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Old August 28th, 2013 (6:31 AM). Edited August 23rd, 2014 by *Riolu Master*.
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    Characters:
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    Introduction

    Hello there! I'm gonna be making a sprite comic for all to see!
    If you want to be a fan of my comic just say "fan me"!

    He was just a Riolu. But he gets in these bad guy's business and now he has to find out what
    their planning.. But he can't do it alone.




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    Goals

    1 Issue
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    20 Issues
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    1 fan
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    Old August 28th, 2013 (7:28 AM).
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      If you want to make the Issue name a link, put this in the spoiler

      [*url=LINK TO THE ISSUE]ISSUE NAME[/url]

      Take out the asterisk, put in the needed things and it should look like this:
      [*url=pokecommunity.com]PokeCommunity[/url]

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      Old August 28th, 2013 (1:33 PM).
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        Well, I'll be the first! Fan me!

        I look forward to this, looks good as of now.
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        Old August 28th, 2013 (1:47 PM).
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          Looks really cool. Can't wait to see where this goes. Fan me!
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          Old August 28th, 2013 (3:19 PM).
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            Old August 28th, 2013 (3:59 PM).
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              Lookin' good so far! Keep it up!
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              Old August 28th, 2013 (10:20 PM).
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                fan meh, seems good they are fairly short but that is okay
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                Old August 29th, 2013 (1:46 AM).
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                I am genuinely feeling sorry for Goldeen right now.

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                Old August 30th, 2013 (8:28 AM).
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                  Old August 30th, 2013 (9:09 AM).
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                  These comics are great so far, I can't wait to see what happens in them next! I'm loving Goldeen's character. Only one line spoken to date and yet I'm already loving its tone haha. The use of sprites has been great but I'm curious as to why you chose each Pokémon that you did? At any rate, keep up the good work - can't wait to see the rest!

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                  Old August 30th, 2013 (3:14 PM).
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                    Hey rockscolbs nice comic looking forward to more of these comics.
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                    Old September 1st, 2013 (7:32 AM).
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                      Issue 4!

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                      Old September 1st, 2013 (7:35 AM).
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                      WOOHOO GOLDEEN CAN FINALLY MOVE

                      This is an epic series. Can't wait for more. Hopefully we'll get to see her again in a later issue. :D
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                      Old September 1st, 2013 (9:10 AM).
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                      NOO, GOLDEEN, I'LL MISS YOU :( She was just getting into her personality, she could've been such a help to the group. I really hope she comes back in a future issue 3
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                      Old September 1st, 2013 (9:53 AM).
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                        Life is hard when you're a Goldeen. Keep them up! :D
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                        Old September 1st, 2013 (1:16 PM).
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                          I made another quick Issue! New Template!
                          Tell me if you like the new template style.

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                          Old September 1st, 2013 (1:50 PM).
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                          OH GOD, IT'S DARKRAI, WE'RE DOOMED :(

                          I much prefer the old style of comic, it was so much cleaner and flowed much better. This new style leaves too much padding and cuts off some of the text in the captions. Also Pinsir has an 'i', not an 'e' :D

                          I'm loving them so far though, and I'm definitely curious as to who Darkrai is and what the evil team want. Did you plan this story out before or do you make it up as you go out of interest?
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                          Old September 1st, 2013 (2:50 PM).
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                            OH GOD, IT'S DARKRAI, WE'RE DOOMED

                            I much prefer the old style of comic, it was so much cleaner and flowed much better. This new style leaves too much padding and cuts off some of the text in the captions. Also Pinsir has an 'i', not an 'e' :D

                            I'm loving them so far though, and I'm definitely curious as to who Darkrai is and what the evil team want. Did you plan this story out before or do you make it up as you go out of interest?
                            I agree with you. It's just that the old template had lines that were slightly moved.
                            And I just make the story as I go and I try to make the endings of each issue suspenseful to make you want to know what happens next.
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                            OMG DARKRAI WILL KILL ALL THE THINGS

                            I agree with Ozzy too, the old style was much more easy to read with and was more smooth. You might want to edit the current one into being thinner and another color (blue, maybe?).

                            You seem to enjoy making these, and I enjoy reading them, so good luck with more! :D
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                            Old September 3rd, 2013 (5:05 AM).
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                              Oh my god, this comic is so great!
                              I can't wait for the next issue! :3


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                              Old September 5th, 2013 (6:32 PM).
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                                Announcement! Unfortunately my laptop will be getting fixed for the next 10 to 12 days
                                So there won't be any issues for a while
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                                  That's fine. Update asap. Fan me!

                                  I also like your plan with this comic on how you naturally make the next issue and the next on the spot instead of creating the story in one sitting. I don't know if it's good or bad, but It's definitely unique. Maybe you can create posts where we can interact with the comic like making us vote or suggest ideas on what a character would do, say, etc.
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                                  Old September 9th, 2013 (1:14 AM).
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                                    Fan me.

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                                    That's fine. Update asap. Fan me!

                                    I also like your plan with this comic on how you naturally make the next issue and the next on the spot instead of creating the story in one sitting. I don't know if it's good or bad, but It's definitely unique. Maybe you can create posts where we can interact with the comic like making us vote or suggest ideas on what a character would do, say, etc.
                                    Love this idea. Your story is amazing so far and I'm really excited to see where you take it, but an idea like Logiedan's could really help for those times when you're lacking some ideas or you need a new direction for the story. I'm excited to see what happens next though so please fix the laptop! :D
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                                    Old September 9th, 2013 (4:26 PM). Edited September 15th, 2013 by *Riolu Master*.
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                                      That's fine. Update asap. Fan me!

                                      I also like your plan with this comic on how you naturally make the next issue and the next on the spot instead of creating the story in one sitting. I don't know if it's good or bad, but It's definitely unique. Maybe you can create posts where we can interact with the comic like making us vote or suggest ideas on what a character would do, say, etc.
                                      Yes I was already planning to do The R Awards sometime later. I may try to use the slow laptop to do some issues.

                                      UPDATE: I can announce that my laptop will be back by Tuesday! And I'll definitely try to get an issue in. (After I play some amnesia a machine for pigs.)
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