need help on writing chapter 3

hi

i really need help writing my special chapter 3 for my search for nido fanfic - https://sta.sh/0566cl7feih


i'm just kinda stuck right now

https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Bio-Roko-The-Vulpix-727631633
https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Bio-Kindle-The-flareon-727480870






would anyone like to help me?

What's your overall aim for this chapter?
As in, what is the overarching thing you're trying to do with this one?
I think that's a good place to start to have some direction.

Vragon2.0 said:

What's your overall aim for this chapter?
As in, what is the overarching thing you're trying to do with this one?
I think that's a good place to start to have some direction.

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i was thinking of having roko tell kimiko the eevee how she met kindle at school *when he was still a eevee* in the form of a flashback


that's all i've got at the moment...

That flashback idea seems like it'll be fine for that chapter. You have an idea of how Kimiko met Kindle?

Bay said:

That flashback idea seems like it'll be fine for that chapter. You have an idea of how Kimiko met Kindle?

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kimiko didn't meet kindle yet at that time... roko did... at school... roko is just telling her how she met him



kindle, when he was a eevee, saved her from bullies *a Banette & a Salandit* when they were at school..

Ok, my apologies for getting the two mixed up. Seems you have a basis on what you'll be writing then. Unless there's still something you're unsure of, all you need to do is get to it!