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Old April 6th, 2013 (10:07 AM).
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Thank you! *cough* So I'm still really stuck on the E4, namely in that I can't make a Lorelei I'm happy with. This is what I've got so far.



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Old April 10th, 2013 (8:14 PM).
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Thanks for the help guys, you're the best. In all seriousness though, I'm starting to like the way she looks. A case of Stockholm syndrome perhaps?

Anyway, I tried my hand (hah!) at a VS Sprite. This is my second attempt at anything like this, and my first serious one. I'm pretty pleased with myself.



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Old April 10th, 2013 (11:27 PM).
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It looks like... it's been stretched or skewed, but idk why...
Did you do it from scratch? It looks pretty damn good man :)
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Old April 11th, 2013 (6:56 AM).
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Hmm. Someone over on the Spriter's Resource also said it was skewed. Can you try explaining? And yeah, it's scratch. I had a pretty particular reference though. :)
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Old April 11th, 2013 (8:09 AM).
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It looks like he's been skewed to the right, maybe cause his head is angled? I can't quite figure out what it is.
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Old April 14th, 2013 (7:02 AM).
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No longer skewered?

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Old April 14th, 2013 (7:49 AM).
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    It looks better, but it still looks kind of squashed. Like the sides are too wide for how tall the VS sprite is, if that makes sense. Maybe it's just me. Also, I think the outlining for his arm could use a little more contrast on the side closest to his face.
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    Old April 15th, 2013 (9:56 AM).
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      really cool sprites! great work!
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      Old April 15th, 2013 (5:55 PM).
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        Nice work, but there are still couple issues:

        His head really seems too large, like as large as his shoulders...

        It's a bit pillowshaded: the shadow on his face tells the light come from left, while the shade on his sleeve is coming from top-right.

        There is missing shadow on his t-shirt under his arm. The light is coming from left et his body is facing right, so all is t-shirt should be shaded. Same goes for the right part of the (blue) vest. I would say that it should be shaded from about under his right eye (our left eye OPV) until the t-shirt.
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        Old May 25th, 2013 (10:40 AM).
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          woooow!! Awesome Sprites!
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