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[PKMN OPEN] The Pokemon Trainer Academy (OOC) (NEW!)

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Dawn

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By the way, Chef30. You asked in the IC about being able to talk to pokemon a while back. (Sorry for not responding! For future references, you should probably ask any question here in the OOC)

You can do that, but just keep in mind that if too many people do, it will get silly as that's supposed to be an extremely rare ability.
 

Dawn

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Nideous is correct. No big deal though. c: The train hasn't left or anything. Just have Hailey get her stuff through security and onto that train. x3
 

JukeboxTheGhoul

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So am I getting Accepted yet? or can I improve it more?

Wait!


Give me 1 more chance say exactly what you want me to do, quote the bits 1 more chance, If you don't except another of my good characters your gonna loose my respect because people just don't see the character behind the writing. If you have seen the character behind the writing and think it is a good idea I think you should not deny them, Unless you have done everything in your power to help, fine Deny, but you haven't, As a Future GM I promise people I will see the Character behind the writing.
 
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SelenaStar

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...aquataris, the poor grammar and spelling in that post kind of proves what Yellow was saying. I resent your accusation that she hasnt done 'everything in her power to help' - I know Yellow and she goes above and beyond her responsibilities to try help role-players improve.

And there is no such thing as a character behind the writing. The character is expressed through the writing. And if the writing is poor, then the character development will be also.

If your standard isn't high enough, that's your problem and not hers. Please don't attack her because you're annoyed.
 
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Dawn

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If you don't except another of my good characters your gonna loose my respect

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Unless you have done everything in your power to help, fine Deny, but you haven't

The problem is not your character. The problem is the grammar. It's... not within my power to teach English. You should type your posts here as if you were expecting them to be graded by an english teacher, however.

Give me 1 more chance

Fine...

In your old app, the personality field was slightly under 4 lines. It needs to be at least approximately 5 lines.

Your history met the length requirement, but you've continuously tried to say way too much in way too little words, it's very awkward to read.

I'm now going to copy paste your app and make corrections in purple. Since the personality and history were the only parts where grammar and the like is being judged, those are the only parts I will be reviewing.

It will be up to you to fix the app after that.

Corrections on Aquataris' app
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Nideous

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XD That's funny! I remember because when you left your character was about to kick Brian's butt for running into her. Heh, nice to see you again. :D
 

TrainerGiza

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XD That's funny! I remember because when you left your character was about to kick Brian's butt for running into her. Heh, nice to see you again. :D

LOL i think i remember that! xD
oh and thankyou! i have been away from poke community in general for a while its nice to be back~ c:
 

Dawn

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Alright, I'm just going to repost Aquataris' app here on this page.

Spoiler:

I'll get to actually looking it over soon, when Megaman gets on.

EDIT: Well I'll be. That actually does look a lot better. I conferred with Megaman765 and... you're accepted, under the condition that you can keep up a decent quality of writing. ...You should be proud of yourself.
 
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TrainerGiza

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Name: Gemma Florence Crane

Age : 22

Gender: Female

Job: Pokémon Psychology , Care and Contests.

Appearance:
Gemma has long white hair that ends right under her ribs, and is cut bluntly. Her bangs are thick and go straight across her forehead just above her dark eyebrows. Her facial features are very striking; prominent cheekbones, sleek eyes and pouty lips. Her eyes are of a vibrant lavender color. Her skin tone is naturally medium tan, and has freckles on her shoulders and face. She's of fair height, around 5'7" but often wears heels, making her taller, around 6 foot. Her body type is long and lean, like a models body, with slight curves.

Gemma likes to wear long floor length dresses that are fitted around her torso and become looser at the bottom. She is rarely seen wearing pants. With this, she wears looks of jewelry and most of her clothes are pastel or neutral colors. She loves lace and silk, usually pairing it with leather. Since she's into contests and such, it's only normal for her to wear make-up on a daily basis, often having long eyelashes, and a bright lip color.

Personality:
Ms. Crane is usually easy going, but can become very serious in the right situations. When talking, she's usually calm and clever, though sometimes she may come off as stuck up. She is one where it would be best for you not to get on her bad side; she has a very thick and deep rage and usually holds grudges. Gemma likes meeting new people, and likes to often quiz her students on their knowledge. She is always up for a challenge, and becomes pretty competitive. Very confident with everything that she does, and doesn't like making mistakes; which causes her to be hard on herself, in all situations. If you don't give her respect, she will not give it when it's not received.

For being a specialist in Pokémon psychology and psychology in general, she is very in tune with her emotions, and can easily read others. Gemma is very caring, and likes to connect with her students, on a mental level, as with her own Pokémon, and all Pokémon for that matter. Though at times she can have a loner type personality, but it doesn't seem to bother her much.

History:
Gemma grew up with her grandparents and an aunt. She never knew her parents since they both died when she was young, when her household's home burned down. She lived in the Village of Dragons, in the Unova region most of her life up until she was old enough to go with her Aunt to Pokémon Contests. From her Grandfather, she obtained her first Pokémon, a Axew, seeing that her grandfather raised them, and often handed Axew's out for passing trainers. Gemma also learned the way of Pokémon thoughts and behaviors from him, and her Grandmother.

When Gemma was of 12 her Aunt took her to the Hoenn region and had her participate in contests, with her lovely Axew. Seeing that the judges had a hard time liking the tough little Pokémon, she set out to obtain other Pokémon to help her, and would fit better. Gemma dreamed of becoming successful in Pokemon Contests, which was very different from most of her friends back home; most of them were, or training to be Dragon Tamers. Once on a search for a Jinx, she ran into a female Snorunt, and decided to capture it, vowing to turn it into a Froslass. Her Xatu was a gift from a boyfriend that she had when she was 17, who was from the historic city of Ecruteak City. When in Johto visiting relatives, she walked through a forest, and found a tricky Venonat following her, the Pokémon wanted to be with her on her journey, when Gemma was 19.

After all of this, Gemma went to College to further study Psychology and to teach other people about how important understanding your Pokémon is, just as much as training it, along with daily training with her pokemon. She graduated at the top of her class, so much so Professor Oak requested her to teach at the Pokémon Trainer Academy.

Pokémon:

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Species: Fraxure ♂
Nickname: Fabian
Personality: He can be very silly at times, and likes to make people laugh, usually can easily cheer up Gemma when she is feeling down. Also has a temper.
Lvl: 45
Moveset: Slash, Dragon Pulse, Dig, Taunt, Double Team, Payback.

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Species: Froslass ♀
Nickname: Fiona
Personality: Has a personality very close to Gemma's, though she doesn't like meeting new people, but will if needed and rarely gets angry.
Lvl: 42
Moveset: Captivate, Confuse Ray, Blizzard, Thunderbolt, Shadow Ball, Light Screen.

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Species: Xatu ♂
Nickname: Xavier
Personality: Xavier is very calm and collected, rarely expresses extreme emotions, and is friendly.
Lvl: 41
Moveset: Lucky Chant, Psychic, Fly, Ominous Wind, Night Shade, Teleport.

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Species: Venomoth ♀
Nickname: Vera
Personality: Vera is the most sassy out of Gemma's Pokémon and loves being in the spotlight.
Lvl: 38
Moveset: Signal Beam, Venoshock, Poison Powder, Aerial Ace, Energy Ball, Double Team.

**If I need to change anything, or something doesn't make sense, I'm sorry, and I will fix it right away~**

@chef30 and @Nideous: thankyou! ^^
 
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