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Old June 30th, 2011 (11:17 PM). Edited July 7th, 2011 by Yagerbomb.
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    Pokemon D.N.A. Version
    Created by Yagerbomb

    Hello, I am Yagerbomb. You may or may not have seen me around here. I have an Idea for a game, Pokemon D.N.A. Version. Please give constructive criticism and ways to make my game better.


    The Legendary D.N.A. Pokemon Deoxys has been noted to live in the Hoenn Region. However, the Legendary Pokemon has been sighted multiple times in the Vitos Region, which is just SouthWest of Hoenn. The Pokemon which is believed to be a virus from space, is capable of producing D.N.A. which is a key part of carrying Genetic information. These sighting have created a buzz in the Vitos Region. The Scientists and Studies of Pokemon alike have been searching for Deoxys. Although, not everyone is looking for the D.N.A. Pokemon for scientific purposes. A group of Criminals, known as Team Nucleo, have been hunting for Deoxys in their effort to create what they refer to as an "invincible army". With this "Invincible Army" Team Nucleo plans to achieve World domination. All of these events have brought the Vitos Region into a state of fear.


    You are the son/daughter of Professor Cottonwood, a renowned Pokemon Professor from the Vitos Region. Your Father, Professor Cottonwood, advises you to experience the world of Pokemon. Your Father lets you have one of three Pokemon, and lets you head out of your Hometown and battle the Gyms of Vitos, while collecting research Data in a Device known as a Pokedex, a Device that Professor Oak gave your Father. While on your Journey, you can't help it but to be intrigued by Deoxys and the search that follows the Legendary Pokemon. How does your interest in Deoxys affect Team Nucleo's plans?


    Coming Soon!


    -167 Pokemon!
    -New Vitos Region to explore!
    -Starters from other games obtainable!
    -Buy Houses and Property!
    -All New Champions League!
    -Bike Races!

    Gym Leaders:

    Chaplin Town: Grace,Grass type

    Boulderbridge City: Rocco,Rock Type

    Bellham City: Mason,Steel Type

    Baronbay City: Matt, Water Type

    Ring City: Gloria, Psychic Type

    Toothridge Town: Hamilton, Ground type

    Vincen City: Brent, Bug

    Sansetto Island: Arnold, Flying Type


    Yagerbomb-Creator,Team Leader,Writer,Character Development,Mapper

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    Scripter( Or someone who can teach me to script)-
    Music(might not need)-


    Is the Plot interesting?

    How can I make the game better?

    Is there anything else I should implement in the game?

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    Old July 1st, 2011 (11:42 AM).
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      Firstly it's a good story.
      Secondly Some screens would be nice.

      But I see a great future with this game.
      Old July 2nd, 2011 (4:57 AM).
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        Originally Posted by Yagerbomb View Post

        Is the Plot interesting?

        How can I make the game better?

        Is there anything else I should implement in the game?
        This game sounds very interesting and I would like to play this game.

        You could make it better by maybe adding more detail to the plot. Not necessarily more information but a cliffhanger like "But will your intrest in the D.N.A. pokémon draw unwanted attention from team Nucleo?" Although a bit more information would be nice.

        Yeah, more minigames besides bike races would be more exciting (although bike races does seem cool and original.
        Old July 3rd, 2011 (9:02 PM).
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          I would love to help you with this game! I can draw fairly well if you need art! I can't sprite to save my life however >.
          Old July 7th, 2011 (6:40 AM).
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            That is interesting! You might want to have other Legendaries in the game, though, to add some depth to the plot.
            Old July 9th, 2011 (3:25 PM).
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              That looks creative! Can't wait for more features!
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              Old December 3rd, 2011 (9:04 AM).
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                hi i was interested in making a team rocket hack of fire red where u can be butch and cassidy or jessie and james and meowth, but i need help making the sprites. could someone help me?
                Old December 3rd, 2011 (10:34 AM).
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                  Hmm; not the first time I've heard this kind of idea; but this one has been executed well
                  However I doubt been able to buy your own house or property would be appealing; as in the actual games you can have Secret Bases - so I'd re-think that idea.

                  Team Nucleo sounds cool, however try and event another way of making them evil - Team Plasma were trying to liberate Pokemon from trainers but did it through demonstrations; and stuff like it however you then have Ghestis's original plan - to rule Unova; maybe make a cover story that can tie in - instead of the Team being like Team Rocket or Galactic.

                  Bike races sound fun; be cool to enjoy the cycling road once more; maybe recieve a pokemon with Extremespeed at the end (like the Zigzagoon from Pokemon:Box)

                  I'd try and get some screenshot's up as everyone loves a bit of eye-candy; we can also help you more with them up :D

                  Moreover try and go a bit more indepth overall; instead of having drab descriptions which are quite empty.

                  Hope I've helped :D
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