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Old January 20th, 2013 (10:08 AM). Edited April 9th, 2013 by Dradier234.
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    Intro
    Pokémon Chaos Mind started 4 months ago. It has been developing more rapidly then usally these days. The plot of this game will be different and unique, just how I like it. This is using Essentials 10. The graphics will be FRLG because most graphics on Essentials are FRLG. I am very proud to present this to PC, as it is the first RMXP pokemon project that I successfully made without errors.

    Objective:
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    As a user of RM2K3, I want to try something new. I have used RMXP enough to know how it works.



    Main Plot: Main Plot: You are 13 years old. As the son\daughter of the champion, you were really lucky. You embark on a quest to find out the mystery of team Chaos Mind, what they desire to do, and why.

    Team Chaos Mind is a evil organization with a unknown purpose. They lurk every where causing chaos, saying its for the good of our kind. They say to have only one weakness, the Chaos Necklace. They desire the necklaces because they are their life-force. They currently wield the Chaos Necklace, but they struggle to keep hold of it because of the life force of the Pokemon dragging it away.

    Your dad explains to you about the how the world started and how Pokémon saved all mankind from Team Chaos Mind long ago. Your dad tells you to find out more about team Chaos Mind, and he sends you to his PKMN Champion Study Lab to get a Pokémon, although your mother Minerva highly disagrees. She thinks its best that you stay home and learn life skills. You go anyway, determined to get your starter Pokémon and begin your journey.

    Along the journey, you discover many Gym Leaders and many many secrets. There are many challenges ahead of you, and many accomplishments to beat. You are a proud trainer, and seek good out of the evil. You see the Chaos Mind as a destructive obstacle to your destiny, and you do what you can to stop it from ruining your fate.TO be continued.


    Story of long ago:
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    A long time ago, Chaos Ruled the earth. Everyone lived in brutality and no peace remained. A team named Chaos mind recked havoc among earth, stole from the poor, gained but did not give. The leader of this team was unknown. Then, where humanity needed it the most, Pokémon suddenly appeared, in many different varieties, like Reshiram, or Zeckrom, Shieldon, or Groudon. The Pokémon saved the people. Celebi grew grass and forests. Heatran created fire. Roserade planted flowers to keep the earth healthy, and many more Pokémon. The Pokémon sucked the evil energy off of the Chaos Necklace and released into good energy.


    Experience:
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    Pokémon like you never have before. Explore an all new region. Battle with Pokémon and explore new legendary Pokémon as well. Stroll around the huge world with improved 4th generation graphics. Use all new items like the light stone to old ones like potions. Visit daycare centers, heal your Pokémon, equip your Pokémon with powerful moves using TMs and HMs. Surf through unknown land. Fight the evil to save humanity from its greatest fear! The Chaos MInd!

    All features to improve your game will be available like the mystery gift. Catch Darkness and tame it. New Chaos Pokémon will be available. Darkrai, Giratina, and Arceus are now available in Chaos Form!




    Gym Leaders
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    First Gym:
    Creon City

    Gym Leader: Fistro
    Type: Rock
    Description: A headstrong gym leader that specializes in Rock types.


    Team
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    Me for everything (Solo Project)
    Except for beta testers




    Features
    All new region
    All new plot
    New organization\team
    new unexpected rival
    BW Load Screen
    Some events from amima


    Progress
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    Mapped to Deck City
    Route 1
    Route 2
    Square Garden
    New Pyron City
    Still needs polishing on events.

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    Final New Screens
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    Old Screens
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    Release
    Download Alpha 0.5: http://www.mediafire.com/?hamn1mo94s560ar

    Credits
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    Maruno
    Poccil and people who made Essientials v11
    Carmaniac for load screen

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    Old January 20th, 2013 (5:18 PM).
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    Congrats on starting another game dude! But there are a few things you could fix IF YOU WANT:
    -Add a better stroryline : The one you have currently is not really attractive(without any offence). Spice things up and add more plot to the storyline. Show that Team Chaos have a VERY evil plan and that the hero must jump in to stop it and not because his dad ordered him to.
    -On the last screenshots : I think you should use thinner ledges.
    -Upgrade your graphics : Just like Rayquaza once told me, people like more up-to-date graphics like HGSS-DPPt-BW-B2W2. (This is just an opinion, it looks good with FR/LG graphics too).
    After that the game looks good, if you ever need a storyliner i'm available to help you whenever you want!
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      Old January 20th, 2013 (6:22 PM).
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        Congrats on starting another game dude! But there are a few things you could fix IF YOU WANT:
        -Add a better stroryline : The one you have currently is not really attractive(without any offence). Spice things up and add more plot to the storyline. Show that Team Chaos have a VERY evil plan and that the hero must jump in to stop it and not because his dad ordered him to.
        -On the last screenshots : I think you should use thinner ledges.
        -Upgrade your graphics : Just like Rayquaza once told me, people like more up-to-date graphics like HGSS-DPPt-BW-B2W2. (This is just an opinion, it looks good with FR/LG graphics too).
        After that the game looks good, if you ever need a storyliner i'm available to help you whenever you want!
        Ill add storyline as I progress. Thanx! Ill also update the tiles by using crazy ninja guys HGSS ones. I might need a storyliner.

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        Good luck on your game, it could really be something good if you work hard on it
        Thanx!

        Update: I am looking mappers to update my maps into HGSS.
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        Old January 20th, 2013 (6:31 PM).
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        Update: I am looking mappers to update my maps into HGSS.
        You don't need mappers to update maps into HG/SS. You can do that yourself.
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        Old January 20th, 2013 (6:50 PM).
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        I might need a storyliner.
        Then don't hesitate to ask my help! That's why we're a community, to help each other.
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          i love the idea of having mom as your rival
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          Old January 21st, 2013 (8:06 AM). Edited January 21st, 2013 by Dradier234.
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            You don't need mappers to update maps into HG/SS. You can do that yourself.
            Yes, but I've mapped all the way up to Route 3 using FRLG, and I want a break. It also doesn't hurt to have a mapper.

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            Then don't hesitate to ask my help! That's why we're a community, to help each other.
            I'll surely ask for help when I need it! :D

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            i love the idea of having mom as your rival
            That might change... Thanks though!

            Update: I now have HGSS chars/overworlds. Remapping is now started in HGSS style by Nintendork.
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            Old January 21st, 2013 (2:33 PM).
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              Yes, but I've mapped all the way up to Route 3 using FRLG, and I want a break. It also doesn't hurt to have a mapper.

              I'll surely ask for help when I need it! :D


              That might change... Thanks though!

              Update: I now have HGSS chars/overworlds. Remapping is now started in HGSS style by Nintendodork.
              What did I say about the name? -w-

              Also, I'm mapping a few of your maps, I said, I am busy with my own game.
              Plus, seeing how they're done can give you idea on how to do it better.
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              Old January 21st, 2013 (3:16 PM). Edited January 22nd, 2013 by Dradier234.
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                Okay, thanks, I put you as part time mapper.
                Update: I will probably not upgrade to HGSS style..... Due to no mappers. If you want to be a FULL time mapper, contact me..
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                Old February 1st, 2013 (7:00 PM).
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                  I have some new screenies. Theres a new revealed character, Gary Oak.. This game follows some anima events to make it familiar.. This is when the player finds gary oak trying to catch a Kanghastan.... Eoic failure for him... Gary playes a important role in the game, when you get stronger, he battles you a couple times, and helps you out sometimes..


                  Credits to CrazyNinjaGuy for the char of Kanghastan in his kit..
                  Another funny screen
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                  Looks fine to me, but try to stay clear of using internet lingo within the game. Things such as "omg", "lol", "idk", etc. should really not be used, unless you're going for some type of comedic approach or that's just generally how you prefer it.

                  I just find that spelling it out fully looks more professional and polished.
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                  Old February 2nd, 2013 (6:22 AM).
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                    Okay, I might get rid of OMG in the future... But I'm still using the expressions like :D
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                      a simple "Yes!" would convey a similar message
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                      Old February 2nd, 2013 (11:05 AM). Edited February 2nd, 2013 by Dradier234.
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                        I guess.. I'm now asking for
                        spriter
                        experienced mapper
                        and scripter.
                        I'll be putting a request on the recruitment threads.

                        Hello guys! I just made a wiki, and you access it through my signature. Please comment on it and tell me how I can improve.
                        Or here...http://pkmn-chaos-mind.wikia.com/wiki

                        Heres New Pyron City, please give me advice on what to fix.
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                        Old February 10th, 2013 (5:24 PM).
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                          Urge, no ones posting...

                          New story of long ago
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                          A long time ago, a chaos pokemon named Darkrai appeared after Arceus created everything and ruled the earth. Everyone lived in brutality and no peace remained. A team named Chaos mind wrecked havoc among earth, stole from the poor, gained but did not give. The leader of this team was unknown but it was said that he, somehow, managed to capture the Chaos pokemon and extracted his DNA to create a clone who possessed more powerful abilities. Then, where humanity needed it the most, Arceus sent the Guardians Pokémon. They were 3 : Dialga, Palkia and Giratina. The Pokémon saved the people and gave birth to the other pokemon like Rattata, Celebi, Heatran, etc.... Celebi grew grass and forests. Heatran created fire. Roserade planted flowers to keep the earth healthy, and many more Pokémon. These Guardians put the chaos pokemon and his clone to sleep just before disappearing in a long slumber

                          Heres a screen of HGSS styled deck city, forgive me for double posting.
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                            I guess.. I'm now asking for
                            Heres New Pyron City, please give me advice on what to fix.
                            it's really empty and too square. It looks boring, if I were to visit it it would seem kind of uninteresting.
                            you need to make the borders less square like, and make it curve like, and flowing.

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                            there is no symmetry. while a town is different from a route, where one would be in the outdoors and wild, this one would have been planned out and made by real people; it seems like it was made randomly. You need to make it symmetrical and less cluttered and more interesting.
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                              it's really empty and too square. It looks boring, if I were to visit it it would seem kind of uninteresting.
                              you need to make the borders less square like, and make it curve like, and flowing.


                              there is no symmetry. while a town is different from a route, where one would be in the outdoors and wild, this one would have been planned out and made by real people; it seems like it was made randomly. You need to make it symmetrical and less cluttered and more interesting.
                              Hmmm, bout this?

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                                I like what you've done; I would move the blue/white building back a few spaces to keep it away from the trees, and connect the bottom concrete path with the rest of it with the path in the middle and it should be fine, good job! 8/10
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                                  Ill change that but in this sreen, the change isn't there, sorry.
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                                  Ill change that but in this sreen, the change isn't there, sorry.
                                  Why would you change virtually the same picture with just the message that you didn't change what you're planning to? Just...why? There really doesn't seem to be a point to it.
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                                    Sorry, here's the change.
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                                    Old February 15th, 2013 (2:57 PM). Edited February 23rd, 2013 by Dradier234.
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                                      Heres 3 new screens of the new WIP Route 1, Route 4 and a Deck City screen. Enjoy! A new character as main!




                                      EDIT: Even more new supa new screens!! Just updated 2-16 evening!

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                                        the blue fences seem out of place being randomly there next to nothing, and blocking the path to nothing
                                        the idea of elevation is really neat and something i always liked, but the way you placed the stairs makes it look unnatural and doesn't give the full effect you are trying to achieve

                                        other than that, theres not much else else to say about the maps, except that the trees have little edges and bits that you seem to be misplacing along the outermost edge of your tree barriers by accident

                                        I like it so far! and I like your tiles, I'm really picky about the ones i've found, I doubt I'll ever find a good one hahahaha. Good luck though, its looking good.
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                                          Why is the player dressed so fancy?


                                          the blue fences seem out of place being randomly there next to nothing, and blocking the path to nothing
                                          the idea of elevation is really neat and something i always liked, but the way you placed the stairs makes it look unnatural and doesn't give the full effect you are trying to achieve

                                          other than that, theres not much else else to say about the maps, except that the trees have little edges and bits that you seem to be misplacing along the outermost edge of your tree barriers by accident

                                          I like it so far! and I like your tiles, I'm really picky about the ones i've found, I doubt I'll ever find a good one hahahaha. Good luck though, its looking good.
                                          Thank you for the feedback! The player is Riley and he dresses fancy. Rileys a place holder. I'm probably going to use the DP Hero\Heroine, when I get hold of the back sprites of them. The blue fences is suppose to be surrounding the stairs, and the tree mistakes are fixed. I don't really know what else I could do to the stairs, because there isn't anywhere else to put it.
                                          Any suggestions?
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