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Old November 5th, 2012 (6:05 PM). Edited January 29th, 2013 by EnglishMilkshake.
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    Pokémon Pear Blue Version

    This game is being made with RPG Maker XP using Pokemon Essentials v10.

    The sprites for the heroes, gym leaders, and Team Nebula are placeholders.

    Good evening. Professor Oak and family are moving to a new never before seen region to do more research on Pokemon. Their new hometown, Grasplum Town, happens to be your hometown. You are about to recieve your first Pokémon, which will be either Treecko, Tepig, and Squirtle, and take on the Gym Leaders and become a Pokémon Master. The question is... can you catch 'em all?

    Who are those thugs that roam around the region? And what are they there to do?

    This game has a regional dex of Pokemon from the official regions. No fakemon included. You can even catch all 649 Pokémon in this fan game, but some aren't available until you get the National Dex.

    Wanna see some screenshots? No Problem!

    Spoiler:

    Regional Pokedex

    001. Treecko
    002. Grovyle
    003. Sceptile
    004. Tepig
    005. Pignite
    006. Emboar
    007. Squirtle
    008. Wartortle
    009. Blastoise
    010. Rattata
    011. Raticate
    012. Glameow
    013. Purugly
    014. Pidove
    015. Tranquill
    016. Unfezant
    017. Poochyena
    018. Mightyena
    019. Wurmple
    020. Silcoon
    021. Beautifly
    022. Cascoon
    023. Dustox
    024. Magikarp
    025. Gyarados
    026. Feebas
    027. Milotic
    028. Pichu
    029. Pikachu
    030. Raichu
    031. Munna
    032. Musharna
    033. Kricketot
    034. Kricketune
    035. Slakoth
    036. Vigoroth
    037. Slaking
    038. Scraggy
    039. Scrafty
    040. Azurill
    041. Marill
    042. Azumarill
    043. Grimer
    044. Muk
    045. Joltik
    046. Galvantula
    047. Pachirisu
    048. Zubat
    049. Golbat
    050. Crobat
    051. Koffing
    052. Weezing
    053. Chatot
    054. Klink
    055. Klang
    056. Klinklang
    057. Gulpin
    058. Swalot
    059. Cherubi
    060. Cherrim
    061. Eevee
    062. Vaporeon
    063. Jolteon
    064. Flareon
    065. Espeon
    066. Umbreon
    067. Leafeon
    068. Glaceon
    069. Paras
    070. Parasect
    071. Yanma
    072. Yanmega
    073. Togepi
    074. Togetic
    075. Togekiss
    076. Tympole
    077. Palpitoad
    078. Seismitoad
    079. Sunkern
    080. Sunflora
    081. Aipom
    082. Ambipom
    083. Buizel
    084. Floatzel
    085. Mienfoo
    086. Mienshao
    087. Onix
    088. Steelix
    089. Aron
    090. Lairon
    091. Aggron
    092. Roggenrola
    093. Boldore
    094. Gigalith
    095. Sandshrew
    096. Sandslash
    097. Trubbish
    098. Garbodor
    099. Minccino
    100. Cinccino
    101. Houndour
    102. Houndoom
    103. Cacnea
    104. Cacturne
    105. Trapinch
    106. Vibrava
    107. Flygon
    108. Spiritomb
    109. Hippopotas
    110. Hippowdon
    111. Gothita
    112. Gothorita
    113. Gothitelle
    114. Solosis
    115. Duosion
    116. Reuniclus
    117. Cleffa
    118. Clefairy
    119. Clefable
    120. Igglybuff
    121. Jigglypuff
    122. Wigglytuff
    123. Machop
    124. Machoke
    125. Machamp
    126. Rhyhorn
    127. Rhydon
    128. Rhyperior
    129. Sneasel
    130. Weavile
    131. Swablu
    132. Altaria
    133. Poliwag
    134. Poliwhirl
    135. Poliwrath
    136. Politoed
    137. Goldeen
    138. Seaking
    139. Finneon
    140. Lumineon
    141. Mareep
    142. Flaafy
    143. Ampharos
    144. Ponyta
    145. Rapidash
    146. Girafarig
    147. Kangaskhan
    148. Tauros
    149. Miltank
    150. Shroomish
    151. Breloom
    152. Pineco
    153. Foretress
    154. Psyduck
    155. Golduck
    156. Volbeat
    157. Illumise
    158. Surskit
    159. Masquerain
    160. Barboach
    161. Whiscash
    162. Corphish
    163. Crawdaunt
    164. Carnivine
    165. Skorupi
    166. Drapion
    167. Croagunk
    168. Toxicroak
    169. Dwebble
    170. Crustle
    171. Makuhita
    172. Hariyama
    173. Meditite
    174. Medicham
    175. Krabby
    176. Kingler
    177. Bagon
    178. Shellgon
    179. Salamence
    180. Whismur
    181. Loudred
    182. Exploud
    183. Dunsparce
    184. Druddigon
    185. Swinub
    186. Piloswine
    187. Mamoswine
    188. Vanillite
    189. Vanillish
    190. Vanilluxe
    191. Pawniard
    192. Bisharp
    193. Gligar
    194. Gliscor
    195. Ducklett
    196. Swanna
    197. Tentacool
    198. Tentacruel
    199. Chinchou
    200. Lanturn
    201. Zangoose
    202. Seviper
    203. Blitzle
    204. Zebstrika
    205. Tirtouga
    206. Carracosta
    207. Archen
    208. Archeops
    209. Mantyke
    210. Mantine
    211. Remoraid
    212. Octillery
    213. Clamperl
    214. Huntail
    215. Gorebyss
    216. Sableye
    217. Mawile
    218. Gastly
    219. Haunter
    220. Gengar
    221. Shuppet
    222. Banette
    223. Drifloon
    224. Drifblim
    225. Litwick
    226. Lampent
    227. Chandelure
    228. Spheal
    229. Sealeo
    230. Walrein
    231. Shellder
    232. Cloyster
    233. Staryu
    234. Starmie
    235. Relicanth
    236. Throh
    237. Sawk
    238. Slowpoke
    239. Slowbro
    240. Slowking
    241. Elgyem
    242. Beheeyem
    243. Numel
    244. Camerupt
    245. Horsea
    246. Seadra
    247. Kingdra
    248. Meloetta
    249. ???
    250. ???



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    Download Beta 0.17 here
    This beta goes all the way up to the 4th Gym. If you gone through an early demo, I reccommend you start a new game for the full effect. About 1 quarter of the game is covered in this demo, with some missing music. Not to mention this still uses some placeholder sprites.

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    Old November 6th, 2012 (6:27 PM).
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      Um. So I'm writing this as I play the demo.

      -First, before playing it, you say an "undiscovered region." If it's undiscovered, and this is all from assumption given your screen shots, why are there civilized people other than Oak and his family. On another note, after starting, why are there houses already established as well as routes and even an entire Pokemon League?
      -The intro is eerily similar to the ones in maybe all versions of essentials.
      -Your mother says nothing after she tells you to go to the lab. IMO, that's terrible parenting. "Here kid. Go to some old man's house, get some weird animal in a ball and go explore this undiscovered region!"
      -When you try to leave town, the path out of the town seems wide. The maps are all too linear. Also, when talking to the guy who prevents you from leaving town, the event loops and the game crashes.
      -The graphics don't seem original but if almost everything else is(like story line, characters, etc), that won't matter.
      -Oak appears in this game. That in and of itself is not a problem. However, his grandson(Gary/Blue) is mentioned and you get to name him. For me, at least, that's awkward, considering Blue is an already established character from the previous generations. If you explain how he ties into everything, that may clear up a thing or two.
      -The route as well as Seaslocke town once again are too linear.
      -In Seaslocke Town, I can't enter houses. For now, though, it's not a major issue. Also, in the Pokemart, you can't talk to the clerk. You can't walk up to the counter. You probably did not set the right allowances for the tiles or probably used the wrong blank tile to erase something.
      -Sorry, but I didn't enjoy the demo. You pretty much displayed the basic features that can be found in essentials. You didn't give me enough of a demo to actually want to see the next release.

      Criticism on the Post itself
      -You gave us no story.
      -If we assume your little paragraph is a "story," it will only attract sadists who want to secretly laugh at your game but also people who may want to help.
      -Pertaining to the paragraph itself, why would oak suddenly get up and move the entire operation of his lab to some unknown land?
      -You say you can catch all 649 pokemon in this game? 649 is a lot. Since this is a fan game, there really isn't a need for the inclusion of all 649 pokemon but if you're up to it, it's fine.
      -Idk if I mentioned this before but you only showed us basic features of essentials. Look back at the test maps to get an idea of what more you can do with the kit.
      That's all I really have the attention span to say.
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        Sorry about it. It was just in development. I'll fix a few things in a later version. (Not all Pokémon are available pre-National Dex).

        I'll create a new version and improve a few things...
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        Old November 6th, 2012 (6:59 PM).
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          I hope I didn't come off as mean. But you should release your next beta when you've gotten up to a significant point such as a gym battle or after an important point in the story. You have free reign over how you make your game, but try not to model it too closely to the official games. If I wanted to get all 8 badges, take down a pathetic gang of fools and become the most powerful trainer in the region after battling endless waves of incompetent trainers, I have the official games. But their story gets repetitive after a while. We want something relatively new, which Nintendo fails to bring out every time.
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            Eh...
            These sprites look a bit familiar:

            If you are using my pack (which I assume you do) you shouldn't forget to credit the people these resources belong to:

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              I agree with an upper post.
              If the region is undiscovered, then there should be nothing there, no towns, nothing.
              If anything you should write ''Oak and his family move to the new region of...''

              Other than that, your screenshots show very little.
              Each I do believe is not yours, the starter script is the same as Essentails, just Pokémon changes. The battles aren't needed, dunno why you've got the pokédex there.
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              Old November 7th, 2012 (1:36 PM).
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                Eh...
                These sprites look a bit familiar:

                If you are using my pack (which I assume you do) you shouldn't forget to credit the people these resources belong to:

                P-Sign
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                With all said about Nintendork, I also have some more complaints:

                1. Why are you giving a release? There isn't enough content inserted to the game yet.

                2. The mapping is not done too well. (I mean no offense here, as I too did once map like this but at least try adding some flowers/bushes/rocks to it)

                3. I'm not sure, but Route 1 looks awfully familiar to me, but I don't know why, might just be my memory mixing up a few maps together.

                4. As an additional complaint to Route 1, why are the 2 Youngsters saying the exact same thing in the same mirrored position, and why so many pokeballs?
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                  My honest apologies all of you. I will furnish the maps and more in the next demo. It'll take a while before the complete project, so I'm just doing bits at a time. If you are offended, do not comment until you try the next release.
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                  I am sure that no one was offended but was rather giving you some tips (although they were complaints too) to make the game a bit better.

                  There is no space where it says: "Blue:Well..." Just pointing out that it should have a space. (This isn't a complaint but rather a bug report)

                  Also, it's good that you added more screen shots one of which is actually part of the game. (Excluding battles, pokedex scenes, and the starter choice)

                  I'll try out the demo a bit and comment again afterwards, but I think you've at least made a small jump upwards here. (Even though I still think it's a little early, but I won't know until I try)
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                  Old November 8th, 2012 (2:12 PM). Edited November 9th, 2012 by EnglishMilkshake.
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                    I have released Beta 0.04 because why not...

                    I have furnished some maps and fixed a few bugs, it goes all the way to Lonlyard Forest since I'm not sure what Pokémon, alongside Scraggy, I should put on Route 3, and what music to Play in the next city. I'm not even sure what to name the Region...

                    Spoiler:

                    The second Gym Leader is named "Jackson"


                    If you see any bugs with the new version, lemme know.

                    The link to the demo if on the first post, try it out!

                    Come on! While this project is still fresh. Post something to improve the game!
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                      May I help with this game? I see its potential and I have experience with the RPG Maker Programs. I am an experienced mapper and can write pretty decently. I will send you a game of mine if you need some proof that I'm as good as I claim. Thank you if I can!
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                        Ok well i'm fairly new to things like this so, as such I have no idea how to start up the game. :/ sorry bout that
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                          I see you've added new screenshots, and I don't wanna sound like a broken record, but alot of them show features from essentails, which isn't really showing what you've done, it's showing what Maruno has done, and you're using.
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                            Pokémon Pear Blue Version

                            This game is being made with RPG Maker XP using Pokemon Essentials v10.

                            Good evening. Professor Oak and family are moving to a new never before seen region to do more research on Pokemon. Their new hometown, Grasplum Town, happens to be your hometown. You are about to recieve your first Pokémon, which will be either Treecko, Tepig, and Squirtle, and take on the Gym Leaders and become a Pokémon Master. The question is... can you catch 'em all?

                            Who are those thugs that roam around the region? And what are they there to do?

                            This game has a regional dex of Pokemon from the official regions. No fakemon included. You can even catch all 649 Pokémon in this fan game, but some aren't available until you get the National Dex.

                            Wanna see some screenshots? No Problem!

                            Spoiler:

                            Regional Pokedex

                            001. Treecko
                            002. Grovyle
                            003. Sceptile
                            004. Tepig
                            005. Pignite
                            006. Emboar
                            007. Squirtle
                            008. Wartortle
                            009. Blastoise
                            010. Rattata
                            011. Raticate
                            012. Glameow
                            013. Purugly
                            014. Pidove
                            015. Tranquill
                            016. Unfezant
                            017. Poochyena
                            018. Mightyena
                            019. Wurmple
                            020. Silcoon
                            021. Beautifly
                            022. Cascoon
                            023. Dustox
                            024. Magikarp
                            025. Gyarados
                            026. Feebas
                            027. Milotic
                            028. Pichu
                            029. Pikachu
                            030. Raichu
                            031. Munna
                            032. Musharna
                            033. Kricketot
                            034. Kricketune
                            035. Slakoth
                            036. Vigoroth
                            037. Slaking
                            038. Scraggy
                            039. Scrafty
                            040. Azurill
                            041. Marill
                            042. Azumarill
                            043. Grimer
                            044. Muk
                            045. Joltik
                            046. Galvantula


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                            Download Beta 0.06 here
                            B0.06 is not much different from B0.05 other than bug fixes and storyline placeholders. I'm not sure what to call the new Pokémon thug team (if possible, Team ???)

                            I'll work on Beta 0.07 once I get some ideas or some extra work.

                            Good luck, and hope you enjoy the game!
                            May I give just a few pointers?
                            - In my game there are 160 obtainable pokemon which is a fairly small amount, but you currently have 46, which is ridiculously small. More variety is needed.
                            - I'm sure many would agree that the tiles are a bit... boring. Mainly because they're old and people like to see newer HGSS/BW stuff, this also includes charsets.
                            - You may also want to upgrade trainer sprites as well.
                            - It's always good to have an original Hero/ine, rival and in some cases a new professor.

                            Above all these are just some criticisms, being in the beginners showcase means this is a relatively new game and there is a vast amount of planning being done. You don't have to take these to heart.

                            Good luck.
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                            Old November 12th, 2012 (3:26 PM). Edited November 12th, 2012 by EnglishMilkshake.
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                              What a bad way to bump. I'm sorry If you are offended, but the numbers will exceed 46 in later versions, and all 649 will be made available in some way shape or form.

                              It looks like I'll need spriters for this project. Now that you mention it, I'm thinking of using new protagonists, but someone will have to sprite them. Whoever does will be credited.

                              Not to mention the Gym Leader overworlds are just placeholders, and I choose the closest overworld to their design for the Gym Leaders.

                              I'll work on it...

                              And to top that off, I'll have to wait for Pokemon Essentials v11 before making a game with updated tiles. Sorry, but this game will have to be in FR/LG style for now, until Essentials v11...
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                              Old November 12th, 2012 (4:32 PM). Edited November 12th, 2012 by CourageHound.
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                                Ok I got past the first gym and now have entered the first Forrest area. I cannot continue much farther since I lack the the time to do so but I will give a quick overview of my thoughts so far. Everything I will write be constructive and kind criticism. If anyone has questions whatsoever about the analysis below or disagrees with anything I say, feel free speak up.

                                Ok well I like the game so far but, with it being a work in progress it also has some things to address. From when I first started the game with the greeting from prof. oak till where I stopped, I noticed uncanny similarities mirroring from the FR/LG games. Some variety and changes to the landscape would be nice. Also idk if your still working on adding stuff, or i was intentional, but the areas where you tried to modify to be unique actually seem extremely one-dimensional and straight forward. The towns are also a bit boring due to not being able to visit building and that there's so little content, but i'm sure its still a work in progress. Another thing I'd like to say is that the music has an obvious loop of where it would go on, end and then play again after a few seconds. Now I like the 4th gen battle scene but there are a few things that bug me. One is the slight sluggishness of battles(kinda sluggish throughout the game but more apparent in battles). Also with me getting Tepig as my starter(I love you for that) I noticed you used his B/W sprite but the battle scene is 4th gen formatted. Tepig's sprite wasn't really designed for that and looks very pixely. A re-spiriting would be nice.

                                Recap:
                                ~Needs more content
                                ~More fluid scene/animation transitions and music
                                ~Battle scenes are a bit lacking
                                ~Needs more move animations
                                ~More originality - more interesting over world

                                Some things I would like to see:
                                ~Interesting thins in your game that capture the player and make your game unique
                                ~Optional feature of your pokemon following you like in HG/SS
                                ~A point in the game or some kinds feature in your game where you have in depth or at least partial interactivity with your pokemon rather than you capture the little animals and they never see the light of day unless they're battling
                                ~A friendship checker like in D/P(Dr. Footstep)
                                ~A way to get Muk very early in the story
                                ~More pokemon
                                ~Poketech like Item

                                Well that's all. Good luck and keep up the good work!


                                EDITT: Ok this game was meant to be in FR/LG style I understand and accept that. However all I would like to see is better conduction of what it has to offer. Not that I'm saying that the overall style is "boring", just needs more development.
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                                  May I give just a few pointers?
                                  - In my game there are 160 obtainable pokemon which is a fairly small amount, but you currently have 46, which is ridiculously small. More variety is needed.
                                  - I'm sure many would agree that the tiles are a bit... boring. Mainly because they're old and people like to see newer HGSS/BW stuff, this also includes charsets.
                                  - You may also want to upgrade trainer sprites as well.
                                  - It's always good to have an original Hero/ine, rival and in some cases a new professor.

                                  Above all these are just some criticisms, being in the beginners showcase means this is a relatively new game and there is a vast amount of planning being done. You don't have to take these to heart.

                                  Good luck.
                                  Not being mean to you at all ... but it seems whenever there's a FRLG styled game. You seem to pick on just that. That it's FRLG styled. FRLG style is not that ''...boring'' it's quite appealing, if implemented correctly, maybe this persons skills will improve to implement it in such a manner, and not everyone likes to see HGSS or BW styles. I actually think BW sucks. Badly. I'd enjoy this game more if it were FRLG.
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                                    Beta 0.08 has been released. Are you shocked?

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                                    The third gym is located in Ceramist City. I am not sure what Gym Leader should be here...


                                    Good luck having to defeat Jackson, I'd recommend getting a Grimer with Mud Slap.
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                                      Beta 0.08 has been released. Are you shocked?

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                                      The third gym is located in Ceramist City. I am not sure what Gym Leader should be here...


                                      Good luck having to defeat Jackson, I'd recommend getting a Grimer with Mud Slap.
                                      You're releasing a lot of betas here.
                                      There is nothing wrong with it, just it'll make the next beta boring if they finish so close together*
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                                        You know what, I think I should upload the next demo before the project gets forgotten about.

                                        Beta 0.17 has been released. It has been a big modification since the previoulsy released beta. The demo ends at Gym 4. Comment on this thread if you encounter any bugs in the programming.

                                        Also, I haven't tested Gyms 3 and 4, so I'm not sure how hard or how easy they are compared to the previous gym Leaders. Be sure to reply once you defeat them.

                                        I do not reccomend you run off the save files of your previous demo if you downloaded it. Good luck, and give feedback after playing!
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                                          Old November 18th, 2012 (6:26 AM). Edited November 19th, 2012 by EnglishMilkshake.
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                                            Sorry, I'll fix that, if I can...

                                            Hmm.. I'm not sure how it skips to the Essen Region, I'll try to fix that.

                                            OK, I fixed it, I should upload the fixed Beta 0.17 soon. Look forward to it.

                                            ...Somebody BUMP this Topic before it gets forgotten about?
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                                              The entire Pokedex, with the exclusion the Legendaries at the last 2 positions, has been fully released. Check out Pokémon Pearl Blue!

                                              The Next Beta should be up after a while...
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                                                Sorry for the inconveniance, but Pokemon Pear Blue is not gonna be released any further, and will kick the bucket soon. I'll make sure to make the the semi-full version as the next update. Prepare to see how crudely drawn the new graphics will be.
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