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Old August 9th, 2010 (10:42 PM). Edited March 4th, 2011 by triggerhappymonk.
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    POKéMON SD
    Plot:

    You are a new Pokémon trainer in the Hokkaido region. You receive news from your mom that Professor Oak, Professor Elm, Professor Birch, and Professor Rowen (Rowen could not make it so Greg took his spot) where at the local library, so you've gone to see them. You soon find out that there's a Pokémon league so you decide to take a starter Pokémon and begin your journey. But things aren't always that simple, A team of Pokémon thieves by the name "Team Trooper", has a sinister plan to capture every Pokémon and use them for test subjects. it's up to you to stop them an find out what is there master plan. Will you be the one to save all the Pokémon in the Hokkaido Region and beat the Pokémon league?

    Characters (So Far):
    Barry: Male hero (Name could be changed)
    Amy: Female hero (Name could be changed)
    Professor Oak: Pokémon Professor
    Professor Elm:
    Pokémon Professor
    Professor Birch:
    Pokémon Professor
    Greg: Filling in for Professor Rowen
    Maker:
    RPG Maker XP with Peter O.'s Pokémon Starter Kit

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    More Screen shots coming soon.

    EXTRA INFO:
    You may choose between any starter from Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, Sinnho
    Battle through a brand new region
    Face the terrible Team Trooper
    Enjoy an exiting new story
    Use "Mystery Gift" to get rare items and Pokémon
    5th Gen Pokémon Graphics and Pokédex


    If anyone would be interested in being a trainer in the game's Battle Tower, please PM me with your trainers name and Pokémon (The Pokémon can't be legendary nor above Level 90)

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    Old August 12th, 2010 (6:00 PM).
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      The plot sounds boring, and the screenie with the house looks really empty, and you haven,t really changed anything in Poccils Kit, you just used Bill,s sprite
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      Old August 12th, 2010 (10:45 PM).
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        I agree with toma.
        It's not even a story at all.
        More like a cliff note, flat, unoriginal, etc.

        If you want people to be interested in your game you need a story first and foremost. Not just a "Oh Pokemon League, lets go!"
        As for the screens, I'm fairly certain you've never done this.

        So first, develop a story. Anything works, it can always be altered or branched later.
        Once you have a story down work on learning about your engine, in this case RPGMXP.
        You need to have a good understanding of Ruby GSS, and then get a good handle on spriting, or someone who does.
        Graphics make a game, even though this is a fan game and it normally doesnt count, you'll get more attention and a wider following with originality and difference from those who simply get the starter kit and base solely around it.

        I'll keep an eye on the topic and see how it goes. If you have questions we're here to help.
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        Old August 13th, 2010 (10:47 AM).
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          I've just started this not to long ago, and i don't want to give away to much of the story. and for the screen shots, i know i haven't changed much, but once i get farther in development, you'll see that it gets more interesting.
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          Pokémon Rayquaza Emerald
          Pokémon Dialga Diamond/Palkia Pearl
          Pokémon Giratina Platnuim
          Pokemon Reshiram Black/Zekrom White
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          Old August 13th, 2010 (4:31 PM).
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            http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=42434

            http://www.rpgrevolution.com/tutorials/ruby-game-scripting-system.html

            http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=164853

            AND GET SOME NEW TILES! THEY LOOK SO OLD!
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            Old August 13th, 2010 (5:39 PM).
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              Haha thank you Toma for the follow up.

              Trigger how can you give away too much when you haven't given us a story at all?
              To give away a small bit never hurts anything.
              If anything it entices people to want more, like a teaser.
              Try working on giving out something, anything at all for the readers, and see if they catch interest for the moment.
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              Old August 13th, 2010 (7:43 PM).
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                Thanks for the advice. this is my first thread for any of my game projects. and toma, i'll try out the sinnoh tiles that came with the 4th gen pack i got when i started this game.
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                Pokémon Kyoger Sapphire/Groundon Ruby
                Pokémon Rayquaza Emerald
                Pokémon Dialga Diamond/Palkia Pearl
                Pokémon Giratina Platnuim
                Pokemon Reshiram Black/Zekrom White
                Pokémon Tin/Steel
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                  Hey everyone, just to let everybody know that some updates have been made and some more screen shots will be released soon. sorry if it's been a while, but the wait is worth it.
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                  Pokémon Blastiose Blue/Charizard Red/Venasaur Green
                  Pokémon Pikachu Yellow
                  Pokémon Ho-Oh Gold/Lugia Silver
                  Pokémon Suicune Crystal
                  Pokémon Kyoger Sapphire/Groundon Ruby
                  Pokémon Rayquaza Emerald
                  Pokémon Dialga Diamond/Palkia Pearl
                  Pokémon Giratina Platnuim
                  Pokemon Reshiram Black/Zekrom White
                  Pokémon Tin/Steel
                  May seem like a lot, but i'll get them done. I apologize for any misspelling

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                  Old March 4th, 2011 (10:40 AM).
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                    By any chance, you do recognize that Hokkaido is the region in Japan Sinnoh's based on?
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                    Old March 4th, 2011 (1:05 PM).
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                      no, unfortunitly i did not realize that, if you would like me to change the name, post a reply suggesting a new name.
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                      Pokémon Blastiose Blue/Charizard Red/Venasaur Green
                      Pokémon Pikachu Yellow
                      Pokémon Ho-Oh Gold/Lugia Silver
                      Pokémon Suicune Crystal
                      Pokémon Kyoger Sapphire/Groundon Ruby
                      Pokémon Rayquaza Emerald
                      Pokémon Dialga Diamond/Palkia Pearl
                      Pokémon Giratina Platnuim
                      Pokemon Reshiram Black/Zekrom White
                      Pokémon Tin/Steel
                      May seem like a lot, but i'll get them done. I apologize for any misspelling

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                      Old March 14th, 2011 (4:37 AM). Edited March 14th, 2011 by TheMarkCrafter.
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                        I know some things that it will help your game look better.
                        1. Go to here: http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=173059
                        2. Change the evil team's name.
                        3. Edit the Trainer Backsprite/Frontsprite.
                        4. Change the story.

                        I know some things that it will help your game look better.
                        1. Go to here: http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=173059
                        2. Change the evil team's name.
                        3. Edit the Trainer Backsprite/Frontsprite.
                        4. Change the story.
                        5. Pokemon SD, what is this name anyways
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                        Old March 14th, 2011 (11:09 AM).
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                        I suggest you read the rules before you continue posting in the Game Dev forum.

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