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Old August 14th, 2012 (6:05 PM).
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    Old August 14th, 2012 (7:01 PM).
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    So sorry I haven't returned in a while! Got tied up with life. But there's no time like the present, so let's review:

    @The Final Watchman - It's a very decent SU, but I feel you need a bit more meat and substance in your personality section. Also, am I going crazy or you don't have a starter picked out? I can't seem to find it. If you can just adjust it in these areas you'll be a-okay to go. :3
    That's actually because I saw three good RPers post SUs so I didn't actually finish it, xD. Though, now that I still have a chance... *Runs to SU*
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    Old August 14th, 2012 (7:25 PM).
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      So sorry I haven't returned in a while! Got tied up with life. But there's no time like the present, so let's review.

      @Lt. Col. Fantastic - (Great username BTW) It's just, um, well, the character is unbelievable in a lot of ways. She's just 19, conning several rich men out of money and buying a bloody house on top of that, and she gets.... SOUL? That's more acquainted to the rich men ruining her life and placing her in a cell forever. And she just "escapes?" There are one too many things that this apparently unintelligent girl does that isn't really believable. There are also several spelling mistakes. Declined for now.

      I'm not saying make her boring, just a bit more.... real. And interesting.
      Okie dokes. I'll work on this, or even scratch the character and make a new one if I'm feeling extra insane tonight. Should be done by tomorrow. (Sorry for spelling, I don't have any spellcheck, and lets be honest. I'm not the best speller here. But I will either buy a dictionary or somehow code spellcheck for this thing.)

      EDIT: Oh, wow. Theres a spellchecking app on the Market. No more errors for me!
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      Old August 15th, 2012 (1:56 AM).
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        Yes! Chaos indeed. Looking forward to working with y'all. :3c

        Also, just a bit of question to sate my curiosity, does the aspiration part of the SU have any major relevancy or is that just an extension of the personality section? I'd like mine to be better thought out if it turns out to be something of massive importance, haha. xD
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        Old August 15th, 2012 (6:06 AM).
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          Old August 15th, 2012 (6:56 PM). Edited May 26th, 2015 by Who's Kiyo?.
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          Old August 15th, 2012 (7:24 PM).
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