I need help in improving characters + recommendations in writing the story for a fangame.
I made some characters using character tropes and sterotypes.
So far I have these...
(dark type leader) - Laidback, cool and somewhat vain somewhat similar to Piers but a little more snob; #SnobbyFatGuy
(flying type leader) - Energetic, good willed tribal youngster who acts like a superhero; has an extreme sense of justice; BeastBoy/ Ben 10 vibes. (Somewhat obnoxious) #HeroKid
(ground type leader) - Clumsy, Amnesiac and Artistic lady. Heiress to her mother's mega-company but want's to pursue different path (Sculpting and Pottery). #MotherKnowsbest #FamilyDrama
(electric type leader) - Calm and Collected Athlete. AceTrainer type. Has eyes similar to brock (rivals with Water Leader); "always seems to be bothered/annoyed by something"
(ghost type leader) - Comedian, runs a stand up comedy cafe; somewhat in between Shauntal and Acerola (in age) ; makes bad punjokes all the time (ghost puns most of the time). #DarlingOfTheVillage
(Water Type leader) - The self proclaimed cool guy. Somewhat similar to Gordie but a little more muscular. Scared of the sea. Uses River-based water-type Pokemon instead. (rivals with electric leader) #BigMusclehead #LifeGuard #BigGoofyGuy #LaughsLoudlyGWAHAHA
(Steel) - #Aloof #Timid #TechnoNerd #Glasses #MadLadInventor; fraternal twins with Poison Type Leader