Narrated Pokemon Quartz Let's Play

Not trying to take away from Yuoaman at all.

I was bored and seen this game sitting around, so I wanted to do a Let's Play.

I've done on episode so far.
And am recording right now.

Episode 1:

Okay, I think you need to blow your nose, write a script, and deliver it properly, because your voice is really quiet, there's loads of hesitation and you're yawning. Doesn't seem enthusiastic to me. The jokes aren't the best, either.

You need to be a little louder. And yes, Pokemon Ruby cheats do work on Quartz. The narration is okay.

Live commentary lets plays aren't supposed to have scripts.

I'll be posting more vids later.
My voice is normal, my laptop is really old it makes a weird buzzing noise, that is why my voice is soft.

You need to speak louder, also it's kinda boring to just hear that unenthusiastic voice and constant " uhhhsss......"