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Old March 28th, 2013 (8:38 PM). Edited March 29th, 2013 by ShinyUmbreon189.
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    For those of you that don't know me I'm ShinyUmbreon189 aka on other forums as HalfBaked and RealTalkRealFlow. I'm a rapper and have been in the game for a few years now and I think it's time to post my lyrics on PC. No fake lyrics here, it's all real talk. No money, drugs, women, fashion, etc. No promoting killing or mentioning my money, gold chains, diamonds on my neck/wrists, no 24" rims on my car, etc. My lyrics are based on real events or my beliefs on specific situations/events.

    Others have said my lyrics are powerful while some are mind opening and powerful at the same time. Some have said they have really good flow and delivery and some have said events are saddening. I'm a versatile rapper, all my songs are based on different topics and no writers block issues here like on the radio. My lyrics aren't repetitive. There is profanity but not in every line/bar some songs have 10 swears while one has 2 or 3, it varies song to song. I will not be posting the hooks to my song those because those are exclusive to certain people I know and still in the construction of them.

    All these lyrics are written by me and would really appreciate it if other people don't steal them for I have dedicated a ton of time in writing them, so please no stealing my lyrics.

    Every week or so I will upload a new song or whenever I feel for that matter. May be 2 days may be 2 weeks may be a month may be the next or same day. It depends.

    First song is "The End" and it's my true beliefs on what the govt. is doing to this country. Please no disagreeing with my lyrics and try to turn me away from the lies when they're blatant. I will allow constructive criticism but I've never had these issues anyways so post what you would like about the song or songs and word structure.


    Government hiding behind all they're conspiracies
    Destroyin us, so devious with all they're theories
    Theyre takin our rights, another way to control us
    Then when we disagree those dictators go after us
    World domination, causin nothin but chaos
    They're corruption has put all the people in danger
    Those murders are a hoax, makin em stronger
    Fed up with they're lies, can't take theyre shit any longer
    We ain't got no leaders no real motivation
    Just a cold corrupt nation with a fucked up generation
    Peoples brainwashed thinkin Obama's the inspiration
    Can't believe were so blind we don't see all his destruction
    He ain't helpin shit, he makin it worse
    Historys repeating itself, we done gone in reverse
    Lied to so many times, don't know whats fake or real
    Get ready, it's bout to turn into a battlefield

    (Yo we need to open our eyes and mind you know,
    The govt can't hide forever,
    eventually the truths gonna come out
    See politicians they ain't nothin but Illuminatic puppets
    Or whatever them motherfuckers wanna call it)

    They're the reason posses are goin on these killin sprees
    But them school shootings ain't nothin but conspiracies
    And for what, to get ahold of our gun control?
    Like criminals don't have guns, we won't be all helpless
    Thats why a .22 pistol in the streets of Chi-Town
    Strictest gun laws maintains the highest body count
    Gangstas doin drive-bys wantin to fuckin throw down
    All over guns and drugs they want in pounds of amount
    Killin' innocents over nothin but money and corruption
    Over shit smuggled here by illegal immigration
    End of the world new world order beginning of another
    Civil War mothafuckers were not ready for the gore

    (People they're lyin to us about everything
    School shootings, taxes, war, news, 9/11, storm tradgeties
    It's all a way for them to get inside our head and manipulate our mind
    But they ain't gettin mine)


    Post away, and I will update with new material soon!
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    Old March 28th, 2013 (11:02 PM).
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      wow you are too good i cant belive it ...... i am not so good in poetry but i am good in writting fiction. i hope you continue your work. take care
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      Old March 28th, 2013 (11:42 PM).
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        Thanks homie I really appreciate it. It's not exactly poetry (rap lyrics) but still counts as poetry and it's my true beliefs and I believe it's legit non-fiction but people just don't realize it.

        Most of my songs are written through inspiration, usually I can't write something serious like this unless somethings motivates me to. I mean I can but it wont sound as clean, delivery wont be as good, flow wont seem spot on, etc. I like to mess around with the rhyme schemes as well and not just A,B C,D, E,F with double each until the whole song is over. In this one I added rhyme schemes in one bar/line so more than one word rhymed while maintaining my flow and skipped bars/lines to rhyme into the next one after it while the one in between rhymed with the following line like Town, count, down, amount. See how that works? They are all similar in rhyme and have the same characteristics but are completely different rhyming words. You gotta know when to use them and not to use them. I can't stand it when rhyming is competitive, I'm versatile with my rhymes, you'll see more rhyming techniques in other songs like ,multisyllable rhymes, perfect rhymes, bending rhymes (pronounced in different ways to rhyme), etc.
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        Old March 30th, 2013 (8:45 PM).
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          I know its rap lyrics... good work i will be waiting for more
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          Old April 8th, 2013 (8:40 AM).
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            Well met.
            Though, I personally believe that all lyrics are poetry, albeit a different kind.
            Regardless, these are rather impressive. I'll be on the lookout for when you add more.
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            Old April 10th, 2013 (9:27 PM).
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              Okay I have another song I'm gonna post and it was when I was going through hard times, I got songs over all kinds of topics just so you guys know. So here's the lyrics, it's got 3 verses instead of 2 and the 2nd verse is 50% longer, than the other 2. 16, 24, 16.

              Back in the days, when I was just a little kid
              Where no hatred or my worries ever existed
              Back when life was good had no responibilites
              No possiblities that I'd ever be out of safety
              Had motivation, parents were good role-models
              They didn't down the bottles and they didn't do the drugs
              They taught me right from wrong can truely say they're my idols
              Like guardian angels everlasting symbols
              Of love and hope that someday I'd grow up to be strong
              And I'd thrive to survive any hard times in my life
              That I would never give up, no matter how hard the obstacle
              Lifes cruel to you at the same time it's beautiful
              You make your own destiny, gotta show your bravery
              Good things will come out of it, and that's a guarantee
              Two wrongs don't make a right, but don't turn away from fright
              If you do the right things, everything will be alright


              I kept asking myself. Why does life gotta be so hard?
              Seems since birth, I've been dealt with a losing card
              Its got me to my knees with pain i cant ignore
              Making a break to the door, wanna pour shots to ease my pain
              Hoping that all this torture will never remain the same
              Playing tricks on my brain, can longer sustain the pain
              It's givin me a migrain trying to puzzle together
              Words And emotions impossible to explain
              Started pickin my poison to escape reality
              Made me feel safe, mind set free of anxiety
              Feelin no stress the only thing that calmed my nerve
              Not really giving a fuck, if I was kicked to the curb
              Had nothing to live for, didn't exist in this world
              No money, no job, no friends I was constantly bored
              Only had my pen and pad, wrote down what was on my mind
              Pissed off at mankind and it made me wanna reside
              In society told myself I'd never be successful
              Was so hostile towards others and I felt so shameful
              So hateful, so regretful, I didn't think I was normal
              This hatred inside of me, had me anti-social
              I failed the mission cuz I didn't wanna listen
              Always felt I was the victim and I didn't feel like livin
              Need the fountain of youth, so I can feel good again
              To be awaken for my weaknesses that I can re-strenghthen

              Everyday I feel this pain, just want it to go away
              Wakin up the next day rerun of yesterdays replay
              lifes nothin but a decay starin at the gateway
              With nothin else to lose hopin in my life will be okay
              I doubt it will it's the same fucking routine
              Over and over, I need to chill out with some codeine
              Then cleanse my soul, of all this pain with an elbow
              Of marijuana smoke, so I don't turn into a psycho
              I've had enough of this shit can't handle it one bit
              Another minute of it, then a crime I may commit
              I feel so unfit, why am I even here in the first place?
              According to me, I put my family to a disgrace
              I'm starin at a bottle of this 40 oz of liquor
              Wanna wash my pain away, got my finger on the trigger
              Russian Roullete, drugs all up in the chamber
              I'm in danger unless I come up with a life changer
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