Art Studio For visual art, photography, and music! Pokémon related or not, showcase or discuss anything related to the visual or musical arts.

View Poll Results: How's the comic?
Awesome! 23 67.65%
Good. 9 26.47%
Bad. 2 5.88%
Voters: 34. You may not vote on this poll

Reply
 
Thread Tools
  #101    
Old January 29th, 2014 (5:15 AM).
Elaitenstile's Avatar
Elaitenstile Elaitenstile is offline
I am legend
     
    Join Date: Feb 2013
    Posts: 1,909
    The suspense you add in every issue is incredible. I do hope you plan around making those extra panels, because they could add detail and give more space to permit longer stories (since the Duskull one was hard to explain in just a few panels).

    Also, I'd like to say that slow character reveals that you've made in the characters (like Riolu not being a complete rusher, Absol always trying to stick to the main task) are amazing. I do hope you plan more character developments!

    PS - I hope the next issue has something to do with Goldeen and Poliwrath from back there.
    __________________
    ~
    Reply With Quote

    Relevant Advertising!

      #102    
    Old January 29th, 2014 (5:30 AM).
    Gabon's Avatar
    Gabon Gabon is offline
       
      Join Date: Jan 2014
      Gender: Male
      Posts: 20
      It's nice keep going You have talent
      Reply With Quote
        #103    
      Old January 29th, 2014 (6:20 AM).
      Hatsune Mika's Avatar
      Hatsune Mika Hatsune Mika is offline
      FireRed Nuzlocke
         
        Join Date: Dec 2013
        Location: Abyssal Ruins
        Age: 21
        Gender: Female
        Nature: Naughty
        Posts: 453
        I only got to see the third issue since school wifi doesn't like me but love how it was set. Fan me :D

        Ill try to check later with neighbors wifi if it lets me.
        __________________
        FC: 4528-0285-6218
        Omega Ruby!
        Team for Omega Ruby:
        Blaziken, Primal Groudon, Diancie, Mightyena, Rayquaza

        Walking down the path I know. Banning Pokémon just because you don't know how to beat them is just plain wrong. It's like banning alcohol because it makes ugly people pretty.
        Reply With Quote
          #104    
        Old February 1st, 2014 (4:04 PM).
        *Riolu Master*'s Avatar
        *Riolu Master* *Riolu Master* is offline
        The Aura Within
           
          Join Date: Aug 2013
          Gender: Male
          Nature: Jolly
          Posts: 151
          Here's Issue 29! As you can see there are 4 more panels!
          Spoiler:
          __________________
          Friend Code: 1220-6901-8805

          Reply With Quote
            #105    
          Old February 8th, 2014 (8:29 PM).
          *Riolu Master*'s Avatar
          *Riolu Master* *Riolu Master* is offline
          The Aura Within
             
            Join Date: Aug 2013
            Gender: Male
            Nature: Jolly
            Posts: 151
            Spoiler:


            Issue 30! New goal achieved!
            __________________
            Friend Code: 1220-6901-8805

            Reply With Quote
              #106    
            Old February 9th, 2014 (9:03 PM).
            lucariokul's Avatar
            lucariokul lucariokul is offline
            Illusions surround me. Help...
               
              Join Date: Jul 2013
              Location: Auric Island.
              Gender: Male
              Nature: Lonely
              Posts: 217
              Legend of Zelda locations from Minish Cap? Cool. Fan me.
              __________________
              Have a nice day. Friend Code: 0817-4434-9088, Rock Type Safari.
              Check out my Trader Reviews!
              Proud member of the Aura Guardians Lucario and Riolu Fan Club.


              Reply With Quote
                #107    
              Old February 10th, 2014 (12:23 AM).
              Logiedan's Avatar
              Logiedan Logiedan is offline
              highly-functioning sociopath
                 
                Join Date: Mar 2009
                Location: yoshi's story
                Age: 2
                Gender: Male
                Posts: 2,936
                Idk how, but these mashups of different art styles regarding backgrounds, sprites and effects are really working for you. XD Good job as always.
                __________________


                pair: Sheep
                Reply With Quote
                  #108    
                Old February 10th, 2014 (8:28 AM).
                Blueredemption's Avatar
                Blueredemption Blueredemption is offline
                Never stop exploring!
                • Crystal Tier
                 
                Join Date: Aug 2013
                Age: 18
                Gender: Male
                Nature: Careful
                Posts: 467
                Another great couple of issues, i should check this thread more often
                __________________
                Reply With Quote
                  #109    
                Old February 10th, 2014 (12:57 PM).
                *Riolu Master*'s Avatar
                *Riolu Master* *Riolu Master* is offline
                The Aura Within
                   
                  Join Date: Aug 2013
                  Gender: Male
                  Nature: Jolly
                  Posts: 151
                  I'm not really good with user bars, but I tried to make one for The Riolu.


                  __________________
                  Friend Code: 1220-6901-8805

                  Reply With Quote
                    #110    
                  Old February 21st, 2014 (5:56 PM).
                  Squirrel's Avatar
                  Squirrel Squirrel is offline
                  • Crystal Tier
                   
                  Join Date: Sep 2011
                  Location: England
                  Age: 22
                  Gender: Male
                  Nature: Quirky
                  Posts: 9,460
                  Just caught up with this again, wowww it's gotten good. The Thieve's Guild bit was a little odd given that the thieves had no reason to bring them to the guild, but this trials thing is looking really fun! I can't wait to see the next issues :D
                  __________________
                  Reply With Quote
                    #111    
                  Old March 14th, 2014 (12:55 PM).
                  *Riolu Master*'s Avatar
                  *Riolu Master* *Riolu Master* is offline
                  The Aura Within
                     
                    Join Date: Aug 2013
                    Gender: Male
                    Nature: Jolly
                    Posts: 151
                    Finally Issue 31! Sorry I haven't been very active lately.
                    Spoiler:
                    __________________
                    Friend Code: 1220-6901-8805

                    Reply With Quote
                      #112    
                    Old March 14th, 2014 (4:00 PM).
                    Perdition Haze's Avatar
                    Perdition Haze Perdition Haze is offline
                    • Silver Tier
                     
                    Join Date: Jul 2012
                    Location: New York, USA
                    Posts: 11,811
                    I'm really liking your comic so far; it's an interesting read! I have one suggestion, though; maybe you could try using real in-game textboxes in your panels? They would look more complete that way, if you know what I mean. Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next issue. Can't wait to see how they deal with Hippowdon. d:
                    __________________
                    Reply With Quote
                      #113    
                    Old March 23rd, 2014 (3:48 PM).
                    *Riolu Master*'s Avatar
                    *Riolu Master* *Riolu Master* is offline
                    The Aura Within
                       
                      Join Date: Aug 2013
                      Gender: Male
                      Nature: Jolly
                      Posts: 151
                      Alright! Here's Issue 32.
                      Spoiler:
                      __________________
                      Friend Code: 1220-6901-8805

                      Reply With Quote
                        #114    
                      Old March 23rd, 2014 (8:03 PM).
                      Blueredemption's Avatar
                      Blueredemption Blueredemption is offline
                      Never stop exploring!
                      • Crystal Tier
                       
                      Join Date: Aug 2013
                      Age: 18
                      Gender: Male
                      Nature: Careful
                      Posts: 467
                      Heh Heh... RAWR

                      another good couple of issues, good to know its still running
                      __________________
                      Reply With Quote
                        #115    
                      Old March 24th, 2014 (1:17 PM).
                      qOptic's Avatar
                      qOptic qOptic is offline
                         
                        Join Date: Mar 2014
                        Posts: 17
                        Currently a fan. I am in love with this series :D
                        __________________

                        I just go with the flow, I follow the yellow brick road. I don't know where it's going to lead me, but I follow it.

                        Reply With Quote
                          #116    
                        Old March 26th, 2014 (3:43 AM).
                        XpokeX's Avatar
                        XpokeX XpokeX is offline
                        I'm a ninja and im..... gone
                           
                          Join Date: Feb 2014
                          Age: 16
                          Gender: Male
                          Nature: Lonely
                          Posts: 156
                          Absolute fan ^~^ just read everything till issue 32 in one sitting :3 everything looks awesome too
                          __________________

                          "Pokemon is my escape from reality,no one to judge or fight,it's just me having fun"
                          Reply With Quote
                            #117    
                          Old May 4th, 2014 (5:49 PM).
                          *Riolu Master*'s Avatar
                          *Riolu Master* *Riolu Master* is offline
                          The Aura Within
                             
                            Join Date: Aug 2013
                            Gender: Male
                            Nature: Jolly
                            Posts: 151
                            Hey everyone! Sure has been awhile hasn't it. Well I'm giving up yet!
                            Spoiler:
                            __________________
                            Friend Code: 1220-6901-8805

                            Reply With Quote
                              #118    
                            Old May 5th, 2014 (11:34 AM).
                            FlexxGaming's Avatar
                            FlexxGaming FlexxGaming is offline
                            Pokemon XY PC Edition Developer
                               
                              Join Date: May 2014
                              Gender: Male
                              Posts: 78
                              I like your comics so far :D keep up the good work!
                              __________________


                              [CENTER]
                              Reply With Quote
                                #119    
                              Old August 21st, 2014 (6:50 AM).
                              *Riolu Master*'s Avatar
                              *Riolu Master* *Riolu Master* is offline
                              The Aura Within
                                 
                                Join Date: Aug 2013
                                Gender: Male
                                Nature: Jolly
                                Posts: 151
                                Hey guys long time no see! THE RIOLU IS RETURNING! Right now I have 3 more issues done and here's just one of them!
                                Spoiler:


                                I hope to be more active! Until next time!
                                __________________
                                Friend Code: 1220-6901-8805

                                Reply With Quote
                                  #120    
                                Old August 23rd, 2014 (7:43 PM).
                                *Riolu Master*'s Avatar
                                *Riolu Master* *Riolu Master* is offline
                                The Aura Within
                                   
                                  Join Date: Aug 2013
                                  Gender: Male
                                  Nature: Jolly
                                  Posts: 151
                                  Here's the next issue!
                                  Spoiler:
                                  __________________
                                  Friend Code: 1220-6901-8805

                                  Reply With Quote
                                    #121    
                                  Old August 30th, 2014 (9:54 AM).
                                  *Riolu Master*'s Avatar
                                  *Riolu Master* *Riolu Master* is offline
                                  The Aura Within
                                     
                                    Join Date: Aug 2013
                                    Gender: Male
                                    Nature: Jolly
                                    Posts: 151
                                    Issue 36!
                                    Spoiler:


                                    Not a lot
                                    of feedback lately huh.
                                    __________________
                                    Friend Code: 1220-6901-8805

                                    Reply With Quote
                                      #122    
                                    Old August 30th, 2014 (10:13 AM).
                                    Ice's Avatar
                                    Ice Ice is offline
                                    • Crystal Tier
                                     
                                    Join Date: Aug 2014
                                    Posts: 3,249
                                    Well, you probably lost most of you're audience when you stopped for a while, and this sub is not very active. People don't tend to post in other threads then their own.

                                    I don't feel like reading all the back catalog, so I started at 34. The dialogue is natural, but the progression feels weird. Everything goes incredibly fast, but it doesn't feel like there is happening that much.

                                    I also like how it's not that static. Characters change place from frame to frame (well, mostly), and the comic feels diverse.
                                    I would make it a little longer though, have some more room to give the characters some depth, without losing pace. And please give a summary so people can catch up.
                                    __________________
                                    paired to Foxrally. I also tweet jokes, sprites, and opinions about Pokemon fangames here.
                                    Reply With Quote
                                      #123    
                                    Old September 4th, 2014 (6:07 PM).
                                    Boured's Avatar
                                    Boured Boured is offline
                                    CEO of Boured Games
                                    • Gold Tier
                                     
                                    Join Date: Oct 2013
                                    Location: Why should I tell you I don't know you :3
                                    Age: 17
                                    Gender: Male
                                    Nature: Jolly
                                    Posts: 171
                                    I know it is going to be good without even reading it so please fan me.
                                    __________________
                                    A hack will rise from the death of another...

                                    Jagold is awesome!

                                    Reply With Quote
                                      #124    
                                    Old January 4th, 2015 (5:21 PM).
                                    *Riolu Master*'s Avatar
                                    *Riolu Master* *Riolu Master* is offline
                                    The Aura Within
                                       
                                      Join Date: Aug 2013
                                      Gender: Male
                                      Nature: Jolly
                                      Posts: 151
                                      Hey guys it has been awhile!... A long while.. I'm just wondering if anyone wants me to continue with this comic. Or just don't because of how long I've been gone.
                                      __________________
                                      Friend Code: 1220-6901-8805

                                      Reply With Quote
                                        #125    
                                      Old January 6th, 2015 (12:41 PM).
                                      *Riolu Master*'s Avatar
                                      *Riolu Master* *Riolu Master* is offline
                                      The Aura Within
                                         
                                        Join Date: Aug 2013
                                        Gender: Male
                                        Nature: Jolly
                                        Posts: 151
                                        Here, I'll post the next issue and see if anyone will still like this. If not I won't do this anymore.
                                        Spoiler:
                                        __________________
                                        Friend Code: 1220-6901-8805

                                        Reply With Quote
                                        Reply
                                        Quick Reply

                                        Sponsored Links
                                        Thread Tools

                                        Posting Rules
                                        You may not post new threads
                                        You may not post replies
                                        You may not post attachments
                                        You may not edit your posts

                                        BB code is On
                                        Smilies are On
                                        [IMG] code is On
                                        HTML code is Off

                                        Forum Jump


                                        All times are GMT -8. The time now is 10:01 AM.