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[Pokémon] pokemon dream gold

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Hello every one this is first writing work i am making this story by taking base the story of gbc pokemon gold game.:D
i wish to make to hack acc. To this story so i am writing this

I hope you all will like it
 
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CHP:1- Introduction
[talking with prof.juni through PC]

Prof.juni:hello! I see you are the new boy who is about to get new pokemon at pokemon lab oh you are confused who am i,i am prof.elm assitant uhh.. Whats our name by the way
(we type our name)
Intro cont...
So i will give you some guidance
in this world of pokemon you can do many things by collaborating with pokemon i have heard you want to become pokemon champion.
For this catch as many pokemon you can and raise you friendship with them.
OK.. I will see you tommorow.
INTRO ENDS
CHP ends
I will start putting some dialogue from next time
 
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CHP:2-getting starter
[note:i am denoting player as ash]
(player wakes up in room well every thing seems normal now...)
(a voice comes)
mom:son! Come down for brakfast you hava to go lab for taking your first pokemon you shouldn't be late!
Ash:yeah mom! coming.
(To self)yeah i will be getting my first pokemon today i am so excited!!!
Mom:come down fast son.
Ash:yeeeaahh mom!!
(mom cares so much)
(player comes down)
mom: oh! Finally you are down.
Come on now eat your breakfast and hurry up.
Ash:yeah mom.dont worry i am on time

NEW BARK TOWN
goes to prof elm lab
{prof.elm lab}

prof.juni: ohh.. So you are here
by the way who are you?
Ash: ohh come on prof.juni you forgot you were going to give me my starter and...
Prof.juni:ahh yess... Correct
come over here this are the three starters
1.water type totodile
2.fire type cyndaquil
3.grass type chikorita
you can select one
ash:yes! I know them, but whom do i choose all of them are cool
ohh i wish i can take all of them
prof.juni:Sorry! Thats not happenning.
So be calm and select on
ash: ok now i select this one...
[Selects cyndaquil]
prof.juni: oh great then..
Well ash if you don't mind i have a request for you.
Ash:umm.. Why i am having a bad feeling about this.
Prof.juni:come on don't say that i gave a pokemon now can't you help me.
Ash:yeah!yeah! Ok what it is?
Prof.juni: prof elm is at mr.pokemon's house who lives near cherrygrove city he is helping him in searching of mega evolution a new tpe of evolution.
Ash:uh..mega evolution?
Prof.juni:yes! It is a new type of evolution through it is still not clear.
But anyway he forget is briefcase here..he called me to sen him this can you go and give this to him?
Ash:well,that's not hard.
Prof.juni: ok then! Take this go
(hands over briefcase)
(ash tals to himself while going out)
mega evolution huh?I hope you will also mega evolve someday cyndaquil,well for now i have to do this work.
But first.come on cyndaquil i will meet you with my mom and i have to tell about this quest to mom.
CHP ENDS
please readers i would be very happy if anyone can give a feedback to my story review suggestions or even a short cooment how you like it
 
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CHP 3-Prof.Juni's quest

(at ash house with his mom)
mom: ohh!!look at the adorable pokemon how cute!!
Cyndaquil:cynada..
Ash:mom meet my first pokemon cyndaquil.
Mom: yeah i can see did prof.elm gave it to you?
ash:nope! He was out for a work his assitant prof.juni gave it me.
Mom: ok come here cyndaquil i will give you something tasty to eat!
(cyndaquil burns its flame in happiness)
ash:yes,mom prof.juni asked me to do a task for her.
Mom:well..will you be late?
Ash:i think it will not take much time i will be back soon.
Mom:then it's ok but eat something first and then only leave.
Ash: ok mom!eat something cyndaquil we are going on our first quest!
Cyndaquil:cynndaa!!
(after eating)
ash:mom i am going.
Mom: ok have taken your bag?
Ash:yes mom
mom: and bootle you will get thirsty on your way...and handkerchief..what about your food should i pack some food for you..and
ash:mom!mom! Be calm don't worry to much i will be fine
i will come back home soon don't worry and by the way there are pokemon centers on the way.
Mom: OK if you say so but be careful
ash: ok bye mom!
Mom:bye son!
Ash: ok cyndaquil are you ready?
Cyndaquil:cynndaa!!
Ash:let's go then

So they started walking they first headed for the cherrygrove city so that they can ask someone the route to their destination
but they got enconter by a group of caterpie!

Ash:uh what's this a caterpie,cool we have encountered only pidgey and sentrets
i have not expected to see a whole bunch of them together by the way
ok then they are bug type so my fire type will be good...ok cyndaquil use ember!
Cyndaquil:cynda??
Ash:what? Go use ember
cyndaquil:....
Ash: uh i think you still don't know the move ember
what are we going to do now
(suddenly a voice came)
???:go growlithe use scary face!
Growlithe:groww!!
(all the caterpies ran away)
ash:who was that?
Inspector jenny:what are you doing here don't you know the notice.
Ash:uhh..what notice?
Ins.jenny:seems you are not aware of it.
Recently team rocket of kanto have entered johto and are capturing all pokemon and are scaring them away
so pokemon inthis area are behaving aggresively to defend
ash: oh i didn't know that
ins.jenny: ok but be safe don't walk much in grassy area for know we are taking measures to calm the pokemon so don't worry
(takes her bike and goes)
ash:wow..what a start
ohh..i can see the cerrygrove city there let's go

so ash goes to the town and heals his pokemon and rest for while and then now starts his journey again..

Ash:umm..excuse me do you know where mr.pokemon live
man:well..i know but don't you know where he lives
ash: (if i knew i didn't have asked you) well no
man:he lives just a bit ahead go straight and take a bit right way to will find his house.
Ash: oh thanks!
Man:wait i know take this it is a map card i maked it for pokegear it's not for sale right now but you can take it advertise it for me.
Ash:well..ok if you say so

so ash moves forward encounter some pokemon level up them
getting some berries on the way and he finally reachers up there
he enters the house

prof.elm: oh i see you are here!
Wheres my briefcase
ash:well..here it is
prof.elm:thank god you are on time i was worried about it
ash:yeah(at least you can say thank you well leave it)
prof.elm:by the thanks for delivering it to me.
Ash: oh i think he read my mind..
Prof.elm:did you said something
ash:no,no..i said it's ok
prof.oak: oh so you are the trainer who recieved his first starter
i see your pokemon is very happy with you,you take good care of him
ash:yeah we are good friends!
Prof.oak:i see..well i found the person i was finding

everyone sees at him in wonder

mr.pokemon:whom where you finding?
Prof.oak: i was finding someone who takes care of his pokemon have a friendly relation with them and i think he is perfect..
(removes something from bag)
here take this
ash:what it is?
Prof.oak:it is a pokedex.
Ash: pokedex??
Prof.oak: yes it is a machine that records data of pokemon that you see
ash:so why are you giving it me.
Prof.oak:i think you are trustworthy and you are a pokemon trainer so you will of course roam around to catch many pokemon so you an fill it
oh! Look at the time i should leave now
ash:he rushed out so suddenly.
Prof.elm:well anyway you are lucky kid prof.oak himself gave you pokedex..
Tell prof.juni i will be back after my work is done
ash: ok i will return now

SO..the quest is finally over and he steps out is there someting else waiting for ash then wait for next chp
 
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CHP:4-Encounter-rival OR friend

after ash delivers the briefcase to prof.elm at mr.pokemon house he left the house to return back home just when he receives a call

prof.juni: oh ash! I have a message for you your mom came running to lab and said he want to give you your pokegear that you forgot at home.
Ash:uhh..yes i forgot it at home?
I will come back now to take it the work is done by the way.
Prof.juni:the work is done? You are fast young man.but don't worry kris,prof.elm daughter was on his way to meet his dad so i have sent your pokegear with her.
You will surely meet her on way.
Ash:and...why is that so?
Prof.juni: Oh! She is just a kind cheerful,happy mood girl anyone is attracted towards her.
Ash: okk then i will meet her.
Prof.juni: ok the see you soon

So ash countines on his way back home when he sees ins.jenny again so he goes to enquire about the pokemon.

Ash:inspector jenny!
Ins.jenny: ohh! Ash you are here.
Ash:I just came to ask about the pokemons
ins.jenny:don't worry now situation is under control you can now frely go into grass for catching wild pokemons.
Ash:thank goodness i really wanted to catch all these pokemons
ins.jenny:so you haven't caught any pokemon yet you should go and buy pokeballs from pokemart first good luck!
Ash:thanks ins.jenny!

So ash goes to cherrgrove city rest for bit there and contines his journey when he sees a pokemon battle outside the pokemon centre he rushes out to see it.

Ash:wow you they fighting a pokemon battle.
(pokemon battle)
boy:go ratata!use tackle!
Girl:marill use defense curl
ratata hits marill,
girl:marill are you ok?,lrt's teach them a lesson.keep using defense curl.
Boy:are you scared keeping defensive all time.go ratata use tackle!
Ratata hits marill again.
Boy::@whats happenning why doesn't he faint out.
Girl:why are you scared?
Marill use rollout!!
Marill gives a hard blow to ratata,ratata faints out.
Boy:what but how?
Girl:you should also use brain while battling defense curl increases the power of rollout!

Ash: (well she is smart but she is being a bit oppresive on him)
girl: oh yes i won!
Ash:umm..excuse me
girl:yes!do ou want something.
Ash:are you kris?
Girl:yes but how do you know ohh..did i became that famous!
Ash:well..i just maked a guess,hello i am ash
kris: ohh! So you are ash, here take you're pokegear
(hands it over)
ash:thanks! I was wooried about it
kris: ohh..i see you are having a pokemon's with you so that means you are a trainer would you like to battle then
ash:umm..(she asked so suddenly)
kris:what are you thinking ou are lucky taht i am battling you don't worry i will go easy on you!
Ash: oh thanks a lot!
Kris: okk then let's battle go marill!
Ash:go cyndaquil!
Kris:cyndaquil bad choice my maril is water type which is powerful against fire
ash:let's battle first!
Ash:go cyndaquil use tackle!
Kris:marill! Use defense curl
cyndaquil attacks marill with all power
ash:cyndaquil use tackle again!
Kris:marill defense curl!
Cyndaquil again collides with marill and marill faints out!
Kris:what?so fast how?
Ash:well i think you forgot to heal your pokemon after the earlier battle.
Kris:what?ohh..damn,how can i forget that,you didn't even tell me that.
Ash: (should i tell that as a opponent)
kris: ok..ok..i accept it is my mistake.well next time i will surely win
ash:we will see that.
Kris:see you later!
Ash:yeah bye!

SO kris went on her way and ash kept on moving on his way back home soon he reaches back at prof.elm's lab

prof.juni: ohh..ash you are back,how was your small trip
ash:well..can't say exactly but if to say some extent it was good.
Prof.juni:good to hear that!
Ash:well..look what prof.oak gave me a pokedex
prof.juni: ohh..wow incredible prof.oak was there too
ash:yes,he also had some work.
Prof.juni:i am a big fan of him
ohh..I WISHED I HAD GONE..
Anyway my badluck
ash:i don't think it's a big crisis!
Prof.juni:yeah..not for you
but if he has given you it he must have seen something in you
ash:well i have no idea about it
prof.juni:what have you decided next?
Ash:nothing for now..
Prof.juni:why don't you collect gym badges most of the trainer prefer this.
Ash:not a bad idea i will give it a try which will be the closest one?
Prof.juni:the violet city gym will be the closest you should surely give it a try.
Ash:well bye for now see you later
prof.juni:buh-bye

[ash goes back home and tell the whole story to mom]

mom:whew..what a great adventure it was,you must be tired rest for today.
Ash:yes mom!i have decided to challenge gym leaders
mom: ohh..so that means you will be leaving soon for it
ash:yeah mom...but don't worry i will be fine i will take care of myself.
Mom:yes! I think you can i am proud of you my son...
Ash:thanks mom..
CHP-ENDS
[So ash will start his journey from tommorow onwards what is written in his fate what kind of pokemon are waiting for them to know wait for next chapter]:D
feedbacks on story are appreciated
 
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