Project: Creating a Pokemon League

I'm loving how active this Round is already! Sorry I missed so much; I was at school =P. I will try and answer/comment on everything done!

Zeta Dimentio:

Are you stuck with one type in this? Or can you use more then one?

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You can do a maximum of two types, though you can have some random others in there as well. For example, someone posted and Earth gym (Rock/Ground), but they threw in a couple Earth-Like Steels. There really aren't defined limits, but just don't go insane =P.

Night Walker: I like your persistence with the gym =). It's great, and I like the touch of the custom sprites. Everything is well done in it: Formatting, Extra Touches, its great, but I have one suggestion: evolve the Round 1 Sneasel into a Weavile, as it gets some huge gains on evolving, but besides that critique, I don't have much more to say. Great job!

Fire Wolf: I love the gym! The legendary that you used in Round 2 is fine; I encourage you to use any pokemon that is in the OU tier or below (with the exception of Celebi & Jirachi). The level and evolution progression is great in your gym, and I really like how you progressed into the Round 2 Gym. The "critique" I have is that your gym trainers don't need movesets, but that just shows me how interested you are in the concept; going the extra step =).

Phantom Renegade:

Yay! Second time really is the charm! :D I'll probably continue pulling gyms out of nowhere, but this really boosts my motivation!

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Haha I'm glad you feel encouraged, I would love to see more gyms from you =).

Charmageddon:

I'm gonna skip this round... I've got ideas for the 4th, 5th, 7th and either the 8th gym or E4, I haven't decided. So I'm just gonna start work on my gym 4 now.

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I understand. I can't wait to see even more developed work after this round, good luck!

Killer95: I have some good news and some bad news. Let's start with the bad news: that is not going to be the round three gym. However I really like the concept of a Beauty Trainer, so Briana is going to be the contest rival to the protaganist, so when you go into Pokemon Contests, you fight her. This means she won't need any trainers, but she will need 4 rounds. The rival level range I would like to see is:

Battle 1: 20-26
Battle 2: 34-39
Battle 3: 49-53
Battle 4: 68-73

If you aren't interested in that, just say so, but if you are, edit your existing post to be a rival. Usually I would take care of rivals after the Elite 4 is done, but I hadn't even considered a contest rival until now, so if you are interested, Briana will be one of the 4 Rivals.

This is a note for everyone else: JUST BECAUSE I SAW THIS GYM AS A RIVAL DOES NOT MEAN I WANT TO SEE ANY MORE RIVAL BATTLES AHEAD OF TIME.
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Haha, lots of posts to respond to, I hope to have a great round!

ok ill do that very soon....

Hey, guess who's back with another go at a gym submission? :)

Maci12, I thought that gym trainer movesets are required, so I took 2 of the 3 hours in deciding the movesets.

I thought they were required too.... :(

Haha, they aren't =P Like I said earlier, my Rom Editor doesn't allow me to put in movesets for the Pokemon Trainers, so that isn't required.

Okay, we had 5 gyms posted on the first day that is more than all of round 2!

I have to go now, but a full list of comments and criticisms will be posted around 3:30 EST (7:30 Forum Time).

Remember, the gyms are due at 12:00 a.m. EST, so keep them coming!

My Gym: Elite 4 champ

Leader: Laura

Age: 15

Attire: She wears a pink bikini. Has Long Blonde hair.

Type: Water


Before Battle: You have finally made it to me congratulations, but it ends right here, i might look more like a model than a battler but dont let looks fool you, i am the Elite 4 Champion and i am here to win so LETS FIGHT.

Pokemon


Gyarados lvl 63
Hyper Beam
Hydro Pump
Dragon Dance
Twister

Milotic lvl 63
Safeguard
Aqua Ring
Recover
Hydro Pump

Tentacruel lvl 65
Poison Jab
Hydro Pump
Screech
Wring Out

Kingdra lvl 66
Dragon Dance
Dragon Pulse
Twister
Hydro Pump
Paras, Parasect
Chikorita, Bayleef, Meganium

Ludicolo lvl 66
Giga Drain
Nature Power
Solar Beam
Surf

Wailord lvl 69
Rest
Bounce
Hydro Pump
Dive

After Battle: I see you have beaten me, wait this cant be true im the best, *sighs* i lost fair and square so you are now champion so follow me

*Walks in door behind Champion*

Here is where you record your pokemon into the hall of fame so when your ready place your poke balls in the slots and then i can record them into the hall of fame.

Enjoy...

got any questions about it just let me know so i can make the champ more better.

@ poison Pokemon Rules: I think its alittle to early to be doing the Elite Four or the Camp. How about this, you hold on to your idea and wait untill we are able to make the Elite Camp. oh, and another thing, your idea is good, but there's already a gym with water types pokemon, so i would advise using another type of pokemon. and one more thing, theres two rounds. sorry for putting your idea down, i was just pointing things out. But your idea is very good.

Also, Maci already has the champ sorted out, we only submit the Elite Four members.

On a slightly related note, I think that the Elite Four should be Grass, Rock, Flying and Electric trainers, as they (along with Normal) are the only types not yet used by the Elite Four.

i agree, but if that's going the type of pokemon, then we have to figure out the order.

A lot of people seem interested in the process of the Elite 4 decisions, so let me clear that up now: I will be adding a poll when the time comes of typings I think are appropriate, and the community will decide based on the poll. Also, @ Poison Pokemon Rule, I'm doing the Champion Battle, it is the only battle I'm making, so...Also, we already have a Water Gym that was chosen for Round 1, so that gym isn't eligible for Gym 3 =(. Sorry!

Now onto the comments I promised!

Eos Dauro: I have nothing to say; it is perfect. Everything is extremely well done, the level and evolution progression is exactly what I wanted for Gym 3, great job.

Skip Shot: I see we have our Round 1 winner back for more. The gym kicks ass, and I love that Pyroak is in the gym, what a cool CAP. Also the typing works excellently with Electric (which I assume you were going for). The only problem I have is that the Round 1 has 5 Pokemon, which I don't want to see until Round 7: Gym 7, and that Round 2 has 6 Pokemon, which is illegal for Round 2 Gym Leaders. Other than that, it's perfect!
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Read your post, my Round 2 has 6 as well, I'm going to take one out to stay with the pattern!

Gym 3
Location: Caliginous Town
Type: Dark
Tenabray Badge

Gym Description:
Caliginous Town Pokemon Gym
Leader: Tyron
"The master of the shadows awaits."

Gym Tips:

"Hello there, (name). Tyron is a guy who goes all out with Dark Types. It might be wise to have a Fighting Type in your team to make things easier. Good Luck!"

Puzzle Description:

When you enter the gym there is complete darkness. You have to search around for buttons that make the gym light up a little bit more. Each button is guarded by a trainer.

Round 1

Gym Trainers:

Trainer 1
Camper Josh

Opening Speech: "I love camping out in the darkness! Let's battle for some fun."

Pokemon:


Drapion
Battle Armour
Level 25

Bite
Acupressure
Ice Fang
Knock Off

Shiftry
Early Bird
Level 25

Fake Out
Razor Leaf
Faint Attack
Harden

Skuntank
Aftermath
Level 25

Night Slash
Toxic
Screech
Slash

Defeat Dialogue: "That was a fun battle!"

Closing Speech: "Your strong! Good luck with battling Tyron!"

Trainer 2
Lass Tiffany

Opening Speech: "I may be scared of the dark, but I will not be beaten!"


Pokemon:

Crawdaunt
Hyper Cutter
Level 26

Bubblebeam
Knock Off
Vicegrip
Harden

Sharpedo
Rough Skin
Level 28

Crunch
Ice Fang
Scary Face
Focus Energy

Defeat Dialogue: "Being scared caused me to battle poorly."

Closing Speech: "You'll be scared too, when Tyron gets you."

Trainer 3
Collector George

Round 2- Rematch

Gym Leader
Leader Tyron

Opening Speech: "Hello again. I'm glad that I finally get a rematch. I have become much stronger, so be prepared. To Battle!"

Pokemon:

Absol @ Focus Band
Super Luck
Level 75

Night Slash
Psycho Cut
Swords Dance
X-Scissor

Umbreon @ Sitrus Berry
Synchronize
Level 74

Dark Pulse
Confuse Ray
Double Team
Psychic

Weavile @ Focus Sash
Pressure
Level 76

Night Slash
Aerial Ace
Ice Punch
Poison Jab

Honchkrow @ Razor Claw
Super Luck
Level 76

Dark Pulse
Drill Peck
Roost
Night Slash

Tyranitar @ Expert Belt
Sand Stream
Level 77

Crunch
Stone Edge
Earthquake
Dragon Claw

Defeat Dialogue: "I lost again! You are a worthy trainer."

Closing Speech: "I guess you are just one of the few trainers who are stronger than me. I will accept defeat. I hope that I can get another rematch sometime."

Hallway Kid - Formatting is great, you followed all the rules: great job! There's no issue I see with this gym, as all the progression is correct. I would, however, like to see more challenging Gym Trainers. Maybe evolve Nuzleaf, evole the Carvahna, and maybe change the Murkrow to a Drapion. Just my two cents.

As a side note: Is that a custom Umbreon sprite? Because I like it a lot!

Ability: Inner Focus
Cross Poison
Wing Attack
Confuse Ray
Air Cutter

Closing Speech: I lost, now i have no chance of becomming leader.






Glare

Closing Speech: I lost, i dont know what to say i have never lost before heres the official gym badge.

I wonder why theres no Poison type Legendary Pokemon.......

Darkfox1525 said:

I wonder why theres no Poison type Legendary Pokemon.......

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i was just wondering the same thing

Maci12 said:

The gym kicks ass, and I love that Pyroak is in the gym, what a cool CAP. Also the typing works excellently with Electric (which I assume you were going for). The only problem I have is that the Round 1 has 5 Pokemon, which I don't want to see until Round 7: Gym 7, and that Round 2 has 6 Pokemon, which is illegal for Round 2 Gym Leaders. Other than that, it's perfect!
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Ok, so I can compensate for that by taking out one Pokemon for each round. I'll delete Victreebel from both teams, since it is redundant to Vileplume and Pyroak and whatnot. Thanks for the input!

To above posts: I've been curious about that too. I think that Generation V should have some type of Poison-type Legendary in it.

or we can come up with our own and make a Fakemon.