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Started by Vavavoom ♣ February 21st, 2007 2:50 PM
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Minorthreat0987

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i agree with a lot of people, this game has potential but you will have to work hard.

one thing i noticed was some of your tiles are tiled wrong. for example this is how the d/p tree should be tiled:


that will erase those "pathways" between the trees.

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Something Witty
Seen June 16th, 2014
Posted December 15th, 2011
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Ah, good work, Minorthreat. Thats the correct tiling.

Now, I'm NOT rating your tiles, if I did, I would rate them a 2/10. lol. I'm rating your maps. Losanelle City is pretty good, but it too small to be a City. Honestly if you want to give it the title as a City, add a pond or two, and a flower shop or something. Other than that the overall placement is decent, but it has a lot of random openings. My overall rating for Losanelle City is 7/10 for a lack of City-ness

Route 701 is decent, but bare. No ponds, ridges, nothing exciting for the Player to see while treking through. Commonly found in beginning routes or small travel routes. 8/10

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Something Witty
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I'm not talking Royaly. I'm rating a map =P

Yes, I know its like Petalburg, but Cities like that were turned into towns in DP. I'm just saying its small, thats all. Though a 7 is still my final ratings. It just feels empty lol


credit to Minorthreat for the trees

heres an example of tree colaborations. This shows D/P colaboration, and my style.

I'm not trying to be rude, I'm only trying to help you make your game to achieve success.

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Something Witty
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>_> Riiiight, okay. Thats not a point at all. I think it looks more nature like, instead of perfect row after row of trees which looks plain and un-nature like

But thats completely your decision. Rememeber, don't hold a grudge on me, I'm simply rating your stuff =P

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Something Witty
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Posted December 15th, 2011
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Hmmm, I like it! Use it, cherish it lol. It looks good! a mix between DP and zigzag, wilderness lol. You should use it ;)

If you ever need me to clean up some houses or make you some buildings, just ask. I'll post an example in a minute, I need some food first lol
Seen November 10th, 2007
Posted October 30th, 2007
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Well I have new screenshots of the up-comming demo:

Walking Rauwolfia Town


Going out of Bloosy Town
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i6/vavavant/4.png

Somewhere on Route 702
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i6/vavavant/2.png

Talking to the old man in Losanelle City


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Minorthreat0987

Pokemon Tellurium

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the screens actually look pretty good. I like them. One thing i have to say is, the paths and houses in Losanelle City aren't clean, they're all JPEGish and it really takes away from the quality of the map, you should clean it up some. Also the message window should be more POKeMONish verse the default RMXP one. Overall though i like the way this game is coming along. It has an extreme amount of potental.

Good Luck mate.

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mate, try not use jpeg files. it kinda ruins the picture quality by making it blur in most places. try and use GIF as long as it doesnt make the picture look weird but use PNG as it keeps the picture quality like a BMP, and uses less space than a BMP. use PNG if you feel comfy with it.
Seen November 10th, 2007
Posted October 30th, 2007
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Next time, PNG. Now, new screenshots are released!!

Walking in the rainny city of Canderlia!


Down the stairs in the South Route (Really, it is called South Route)


Reading a sign in Flaroma Town


Walking in that sublime town (Flaroma Town)


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Something Witty
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If I use it, I will have to remake ALL the houses/buildings that I had cleaned up.
Your later screenshots are OK but still need work...lots of work. Like the mountaineous route, it would be good, but it D/P the grass is just the grass, theres not grass below it. Yours looks fake like that. The house I made is in decent format. By revamping ALL of your buildings, you could have a decent fangame. But by being lazy, and just keeping them ugly Jpeg, well, thats your choice, not mine

Great job! I'm looking forward to playing this! This looks exactly like D/P, well, close ^^
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mate, try not use jpeg files. it kinda ruins the picture quality by making it blur in most places. try and use GIF as long as it doesnt make the picture look weird but use PNG as it keeps the picture quality like a BMP, and uses less space than a BMP. use PNG if you feel comfy with it.
two problems with that. He saves in Jpeg, and the quality previously isn't the best because there all ripped from D/P screenshots

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Something Witty
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I saw the new screens. Flaroma Town, or Sublime Town looks too open o_O The regular buildings in Canderlia City look messed up around the shading, but are fine. The houses again, are Jpeged to death. And South Route's grass is messed up =P

thats my say lol
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