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Old March 21st, 2014 (7:27 PM).
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    Okay, so here's a fun, little writing game. I'll start off with the first sentence of a story, and then the next poster posts the next sentence, and then the next person posts the next sentence, and so on and so forth. I wouldn't really recommend copying and pasting the story so far into your post, as that could get pretty long, and who's really going to read all of it? However, if you guys do it, I'll do it, so it's really up to you.

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    You know what? I could have been a mailman, Jerry thought.
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    Old March 22nd, 2014 (10:27 AM).
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    He watched a small mail vehicle pass by from his perch on the back of the garbage truck.
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    Old March 22nd, 2014 (9:11 PM).
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      "At least this job is more exciting, sometimes," he reminded himself as he gave a signal to the garbage truck driver that they were to follow the mail vehicle, their new target.
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      Old March 22nd, 2014 (10:02 PM).
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        Unexpectantly, the mail vehicle veered off to the high hills, which towers over the city as the sunny afternoon wore on, a high glaring oval in the midist of the bright sky.
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        Old March 23rd, 2014 (4:08 PM).
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          That's odd, Jerry thought, what kind of mail truck goes over there?
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          Old March 23rd, 2014 (11:55 PM).
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            What kind of delivery would this truck even carrying?, Jerry thought, a storm of thoughts in his mind, well, there's no going back now, after all this way
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            Old March 24th, 2014 (2:33 AM).
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              Jerry then drives the truck off the cliff, attempting to follow the mail van, then he found the most peculiar thing he had ever seen in his life... What in the-?!
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              Old March 24th, 2014 (2:45 AM).
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              Right in front of him is a disgusting groaning luminous slime creeping out of the back of the mail van.
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              Old March 24th, 2014 (3:59 AM).
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                The looks made him want to throw up, it was scary and repulsive.
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                Old March 24th, 2014 (7:34 AM).
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                  The ooze suddenly explodes from the back of the mail van, splattering onto the windshield of Jerry's garbage truck.
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                  Old March 24th, 2014 (7:41 AM).
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                    "Well, I certainly hope my insurance covers this," remarked Jerry with revulsion, switching on his wipers.
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                    Old March 24th, 2014 (9:49 AM).
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                      Now though..., Jerry glanced outside, a frenzy of canyons and cliffs sprouting everywhere. The mail truck screeched to a stop suddenly.
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                      Old March 24th, 2014 (12:34 PM).
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                        Two creatures bolted from the mail truck.
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                        Old March 24th, 2014 (12:48 PM).
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                          Jerry asks the driver to slow down, as they parked just behind the truck, the two strange creatures leaving dust in their wake.
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                          Old March 24th, 2014 (5:45 PM).
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                          The two strange creatures decided to go hide in a sewer.
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                          Old March 25th, 2014 (6:04 AM).
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                            What peculiar creatures may they be? Jerry reluctantly followed the two strange creatures only to find himself in a sewer.
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                            Old March 25th, 2014 (9:52 AM).
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                              "Cribits, the agents is following us!" one of the creatures whispered in a raspy voice to the other, "What are we going to do?"
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                              Old March 25th, 2014 (10:58 AM).
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                                "We make a run for it," the other hissed, spittle spewing around, "Master would not be pleased."
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                                Old March 30th, 2014 (7:15 PM).
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                                  The agent walked into the damp tunnel and waited a moment for his eyes to adjust to the darkness.
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                                    The agent only manages to catch a glimpse of the two creatures fleeing from the scene because of the dark and foul-smelling place, he tried to run after them but...
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                                      "What the!?" The agent managed to say before he slipped, hitting his head on a concrete wall and blacked(Or should I say whited?) out.
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                                      He awoke after a short period of darkness to find himself being dragged down this long damp tunnel by the two creatures he had been following.
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                                        "What if master would not be pleased with this?", the other creature said. "It doesn't matter now, would you risk us getting caught due to this puny human?" "I guess not, let's hurry! The opening is near!"...

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                                          "Uggh, where is Jerry?" Susan thought. "It's not like him to be late. I'll just call him."
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