          Destroy one of your opponent's creatures.
                                          Your opponent discards his whole hand.

                                          Looks very dark to me. Looks okay for the most part.

                                          Pogi:
                                          Ember Hulcus
                                          3 mana cost
                                          1 mana generator
                                          2000
                                          When you put this creature into the battle zone, you may discard a creature from your hand to destroy an opponent's creature with teh same mana cost.
                                          Flavor Text: They like to burn. And they like to throw what they burn too.

                                          Looks very borderlined. But I'm afraid for the ability to be extremely broken...You might want to increase cost to like 5 to be sure.

                                          For Duel Masters, PLEASE!!!!! put the civ the card belongs in!!!!!!

                                          Haphestus, King of Red dragons 6RR
                                          Legendary Creature - Dragon
                                          Flying, Rage 2 (When this creature is blocked, it gains +2/+2 until end of next turn)
                                          "My professional opinion of this dragon? Run. Like hell."
                                          -The Draconomicon
                                          6/6
                                          Rare

                                          I took out "red" in "red dragon" and replaced rage 1 with rage 2 (this way you can have rage 1 for +1/+1 and continue on from there, should you decide to use this mechanic in the future). You may want to decrease ost to 4RRR or something, since the dragon has legendary status. As for rulings on rage, it SHOULD be okay. No garantees. Ask KLS, he's probably better with rulings than I am.
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                                          Old December 3rd, 2004 (6:50 PM).
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                                            Yeah, the Skyterrors are fire, the crystal samurai is stuffed up and sounds like a dark card but anywho, all I have to do is kiill the flavor and rename it.
                                            All my spells are dark. I thought the skyterrors were a bit too obvious :\ since all dragons are fire. Thank you for the help.
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                                            Vulcanblade Skyterror (i even have a pic of this card i sketched, too bad my scanner is f'ed)
                                            Creature
                                            Armored Wyvern
                                            Mana Cost: 8
                                            Mana Gen: 1
                                            Power: 7500
                                            This creature can attack twice in one turn if your opponent has a creature with "blocker."
                                            Double breaker
                                            "Swords, guns, blades, cannons, how do you get through this thing?!" --Aeris, Flight Elemental

                                            Odyssey Skyterror
                                            Creature
                                            Armored Dragon
                                            Mana Cost: 8
                                            Mana Gen: 1
                                            Power: 5000
                                            Whenever this creature attacks, destroy another creature with 'double breaker." (the creatures don't battle)
                                            When your opponent has a light creature on the field, this card gets 'double breaker.'
                                            Power attacker +4000
                                            "Leviathans are a bit too heavy, Cyberlords are a bit too puny, I guess Angel Commands will do."

                                            Heaven's Forthold of Angels
                                            Spell
                                            Light
                                            Mana Cost: 9 (i know the cost is a quite steep for a spell...)
                                            Mana Gen: 1
                                            Tap all of your opponent's creatures.
                                            Untap 4 cards in your mana zone.
                                            "Heaven doesn't want me, but Hell feels I'll take over." --Ballom, Master of Death.

                                            KLS, the Krazy Guardian
                                            Evolution
                                            Light
                                            Guardian
                                            Mana Cost: 5
                                            Mana Gen: 1
                                            Power: 10000
                                            Blocker
                                            This creature can't attack.
                                            This creature attacks each turn if able while your opponent has a darkness creature.

                                            Kenny, Intelligence Elemental (if there isn't one yet)
                                            Creature
                                            Light
                                            angel Command
                                            Mana Cost: 8
                                            Mana Gen: 1
                                            Power: 6500
                                            Blocker
                                            This creature can't be blocked.
                                            Double breaker.
                                            "Wrong! If I killed you, that will solve the equation.."

                                            Alexander II, Holy Knight of Deathl
                                            Creature
                                            Darkness
                                            Demon Command
                                            Mana Cost: 9
                                            Mana Gen: 1
                                            Power: 10000
                                            Blocker.
                                            Power attacker +2000
                                            Double breaker
                                            "There is no point of killing me! I'am but your humble traitor, but so what, you elementals have no purpose for life. Your not strong enough!"

                                            Alexander, the Divine knight
                                            Creature
                                            Light
                                            Angel Command
                                            Mana Cost: 8
                                            Mana Gen: 1
                                            Power: 9500
                                            Blocker
                                            This creature can attack untapped darkness creatures.
                                            Double breaker.
                                            "Gather round your armies! We have surrounded Alexander II!"
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                                              Minion of Zorc
                                              Effect Monster
                                              3 / Dark / Fiend
                                              When this card is destroyed, you may either:
                                              > send 1 monster from your hand to the graveyard to special summon 1 monster of equal level stars from either player's graveyard to the field.
                                              > send 1 spell/trap card from your hand to the graveyard to use instantly use 1 spell/trap card from either player's graveyard.
                                              ATK/400 DEF/800
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                                                Vulcanblade Skyterror (i even have a pic of this card i sketched, too bad my scanner is f'ed)
                                                Creature
                                                Armored Wyvern
                                                Mana Cost: 8
                                                Mana Gen: 1
                                                Power: 7500
                                                This creature can attack twice in one turn if your opponent has a creature with "blocker."
                                                Double breaker
                                                "Swords, guns, blades, cannons, how do you get through this thing?!" --Aeris, Flight Elemental

                                                Clunky in terms of the first ability. Just wording issues here. Personally I know how you think it should work, but maybe it would be better for understanding if you have it as "you may untap it and attack with it again if it destroyed exactly one blocker this turn." Note that if oyu try to take your wording literally, I wouldn't have known what to do.

                                                Odyssey Skyterror
                                                Creature
                                                Armored Dragon
                                                Mana Cost: 8
                                                Mana Gen: 1
                                                Power: 5000
                                                Whenever this creature attacks, destroy another creature with 'double breaker." (the creatures don't battle)
                                                When your opponent has a light creature on the field, this card gets 'double breaker.'
                                                Power attacker +4000
                                                "Leviathans are a bit too heavy, Cyberlords are a bit too puny, I guess Angel Commands will do."

                                                I guess it's okay. Might be on the broken side of the curve tho. You'll need to test this puppy out before judgements can be made.

                                                Heaven's Forthold of Angels
                                                Spell
                                                Light
                                                Mana Cost: 9 (i know the cost is a quite steep for a spell...)
                                                Mana Gen: 1
                                                Tap all of your opponent's creatures.
                                                Untap 4 cards in your mana zone.
                                                "Heaven doesn't want me, but Hell feels I'll take over." --Ballom, Master of Death.

                                                Good stuff. I'm considering only that the untap ability comes from the Civ wheel's "free" representation method. lol

                                                KLS, the Krazy Guardian
                                                Evolution
                                                Light
                                                Guardian
                                                Mana Cost: 5
                                                Mana Gen: 1
                                                Power: 10000
                                                Blocker
                                                This creature can't attack.
                                                This creature attacks each turn if able while your opponent has a darkness creature.

                                                O_O the two abilities contradict each other! Can't attack and must attack if able? That means it can never attack!

                                                Kenny, Intelligence Elemental (if there isn't one yet)
                                                Creature
                                                Light
                                                angel Command
                                                Mana Cost: 8
                                                Mana Gen: 1
                                                Power: 6500
                                                Blocker
                                                This creature can't be blocked.
                                                Double breaker.
                                                "Wrong! If I killed you, that will solve the equation.."

                                                HAHAHAHA!

                                                Alexander II, Holy Knight of Deathl
                                                Creature
                                                Darkness
                                                Demon Command
                                                Mana Cost: 9
                                                Mana Gen: 1
                                                Power: 10000
                                                Blocker.
                                                Power attacker +2000
                                                Double breaker
                                                "There is no point of killing me! I'am but your humble traitor, but so what, you elementals have no purpose for life. Your not strong enough!"

                                                Generally I don't like blocker with double breaker on one card (it's anti synergetic, the bad kind), but I guess.

                                                Alexander, the Divine knight
                                                Creature
                                                Light
                                                Angel Command
                                                Mana Cost: 8
                                                Mana Gen: 1
                                                Power: 9500
                                                Blocker
                                                This creature can attack untapped darkness creatures.
                                                Double breaker.
                                                "Gather round your armies! We have surrounded Alexander II!"

                                                See above.

                                                Yamichi:

                                                Minion of Zorc
                                                Effect Monster
                                                3 / Dark / Fiend
                                                When this card goes to the graveyard from the field, choose one:
                                                > Discard 1 monster card to the graveyard to special summon 1 monster of equal level stars from either player's graveyard to the field.
                                                > Discard 1 spell/trap card to the graveyard to use instantly use 1 spell/trap card from either player's graveyard.
                                                ATK/400 DEF/800

                                                The abilities are quite dangerous on their own... The trap portion of the second ability you should omit for sure. Actually the second ability can break so many rules too...:-/ This calls for vapour ops! Crap Upper deck doesn't have one...
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                                                Old December 5th, 2004 (2:23 AM).
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                                                  Sorry guys if you don't like the Fire civilization but I guess its the only Civ that has humans, well, particular humans that is the closest to the humans that are humans in this world. O___o; I dont really like Fire too but ANYWHO, I just turned everyone(in the Other Cards) I know into Fire cards! That really does suck..

                                                  Dragon Bearer Akira
                                                  (btw thats my real name)
                                                  Creature
                                                  Human
                                                  Mana Cost: 4
                                                  Mana Gen: 1
                                                  Power: 2000+
                                                  While attacking, this card gets +2000 power for each Armored Dragon or Armored Wyvern in your graveyard.
                                                  "Your lucky only like 10 dragons live in this area.."

                                                  Darkrealm Guardian Pogi
                                                  (for your liking for Darkness creatures)
                                                  Creature
                                                  Human
                                                  Mana Cost: 6 (i know, its a sh!t cost for some human)
                                                  Mana Gen: 1
                                                  Power: 1000
                                                  Ignore summoning sickness for this creature.
                                                  This creature gets +1000 power for each darkness creature tapped in your battle zone.
                                                  "Get out, Aeris, we don't like you."

                                                  Krazy Cannoneer KLS
                                                  (I just added Krazy to represent him more thoroughly)
                                                  Creature
                                                  Human
                                                  Mana Cost: 3
                                                  Mana Gen:1
                                                  Power: 8000
                                                  When this creature is put in your battle zone, destroy 3 other creatures in your battle zone. If not, destroy this creature when it is summoned.
                                                  "Hohoho, that is some krazy effect I have there."

                                                  Blast Diver Mullet
                                                  (you like water cards right?)
                                                  Creature
                                                  Human
                                                  Mana Cost: 4
                                                  Mana Gen: 1
                                                  Power: 2000+
                                                  This creature gets +1000 power for each Water(or aqua) creature in your battle zone.
                                                  "No waay, I love the water, I'll race you. And don't worry about my cannons, they only tickle."

                                                  Wyvern Master Ricky
                                                  Creature
                                                  Human
                                                  Mana Cost: 3
                                                  Mana Gen: 1
                                                  Power: 2000+
                                                  When this creature is put into the battle zone, return one Armored Wyvern from your graveyard to your hand.
                                                  Power Attacker +1000.
                                                  "Just because I don't have any special armings doesn't mean I'm weak, buddy."

                                                  Hammer Paladin Yamichi
                                                  Creature
                                                  Human
                                                  Mana Cost: 6
                                                  Mana Gen:1
                                                  Power: 1000+
                                                  When you put this creature into the battle zone, destroy all creatures with 2000 power or less.
                                                  Power attcker +2000.
                                                  "If you think that Immortal Baron is good, take a look at me!"

                                                  and lastly, Kenny, i didnt forget about you, your that elemental from my other post, so your... particularly special. XD
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