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Well, I finally had the courage to make this thread.
This is the third fic I start, but given the fact that the first two are quite long stories and this is a shortie one, I'll post this.
Title: The Rivalry (I have no better title, I thought The Battle but...)
Genre: Action/Friendship/Romance
Note: As I'm not British/American/Aussie, my english is a bit limited. So, it's possible that the fic have some mistakes in the spelling. PLEASE let me now what words I wrote wrong.
Status: I've written half the fic already. It won't take so much to finish it.
Credits: I'll give a big credit to Yuki3056 for helped me with the wrong words :) -With the first chapters anyway-
Any suggestion/comment/doubt will be welcome and so be clarified.
"Are you ready?" Alexis asked with a malicious smirk to his opponent whom he would be battling soon. "Nerves can be a tricky factor in your first final of the Pokemon League."
"I know you very well, so nerves shouldn't be a problem," answered Henry.
In that moment, a man who was dressed in an odd manner entered the room. He was wearing a shiny blue coat and ridiculous spectacles "Are you ready, guys? This is the moment. All these people want to see a good battle. So, try not to disappoint them."
"I think there's someone who is already disappointed…" Alexis stared at Henry. His grudge was showing in his eyes. The other boy tried not to look at him, but it was an awkward situation. The odd dressed man left the room, and the boys prepared to do the same.
Alexis was seventeen. His hair was black and messy, he dressed in all dark and blue colors. On the other hand, Henry was eighteen. His hair was a dark-blond color and judging by his clothes one could think he was a tennisman. His face was a bit friendlier than Alexis'.
Suddenly, they heard the announcer introducing them. "Hello, ladies and gentlemen! Hello, young trainers! It's a great day for pokemon battling and this is the best place to see just that!" the people in the stadium screamed, they seemed to be very excited. "We have had an amazing tournament, and now we're going to see the big Final! In the green corner, we have a boy who got through the Final for the very first time. Last year, in his only previous appeareance, he lost in Round of 16, but now he's eager to claim victory! Let's give a warm welcome to Henry, from Azalea Town!"
In the locker room, Henry took a deep breath and went outside. He walked through the short passage and, suddenly, he was struck by the bright sun, the people in the stadium, the noise, the nerves and the emotion in the air. Henry waved and went to the middle of the arena. He noticed the oddly dressed man was the one with the microphone, preparing to introduce the other boy.
"And now, while Henry prepares for battle, let's give a warm welcome to his next challenger. They are old neighbours from Azalea, but I'd guess Henry was sure he wouldn't battle against him in this very stadium. He's the defending two-time Champion. His battle style demolished all of his foes in this year tournament, and now he's ready to put his pride on the line and try to become the first person ever to win three Johto championships in a row! Say hello to Alexis from Azalea Town!"
Alexis entered the Stadium, but the feelings he had were different from the ones Henry had. He was used to battling in the Center Stadium. He liked to see all the people who were excited, screaming, crying and getting anxious. He used to feel the same way, but he always managed to not lose his focus. That was the key for victory, in his opinion anyways.
The boys stood with the Battle Judge in the center of the arena. "This is a 6 on 6 battle. You can substitute Pokemon without limit, and when a trainer loses three of his Pokemon, there will be a five minutes break. I hope you have a good battle, but act like gentlemen. Now, go to your corners."
The boys prepared to fight. The surface was suitable for many different kinds of Pokemon. It was a long plain with long grass, there was a lake near the middle and some rocks and trees scattered about the arena.
"Well, the battle between Henry and Alexis starts now!" said the announcer with excitement.
"Houndoom, go!" Alexis released his first Pokemon. In his previous battles, Houndoom was often seen destroying two or three oponents in a row, so Henry wasn't surprised at this choice. In fact, he had seen all of Alexis' battles and had an idea of what Pokemon he could use in the Final.
"Go and give your best, Giggly!" Henry's Wigglytuff came out of his Pokeball and soon the battle began.
"Use Flamethrower!" Houndoom was too quick for Giggly, and very powerful too. Before Wigglytuff even realized he was in the Center Stadium battling for the Championship, a powerful wall of flames engulfed him. Giggly would have to battle against two foes: Houndoom and its own nerves.
"Well, if someone here doesn't know what kind of strategy Alexis uses, you can see it right now! This is the kind of offensive attaks that led him to victory so many times!" the announcer was excited, and so the people.
"Giggly, I now you can resist, that's why I picked you." Giggly got up after the flames were gone. "I know you can do it. Use your Recover!"
"Recover is an attack that helps the user to recuperate health." Henry suddenly remembered a feminine voice. "Now, do you know any Pokemon who can use Recover?" the teacher asked. But no one could answer because someone had entered in the classroom: A boy with black and messy hair. "Oh, on your first day and you're late. You must be Alexis."
"Sorry, Miss. It isn't that late anyway." said the boy with a conciliator smile.
"Well, go and sit over there." Answered the teacher.
The boy sat next to another boy. Alexis looked over him curious. "Hi, I'm Alexis. What's your name?"
"I'm Henry, nice to meet you. Look, I would advise you to be the first one here tomorrow. Teacher Marie can be a bit annoying if you're late constantly.
"Oh, thanks for the advice. It's just I'm new in this city."
"Don't worry, ask me if you need any help."
"And now Wigglytuff is using Recover! Good strategy!" the voice of that funny man brought Henry back to the battle.
"It won't last much longer. Houndoom, use Iron Tail!" "Doommm!!" Answred the canine Pokemon. The Iron Tail was heading towards Giggly, but Henry seemed to be lost in thought, and Giggly sensed that. The poor Pokemon was lost and confused.
"Hey, would you like to see the town after class?"
"Yeah! That would be great, so I can get to know this place a bit better."
"Henry and Alexis stop talking in class please!" Henry still remembered when he was six years old and met Alexis on the first day of school. Still remembered the ugly voice of Miss Marie yelling. And that noise took him back to reality. He heard another ugly voice, and saw Houndoom attempting to destroy Giggly with his Iron Tail.
"Giggly! Mega Punch!" but it wasn't enough. The Iron Tail hit Giggly directly, who wasn't even able to prepare the Mega Punch. The battle was over. "Wigglytuff is no longer able to battle! The victory goes to Houndoom!"
"And suddenly Alexis is one to zero!!! Henry will have to focus all of his attention if he wants to win! He seemed a bit distracted…"
"What had happened Henry? Nerves?" Alexis glared at his rival, but he didn't say a word. The battle was still going…
This is the third fic I start, but given the fact that the first two are quite long stories and this is a shortie one, I'll post this.
Title: The Rivalry (I have no better title, I thought The Battle but...)
Genre: Action/Friendship/Romance
Note: As I'm not British/American/Aussie, my english is a bit limited. So, it's possible that the fic have some mistakes in the spelling. PLEASE let me now what words I wrote wrong.
Status: I've written half the fic already. It won't take so much to finish it.
Credits: I'll give a big credit to Yuki3056 for helped me with the wrong words :) -With the first chapters anyway-
Any suggestion/comment/doubt will be welcome and so be clarified.
I.
"I know you very well, so nerves shouldn't be a problem," answered Henry.
In that moment, a man who was dressed in an odd manner entered the room. He was wearing a shiny blue coat and ridiculous spectacles "Are you ready, guys? This is the moment. All these people want to see a good battle. So, try not to disappoint them."
"I think there's someone who is already disappointed…" Alexis stared at Henry. His grudge was showing in his eyes. The other boy tried not to look at him, but it was an awkward situation. The odd dressed man left the room, and the boys prepared to do the same.
Alexis was seventeen. His hair was black and messy, he dressed in all dark and blue colors. On the other hand, Henry was eighteen. His hair was a dark-blond color and judging by his clothes one could think he was a tennisman. His face was a bit friendlier than Alexis'.
Suddenly, they heard the announcer introducing them. "Hello, ladies and gentlemen! Hello, young trainers! It's a great day for pokemon battling and this is the best place to see just that!" the people in the stadium screamed, they seemed to be very excited. "We have had an amazing tournament, and now we're going to see the big Final! In the green corner, we have a boy who got through the Final for the very first time. Last year, in his only previous appeareance, he lost in Round of 16, but now he's eager to claim victory! Let's give a warm welcome to Henry, from Azalea Town!"
In the locker room, Henry took a deep breath and went outside. He walked through the short passage and, suddenly, he was struck by the bright sun, the people in the stadium, the noise, the nerves and the emotion in the air. Henry waved and went to the middle of the arena. He noticed the oddly dressed man was the one with the microphone, preparing to introduce the other boy.
"And now, while Henry prepares for battle, let's give a warm welcome to his next challenger. They are old neighbours from Azalea, but I'd guess Henry was sure he wouldn't battle against him in this very stadium. He's the defending two-time Champion. His battle style demolished all of his foes in this year tournament, and now he's ready to put his pride on the line and try to become the first person ever to win three Johto championships in a row! Say hello to Alexis from Azalea Town!"
Alexis entered the Stadium, but the feelings he had were different from the ones Henry had. He was used to battling in the Center Stadium. He liked to see all the people who were excited, screaming, crying and getting anxious. He used to feel the same way, but he always managed to not lose his focus. That was the key for victory, in his opinion anyways.
The boys stood with the Battle Judge in the center of the arena. "This is a 6 on 6 battle. You can substitute Pokemon without limit, and when a trainer loses three of his Pokemon, there will be a five minutes break. I hope you have a good battle, but act like gentlemen. Now, go to your corners."
The boys prepared to fight. The surface was suitable for many different kinds of Pokemon. It was a long plain with long grass, there was a lake near the middle and some rocks and trees scattered about the arena.
"Well, the battle between Henry and Alexis starts now!" said the announcer with excitement.
II.
"Houndoom, go!" Alexis released his first Pokemon. In his previous battles, Houndoom was often seen destroying two or three oponents in a row, so Henry wasn't surprised at this choice. In fact, he had seen all of Alexis' battles and had an idea of what Pokemon he could use in the Final.
"Go and give your best, Giggly!" Henry's Wigglytuff came out of his Pokeball and soon the battle began.
"Use Flamethrower!" Houndoom was too quick for Giggly, and very powerful too. Before Wigglytuff even realized he was in the Center Stadium battling for the Championship, a powerful wall of flames engulfed him. Giggly would have to battle against two foes: Houndoom and its own nerves.
"Well, if someone here doesn't know what kind of strategy Alexis uses, you can see it right now! This is the kind of offensive attaks that led him to victory so many times!" the announcer was excited, and so the people.
"Giggly, I now you can resist, that's why I picked you." Giggly got up after the flames were gone. "I know you can do it. Use your Recover!"
"Recover is an attack that helps the user to recuperate health." Henry suddenly remembered a feminine voice. "Now, do you know any Pokemon who can use Recover?" the teacher asked. But no one could answer because someone had entered in the classroom: A boy with black and messy hair. "Oh, on your first day and you're late. You must be Alexis."
"Sorry, Miss. It isn't that late anyway." said the boy with a conciliator smile.
"Well, go and sit over there." Answered the teacher.
The boy sat next to another boy. Alexis looked over him curious. "Hi, I'm Alexis. What's your name?"
"I'm Henry, nice to meet you. Look, I would advise you to be the first one here tomorrow. Teacher Marie can be a bit annoying if you're late constantly.
"Oh, thanks for the advice. It's just I'm new in this city."
"Don't worry, ask me if you need any help."
"And now Wigglytuff is using Recover! Good strategy!" the voice of that funny man brought Henry back to the battle.
"It won't last much longer. Houndoom, use Iron Tail!" "Doommm!!" Answred the canine Pokemon. The Iron Tail was heading towards Giggly, but Henry seemed to be lost in thought, and Giggly sensed that. The poor Pokemon was lost and confused.
"Hey, would you like to see the town after class?"
"Yeah! That would be great, so I can get to know this place a bit better."
"Henry and Alexis stop talking in class please!" Henry still remembered when he was six years old and met Alexis on the first day of school. Still remembered the ugly voice of Miss Marie yelling. And that noise took him back to reality. He heard another ugly voice, and saw Houndoom attempting to destroy Giggly with his Iron Tail.
"Giggly! Mega Punch!" but it wasn't enough. The Iron Tail hit Giggly directly, who wasn't even able to prepare the Mega Punch. The battle was over. "Wigglytuff is no longer able to battle! The victory goes to Houndoom!"
"And suddenly Alexis is one to zero!!! Henry will have to focus all of his attention if he wants to win! He seemed a bit distracted…"
"What had happened Henry? Nerves?" Alexis glared at his rival, but he didn't say a word. The battle was still going…
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