Pokémon: Dark Purple & Hot Pink

wow wasn't expecting a game from you!
i really like the text boxes and the map
but.... you might want to add a features section
also try to find a ow spriter for the character sprites
looking foreword to more!

Yeah,
I've changed the name to Dark Purple and Light Pink.

Referencing to their color, and their "aura"
One is Dark and Evil, one is Light and Good.

w00t! You posted it here too! Anyway, I told you about the flaws and characteristics that make this game good and bad on PE. So you have my C&C. But I really like the inspriation for this.

K here's a few more maps:

The edited mountain:


The cave:

I know.
But how do I fix blocky on a mountain? D:

Okay, how about this?

Okay well, new back story...

The people who discovered that mountain decided to make it into a cubelike square shape, because they wanted to be known as the people who created a square mountain. :P

AJ™ said:

Okay well, new back story...

The people who discovered that mountain decided to make it into a cubelike square shape, because they wanted to be known as the people who created a square mountain. :P

Click to expand...

It sounds like you made that story to avoid changing the map. -_-

Anywho, project looks good, but the mountain and the cave look blocky, just like Trace pointed out.

And what game maker are you making this with? 'Cause I have no clue.(No, actually, I do have one... the hero. If you're using Poccil's Essentials, and RPGXP, CREDIT Poccil, and say you're using RPGXP.)

And on the first map, I'm gonna say, stick with one type of house.
I know that one of those houses is double floored, and there's a lab, and there's some kind of tower, but those should be the only exceptions. And flowers on the beach? Think about real life. Do we see flowers, or ANY kind of plant life, growing in the sand, on a beach? Remove the flowers, and if you ABSOLUTELY HAVE TO keep them, for some event or something, use the same flowers that you have on the grass. The FR/LG ones. Don't suddenly switch to R/S/E ones for the beach.

...Why palm trees and regular trees? Why not ALL palm trees?

That ends constructive criticism for the day! :P

please tell me how do you edit scirpts and stories in hacks and RPG Maker
contact me at
[email protected]
[email protected]

Also Known as Pokedude™ said:

It sounds like you made that story to avoid changing the map. -_-

Click to expand...

Maybe. :3

Also Known as Pokedude™ said:

Anywho, project looks good, but the mountain and the cave look blocky, just like Trace pointed out.

And what game maker are you making this with? 'Cause I have no clue.(No, actually, I do have one... the hero. If you're using Poccil's Essentials, and RPGXP, CREDIT Poccil, and say you're using RPGXP.)

And on the first map, I'm gonna say, stick with one type of house.
I know that one of those houses is double floored, and there's a lab, and there's some kind of tower, but those should be the only exceptions. And flowers on the beach? Think about real life. Do we see flowers, or ANY kind of plant life, growing in the sand, on a beach? Remove the flowers, and if you ABSOLUTELY HAVE TO keep them, for some event or something, use the same flowers that you have on the grass. The FR/LG ones. Don't suddenly switch to R/S/E ones for the beach.

...Why palm trees and regular trees? Why not ALL palm trees?

That ends constructive criticism for the day! :P

Click to expand...

I never realized most of those problems until you said them. Thanks. xD!

Yes, PLEASE Listen to Trace, your map is horribly Blocky.. Never EVER have maps that are Square, Follow Straight Paths, and or empty..
(Take it from a former rom hacker, whom's maps got nothing below a 8.7/10 xP)

AJ™ said:

I never realized most of those problems until you said them. Thanks. xD!

Click to expand...

Your welcome! :D I'm waiting for a screenshot of the new maps... xD

I'm still poking around with them.
I think Imma just start over on the mountain.