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Old April 18th, 2013 (3:20 AM). Edited April 22nd, 2013 by Eren Jaeger.
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    PKMN HAZE

    [STORYLINE!]
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    The main character's story starts at "SILKWIND TOWN" in the region called EON! There once a day came that Prof.Oak will be visiting his lab at SILKWIND TOWN. Prof.Oak has a
    student named "Jagold" which is your Rival's brother. Originally rival's name is Ken. So one day when Ken got the news that Prof.Oak were going to take a visit.. Ken rush to Player's house and came saying the news and he also said to stop at his place. When player got to his place, he wasn't there.. and Jagold said that he went to the lab when he saw Prof.Oak going in the lab. So Jagold told the Player to go at Prof.Oak's lab. Once the player got there, Ken already receive his first "POKEMON" which is random base on your weakness and advantage. So Ken rush out the lab and test his very first PKMN. So Player will also receive his first PKMN from "Unova region" and Prof.Oak will let you choose within the 3 PKMN - Snivy, Tepig, and Oshawott. Once Player got his PKMN, journey starts.


    [About EON Region]
    Spoiler:
    People once believe that a two Legendary Pokemon "Latios and "Latias" made they're beautiful region. After the war between Zekrom and Reshiram, Latios and Latias said in they're stories that they take full control on both POKeMON and reach they're understanding and stopped the war because of they're knowledge, after that Latios and Latias became a Myth and stories. However, Team Rocket is searching for them.


    [Updated Screen Shots]
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    [TOOLS USED]
    Spoiler:
    Advance Map
    APE
    NSE
    YAPE
    XSE
    APSE
    APIE
    PTC
    NTME
    Sappy
    Mid2Agb
    TitleScreenCryChanger
    Overworld
    Unlz-GBA
    Poke-Cry GUI
    Hex Editor - Goldfinger
    FSF
    YAPE
    A-Trainer
    PET


    SPECIAL THANKS TO
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    WeslyfG - Tiles
    Swampert tools - tools
    hackmew - tools
    diegoisawesome - XSE tutorial!
    DawnRyder - Title screen Tutorial
    miksy91 - Hex editor Gold finger
    Gamre2020 - Unoffical XSE
    Hussian Patel - continue part Title screen tutorial (better)
    Shinyquagsire - inserting and repoint cry tutorial.
    LU-HO - Advance Map
    gamefreak


    [Need to do]
    Spoiler:
    Change Hero and other sprites
    Change some tiles
    Change Tilescreen and title - DONE.
    Change events.


    [NEEDED]
    New sprites
    Expert at Scripting
    New tiles

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    Old April 19th, 2013 (5:10 PM).
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      The hacks story is pretty good I think.

      Although the Titlescreen and the tiles need some work so they will be good. The mountain tile is good though.

      Goodluck with this I look forward for the next updates.
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      Old April 19th, 2013 (5:18 PM).
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        The hacks story is pretty good I think.

        Although the Titlescreen and the tiles need some work so they will be good. The mountain tile is good though.

        Goodluck with this I look forward for the next updates.
        Yes, I'll be updating everything soon. Title screen sucks most of all :\
        anyways, thanks for the luck!
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        Old April 19th, 2013 (6:02 PM).
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          It looks really good so far and interesting story I can't wait for an update and some gameplay. I also love the male spirte's hat. Will you also have a female or stick with the story and fix to just male?

          I do have a question though, do you know what starter pokemon we'll start out with yet?
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          Old April 19th, 2013 (6:56 PM).
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            It looks really good so far and interesting story I can't wait for an update and some gameplay. I also love the male spirte's hat. Will you also have a female or stick with the story and fix to just male?

            I do have a question though, do you know what starter pokemon we'll start out with yet?
            Good question! I'll randomly pick out on D/P, B/W and hoenn starters. Which means
            all 3 starters will be in 3 different regions, hopefully there cries will be changed as well.
            Anyways, I'll fix everything! thanks :D
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            Old April 19th, 2013 (11:18 PM).
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            Here is my review:
            Storyline
            The storyline contains a few grammatical errors which you should look out for. I won't elaborate more on it. Okay, first thing, after reading just a few sentences, I noticed that you're just re-writing the typical Fr/Lg routine. It might be just me, or others might agree too, but I dislike that. Also, a few characters seemed too casual. For example:
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            Prof. Oak didn't think and just gave the PokeDex
            Try to give Samuel a more former tone, because he has been known since 1998 to be like that. And again, defeating the gyms, elite 4, and stopping Team Rocket is the generic storyline. Try to add more spice and creativity. And for the rest of the storyline, they are fresh and new, so I have no issues with that.

            Screenshots
            First, like what Shadowraze said, your titlescreen needs work. The background is really messy and the whole titlescreen looks empty. As for the in-game graphics, the grass (GRASS, not BUSH) tiles are the color of puke. Try to include more shades, and fix the coloring. I'd recommend at least 3 shades, and get the palette from somewhere else, because your version isn't looking good. Your house tile looks really messed up too, if you're looking to create a more creative house, insert a new one or at least fix your version. Your mapping seems fine, except that some parts are a little too empty.

            OW
            Your overworld lacks shades and it seems a bit too big as compared to the other Fr ones.
            It's either you change one (your custom one) or you change all. (The original ones).

            Overall, I give this a 6/10. You're just in your early stages, so I won't be too strict about the ratings, but I believe your hack has the potential to be FAR better.
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            Old April 20th, 2013 (9:20 AM).
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              As it´s too early for a prediction I´m always interested in new hacks.
              As mentioned before, the titlescreen needs more work but I think you can fix that.
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              Old April 20th, 2013 (10:15 AM).
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                Nice! I really love the story and the tiles you made.
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                Old April 20th, 2013 (6:22 PM).
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                  It's looks like a good hack. As some others said, you need to do some work on tiles and Title Screen but anyways, keep it up!
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                  Old April 21st, 2013 (7:38 PM).
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                    It's looks like a good hack. As some others said, you need to do some work on tiles and Title Screen but anyways, keep it up!
                    I'm working with the tiles but anyways title screen updated.
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                    Old April 22nd, 2013 (3:46 AM).
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                    ...You used the example background for the titlescreen.
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                      ...You used the example background for the titlescreen.
                      already said it's updated.
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                      Old April 22nd, 2013 (7:37 AM).
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                      already said it's updated.
                      Oh sry. That's a lot better :I
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                      Old April 23rd, 2013 (1:45 AM).
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                        Nice hack. I like it but can you fix the tiles?

                        This hack has potential. Good luck on this...
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                        Old April 23rd, 2013 (5:07 AM).
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                        Nice titlescreen fix. It looks much better now.
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                        Old April 23rd, 2013 (6:13 AM).
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                          Really better Title Screen now. I love it. Also can you change the logo- Pokemon Fire Red Version to Pokemon Haze? I would look nice after it.
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                          Old April 23rd, 2013 (4:32 PM).
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                            Really better Title Screen now. I love it. Also can you change the logo- Pokemon Fire Red Version to Pokemon Haze? I would look nice after it.
                            Of course. I kinda spend more time on learning to script.
                            well, scrnshot updated.
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