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Pokémon FULL [M] Lunea's Veil - A Dark Pokémon Tale Page 2

Started by Plumbum September 1st, 2014 3:32 PM
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Plumbum

The Dandy Highwayman (That You're Too Scared to Mention)

Age 25
Male
Chichester, UK
Seen 4 Weeks Ago
Posted August 6th, 2018
101 posts
5.1 Years
Heya there Rising, glad to see your interest, but I've got a couple concerns. The foremost is the brevity of the post - I'm not expecting epics, but really, 2 quite short paragraphs about your character's past just isn't enough. I'd also note whilst I'm here, it's more my fault for not mentioning, but there is no League in Lunea yet. The burgeoning isle hasn't got a single Gym on it, if that's the challenge your character was seeking.
I tear my heart open, I sew myself shut,
and my weakness is that I cared too much...

VeranithasVI

I eat shades of #radred.

Age 24
Male
The Nightosphere
Seen August 28th, 2015
Posted August 28th, 2015
599 posts
4.8 Years
If there's anything wrong, please let me know and I'll change it ASAP! Also, I'd like the possibility of my Doublade leveling up at some point if that's okay? AND ALSO (last thing I promise!!) would I be able to catch a single Pokemon when the RP begins, if I'm accepted that is? :)

~Name~
Thilas Verane

~Gender~
Male

~Age~
Nineteen

~Appearance~

Thilas Verane stands at 6'1" in height, weighing a very lean 195lbs. His body is athletic, from years of physical and endurance training, and he has a vast majority of tattoos covering both of his arms, and his upper and lower torso. He has both sides of his dark brown hair shaved, with the middle of his hair being very long, often spiked into a large mohawk or combed over to one side, generally the left.

His face, mainly his jaw structure, is defined. He has one hazel and one dark green eye, his left and right respectively, and his right canine tooth is a little bit longer and sharper than most peoples, often jutting out of his mouth a little bit. He has, at times, been seen wearing reading glasses, however usually disregards them. It is not known if they are just an accessory, or if he actually needs them for a purpose.

Regarding clothes, Thilas is usually seen wearing a white formal button up shirt, with a royal blue overcoat over the top, unbuttoned most of the time to reveal said white formal shirt. The trimming of the overcoat can range from gold to black to white, indicating that he has more than one. On his lower half, he wears a black pair of jeans with a black leather belt, and a pair of black boots, either with the jeans tucked in or covering the top half. He dresses very simply, though formally.

~History~

Hailing from Pallet Town, Thilas was raised by a star athlete of the Kanto region. He was regularly pushed into training and exercise during his younger years, though as he grew older he learned to enjoy this, as his body began to take the shape that he so desired. At a very young age he began to study Pokemon as a way of coping with the intense physical training, and was introduced to his first ever Pokemon at the age of six, when his mother and father took him to see the towns local Pokemon Professor, Professor Oak. He received a Croagunk from the Professor, and ever since the two have been inseparable.

From his mother's side, he began to get involved deeper and deeper in the world of Pokemon. Balancing out both training and his love for Pokemon, he successfully challenged and defeated all of the Pokemon Gym Leaders that Kanto had to offer by the time he was twelve, a mere six years after receiving his lifelong companion Croagunk. He put a hiatus on his athlete training to focus on the Elite Four of Kanto, until he was discouraged by his mother. A year later he was to find out that his mothers reasoning behind this was that she was, in fact, one of the Elite Four members herself, and could not stand the thought of beating her currently unbeaten son in a Pokemon battle.

Thilas suffered his first Pokemon Battle defeat a year later, at the age of thirteen, against a trainer from the Hoenn region. Thilas and the unnamed trainer began a rivalry spanning six months, culminating in another loss for Thilas, yet it brought about an evolution for his friend Croagunk. It was after this loss that he began to primarily focus on training with his father once more, however with his Croagunk evolving into a Toxicroak, his love for Pokemon still had not wavered. He began working for his father in his father's gym, for Pokemon and humans alike, and worked there until his family's move to Lunea.

Thilas was brought to Lunea when he was fourteen, five years ago, by his parents. His father, the renowned athlete that he was, was contracted too begin work on the development of Daybreak City, and his mother, an Elite Pokemon trainer, was brought into the region by Lunea officials to help ward off whatever was prowling around in the shadows. The three lived in harmony in Daybreak City, until the fateful day of the attack brought Thilas' world crashing down around him.

~Pokémon~

Pokémon Name: Tolbin
Pokémon Species: Toxicroak
Known Moves
Poison Jab
Hyper Beam
Shadow Ball
Sludge Bomb

Pokémon Name: Buster
Pokémon Species: Doublade
Known Moves
Sacred Sword
Slash
Iron Head
Flash Cannon

Plumbum

The Dandy Highwayman (That You're Too Scared to Mention)

Age 25
Male
Chichester, UK
Seen 4 Weeks Ago
Posted August 6th, 2018
101 posts
5.1 Years
If there's anything wrong, please let me know and I'll change it ASAP! Also, I'd like the possibility of my Doublade leveling up at some point if that's okay? AND ALSO (last thing I promise!!) would I be able to catch a single Pokemon when the RP begins, if I'm accepted that is? :)
Oh yay, questions! Well, I have absolutely no qualms with mons evolving during the RP. None at all... As for catching a wild pokémon, I've provisioned for that in the rules, if you remember. You're perfectly allowed to (Normally, Lunean laws require any captured mons to be turned over to the labs for research... but laws are silent in times of war... and given Daybreak's state, nobody wants to vouch for the state of those labs anyway). I don't see any problems with the character though, so welcome in to Lunea.

Rising_Dawn, I'm still hesitant, mostly because you've only really added a couple of lines. For now, I'll accept you, but please, come the RP keep an eye on the post lengths.

Now, I'm aware I'm still waiting on one reserve to put up a signup, but once again I've come to workdays without launching the RP for waiting. From this point on, there is no more waiting. Final warning: If you have a reserve and you haven't put up a character by the time the RP starts, you will not be joining the RP. My next work-free day and most likely launch date is Saturday.
I tear my heart open, I sew myself shut,
and my weakness is that I cared too much...

VeranithasVI

I eat shades of #radred.

Age 24
Male
The Nightosphere
Seen August 28th, 2015
Posted August 28th, 2015
599 posts
4.8 Years
Oh yay, questions! Well, I have absolutely no qualms with mons evolving during the RP. None at all... As for catching a wild pokémon, I've provisioned for that in the rules, if you remember. You're perfectly allowed to (Normally, Lunean laws require any captured mons to be turned over to the labs for research... but laws are silent in times of war... and given Daybreak's state, nobody wants to vouch for the state of those labs anyway). I don't see any problems with the character though, so welcome in to Lunea.
Yay!! You have NO idea how much I've been eagerly awaiting your reply! Thank you :)

So keen for this too start.

Plumbum

The Dandy Highwayman (That You're Too Scared to Mention)

Age 25
Male
Chichester, UK
Seen 4 Weeks Ago
Posted August 6th, 2018
101 posts
5.1 Years
Alright, I got this post sent off to be approved, so really, I should mention you're pretty free with what you start at in this RP. Whether you've met up already or you've not, where you are, as long as you're in danger from the current 'situation'.

So, good luck to everyone out there, myself included even... to let you in on a secret, this is the first time I've done GMing on a site with pretty nifty standards like this one! ^_^
I tear my heart open, I sew myself shut,
and my weakness is that I cared too much...

VeranithasVI

I eat shades of #radred.

Age 24
Male
The Nightosphere
Seen August 28th, 2015
Posted August 28th, 2015
599 posts
4.8 Years
Just a shameless bump, and link to the IC thread. ^.^

IC Thread

Really, REALLY excited for this to start, I've posted my first (and what appears to be the very first) post in what hopefully turns out to be a long and exciting journey. I'll see you all in Daybreak City!

I went away but now I'm back again! ^_^

Plumbum

The Dandy Highwayman (That You're Too Scared to Mention)

Age 25
Male
Chichester, UK
Seen 4 Weeks Ago
Posted August 6th, 2018
101 posts
5.1 Years
The ice storm is indeed following around the Abomasnow. Which means just the city center is very arctic right now.



Alert! A big-arse edit is approaching fast!



Okay, I really don't want to start of this RP with a moan. No, really I don't, so I'd like to say that for the most part I like you guys' posts. I just want to take an issue or two up. Cabbage, I just want to mention that you are taking too many liberties assuming how this Mamoswine is acting, in fact, you are basically trying to wrest control of an NPC from me, which is not cool, we call it "bunnying". I need to tell you what the Mamoswine is doing to kill you, not the other way around.

Caesar, can I get a little clarification where your character actually is? From what I'm reading, he seems to be both in the snowstorm and the plant-life and I need to figure where you are so I know what you're dealing with here (the two are exclusive, you can't be in both). Also, stopping for a lie-down is probably not the best idea. Same with Veranithas and Rising_Dawn, your characters are in completely separate areas to see the snowstorm and the plant life. Once that's sorted, I can get some IC written for you guys.

Really sorry for the moaning guys and in the same breath, I'm sorry for taking a while with it. I should've definitely got on this sooner.
I tear my heart open, I sew myself shut,
and my weakness is that I cared too much...
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