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Old November 23rd, 2004 (3:47 AM). Edited November 23rd, 2004 by Legendary Trainer.
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    To Mewman: Thanx again, Mewman. And Big Evil is my other fictious name.

    To everyone else: I've changed a few things in the following chapters:
    Episode 1, Chapter 2
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    Episode 4, Chapter 3

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    Chapter 2

    Black Jack stood at the entrance of the battlefield of the arena, getting ready for his first round of the tournament. He can hear the crowd giving some huge cheers from the outside, but he never felt nervous one bit.

    Time to whip some, he said to himself as he walked out into the arena, clenching his fists.

    Will you please welcome, shouted the announcer excitedly. The man who is on his winning streak of 2000-0 and the man who has more badges than a normal guy has teeth, please cheer for the man known as Black Jack!

    The crowd was giving some great big cheers for Black Jack. He walked into the arena and waited for his opponent. Chris Jolteon came out, as he is Black Jacks first opponent.

    And his opponent, from Canada, cried the announcer with excitement. The man known for his famous Eevee evolution team and he also claims to be the most famous man in the world Chris Jolteon!

    Chris Jolteon walked down to his respective part of the field, posing and showing off along the way. When he got there, Black Jack sarcastically opened his finger into his opened mouth with a bored look on his face. Seeing that, Chris Jolteon had a vain on his forehead and shouted, Ill make you pay for that!

    Elsewhere in the audience, Ash sat and watched the action with focus in his eyes and Pikachu sitting on his lap. There were four vacant seats on his left.

    Ash! a girls voice called. Ash turned round to find four people were looking for him. One of them had a yellow tanktop, short blue jeans with straps to hold them and ginger hair with a ponytail at the side of her head. The other had spiky brown hair and small eyes and wore a green jacket. Another had a red bandanna, red jacket and tight shorts that nearly reached her knee. Another one was a child, who wore glasses, a green shirt and brown shorts.

    Misty! Brock! Max! May! Over here! Ash called waving his arms for their attention.
    Pika pika! Pikachu cried also waving his arms.

    Ashs friends ran to their seats in case anyone would get there first. Ash, Misty said happily. Whos battling right now?
    Take a look, Ash replied as he pointed at Black Jack.
    Is that Black Jack? May exclaimed.
    Yeah! Brock replied. Hes the guy who helped this girl named Cassandra save the kids in Rustboro City.
    I heard that Black Jack got himself into many dangerous situations and out, Max continued. With his winning streak of 2000-0, I bet that hell win this one for sure.

    In the first rounds, the participants can only use one pokemon each, cried the announcer. The big screen will now select who will choose the trainer to select his pokemon first.
    The big screen of the arena circulated between the pictures of Black Jack and Chris Jolteon. The picture stopped at Chris Jolteons picture.

    Alright then, punk, Chris Jolteon said. I choose Jolteon!
    Figures, Black Jack replied. I already knew that you would choose him, since he must be your favourite.
    All of my pokemon are more than enough for you!
    Well see about that. Tyranitar! Its your time to shine!

    Black Jack threw out a pokeball and out popped Tyranitar. He gave a loud roar as he prepared for battle.

    Tyranitar versus Jolteon? May asked.
    Yep, Brock replied. Both pokemon have their advantages and disadvantages against each other. A Tyranitar has higher physical defence and attack stats, while Jolteon has high elemental attack power and speed.
    And thats not all, Max continued. Tyranitar is a rock and dark type, while Jolteon is an electric type. There is only one bug type attack that Jolteon can learn and that is the Pin Missile attack, and dark types are weak against bug type attacks. But having heard of Black Jack and his pokemons ability of being unpredictable in battle, I have no clue what he or his Tyranitar has in their minds.

    Now without ado, cried the announcer. LETS GET READY TO RUMBLE!

    Chris Jolteon got his pokemon ready to attack. Ill finish you off real fast! he taunted. Jolteon! Thunder attack!
    Already? Black Jack asked with a confident smirk.

    Jolteon charged himself up until his electric powers were full; he then let out a huge roar as lightning was shot out from him and went into the clouds and then dived down at Tyranitar.

    Too easy, Black Jack criticised. Dodge to your left, Tyranitar.

    Tyranitar did what he was instructed as he confidently took one step to his left, making the lightning hit the ground instead, missing him by an inch. A lot of people in the audience had surprised look on their faces and gasped.

    Whoa! Brock said. Smooth move, if that Thunder attack did hit Tyranitar, it wouldve done a lot of damage.
    I told you guys, Max said. Black Jack is unpredictable, he just showed that his Tyranitar can move fast.

    Now, Tyranitar! Black Jack commanded. Mega Punch attack!
    Jolteon! Chris Jolteon yelled. Pin Missile attack!

    Jolteon shot out his Pin Missile attack like wildfire. The attack did hit Tyranitar, but he wasnt even fazed as he continued to run at Jolteon at high speed.

    Tyranitar went on to hit Jolteon with Mega Punch, but he jumped out of harms way, making Tyranitar punch the ground instead. The punch was so hard that it created a hole in it.

    If thats the way this is gonna be, Chris Jolten thought to himself. Ill have to worn him out.

    Jolteon! he commanded. Agility now!

    Jolteon started to run rings around Tyranitar. Stand still, Black Jack said. Dont worry too much about it.

    Jolteon has been running around Tyranitar for a long time, but Tyranitar didnt show any sign of confusion or tiredness. Chris Jolteon was beginning to get frustrated. Jolteon! Chris Jolteon ordered. Tackle attack!

    In front of him? Black Jack asked with criticism. Tyranitar! Shadow Punch!

    Tyranitar gave a stretched and swift punch to knock Jolteon down, like a seviper would strike a pidgey.

    May gave several blinks. What happened? she asked. Ive never seen a pokemon punch like that before.
    A shadow punch? Brock asked. I thought that only Dusclops learn that move.
    I guess Black Jack has his own way of teaching moves, Max replied.

    Misty couldnt help but noticing Ash concentrating on the battle.

    Jolteon slowly picked himself up. Jolteon! Chris Jolteon commanded. Thunderbolt attack!

    Black Jack gave a confident smile as Jolteon charged himself up. Jolteon tried to let the electric attack but it was no use, as he suddenly felt worn out.

    Hey! Whats going on here? Chris Jolteon asked.
    Batteries have their own limits, Black Jack replied. And it looks like your Jolteon has reached his.
    What!
    Since Jolteon has been running around Tyranitar for a long time, he has been growing tired. That means that he had no longer had the energy to use his electric attack, let alone carry on with the battle. In other words youre finished.
    No way!
    Tyranitar! Focus Punch attack!

    Tyranitar turned around as he charged himself. Jolteon had no more energy to move, as Tyranitar slid quickly at him while giving a devastating punch, which caused an explosion, sending him flying. NO! Chris Jolteon cried as his Jolteon fell to the ground unconscious

    After that, everyone stood and gave a deafening cheer for Black Jack.

    Chris Jolteon fell to his knees and was in tears as he called back his defeated pokemon.

    Loser, Black Jack disappointedly thought as he walked to the back of the stadium. Even though he won, he felt nothing. He felt that something was missing in his life of adventures.

    A few minutes later, Black Jack was at the pokemon center, waiting for his pokemon to be healed. He also waited to find out who his next opponent might be. Hi, Black Jack, said a girls voice.

    Black Jack turned around to see her acquaintance, Cassandra. Along side her was one of the students from the Flaming Fist School, fifteen years old. Cassandra and Lao Ping, Black Jack said. Long time, no see. What are you guys doing here?

    Did you actually expect us to miss your matches? Cassandra asked. I promised Gardevior that shed be able to see how you and your pokemon were battling.
    And Ive been chosen to see how Blaziken was getting on, Lao Ping replied. Surely you mustve trained him well.

    Before Black Jack could answer, the big screen circled around to find the pokemon trainers battling for the next round. It turned out that Black Jacks opponent would be a man known as Mr. Mack. He was wearing sport and street clothing.

    Mr. Mack? Cassandra said. I never heard of him.

    Black Jack gave a nasty smile. Might as well whip his as well, he thought.
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    Old November 24th, 2004 (6:23 AM). Edited November 25th, 2004 by Legendary Trainer.
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      Chapter 3

      Ash and Pikachu were at the pokemon center desk, followed by their friends, Brock, Misty, May, Max, Cassandra, her Gardevior and Lao Ping.

      Has anyone seen Black Jack this morning? Cassandra asked.

      Everyone shook their heads sideways, indicating that they havent seen Black Jack since his first round battle against the loudmouth, Chris Jolteon. Wouldve been great if he gets to see any one of Ashs matches, Misty said. He wouldve been so impressed.

      They looked at the big screen as it showed Ashs first opponent. It turned out to be a boy younger than Ash. He had brown hair, a white shirt, blue jeans and brown shoes. The trainers name was Wally.

      Wally, Ash said. Never heard of him.
      Ive heard that he is a gutsy trainer, Brock said. I have a feeling that hell be just as determined as you, Ash.
      Haha! Who wouldnt be?

      Suddenly, a voice was heard from the nearby speaker. Would Ash Ketchum and Wally walk over to the stadium please?

      Thats us, Pikachu! Ash cried excitedly.
      Pika! Pikachu cried.

      They all made their way to the stadium. Ash proved to the security guards that he was there to compete and was told to take a different entrance to the stadium while the others entered at the main entrance. While Ash was getting ready, the others were surprised to see Black Jack already seated as a spectator. They all sat close to him.

      Black Jack? Lao Ping said. When did you get here?
      Early, Black Jack replied. I just hate long cues.
      This guys really weird, May whispered to Misty.
      I second that, Misty replied.
      Hes got good ears too, Black Jack warned.
      Cmon you guys, Cassandra said. Black Jacks not all that bad.
      Gard, Gardevior replied.
      Thanks, kids, Black Jack said.

      Ladies and Gentlemen! the announcer cried. We are about moments away from another great pokemon match! Are you ready!?
      YEAH! the crowd yelled, everyone except Black Jack.
      I cant hear you!
      The crowd yelled even louder.

      Okay! First up, from Pallet Town, he is one of the top sixteen top trainers in the Kanto Region League, the Orange League champion, the Johto League semi-finalist, and now he is hoping to become Hoenn League champion and the next pokemon master ASH KETCHUM!

      As the crowd gave a deafening cheer, Ash nervously walked to his respective part of the field, trying to keep his focus on his upcoming match, along with Pikachu riding on his shoulder. When he reached his part of the field, he let out a small sigh of relief.

      Strange, Black Jack said. For a great trainer, hes very nervous.
      Dont worry about that, Misty said. When he battles, hes like an button. Once he starts battling, theres no way that hell back down from anything.
      I must admit looks can be deceiving.

      As Ash waited patiently, the announcer announced his first opponent. And his opponent, from Petalburg city, he is known as the rookie of the millennium, for the first time ever, ladies and gentlemen, please welcome WALLY!

      As the crowd cheered, a ten-year-old boy was nervously walking down to his respective part of the field. He had green hair and was wearing a white-buttoned shirt, brown jeans and black shoes. He must be Wally, Ash thought.

      Hes from Petalburg city? May said. Thats where we live Max!
      I know, Max said. I noticed that he was with this guy when they were going into a forest while you were out getting your first pokemon.
      Oh.

      Black Jack intently looked at both trainers. Wally must be either strong or lucky getting into this league, he thought theoretically. Either way, Ash will beat him easily, thanks to his experience, titles and innovations.

      The computer will now select which trainer will release his pokemon first, cried the announcer. The computer began circulating and randomly selected Ash to be the first trainer to pick his pokemon first.

      Sorry, Pikachu, Ash said as he took out a pokeball off his belt. I choose you! Sceptile!

      He tossed out his pokeball and Sceptile came out of it. He landed on his feet and placed a small twig in his mouth.

      Okay Wally said nervously said as he took out his pokeball and tossed it. A Gardevior popped out of it.

      Huh! Black Jack said in a slightly surprised way. I never thought that a rookie trainer could find a pokemon like that, let alone catch one.
      Hey! Cassandra said. Its the same species as you, Gardevior.

      She and her friends turned to her Gardeviors direction and noticed that there were sparkles in her eyes. Uh-oh, Black Jack teased, noticing that Gardevior had fallen in love with Wallys Gardevior. Were losing her.
      I just hope that she doesnt act up like Brock does, Misty said.

      Cassandras got a Gardevior, Ash thought to himself. I know stuff about her but I dont know much about this one, so I have to be careful.

      Sceptile! he yelled. Slam attack!

      Sceptile leapt into the air and aimed his attack on Gardevior.

      Um Gardevior! Psychic attack! Wally yelled.

      As Black Jack looked on, he knew that when a trainer attacks physically he shouldnt attack head on; he must trick his opponent first.

      Wallys Gardevior shot out a Psychic blast but missed as Sceptile dodged out of the way and spun his tail to whack Gardevior across the face. It staggered backwards, trying to regain balance. Cassandras Gardevior was in shock.

      Gardevior tried to regain his senses while Sceptile attempted another Slam attack.

      Gardevior! Wally yelled. We cant get hit with the same attack twice! Dodge it!

      Gardevior barely dodged out harms way as Sceptile slammed his tail on floor, created a big dent in it. Way to go! Wally said. Now Shadow Ball!

      Gardevior charged up its powers. Stand your ground, Sceptile! Ash instructed. Dont move until I say so!

      Gardevior finished charging up its powers and shot a large black energy ball at him. Now, Sceptile! Ash yelled. Sceptile did as he was told and dodged underneath the fireball as he ran towards his opponent.

      Now we got him! Ash yelled. Slam attack!

      Sceptile leapt into the air and aimed his tail again towards. His attack was coming quite close to giving it more damage. When suddenly, a black energy ball came zooming in on Sceptile, causing an explosion upon impact. This move has shocked everyone in the entire stadium, including Black Jack himself.

      How did that happen? Ash said in astonishment as Sceptile fell hard on the floor.

      It looks like that Ive underestimated the rookie or more technically the pokemon, Black Jack said. Gardevior mustve unnoticeably used his psychic ability to control his attack.
      You noticed that it was a male? Cassandra asked. How do you know?
      Instincts, Black Jack replied as he looked at Cassandras Gardevior who was clapping with joy, supporting Wallys Gardevior.

      I cant believe it Wally said as he sweated heavily. I never thought that I could win this until Gardevior taught me a little something. I owe him something.

      He shook his head, trying to get back to his strategy. Okay he continued. Ashs Sceptile has been weakened and lying on the floor. And Ash is in panic mode. All I got to do now is attack with Shadow Ball and I would actually beat him!

      Im gonna win!! he yelled excitedly. Gardevior! Shadow Ball attack!

      Seeing that theres no reason to charge up his attack, his Gardevior shot out a smaller sized Shadow Ball at Sceptile. But suddenly, the wood gecko pokemon glowed vigorously green much to everyones surprise, except Ash.

      Sceptile! Ash yelled. Knock that Shadow Ball away!

      Sceptile immediately stood up and whacked the attack away with his tail, sending back to Gardevior! The energy ball was a lot bigger and faster than it was before when Gardevior shot it out.

      Gardevior was hit by the attack and was knocked down before Wally could react. He was deeply shocked. Whats going on? he cried in a confused tone. How can you attack back when your Sceptile was weakened?

      Cos he has a special ability called Overgrow, Ash replied. If Sceptile is at a losing end, hell gain more attack strength.

      Wally looked down on his weakened Gardevior in a defeated look. Its over I surrender, Ash! he said.
      Wally surrenders the match! the referee cried. Ash Ketchum wins!
      Wha Ash said. Giving up just like that?

      Gardevior looked back at Wally with great shock. Im sorry, Gardevior. I dont want you to get hurt anymore, Wally said as he looked down in shame. Plus, Im not ready for leagues like this.

      Ash walked over to him and placed his hand on his shoulder. Dont feel sad, Wally, he said. That attack youve pulled really had us shocked, and I can tell that youre a great trainer.

      Really? Wally said happily. You mean that?
      Sure I do.

      They both shook hands. Every spectator stood and gave out a standing ovation, apart from Black Jack who remained seated and gave some applause.

      Gardevior walked over to Sceptile, who was still glowing, and wanted to shake his paw. Sceptile was about to accept his hand of friendship when suddenly he stopped glowing and fell on the floor holding his injured arm.

      Ash turned round to see whats going on and saw Sceptile on the floor and in pain. He quickly took out his pokeball and got him to return. Wally did the same and they both immediately ran out of the stadium, much to everyones worry.

      Well done, Ketchum, Black Jack thought proudly as he and his acquaintances got off their seats and made their out.

      A few hours later, Ash and his friends, apart from Black Jack, were at the pokemon center, where Ash was waiting to get his Sceptile healed. His new friend, Wally was waiting to get his Gardevior healed. They were waiting outside the operating room.

      Cassandras Gardevior had a worried look on her face. Her trainer couldnt help but notice. You like Wallys Gardevior, dont you? she teased.

      Her Gardevior quickly shook her head sideways as she blushed a bright pink. Dont worry, I wont tell anyone if you dont.

      Gardevior let out a small sigh of relief.

      Meanwhile, Ash couldnt help but worry about Sceptile, remembering that blast Sceptile took was purely damaging. Suddenly, there was a ding sound, signalling that the operation was over.

      As Nurse Joy came out, Brock quickly zoomed over to her and gently grasped her hands. Oh, Nurse Joy, Brock said dreamily. Im suffering from a broken heart and you are only person that can fix it for me.

      Brock suddenly felt Mistys hand tugging his ear and whimpered in pain. Youre going to be suffering a cracked skull if you carry on like that, she growled.

      Ash and Wally quickly walked over to her, followed by their friends. Nurse Joy, Ash said desperately. How is Sceptile?
      And Gardevior? Wally asked.
      Gardevior is fine and you can pick him up tomorrow. But Sceptile is in pretty bad shape and would need a long rest.
      No way! Ash cried.
      Yes. He has been suffering a lot of damage because of his continuous battling before the tournament. I can tell that hes never 100% healed after recovery.

      Ash remembered the fact that Sceptile enjoyed battling a lot, but he never wanted Sceptile to be reckless in battle. Perhaps, I was being reckless when I battle with him, he said in a down tone as he looked down in shame. Im the one to blame.
      Dont put it on all on yourself, Ash, Brock said. We all make mistakes sometimes.
      I didnt make a mistake, Brock. I made a bad choice.

      He looked up at Nurse Joy. Can I see him? he asked.
      Of course, you can, she replied.

      Ash and the others entered the room where Sceptile and Wallys Gardevior were recovering. Ash walked over to the bed where Sceptile was lying on where while Wally walked over to his Gardevior.

      It didnt take for Sceptile to slowly open his eyes. Scept
      Sceptile, Ash whispered. Im glad youre okay.
      Er, Ash, Wally said. If Nurse Joy said that Sceptile wouldnt be able to fully recover for the next couple days during the tournament, whos gonna take over?

      Sceptiles eyes widened with shock. He struggled to get from his bed but he felt the aching pains in his body. Sceptile! Calm down! Ash said. Just listen to me!

      Sceptile did as he was told as he tried to lie comfortably on his bed. Sceptile, Ash started. I know how much you love battling. But I cant risk your health just to win this competition, cos if I do, chances are you wont be able to battle again. Besides, you have got to rest sometime.

      Sceptile agreed that hed relax until he was free to battle again. They were some strong but smooth things to say, Ash, Brock said.
      I know, Ash said. But who can I think of to take over Sceptile?

      Suddenly, a loud roar was heard from outside, a roar that was familiar to Ash, Brock and Misty. Its Charizard! Ash said happily, as Charizard was flying outside the window. Ash opened the window to let Charizard in and they both gave each other a great big hug. Are you here to battle with me? Ash asked. Charizard gave a positive growl and nodded, much to Sceptiles disgust.

      Hey everyone, Ash said. Meet my old buddy, Charizard.

      Charizard let out a small growl. Everyone introduced themselves to him, except Sceptile and Wallys Gardevior. Er Ash, May said. If youre allowed six pokemon on you, how are you going to get Charizard on your team.
      Simple, Ash said. Ill ask Prof. Oak to take care of Sceptile for a while and Charizard will be easy to carry. Is that okay, Sceptile?
      Scept Sceptile replied tonelessly.
      Sceptile Ash said in a concerned tone.

      Nurse Joy walked into the operating room and was shocked to see a Charizard in the operating room. What is a Charizard doing here? she cried.
      Nurse Joy, Ash said. Does Sceptile need any more medical attention?
      No. But he needs a long rest.
      Will it be okay if I sent it to Prof. Oak to rest?
      You know him?
      Yeah. Not only that he researches on pokemon, hes good when it comes to medical stuff.
      Well, Ive never been in this situation. But since Prof. Oak knows a thing or two about medicine then itll be fine with me.
      Thanks, Nurse Joy.

      While they were talking, Cassandras Gardevior couldnt stop staring dreamily at Wallys Gardevior while he was asleep.

      Outside the Hoenn League village, Black Jack was lying by a tree with a straw in his mouth. He was reflecting on what has happened over the past few months after he left Team Rocket. First, he became Blazikens new trainer after his old trainer passed away. Then he helped Cassandra save the children of Rustboros Pokemon School. Then he noticed that someone or something was calling for him while he was battling Mewtwo.

      He always saw himself as a tough and merciless SOB, but for some reason he always helped others in need. While he thought about it, his Nidoking came into his view. Finished your dinner already? Black Jack asked.
      Nidoking nodded.
      Nidoking, Black Jack continued. Do you think that I have gone soft?
      Nid? Nidoking asked. Which meant, huh?
      Ah, forget it, Black Jack replied, realising that Nidoking wouldnt understand.

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      Old November 25th, 2004 (5:34 AM).
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        Chapter 4

        The next day, Black Jack was getting ready for his second round of the tournament. He walked out on the battlefield and waited for his opponent while the announcer introduced Black Jack to the audience. His opponent came out wearing sport and street clothing. He had a radio in one hand and a microphone in the other as he spoke in rhymes, introducing himself. In other words, he was rapping.

        Yo!
        So you is the famous Black Jack!
        I is also famous!
        I is known as the famous Mr. Mack!
        Now dat I is in the Hoenn League Championship!
        Ill go on the attack!
        And making you go what dat!


        Sad Black Jack whispered as he gave Mr. Mack a bored look.

        In the second rounds, cried the announcer. Only two pokemon can be used by each trainer! Are you two ready?
        Yeah! Im ready, fools! Mr. Mack yelled.
        Ready to be smashed you mean, Black Jack replied confidently.
        Well then LETS GET READY TO RUMBLE!

        The huge screen chose Mr. Mack to choose his pokemon first.

        Before we start, fools, Mr. Mack said. How about it if I play a little music!

        He placed his radio next to him and played a tape, which played rapping songs.

        Ash, Pikachu, Misty, Brock, May, Max, Wally, Cassandra, her Gardevior and Lao Ping sat as part of the audience, watching the match. Why would he want to play some music? Ash thought. He then gasped as he remembered. Wait! Ive seen that strategy before! I remember now! It was a couple of years ago while I had a pokemon battle against Rudy back in the Orange Islands!

        Now I choose Hitmonlee, fools! Mr. Mack yelled as he threw the pokeball. Hitmonlee popped out of his pokeball and kept on jumping in a single spot while preparing himself for battle.

        Hmph! Metagross! Black Jack yelled. I choose you!

        Metagross popped out of his pokeball, getting ready for battle.

        Huh? Whats that? Ash asked as he checked on a small gadget called a pokedex, which can describe any pokemon.

        Metagross, an Iron Leg pokemon, the pokedex described. It has four brains in total. Combined, the four brains can breeze through difficult calculations faster than a supercomputer. This pokemon can float in the air by tucking in its four legs.
        Hmm, Ash murmered. Lets see what it can do.

        Metagross! Black Jack commanded. Psybeam attack!

        Metagross aimed and shot out two powerful psybeams out his eyes. But Hitmonlee dodged them as he leapt into the air while doing a leg split. As he landed on his feet, he started dancing again.

        Never seen that before, but its obvious the reason why hes dancing. Black Jack thought as he spotted a radio next to Mr. Mack. That must be hes strategy.

        Black Jack took out his pokeball. Metagross! Return!

        It looks like hes got some other plan in mind, Ash thought.

        Blaziken! Go for it! Black Jack cried as he tossed another pokeball.

        Blaziken popped out of his pokeball. Blazi

        Lao Ping nearly got off his seat as he saw his friend on the battlefield. Blaziken he said to himself.

        Blaziken stood poised for battle and noticed that Hitmonlee was dancing, meaning that he must be very careful.

        That punk kids waiting for me to attack, Black Jack thought. But as soon as I do, he might be able to counter it.

        Blazikens eyes narrowed, trying to predict what Mr. Mack and his Hitmonlee were planning.

        Youre keeping us waiting, fools! Mr. Mack shouted.
        Black Jack and Blaziken realised Mr. Macks weakness. Well, if you hate waiting, he replied. Why dont you attack first?
        Hitmonlee! Rolling Kick now!

        Hitmonlee ran forward. Blaziken stood poised, ready to counter. But to his surprise, Hitmonle flipped forward to do a handstand while both his feet grabbed Blazikens head.

        Hitmolee flipped his body backwards while his feet held Blazikens head and dragged it, flipping Blaziken over, and landing on his back. Both pokemon quickly picked themselves up with Blaziken being momentarily hurt as he held his back.

        I meant seismic toss, fool! Mr. Mack taunted. Hehe!

        That punk! Black Jack thought. He tricked us!

        Thats what you get when you face Mr. Mack! Mr. Mack said. Dont forget, He has seen you battle against Chris Jolteon and he knows youre strategy, sucka!
        Battles are more than just strategies, weirdo.
        Yeah! Its about brawn as well! But judging by your Blaziken, Id say that he has neither!

        Black Jacks eyes narrowed. Brains and brawn, eh? he thought. He wont know whatll hit him

        Blaziken looked at both Hitmonlee and his trainer. He motioned Hitmonlee to come and fight him. I agree! Mr. Mack shouted as he saw that. Lets get back to kicking their butts, Hitmonlee! Jump Kick attack!

        Hitmonlee kept on doing the cartwheels towards Blaziken. Blaziken stepped back a few steps until Hitmonlee leapt into the air.

        Hes gonna come down real fast, Black Jack warned. Get ready to dodge!

        Hitmonlee performed a dive kick at Blaziken, who dodged out of the way. Big mistake! Mr. Mack taunted. Mega kick!

        Hitmonlee switched his jump kick attack to a Mega kick attack where he attacked Blazikens head with a spin kick. But to Hitmonlees surprise, the attack was blocked. Blaziken! Black Jack yelled as he saw the attack coming. Counter attack!

        His fist of the other arm burned an angry red fire as he gave Hitmonlee a hefty punch to the gut. Hitmonlee was sent flying to the end of the field until he fell to the ground.

        It took a few seconds for Hitmonlee to slowly pick himself up, who was in immense pain as he held his gut.

        Now do you see why you shouldnt playing around with other people, let alone me? Black Jack asked. This is what you get for annoying us!

        Mr. Mack had a cold sweat on his head, not knowing what to do next. Dont feel like dancing now huh? Black Jack taunted. Now Blaziken! Blaze Kick attack!

        Blaziken ran like a speeding bullet and aimed his blaze kick attack at Hitmonlees gut. Block that attack, Hitmonlee! Mr. Mack ordered.

        Hitmonlee held one of his hands out, ready to defend while the other held his injured body part. But Blaziken tricked Hitmonlee by jumping on his defensive hand and then both of his feet smashed and bounced off Hitmonlees face. Blaziken somersaulted backwards and landed on his feet while the back of the head of Hitmonlee hit the ground hard, knocking him out. It looks like were even, Black Jack said.

        Hitmonlee was no longer able to battle. With frustration in his eyes, Mr. Mack called him back. Golduck! he shouted. Go smash that Blaziken to bits!

        Golduck pooped out of his pokeball. He does his little dance routine because of the music that Mr. Macks radio was playing while Blaziken responded by folding his arms and tapping his foot, waiting for Golduck to make his move.

        Golduck! Mr Mack cried. Ice Punch attack!

        Golduck began moving towards Blaziken while doing flips and somersaults, trying to confuse him. Black Jack focused on Golducks movements, so did Blaziken.

        Golduck leapt into the air. Its coming from above! Black Jack warned.
        Blaze! Blaziken replied.

        Golduck went to land his icy fist on Blazikens face. Blaziken went to counter the attack with his fire punch attack. Both punches collided; only Goldicks ice shattered to pieces and his fist took damage at the same time. Golduck landed on his back, holding his injured paw.

        As Golduck picked himself up, Blaziken got himself ready to attack again. Blaziken! Black Jack yelled. Comet Punch attack and Rolling Kick!

        Neither Mr. Mack nor Golduck could react when Blaziken leapt forward and performed a series of punches and kicks on different parts of Golducks entire body.

        Fury attack and Sky uppercut! Black Jack ordered. Blaziken continued his attack when he formed his hands into a type of a bird pokemon as he kept on poking viciously at Golducks chest, ending the attack when he sent Golduck into the air with an uppercut. Golduck fell hard to the floor.

        Having enough of seeing his Golduck getting beaten up by Blaziken, he decided to use his elemental advantages against him. Golduck! he cried. Water gun attack!

        Golduck immediately got up, leapt backwards, breathed in and let out a huge foam of water out of his mouth.

        Blaziken! Black Jack ordered. Counter it with your Sky Uppercut and Fire Spin!

        Blazikens paw burned an angry red fire. He let out a huge uppercut into the air and a huge fiery whirlwind came from the ground because of his momentum to counter and evaporate Golducks attack. Not only that the air was hot, but there were also strong and heavy winds around everyone in the arena, threatening to drag the audience members off their seats.

        Everyone held on to their seats, trying not to get sucked into the fiery whirlwind. Some of them covered their eyes so that dusts wouldnt get into their eyes. Misty lost her grip of her seat and was being sucked in. Misty! Ash cried as he grabbed hold of Mistys hand while he held on to his.

        The only person and pokemon was standing confidently was Black Jack and his Blaziken.

        The one that was mostly in danger was Golduck as he looked at the whirlwind with fear and took a few steps back while it was coming closer and closer. Mr. Mack was too distracted by the whirlwinds force, trying to not get sucked in. There was nothing they could do.

        Golduck tried to run away but was caught by the whirlwind. The force around him made him spun around and around. Not only that, he was also receiving damage by the heat of the fire.

        It took some time for the attack to end. As the whirlwind slowly disappeared everyone looked back on the battlefield. It turned out that Golduck was lying on the floor, unconscious. Mr. Mack and his Golduck lost the battle, and Black Jack and his Blaziken won.

        No! No! No! No! No! NO! NO! NO! Mr. Mack cried as he fell to his knees. He then got out his pokeball. Golduck, get back in here

        Everyone stood up and cheered after seeing an amazing victory that Black Jack and Blaziken pulled. The one that was the most enthusiastic was Lao Ping. Blaziken! You did it! he cried.

        Black Jack walked close to the spot where Blaziken was standing. Blaziken turned to see his current trainer. Old man Wong must be very proud of you, Black Jack said in a caring tone.
        Blaze Blaziken replied as he looked up to the skies while a small teardrop ran down his face.
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        Old November 26th, 2004 (3:28 AM).
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          Chapter 5

          The next day after Black Jack defeated Mr. Mack in the second round of the Hoenn League, Ash and Pikachu decided to take a walk around the Hoenn League village a few hours before his second round match. Ash held up his pokeball that contained Charizard.

          Im glad Charizard came back for me, Ash said. He mustve heard that I was participating in the league, so he flew all the way from Charizard Valley to get here.
          Pika, Pikachu replied happily, saying that he missed Charizard as well.

          A few years back, Ash and his friends visited Charizard Valley where a trainer was training a vast number of Charizards. Ashs Charizard wanted to train there so much. Knowing that Charizards dream was to become the strongest there is, Ash left him there even though it pained him so much in his heart.

          Back at the present, Ash then had a down look on his face. But what about Sceptile? he said.
          Pika pika? Pikachu asked.
          Sceptile also likes to battle a lot I dont know if hell ever forgive me after what I did.

          Ash remembered that Sceptile was badly hurt after taking a Shadow Ball attack by Wallys Gardevior during their his first round of the League. Ash had a difficult time choosing which one of his pokemon to replace Sceptile until he was fully recovered. Thats when Charizard returned to help Ash out.

          Pikachu leapt onto Ashs shoulder and patted him on the head. Pikapi! Pikachu! Pikachu said, comforting his trainer.
          Thanks, Pikachu, Ash said.

          How is your training, Ketchum? a familiar voice asked.

          Ash turned to the voices direction and it turned out to be Black Jack calling him. Hey, Black Jack, Ash said. I didnt get the chance to talk to you since walked out of the stadium after you won that match yesterday.
          What about it?
          That Sky Uppercut and Fire Spin combo had literally got me off the edge of my seat.
          Thanks. By the way, hows Sceptile?
          Not so good. He has to rest for the rest of the tournament unless hes fully recovered.
          So, whos taking over?

          Ash showed Black Jack the pokeball that contained Charizard. My Charizard, he answered.
          Nice choice, Black jack replied. Just make sure the rest of your pokemon dont need any more medical attention.

          Ash smiled at that remark. Do you know who youre next opponent is? Black Jack asked.
          Yeah, Ash replied. His name is Brendan Birch. Weve met at the pokemon center and we wished each other good luck.
          Hmm well, I better go in case there would be a long cue at the stadium. See ya.
          Bye, Black Jack.
          Good luck.

          Black Jack walked away from Ash as Ash got himself ready for his upcoming battle. As Black Jack walked, he said, Youll probably wont be needing it in the second round but still a little luck doesnt hurt anybody.

          A few hours later, the whole stadium was packed with spectators who were looking forward to the next match. Wally was among the group, along with Black Jack and others. Ash was once again introduced to the crowd as he made his entrance. The spectators gave some deafening cheers for him.

          Ash waited for his opponent as he walked to his respective part of the battlefield. The announcer then introduced Brendan Birch. He came out wearing a black and red jacket, black jeans and red and white trainers. He has a bandanna with a picture of a red pokeball on it. He also had white hair and a confident look in his eyes.

          Hes the guy who helped me catch Gardevior, when it was a Ralts, Wally said.
          Did you guys travel together?
          Yeah, we did. Brendan knows a lot about pokemon, but being a cheeky guy he likes to play tricks on me sometimes, in and outside of pokemon battles.
          Tricksters tick me off, Black Jack snarled.

          Its a good thing Wally told me some stuff about him, Ash thought to himself. I know Brendan likes to play tricks so I better beware.

          Brendan gave a cheeky smile with confidence. Ash may be good, but he has no idea what I have planned.

          The two trainers were reminded that trainers that it was a two-on-two match but one pokemon must be used at a time.

          Gentlemen, the referee said as the computer circulated to select which one of the two trainers would send out their pokemon first. Are you ready?
          Yeah! Im ready! Ash yelled.
          Course I am! You had to ask? Brendan said.

          The computer chose Ash to be the first to pick his pokemon. Alright then! Ash shouted as he took out his pokeball. I choose you! Swellow!

          His Swellow came out of his pokeball and landed safely on the ground, ready for his opponent to come out.

          Hehe! Brendan sjirachied as he took out one of his pokeballs off his belt. Go! Camerupt!

          He tossed out his pokeball and a Camerupt came out of it, ready for battle.

          Go! Camerupt! Flamethrower! Brendan commanded.
          Swellow! Ash yelled. Fly high in the sky now!

          Camerupt shot out his flamethrower attack but missed as Swellow flew high in the sky. Looks like Swellow has an advantage over you, Brendan! Ash said.
          Dont be too sure! Brendan replied. Camerupt! Eruption!

          Camerupt yelled out his battle cry as huge fireballs shot out of the small volcanoes of his back. Swellow barely dodged each one of them. Good job, Swellow! Ash said. Now! Aerial Ace!

          Swellow flew directly at Camerupt and struck his face with its wing. Camerupt staggered backwards but regained his senses. Hang in there, Camerupt! Brendan yelled. Now, while its flying back, use Eruption again!

          Camerupt let out another bunch of huge fireballs out of the volcanoes. Swellow! Ash yelled. Behind you!

          Swellow looked at the incoming fireballs and dodged them, suddenly a huge flamethrower came and it scorched Swellows wing. No! Ash yelled. What happened!?

          Brendan and his Camerupt got Swellow and Ash distracted when Camerupt was shooting out his Eruption attack, followed by his flamethrower, Lao Ping said as he was observing the match. Another distraction or mistake like that and it could be all over.
          Inexperience is one Ashs weaknesses, Black Jack thought deeply. Brendans younger than Ash and is also inexperience but he is more knowledgeable about pokemon since his dad is a pokemon researcher and that he mightve some clever strategies to trick Ash but I have a strong instinct that Ash will win this match but not because of having more experience than Brendan.

          Swellow fell hard on the floor. We got it now, Camerupt! Brendan yelled. Body Slam Attack now!

          Camerupt leapt into the air as Swellow struggled to get to his feet. Swellow! Get out of the way! Ash cried.

          Swellow looked at the incoming Body Slam and instantly rolled out of the way, barely dodging the attack.

          Phew! May said as she began to sweat. I almost had a heart attack there.
          I forgot to breathe myself, Max said. And Im only watching the match.

          Swellow return! Ash yelled as he held out his pokeball. The injured Swellow was zapped back into its pokeball.

          Ash has called back Swellow and may use it again as a reserve, the referee announced. Ash, choose your second pokemon.

          Ash smiled confidently as he chose his second pokeball. Go! Charizard! Ash yelled as he tossed it out.

          Charizard materialised out of the pokeball and let out a loud roar.

          Black Jack sensed the fire, passion and rage within Charizard. Hmm. I can tell that Ash has trained him very well, he thought. Brendan can try to knock him out but theres nothing he can do here.

          A fire type versus fire type, Brendan said. Even though you reserved youre injured Swellow, you shouldnt make too challenging for yourself, since youre on your second pokemon!
          Dont worry about me, Brendan, Ash replied. Just worry about your Camerupt and your second pokemon.
          I wont need to, Brendan thought to himself. Youll see why.

          Charizard! Ash yelled as he pointed at Camerupt. Headbutt attack!
          Camerupt! Brendan shouted. Flamethrower attack!

          Camerupt shot out his flamethrower attack but Charizard confidently dodged the attack as he flew towards him. As Ash expected, Charizard headbutted his opponent in the face.

          Way to go, Charizard! Ash yelled. Now Mega Punch attack!

          Charizard did as he was instructed and gave a hefty punch to the side of Camerupts face sending him flying. Camerupt! No! Brendan yelled worringly.

          Now! Body Slam attack! Ash commanded. Charizard leapt into the air and grabbed Camerupt by the neck and slammed his face on the ground, knocking him out.

          Realising this, the ref raised a coloured flag. Camerupt is no longer able to battle, Charizard wins this round and Brendan is now on his last pokemon.

          Way to go, Charizard! Ash yelled happily as Charizard roared triumphantly.
          Dont get too excited, Brendan replied as he called back his pokemon. He picked out his second pokemon. Go Swarmpert!

          A large blue mudfish pokemon came out of his pokeball and yelled out his battle cry. Hmm, Ash murmured as he checked his pokedex.

          Swarmpert, the mud fish pokemon, his pokedex stated. Swarmpert predicts storms by sensing subtle differences in the sounds of waves and tidal waves with its fins. If a storm is approaching, it piles up boulders to protect itself.

          I can tell its a water type, Ash thought to himself. Still, I cant withdraw Charizard to get Swellow out, cos itll get him even more hurt.

          Why isnt Ash withdrawing his Charizard? Max asked. I hope he realises that fire types are weaker than water types.
          He does, Misty replied. You saw how injured Swellow was and knowing Ash, he doesnt know how to quit.
          Brendan is being less brave than Ash is, Black Jack thought. Water types have an advantage against fire types, not that it matters since Charizard will win in the end.

          Go for it, Charizard! Ash yelled. Fly attack!
          Swarmpert! Brendan yelled. Water gun!

          Swampert shot out a large spray of water out of his mouth. Charizard flew high in the air before Swarmperts attack reached him.

          Charizard! Attack Swarmpert with your Mega Punch! Ash yelled.

          Charizard dived down at Swarmpert and aimed his punch at him. Swarmpert! Brendan yelled. Water gun again!

          Swarmpert sprayed another water attack at Charizard but missed as Charizard quickly dodged out of the way. Charizard went to give Swarmpert a punch to the face but Swarmpert grabbed it.

          Use your other paw, Charizard! Ash yelled.
          Swarmpert! Grab it! Brendan yelled.

          Charizard used his other paw to punch but Swarmpert grabbed that as well. Charizard! Try to break out of that hold! Ash yelled.
          Swarmpert! Seismic Toss! Brendan ordered.

          Both pokemon were struggling in their test of strength to gain an upper advantage until

          Swarmpert! Use water gun! Brendan yelled.
          What! Ash yelled in shock.

          Swarmpert spat some water out of his mouth and it landed in Charizards eyes, making him lose concentration. Swarmpert used the advantage to grab Charizard round the middle and leapt into the sky.

          We got him now, Brendan thought.

          This is the part of your loss, Brendan, Black Jack thought as he observed Swarmpert attempting to slam Charizard.

          Charizard! Ash yelled. Flip Swarmpert over to counter!
          Say what!? Brendan yelled in shock.

          Charizard turned Swarmpert around in mid-air and Swarmpert fell hard on his back, letting go of Charizard.

          Charizard became free as he flew high in the sky. Charizard! Finish it off with Flamethrower!
          No way! Brendan said still in shock as Swarmpert to get up. Swarmpert move out of the way!

          Charizard shot out a huge and powerful lick of flame, Swarmpert wasnt able to move out of the way because of how much damage he took thanks to Charizards counter.

          After catching the flamethrower attack, Swarmpert became dizzy and was covered with burnt marks. Swarmpert fell to the floor once again but this time he was knocked out. Swarmpert! No! Brendan cried as he ran over to him.

          Swarmpert is no longer able to battle, the referee cried. Charizard wins the round and Ash Ketchum wins the battle!

          We did it! Ash cried.
          Pikachu! Pikachu squealed happily.
          Charizard roared loudly in triumph.

          The crowd went wild as the stood up and gave a deafening cheer. As I suspected, Black Jack thought, as he remained seated while clapping his hands.

          Ash walked over to Brendan. Great match, Ash said.
          It really was, Brendan replied as he smiled while calling back his Swarmpert.

          Ash offered his hand of friendship and sportsmanship to Brendan and he proudly accepted it. I thought that water pokemon can take fire attacks, Brendan said. I guess life is full of surprises.
          You certainly surprised me a couple of times, Ash replied. If you can come up with tricks as good as that, youll do well.
          Thanks, Ash.

          Black Jack was the first person to leave the stadium as usual. Cassandra couldnt help but wonder why he was always the first person to leave

          A few hours later, Wally had a backpack over his shoulder was about to leave. But first he had a visit from Ash and friends, including Black Jack. Leaving so soon? Ash asked.
          Yeah, Wally replied. Sorry I cant stay for the rest of the league but I had a call from my parents asking me for my help back home in Petalburg city.
          Say hi to my mom and dad for me and Max, May said.
          Arent you gonna wait until the officials give you a badge for participating? Brock asked.
          Nah I think Ill leave it, Max replied.
          Suppose I can help you out, Cassandra said as her Gardevior walked beside her.
          Gard, Gard Gardevior, Gardevior said while blushing.
          I think Gardevior wants to talk to yours, Balck Jack said.
          Er okay, Wally replied as he let his Gardevior out of his pokeball.

          Cassandras Gardevior walked over to Wallys, who was also blushing when he looked at her, and took his paw and they walked over to a corner where they wont be disturbed.

          I think my Gardevior has got a crush on yours, Cassandra said while giving Wally a wink.
          Really? Wally asked in a surprised tone.
          Yeah, and if things work, I bet Gardevior would want to see him again.
          I have all the time in the world, Black Jack continued. After this tournaments done, Ill take the badge to you by motorbike. Along the way, Ill pick Cassandra up and so that her Gardevior will visit yours.
          Sounds great, Wally replied.
          I never knew youd be thoughtful, Misty said.
          Well, I try my best, Black Jack replied.

          When they walked to the exit of village, the Gardevior were still holding paws while Wally and Cassandra looked at their pokemon happily. Cmon, Gardevior, Wally said. Lets go.

          The two gardevior looked into each others eyes and nuzzled each other one more time before they departed. As Wally and his Gardevior left they waved goodbye to their friends. To tell you something, Cassandra, Black Jack said. I think we should come up with a nickname for your Gardevior.
          Hmm I dont know, Cassandra said. Why dont we let Gardevior decide?

          Gardevior shrugged, meaning that she didnt mind. The gang walked back to the pokemon center discussing ideal names for Gardevior.

          How about Jenny? Brock suggested.
          Youre not naming her after Officer Jenny are you? Misty said nastily.
          Er no, Brock responded nervously.
          How about Kelly? May suggested.
          Gardevior shook her head.
          How about Snow White? Max suggested.
          Gardevior shook her head again.
          Well, we cant name her after me, Cassandra said. Jesse?
          Everyone shivered at that name (apart from Lao Ping and Gardevior) as Gardevior shook her head again.

          Sandy? No?
          How about Gardy? Not that either?
          How about this, Shelly?
          No? How about Joy?
          Brock!
          Oh, sorry.

          Oh man, Black Jack moaned, wishing that he had never started this in the first place.
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          Old November 29th, 2004 (3:51 AM).
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            Chapter 6

            The next morning at the pokemon center of Hoenn League village, Black Jack was checking to see who was his next opponent. He was looking at the big screen as it showed him his next opponent. It turned out to be a twenty-year-old woman dressed in traditional yet beautiful Chinese dress. The screen stated that her name was Cecilia Stansfield

            I never heard of her, he replied.
            But I have heard of you, said a girls voice.

            Black Jack turned around to see the person that was identical to the picture on the screen. Its an honour and pleasure to finally meet you, Mr. Black Jack.

            She politely bowed to him while Black Jack smiled. Likewise, he replied.
            I have heard many and great deeds you have done, sir.
            And I havent heard anything about you. But getting this far, you must be good.
            I look forward to our battle. And I hope that itll be a great one.
            You can count on it.

            They both shook hands.

            And may the best trainer win.
            I plan to.

            Cecilia giggled at that remark as she turned to exit the center. Finally, Black Jack thought as he shrugged. A trainer who isnt a freak!

            The next day, Black Jack got himself ready for his semi-final round as he walked into the battlefield waiting for his next opponent, Cecilia. Black Jacks acquaintances sat as part of the audience.

            So whos this Cecilia? Ash asked.
            I heard that she came from Mossdeep city, Max replied. She trained at Mossdeep City gym to learn about psychic pokemon, but she likes to learn other styles too and she trains her pokemon in different ways.
            What kind of ways?
            Well for example, she mightve taught a Scyther to use a poison type attack, like Toxic.

            As Cecilia came out, Brock immediately fell for her and blushed. Shes beautiful as well! he cried. She can train me anytime!

            Both Misty and Max pulled each one of Brocks ears to make him snap out of his daydream.

            In this round, The announcer cried. Both trainers are allowed to use three pokemon each but only one at a time! The screen will now show who will be the trainer to start first!

            The big screen had chosen Black Jack to select his first pokemon. I think Ill use the pokemon that I havent used yet, he thought. He remembered using Tyranitar in the first round, and he also used Blaziken and Metagross in the second round. That meant that he had Feraligatr, Nidoking and Salamence left. He picked out a pokeball out of his trainer belt. Feraligatr! he cried as he tossed it out. Go for it!

            He tossed out the pokeball and Feraligatr popped out, giving a loud roar. Cecilia picked out one of her pokeballs and tossed it out. Scyther! she cried. I choose you!

            Scyther popped and got into his battle stance as he prepared himself for battle.

            Scyther! Cecilia shouted. Slash attack!
            Feraligatr! Black Jack shouted. Dodge it now!

            Scythers slash attack was coming down on Feraligatr like a falling tree, only Feraligatr barely dodged out of the way. Scyther kept on slashing at Feraligatr but it kept on missing each time. Suddenly Black Jack noticed the moment when Scythers movement slowed as Scyther leapt into the air.

            Feraligatr! Black Jack shouted. Grab the scythes!
            Feraligatr quickly grabbed Scythers scythe as soon as they were coming down on him.

            Scyther landed on his feet as his scythes were caught, and he wasnt able to struggle free. Cecilia had a shocked look on her face.

            Now feraligatr! Black Jack ordered. Headbutt attack.

            Feraligatr opened Scythers arms apart and headbutted him in the head, knocking Scyther down. Now Feraligatr! Black Jack commanded. Finish him off with your slash attack!

            Feraligatr leapt into the air and was about to defeat Scyther. Scyther! Cecilia cried. Toxic attack!

            Scyther opened his mouth and spat a huge poisonous vomit at Feraligatr. Feraligatr fell down hard on the ground as his entire body suddenly felt weak.

            See? Max said. I told ya!

            Shoot! Black Jack thought. Feraligatrs hit!

            Feraligatr struggled to get to his feet, as did Scyther since he vomited out the poisonous sludge. Both pokemon were feeling quite weak. Ash noticed that Black Jack isnt calling back his weakened pokemon.

            Why isnt he calling back his weakened pokemon? Ash asked. Doesnt he care about his pokemon?
            Pika? Pikachu.
            Of course he does, Cassandra replied. Ive seen how the way he treats his pokemon. From what I saw, they are more than just a trainer training his pokemon. One time, Black Jack and his pokemon fought together as a team against those thugs, the Rocket Revengers.
            I remembered reading about that, Brock replied. Black Jacks way of training must be very different to everybody elses.
            True, Max replied. I heard that he trains them by battling them himself. And judging by Black Jacks physicality, Id say that he mustve trained them very well.

            Even though Feraligatrs hurt, I know that he wont give in, Black Jack thought, feeling Feraligatrs determination, his will to fight and his will to win.

            Scyther! Cecilia cried. Now that Feraligatrs weakened, finish it off with your Slash attack!

            Scyther leapt into the air. Jumping with swords again, eh? Black Jack said confidently. Feraligatr! Grab Scythers neck!

            As Scythers cutting edges were coming down on Feraligatrs head, he instantly grabbed his neck, stopping the attack. What? Cecilia said in shock.

            Slam him now! Black Jack commanded. Feraligatr lifted Scyther up the neck and then slammed him on the ground, knocking him out. Scyther was no longer able to battle.

            Feraligatr was no longer able to battle either as he fainted due to the poisonous effect of Scythers Toxic. It turned out to be a draw. Both Black Jack and Cecilia called back their pokemon.

            Nice work, Feraligatr, Black Jack said to Feraligatrs pokeball.

            Since this is a draw, ladies and gents, cried the announcer. The computer will now select wholl be the first to pick their next pokemon.

            This time, the screen chose Cecilia to choose. Scar Maker! she cried as she picked out another pokeball. I choose you!

            Another Scyther came out as he gave out a battle cry. Another Scyther huh? Black Jack asked. I think you made a bit of mistake, using the same pokemon type for this battle.
            Im afraid not, Cecilia replied confidently. This Scythers different from the one youve defeated.
            Okay then Nidoking! Your turn!

            Black Jack chucked out another pokeball, which contained Nidoking. He popped out of his pokeball and gave a loud roar as he prepared for battle.

            You think that roar would scare us? Cecilia taunted. Scar Maker! Sword Dance and Cut attack!

            Scar Maker spun round as he dashed towards Nidoking like a small tornado. Nidoking! Black Jack yelled. Jump over it!

            Nidoking attempted to jump over Scar Makers Sword Dance and Cut combo, Cecilia had another attack in her mind. Scar Maker! she cried. Sandstorm now!

            Scar Maker spun faster and faster a huge tornado was picked up and caught Nidoking. He was taken by spun by surprise as he spun round and round. Shoot! Black Jack thought as he was surprised by that move as well.

            Nidokings face turned from being surprised to being dizzy and nauseous. Scar Maker! Cecilia ordered. Stop the attack!

            Scar Maker stopped spinning and looked up. As Nidoking fell down, everyone thought that Nidoking was knocked out by the Sandstorm. It looks like Nidokings out, Cassandra said sadly.

            But to everyones surprise, Nidoking retaliated from his dizziness as he spun round and instinctively aimed his stomp move on Scar Maker. Scar Maker! Dodge! Cecilia ordered. Scar Maker barely moved out of harms way as Nidokings feet landed on the ground, making a huge crack.

            Looks like Nidokings not out yet, Black Jack said confidently. Nidoking gave a nasty growl to his opponent.
            Scar Maker! Swift attack! Cecilia commanded.

            Scar Maker leapt into the air and quickly spread out his scythes as he shot out tens of energy fireballs that looked like stars.

            A swift attack, Black Jack commented confidently. A move that never misses and neither does this! Nidoking! Counter attack!

            Nidoking swung his tail round to bounce the Swift attack back at Scar Maker. He tried to dodge the attack but it was no use.

            As Scar Maker fell to the ground, Nidoking gave a loud roar. Black Jack noticed what his pokemon wanted to do at that very moment. Now Nidoking! he shouted. Thrash attack!

            Nidoking tackled Scar Maker to the floor and began his trademark pummelling. Now finish it off with your Mega Punch attack!

            Nidoking lifted his right arm and punched his opponent right in the face, knocking him out. The punch was so hard, that it made most of the audience hurt.

            Scar Maker is no longer able to battle, the referee announced.
            Scar Maker! Cecilia cried. Return!

            Scar Maker went back into his pokeball. Cecilia took out her third and final pokeball. Edge! she cried. I choose you!

            A Scizor popped out of his pokeball. Scizor

            Hmm Cassandra thought. Her battling tactics seems strangely familiar to me

            Take a breather, Nidoking! Black Jack said as he took out his pokeball. Nidoking was sent back into the pokeball. Black Jack took out another pokeball. Salamence! Go for it!

            Salamence popped out of his pokeball and gave a loud roar as he prepared for battle. Edge! Metal Claw! Cecilia commanded.

            Edge charged up the power of his claws and Black Jack noticed the weakness of that move, so did his acquaintances.

            Hmm, normally, anytime a fighter charges up his power, Brock said, informing the others. They wouldnt be able to move because they are focusing on their energy, just so they can unleash their attack.
            And Black Jack isnt going to take any chances waiting for Scizor to attack, Ash replied as he had noticed in Black Jacks previous rounds that not only hes got strong and powerful pokemon, he and his pokemon have an unorthodox ability of being unpredictable.
            Wait a minute! Cassandra thought. Ive seen that move before! I wonder if she knows

            Salamence! Black Jack yelled. Fire Blast attack!
            Edge! Attack now! Cecilia yelled.

            Salamence blasted out a huge fire in a form of a giant symbol. Edge ran towards and dodged underneath the attack and smashed him in the face with his closed pincers, knocking him down.

            Salamence slowly picked himself up, shaking off the dizziness. Edge was about to attack Salamence again, but missed as Salamence dodged the attack and flew up high. Salamence! Black Jack shouted. Flamethrower attack!

            Salamence shot out multiple flames but Edge dodged each and every one of them. Edge! Cecilia cried. Metal Claw again!

            Edge leapt into the air in front of Salamence and slammed his pincers on his head, sending him crashing to the ground, making a huge crack in it.

            Scizor safely landed on his feet after the attack. Black Jack began to sjirachi. Is that the only move you know? he asked in a confident tone.
            Edge! Cecilia cried, ignoring Black Jacks criticism. Finish it off now! Slash attack!

            Scizor charged at Salamence. Salamence and Black Jack noticed the weak point of that strategy straight away as Black Jack stood their ground and Salamence struggled to get to his feet.

            They waited, and waited until

            Now Salamence! Black Jack commanded. Salamence lifted up his front legs and grabbed Edge by the waist. He lifted him up and slammed him on his back. Edge tried to pick himself up but Salamence stopped the recovery as he jumped a small height and slammed his front on Edge, using his weight to squash him!

            Salamence picked himself up to see Edge squashed. Scizor Edge moaned. Scizor is no longer able to battle! the ref cried. Salamence wins the battle and Black Jack wins the match.

            The crowd went wild as they once again gave a deafening cheer as they stood up.

            Edge, Cecilia said. Im very proud of you return.

            As Edge returned to his pokeball she looked at Black Jack. Hmm, she thought. I better keep an eye on him.

            Nicely done, Salamence, Black Jack said with a proud and praised tone. Salamence responded as he gave a triumphant roar.

            Ash looked at Black Jack with determination, as he knew that Black Jack was now in the grand final. He predicted that if he gets into the grand final with him, it would be a heavy and great battle.
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            Old November 30th, 2004 (4:37 AM). Edited November 30th, 2004 by Legendary Trainer.
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              Chapter 7

              A few moments after Black Jack defeated Cecilia in his semi-final match, he and his acquaintances waited patiently for Ash and his next opponent.

              So, who is Ashs next opponent? Black Jack asked.
              Its Steven Stone, May replied. He won last years Hoenn League championship.
              I know.
              I hear that steel-type pokemon are his specialty, Brock replied. So Ash has to be very careful in this one.
              Just a couple of Ground and Fire attacks should do the trick, Max said.
              It takes more than that to beat strong steel type pokemon, Black Jack said. Youve been with Ash for a long time, Max. You should know how he battles.

              The announcer introduced Ash to the crowd as they gave him a deafening cheer. Ash smiled as he waved to them. The announcer then introduced the Hoenn League Champion, Steven Stone.

              Steven came out wearing a smart suit but his arm sleeves were each wrapped by small belts. His hair was grey but the sun made it shiny.

              Nice to see you again, Steven, Ash said as he smiled. I was surprised that you would be my opponent in the semi-final.
              I, too, was surprised, Ash, Steven replied. I just hope that youve trained well, for I do not plan to lose anyway.

              They both met on separate occasions. In particular, they first met in Granite Cave just outside Dewford city where Steven was looking for some rare stones, but they were attacked Team Rocket. Luckily, Stevens Aggron sent them flying with his Hyper Beam attack.

              Everyone was anxious as they waited for the computer to select which trainer would choose his pokemon out first. It chose Steven to pick first, possibly giving Ash and advantage.

              Steven took out one of his pokeballs and tossed it out. Skarmory! he yelled. Go!

              The metal bird pokemon popped out and gave a loud screech, as it readied for battle. Good thing Brock gave me some details about Stevens pokemon, Ash thought. He pointed his finger at Skarmory.

              I choose Pikachu! he yelled.
              Pika! Pikachu cried as he ran onto the battlefield.
              BEGIN! the referee cried as he raised the two different coloured flags.

              Pikachu! Thunderbolt attack! Ash cried.
              Skarmory! Take flight! Steven yelled.

              Pikachu charged up his electric powers and shot out his attack, but missed as Skarmory flew high in the air.

              Pikachu! Thunderbolt again! Ash yelled.

              Pikachu shot out his attack again, but missed again as Skarmory flew sideways. This isnt working! Ash snarled.

              Skarmory! Steven yelled. Drill Peck attack!

              Skarmory dived down at Pikachu while spinning like a drill, the attack missed as Pikachu barely dodged out of the way. Skarmory used the attack repeatedly but missed each time. Skarmory is too fast for Pikachu, Ash thought in a frustrated tone. Wait! I know!

              Skarmory dived his beak at Pikachu again. Pikachu! Ash yelled. Jump on Skarmory!

              The metal birds attack missed as the little yellow rodent leapt into the air and landed on the back of Skarmory.

              Enjoy the shocking experience, Skarmory up close, Black Jack thought as he smiled sinisterly.

              No! Steven yelled. Skarmory! Shake it off!

              Skarmory flew high in the air as he attempted to shake Pikachu away. Pikachu! Thunder attack! Ash yelled.

              Pika CHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!! Pikachu cried as he let out his strongest electric attack. Skarmory screeched loudly in pain.

              After feeling the pain of Pikachus Thunder attack, Skarmory fainted as he crashed on the ground. Before it did, Pikachu jumped off Skarmory and landed safely on his feet. Skarmory is no longer able to battle, the referee announced. Pikachu wins the match!

              Good going, Pikachu! Ash said, congratulating his pokemon and friend.
              Pika Pikachu! Pikachu squealed happily.

              You did your best, Skarmory, Steven said as he called back his unocnoscious Skarmory. He took out another pokeball and tossed it out. Go! Aggron!

              A huge Aggron came out of his pokeball and gave out a loud roar, attempting to intimidate little Pikachu but to no avail.

              Pikachu! You need to rest! Ash yelled. Return!

              Pikachu did as he was instructed and ran back to his trainer. Ash took out another pokeball. Torkoal! I choose you!

              He threw a pokeball and Torkoal came out of his pokeball. Puffs of smoke came out from different parts of his rocky shell as he prepared for battle.

              Aggron! Tackle attack! Steven cried.
              Torkoal! Flamethrower attack!

              As Aggron ran towards Torkoal, Torkoal shot a lick of flamethrower out of his mouth and was coming straight at Aggron.

              Ash might be in luck, Brock said. Both Torkoal and Aggron have high physical defence stats but they are low on elemental defence. We all know that Torkoal is a fire type and Aggron is a dual rock and steel type.
              That means that if Torkoal can hit Aggron with his flamethrower attack, Aggron would be knocked out straight away because Steel type pokemon are weak against fire attacks, Max continued.
              Good thinking, Brock replied.

              Black Jack let out a small sigh. If they want to be smart, they should say things in every little detail, he thought.

              Back on the battlefield, the flamethrower attack was straight at the charging Aggron. Aggron! Jump to dodge the attack! Steven yelled.

              Aggron did as he was instructed and leapt into the air, dodging the flamethrower attack at the same time. Aggron landed on top of Torkoals shell, attempting to cause damage but to no avail. Noticing this, Aggron immediately jumped of his shell.

              Hmm, that didnt work, Steven thought to himself.
              Aggron didnt have much chance against Torkoals defences, Ash thought as he smiled confidently.

              Aggron! Thunder attack! Steven commanded.
              Thunder!? Ash yelled in shock.

              Aggron let out a small growl as electricity surrounded his body. He then let out a huge roar as a huge spark of electricity was flying at Torkoal. Torkoal! Ash yelled. Dodge out of the way!

              Torkoal barely dodged out of harms way. Aggron! Take down attack! Steven yelled. But Aggron wasnt able to attack as he felt the recoil of his electric attack as he became paralysed, much to Stevens shock.

              I dont get it, May said. Why cant Aggron attack?
              He used up too much electricity, Black Jack replied. Ever heard of power overload?
              No. Ive never watched Star Wars.

              Ash took his chance to make his attack. Torkoal! Flamethrower!

              Torkoal shot out another lick of flame at Aggron. This time the move connected as Aggron felt even more pain in and out of his body, passing out in the process.

              Aggron is no longer able to battle, the referee announced. Torkoal wins the round and Steven Stone has one pokemon left at his disposal.

              That was great Torkoal! Ash yelled triumphantly. One more pokemon to knock out and were in the grand final!

              Both Pikachu and Torkoal cheered happily at the announcement.

              Maybe, Steven replied as he took out another pokeball. But this battle is far from over, Ash.

              He tossed out his third and final pokeball. Go! Metagross!

              Metagross came out of his pokeball.

              Steven has a Metagross too! Ash said as his eyes widened.
              Youre my last hope, Metagross, Steven thought to himself. But with you, the battle has just begun.

              Things are about to get interesting, Black Jack said as he closely observed the match.

              Lets see, Ash thought deeply. Black Jack used his Metagross against Mr. Macks Hitmonlee in the previous round. His Metagrosss kept on missing of Hitmonlees dancing techniques. A lack of speed might be Stevens Metagrosss weakness.

              Torkoal, return! Ash yelled as he took out his pokeball. Torkoal went back inside it. Ash took out his other pokeball and tossed it out. Charizard! Go!

              Charizard came out of his pokeball and let out a loud roar. Alright, Charizard! Ash yelled. Flamethrower attack!

              Charizard aimed and shot out a lick of flame out of his mouth at the Iron Leg pokemon. Metagross! Steven yelled. Counter with Mirror Coat!

              Metagross glowed vigorously and the fire attack bounced away from and was coming back at Charizard. Charizard! Dodge! Ash yelled.

              Charizard barely dodged out of the way as it flew high into the air.

              Ash, look out! Misty cried as the flame attack was coming at Ash. Luckily, he dodged out of the way.

              Phew! Max said as he wiped away some sweats off his forehead. I thought Ash was a goner there.
              I was worried too, Misty said. Ash got himself seriously hurt at times.
              So have I, Black Jack thought as he continued to watch the match.

              Charizard! Ash yelled. Knock Metagross down with your headbutt attack!

              Charizard did as he was instructed and dived straight down at Metagross like a speeding bullet that was shot out like a gun. Why would Ash command his Charizard to use an attack that wouldnt do much to Metagross? Black Jack thought. Unless

              Aim for the leg! Ash yelled.
              Dodge to your right, Metagross! Steven yelled.

              Charizard barely missed one of Metagrosss legs as it dodged out of the way. Now Metagross! Steven yelled. Give that Charizard a headbutt of your own!

              Charizard turned around in mid-air and attempted another headbutt. But as he dived down, Metagross leapt into the air and headbutted him in the face. Great job! Steven yelled. Finish with Psybeam attack!

              No! Ash yelled.

              Metagross safely landed on the ground, which caused a small earthquake. It then aimed its eyes at Charizard and shot his two Psybeams out of them. The attack hit Charizard, knocking him out.

              Charizard fell hard on the floor. Ash ran over to his defeated pokemon. Charizard! No! Ash cried worryingly. Are you okay?

              Charizard let out a small growl but wasnt able to move because of the damage Metagross caused. Charizard is no longer able to battle! the ref cried. Metagross wins the round.

              Ash took out his pokeball and got Charizard to return. He now has two pokemon remaining, Torkoal and Pikachu.

              Ash took out the pokeball that contained Torkoal. Torkoal! Go! Ash cried.

              Torkoal came out prepared for battle as puffs of smoke came out of different parts of his shell. Okay, Torkoal! Tackle attack! Ash yelled.
              Metagross! Headbutt attack! Steven yelled.

              Metagross and Torkoal ran at each at their highest speed. Metagross lowered its head, attempting to give Torkoal his attack. But the fiery tortoise ducked and tackled on of Metagrosss legs, tripping him over.

              Metagross landed on his back, unable to move physically. Metagross! Steven yelled. Use your psychic powers to get back on your feet!

              Metagross summoned up his psychic powers and slowly floated into the air. It turned itself sideways and landed on its feet. I oughta catch me a Metagross, Ash thought.

              Torkoal! He yelled. Tackle it again!

              Torkoal leapt into the air and tackled Metagross in the face with its shell. Metagross staggered backwards. Metagross! Steven yelled. Shoot out your Psybeams!

              Metagross shot out two psybeams out of his eyes at Torkoal. Torkoal! Ash yelled. Flamethrower attack!

              Torkoal shot out a lick of flame out of his mouth. The attacks collided and both pokemon had to push their powers to their limits. It was quite a struggle for both pokemon but Torkoal lost it as the two psybeams caught him, causing static around his body and knocking him out. No! Ash cried in a desperate tone.

              Torkoal is no longer able to battle, the referee announced. Metagross won the round and Ash Ketchum has one last pokemon left.

              Ash called back his knocked out Torkoal and sent out his last standing pokemon, Pikachu. Black Jack unfolded his arms and pressed his hands on his knees, he leaned slightly forward and smiled.

              What is it, Black Jack? Lao Ping asked.
              I think Mother Nature has something planned for Steven, Black Jack replied.

              A small drop of rain fell on the field. Suddenly, it began to rain. Some people in the audience opened up their umbrellas while others covered their heads with books, bags, newspapers or hands, etc. Black Jack took no notice of the rain as he continued focusing on the match.

              The rain also surprised Ash, Steven and their respective pokemon. Regardless of the bad weather, they decided to continue.

              Metagross! Steven yelled. Meteor Mash!

              Metagross quickly glowed vigorously as he started floating into the air. Its front legs aimed at Pikachu as he charged like a Rhydon.

              Pikachu! Dodge! Ash yelled. Pikachu leapt into the air to dodge the attack and landed on top of Metagross.

              No! Steven thought in shock. If Pikachu uses an electric attack, Metagross will be knocked out because of the rain!

              Pikachu! Ash yelled. Thunder now!
              Metagross! Steven yelled. Shake it off!

              Metagross, still airborne, was zipping through the skies trying to shake off Pikachu while the yellow rodent was hanging on to it for dear life. Metagross finally to shake off Pikachu and Pikachu was now falling at a great height.

              PIKACHU! Ash cried in shock.

              Pikachu retaliated as he charged up his powers and shot out his Thunder attack at Metagross, shocking it until it fainted. Pikachu safely landed on his feet while Metagross fell hard on the floor. As Pikachu landed, he was breathing heavily, feeling worn out after giving out his most powerful attack, which was enough to knock Metagross out.

              Metagross is no longer able to battle! the referee announced. Pikachu wins the round and Ash wins the match!

              With that announced, the crowd went wild as they

              He beat me, Steven said in a surprised tone.
              Pikachu! We did it! Ash yelled triumphantly.
              Pi Pikachu! Pikachu squealed happily as he held up a V sign on his paw.

              Impressive, Black Jack said as he stood up applauding calmingly. Very impressive. Even I would have a difficult time battling Steven.

              Steven called back his Metagross and looked at it. We have lost the title, Metagross, he said with a smile. But I am so proud of you and the others.

              Ash walked over to him. Steven, he said as he offered to shake his hand. This was one great match.
              I agree, Steven replied as he shook Ashs hand. I will never ever forget this match. And I wish you and your pokemon good luck in the grand final against Black Jack.
              Thanks.

              Dark clouds began to float away as the sun started to shine. Looks like the future is looking bright for you, Ash, Steven said.

              Now! cried the announcer with excitement. The places for the grand final have been decided! Itll be Black Jack versus Ash Ketchum!

              Everyone in the audience gave another deafening cheer.

              The grand final will begin in two days! So finalists either rest up or train hard! Everyone wants you guys in top form for your battle!

              Black Jack started walking out of the stadium while the others continued cheering. You may have helped me saw the error of my ways, Ketchum, Black Jack thought deeply. Sure, you deserve to be the champion. But just make sure your pokemon dont get their heads smashed.

              With that in mind, Black Jack sjirachied evilly.

              Next episode: Black Jack gets invited to a reunion an unexpected one.
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              Old December 1st, 2004 (6:36 AM). Edited December 1st, 2004 by Legendary Trainer.
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                I've changer some of the bits for episode 1, chapter 1.

                Chapter 1:

                It was nighttime, Black Jack was sitting next to a window in a pokemon center of the Hoenn League stadium looking outside of the window, arms folded. A clock on one of the walls says that it was one oclock in the morning. Everyone was asleep, except him. He always suspected that someone or something might come out of nowhere and attack him.

                When morning came, Ash and the others visited the pokemon center; they were also with Cecilia, who acquainted with them after her battle with Black Jack. To their surprise, Black Jack and his pokemon were there, eating breakfast, which were a share of pancakes. Black Jack also had coffee; his Blaziken had small cups of Chinese tea while the others were drinking water.

                Black Jack? Cassandra said. When did you get here?
                I stayed here all night, Black Jack replied.

                Feraligatr and Nidoking were guzzling quickly and noisily through a lot of pancakes while the rest of Black Jacks pokemon looked on as they had small anime sweat drops on the side of their heads. Feraligatr gave a small burp, hoping no one heard or noticed.

                Pancakes? Black Jack offered. Theyre all right.
                Sure, everyone replied.

                Black Jack snapped his fingers. A waiter came by. Yes sir?
                More pancakes, Black Jack replied.
                Yes sir.

                In no time, pancakes were delivered to Ash and the others. Ash took a bite of one of the pancakes and quickly recognised the taste. My moms here! he yelled.

                Ash! a womans voice yelled.
                Mrs Ketchum? the others called (except, Black, Cassandra and Lao Ping).

                A woman with a red pony tail, pink jacket, yellow shirt, purple skirt, white apron and white high heeled shoes came out of the kitchen.

                Mom! Ash cried happily as he rushed over to her.
                Oh, Ash, Mrs Ketchum replied. Hows my little pokemon master?
                Things are going great, mom. What are you doing here?
                You think that I would miss your matches, hmm, even if you didnt even contact me? You naughty boy!
                Sorry, mom

                Ash placed his hand at the back of his head in embarrassment. Pika pika! Pikachu said.
                Mrs Ketchum looked down at Pikachu. I havent forgot about you either, Pikachu, she replied as she picked him up.
                Pikachu! Pikachu said happily.

                Black Jack had just finished off his last pancake. His pokemon hadnt finished theirs yet. Ill be out for a sec, he said as he got up from his seat. Ill be back for you guys.
                Wait, Black Jack, Ash called. You havent met my mom yet.
                Hi, Mrs Ketchum said. My names Delia.
                Hi, Black Jack replied as he continued walking away, hands in his jacket pockets.

                Why is he being like this? Misty asked.
                It must be because of his parents, Cassandra replied theoretically. Either they never treated him right, or worse.

                Black Jack walked outside the pokemon center. He was deep in thought about someone important in his life. A relative. A brother. John, he said quietly to himself. Should I call you?

                Black Jack gave a small smile to himself while he scratched his head. Suddenly, a womans voice called out to him. Mr. Black Jack.

                Black Jack turned round to see the nurse of the Pokemon center, Nurse Joy.

                What? Black Jack asked in a rude tone.
                A message for you, she replied.

                She handed the message over to him; he opened it and read it. At some point, his eyes widened with shock. His pocketed the message and hurried off.

                Where are you going? Nurse Joy cried.
                None of your business! Black Jack shouted back as he ran.

                Ash, Cecilia, Delia, Misty, Brock, May, Max, Cassandra and Lao Ping came running out of the pokemon center after they heard Black Jacks shouting. Black Jacks pokemon followed behind.

                Nurse Joy! Brock called.
                What happened? asked Misty. We heard a shout from Black Jack.
                I have no idea where hes going, Joy replied. I got a feeling that something bad is about to happen.
                Do you know where hes heading to? Lao Ping asked.
                I havent a clue.
                I have an idea, Cassandra said as she took out her pokeball. Go! Spearow!

                Spearow popped out of his pokeball. Spear!

                Spearow! Cassandra cried. See if you can find out where Black Jack is!
                Spear! Spearow replied as she flew away.

                As she flew around the Hoenn League village, she spotted Black Jack outside the arena talking to a man in a black suit. The man in the black suit allowed Black Jack to enter. Spearow flew back to the others.

                Back at Cassandras location, she spotted her Spearow flying back. Spearow, did you find him? Cassandra asked loudly, because Spearow was still in the air.
                Spearow! Spearow cried as she pointed at Black Jacks direction.
                Great! Ash replied. Lets go!

                Everyone, except Nurse Joy, ran to the stadium. Brock suddenly stopped and ran back to her. If its nothing, Brock said, while blushing and gently holding Joys hands. Will you date me tonight?
                Huh? Nurse Joy replied with confusion on her face.
                Brock! snarled Misty as she ran back to pull Brocks ear. This IS something and something tells me its something bad!!

                She ran towards the stadium again while pulling Brocks ear. All Brock could do was moan in pain.

                The man in the black suit spotted them coming. What do you brats want? he rudely asked.
                We want to know whats going on in there, Ash demanded. We saw Black Jack going in there!
                Black Jack was told to come here, the man answered. The reason is none of your concern.
                I dont think hes going to budge, Lao Ping said.

                Feraligatr, Nidoking and Tyranitar looked at each other and nodded. They decided to gang up and beat the heck out of that man. The man in the suit couldnt even defend himself against three of Black Jacks strongest pokemon as he lay on the floor with swirly eyes.

                I was mistaken, Lao Ping said looking at damage that the pokemon caused.

                Ash and co. ran inside the stadium and looked round to see Black Jack standing in the audience balcony with shocked eyes.

                Black Jack! Cassandra shouted. What are you doing here?

                Black Jack looked at a medium built man in with brown short hair and beard with blue determined eyes. He was a wearing a blue shirt, black trousers and brown shoes. He was holding a black briefcase.

                I asked myself the same question, Black Jack replied still with the shocked look. With a slight difference what is my brother doing here??
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                Old December 2nd, 2004 (5:00 AM).
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                  Chapter 2

                  Black Jack and co. were at the arena watching as audience members. On the battlefield stands a medium built man in with brown short hair and beard with blue determined eyes. He was a wearing a blue-buttoned shirt, black trousers and brown shoes. He was also holding a black briefcase.

                  John Black Jack said to himself.
                  You know him? Cassandra asked, hearing what Black Jack said.
                  Hes my brother.

                  That shocked everyone and the pokemon, except his Tyranitar. Nidoking couldnt help but notice.

                  Ash ran up Black Jack, You have got to be kidding! he said.
                  Do you see me joking about? Black Jack replied.

                  Before anyone could say another word, a man in a red suit came out of the entranceway. A man in a black suit followed behind, holding a briefcase. That guy looks familiar, Black Jack thought to himself.

                  Mane! John yelled. Wheres my family!?

                  John has a family of his own?? Black Jack asked in a shocked tone.

                  Calm down, my dear opponent, Mane replied in a calm tone and a posh accent. We dont want to make a scene in front of our audience now, do we?

                  He turned his head to his right to see Black Jack and the others. John did the same. To his shock, he saw Black Jack. Jack!? he said in a shocked tone. I thought this would be a private battle, Mane!

                  I wanted it to be a surprise, my friend, Mane replied. We have both seen Black Jack and Ash Ketchum get into the grand final, so I decided to give them a little treat.

                  John growled at Mane. Calm now, Hummingburg, Mane said. If you want your family back, all you have to do is beat me in a pokemon battle. But if you fail, not only will they remain in their cells, but youll also be joining them and youre company will be mine!
                  Thats not gonna happen! John shouted in response. Not only am I gonna win this battle, but Ill also smash your head in!
                  Then let the game begin.

                  Elsewhere in a stadium, a man with short light purple hair, a woman with long dark purple hair and a Meowth were cleaning out lavatories, they were all in cleaners uniform. Of all da jobs that we coulda chosen, said the Meowth. We had to choose dis? Whys dat?
                  Because this is the only job we can find available! complained the woman. And also because of those twerps that keep on ruining our plans to capture that Pikachu, there would be no way that the boss would be paying us! And if you two would stop fooling about when we did catch Pikachu, we wouldve gotten away with it! And
                  Yes, yes alright! the man moaned. Gosh, there was no need to be so harsh, Jesse.
                  Of course there is, James! Were bad guys! And its a good thing that we finished cleaning this dump!
                  Where do we clean next, Jess? Meowth asked.
                  That stupid stadium!

                  Back at the battlefield, John and Mane walked to their respective parts of the battlefield. The man that was accompanying Mane opened the brifcase and it revealed six pokeballs, each containing a pokemon. Mane picked out one of them, while John got one of his pokeballs out from his own briefcase.

                  Well, Black Jack, Max said. What do you think Johns chances are?

                  Black Jack clenched his fist, his eyes turned from shock to determination. I dont know, kid he replied. But no matter what, I wont hold anything back to help him.

                  He leaned forward. John! he cried. You have to believe in your pokemon! John turned to look at his brother as he continued encouraging him. It takes more than shouting out attacks and strong pokemon to win! Everything is at stake here! If Mane wins, you wont be the only person losing something important! Cos Ill be losing you as well! And I dont want that to

                  Black Jack! Ash interrupted. Just calm down, okay?

                  Black Jack breathed deeply in and out.

                  Its alright, Jack, John thought to himself. I wont be needing help in this one.

                  Mane took out a coin out of his pocket. Ready, Hummingburg? I will flip a coin to decide who call out their pokemon first. Heads, Ill go first. Tails, youll go first.
                  Just flip it, John replied.

                  If John has to go first, Black Jack said. Then Mane would have the advantage, and that could be a big problem for him.

                  Mane flipped a coin. As it landed on the ground, it showed the tail symbol. The man standing near Mane went to pick up the coin for him. Shoot! Black Jack cursed.

                  I go first then! John shouted. So what? You still wont beat me! I choose you! Machoke!

                  A Machoke popped out of his pokeball. It showed some muscle poses.

                  A Machoke? Mane replied with a confident smile. This is going to be such fun. Go! Pokeball!

                  Mane tossed out a pokeball and out popped A Suicune!!

                  Shock appeared on everyones faces. Mane does have a big advantage!! Max shouted.
                  I cant believe it! Ash said. How is anyone gonna beat that?

                  Black Jacks eyes narrowed with suspicion. Mane must be a tough trainer to catch a pokemon as rare as Suicune, he thought. Unless

                  He then spotted a very small microchip on Suicunes back. Wait a minute, he thought. Whats that microchip for?

                  I dont care if you have the rarest pokemon around! Ill still beat you! John shouted with determination. Having heard that, Black Jack took his eyes off the microchip. Machoke! John ordered. Karate Chop!
                  Suicune! Mane ordered. Counter with Water Gun!

                  Suicune opened its mouth and shot out a huge and powerful foam of water at Machoke. Machoke got caught and was shoved by the attack until his back got smashed into the stadium wall. He was no longer able to battle as everyone watched in horror and shock.

                  That looked more like a Hydro Pump than a Water Gun! Max cried.
                  This stinks! Black Jack cursed as he pounded his fist into his hand.
                  That Machoke didnt even land a finger, May said.

                  Jesse, James and Meowth were coming up the stairs of the stadium to clean out the rubbish. To their surprise, they found Black Jack and the others staring down at the field. Its the twerps! James moaned.
                  What are they doing here? Jesse moaned.
                  Never mind dat, Meowth said in an interested tone. Come n look at dis!

                  Jesse and James looked at what Meowth was looking at they both gasped in amazement. Its so beautiful! Jesse said. Just like me!
                  Hey, guys! Meowth said. Are you guys tinkin what Im tinkin?
                  Im sure am! Jesse replied in a determined tone.
                  Im not, James replied. What is it? Lunch?
                  Were going to bring that Suicune back to the boss, you moron!
                  Oh, yes
                  And I got a plan for it.
                  Wot? Were not gonna catch Suicune in front of dose twerps are we?
                  Of course, youre right. Those brats always mess things up! I have a better idea

                  The three ducked down, keeping out of sight to make a plan.

                  Machoke! John ordered. Return!
                  Machoke returned to his pokeball and John picked out another one. Venusaur! I choose you!

                  Venusaur popped out of his pokeball and gave out a loud roar, as he prepared for battle.

                  This should be a good move, Lao Ping said. Grass types are an advantage against water types.
                  Lets hope so, Brock replied. Otherwise, Suicune will do more damage.

                  Black Jack sat down with his arms folded, concentrating on the match. Cmon, John! he thought deeply in a desperate tone. Beat that creep!

                  Venusaur! John ordered. Leech Seed and Toxic!

                  Venusaur spat out a huge purple goo out of his mouth and sent out three small seeds out of the flower on his back.

                  Suicune! Mane commanded confidently. Right Guard I mean Safeguard!
                  What?! John shouted in shock. No way!

                  An aura surrounded Suicune, blocking the attacks that Venusaur sent out. Oh dear, Mane said. I should stop remembering the name of that deodorant, today isnt my shopping day. Now Suicune! Aurora Beam!

                  Suicune shot out a shining beam out of its mouth and it hit Venusaur, knocking him out. John growled with frustration. I cannot be defeated he said to himself.

                  This is bad Black Jack said with desperate eyes. The battle has just started and John lost two of his pokemon already.

                  Hmhm, Mane thought evilly. If everyone is surprised to see a Suicune in a trainer battle, they havent seen anything yet hahahaha HAHAHAHA!
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                  Old December 3rd, 2004 (2:39 AM).
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                    Chapter 3

                    At that moment, Mane was in the lead with two wins to zero. He had one of the legendary pokemon called Suicune on the battlefield, waiting for the next pokemon to defeat.

                    Black Jack noticed that Suicune was behaving rather strangely. He also noticed that a microchip is attached to the back of Suicune. A microchip, he said, catching his acquaintances attention. That must the reason why that pokemon is acting so strangely.
                    Are you really sure about that? May asked, also noticing the microchip. Are you sure that they are not robots or something?
                    Ive been with pokemon more than you have, kid. That Suicune is definitely real and tough to beat. But still, dont count out my brother out yet. Hes got the same toughness that I have.

                    On the battlefield, Mane had a confident look in his eyes. Johns eyes turned from determination to frustration. He took out another pokeball out of his briefcase. Haunter! he cried. I choose you!

                    Haunter popped out of his pokeball and gave a battle cry.

                    Suicune, return, he ordered, as Suicune returned. Perhaps I have been a bit rough on you my dear fellow. Maybe I should use a pokemon that I have less experience with. That way, youll have a bit of advantage.
                    Bad move, Mane! John warned. Youre gonna regret that! Not only for choosing a pokemon youre weaker with, but also for kidnapping my wife and daughter! If you laid one finger on them, Ill
                    Calm down, Johnny. Keep your focus on the game if you want to win. Saving your family would be a bonus as well, wouldnt it? Haha!

                    Elsewhere, behind the audience seats, Jesse, James and Meowth were peeping out to see what was happening. Hey, Meowth said. Wheres dat Suicune?
                    Has someone lost already? James asked.
                    I just hate that word! Jesse complained. Whats going on now?

                    Mane placed Suicunes pokeball back into the briefcase and picked out another one. John still had that frustration in his eyes. Go! Pokeball! Mane cried as he tossed out another pokeball. This time it was Zapdos!

                    The shock expression appeared on everyones faces again. You have got to be kidding me! Black Jack yelled.
                    Hows that an advantage!? Max cried. How can anyone beat Mane if he has Zapdos and Suicune?

                    Oh look, Jesse! James said with glee. Imagine what the boss would think if we brought that pokemon to him too.
                    Oooooooohhhhh! Meowth replied. I can picture it now. We would become Team Rocket executives, we would get lots a money, we would be getting a luxury house, we
                    Stop imagining things, Meowth! Jesse complained. To get all that, well need to get them for the boss!
                    Suddenly a Wobbuffet appeared. Wobbuffet!
                    This doesnt include you! Get back inside! Jesse complained as she held out her pokeball.

                    Haunter! John commanded. Night Shade attack!
                    Zapdos! Mane cried. Thunder shock attack!

                    Haunter shot out a dark beam while Zapdos shot out a bolt of lightning. Both attacks collided and both pokemon were pushing their limits to inflict damage against each other. Haunter began losing his strength and the Zapdos thundershock zapped him, making him dazed.

                    Now Zapdos! Mane ordered. Drill Peck attack!

                    Zapdos dived directly at Haunter while spinning like a whirlwind. It swooped upwards as soon as he hit Haunter, sending him flying and knocking him out. As John have noticed was floating down motionlessly from the sky he got him to return. Haunter return! he cried.

                    Hmhmhm! Three down, Mane said. Three to go!

                    This is the one pokemon that has never been defeated after a hundred matches! John snarled as he picked out another pokeball.

                    A hundred matches, huh? Black Jack thought.
                    You better get ready to release my family! John shouted. Go! Pokeball!

                    John tossed out another pokeball, which turned out to be Tyranitar! Black Jack had a surprise look in his eyes. His Tyranitar looked at Johns Tyranitar and gave a loud roar to him. Johns Tyranitar looked at Black Jacks Tyranitar and roared back.

                    You had an advantage until now! John shouted. Because now my Tyranitar is out and ready to smash your head in, and all of your pokemon will fail you!

                    I beg to differ, Mane replied. I think you have just made your final mistake. You shouldve saved the best until last. Zapdos! Thundershock attack!

                    Zapdos shot out a bolt of lightning at Tyranitar. But he dodged the attack as he leapt into the air, making the lightning attack hit the ground instead. Tyranitar leapt as high as Zapdos was flying.

                    Tyranitar! John commanded. Body Slam attack!

                    Tyranitar quickly grabbed Zapdos and brought down to the ground, slamming him in the process.

                    How dare Johnny hurt such a beautiful bird, muttered Mane in his thoughts.

                    Now Tyranitar! John cried. Finish it off with Body Slam and Earthquake attack!

                    Thats our move! Black Jack said to Tyranitar. Lets see if his Tyranitars move is more damaging.

                    The Tyranitar on the field lifted Zapdos up to his heads height and then slammed him on ground, almost making a hole in it. The impact was so hard that it would seriously damage an army tank if slammed on.

                    Zapdos was knocked out, no longer able to battle.

                    Just the same, Black Jack commented with a happy smile. At least Zapdos is knocked out.
                    Looks like your brother does have a chance! Misty said.

                    Johnny, Mane said. Im impressed by the strength of your Tyranitar. But strength alone isnt enough.
                    Even though I hate you so much, I couldnt agree more! John replied with a frustrated tone. It also takes heart and spirit to beat the likes of you!
                    I hope that Tyranitars heart and spirit is higher than his strength, Mane said has took out another pokeball. Because this pokemon I have in my hand is guaranteed to make things even more interesting!
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                    Old December 6th, 2004 (1:24 AM).
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                      Chapter 4:

                      Mane stood in the battlefield holding a pokeball. Things are getting interesting, he said. Youve just taken out Zapdos, one of my favourite pokemon. Now Im going to give you a surprise for your effort.

                      Black Jack and the others were observing the match as spectators, desperately hoping that John would win this match. Jesse, James and Meowth were also watching the match but from somewhere else in the stadium.

                      A Zapdos knocked out by a Tyranitar? Meowth exclaimed. Anuder pokemon dat we can catch!
                      I can imagine the boss giving us more than just a raise! James said happily.
                      Not now James! Jesse complained. Lets just see what that Mane guy has in store.

                      Go! Pokeball! Mane cried as he tossed out another pokeball. This time it was Mewtwo!!

                      Shock expressions came onto the faces of Misty, Brock, Ash and Black Jack. How can a pokemon trainer catch Mewtwo!?
                      Huh? May asked. I never seen or heard of that pokemon before.

                      Realising that the others have seen the genetic pokemon on the field, Black Jack had to give some information about him. That pokemons name is Mewtwo. One of the most rarest and one of the most powerful pokemon.
                      What? Ash asked in a surprised tone. You know him?
                      Yeah we met on a couple of occasions and battling him wasnt pleasant but I liked it. And judging by your tone, you seem to know him as well.
                      Yeah, we met him at one time when he was in trouble and

                      Black Jack stopped him by raising his hand as he noticed another microchip. This time it was on the back of Mewtwos neck.

                      I knew it! Black Jack snarled angrily. It IS the microchip! Mane mustve used some annoying gadgets to not only to capture them but to control them as well!
                      Wait a minute! Ash said. If Mane captured Mewtwo, what happened to the other pokemon?
                      He mustve captured them too, Black Jack replied. Lets concentrate on the match. John needs all the help he can get.

                      Everyone agreed as they watched the match again with high hopes for John.

                      Team Rocket also saw with their mouths wide open. I cant believe it! Meowth cried. Dat guys either used some special gadget, or hes got some other method of catching and using pokemon!
                      The boss would give us a big promotion if we get that thing! James said excitedly.
                      Not only that! Jesse continued. Hed give us a big raise, a paid holiday, a very big house
                      Dis could go on forever Meowth mumbled.
                      Suddenly, Wobbuffet appeared again. Wobbuffet!

                      Mewtwo! Mane cried. Hyper Beam attack!

                      Mewtwo raised his hand and shot out a huge beam of light at Tyranitar, who barely dodged the attack.

                      That was close! John commented. Tyranitar! Tackle attack!
                      Mewtwo! Barrier! Mane commanded.

                      Tyranitar ran at Mewtwo to take him down, but Mewtwos eyes glowed as he stood. John and Tyranitar thought that they got him, but to their surprise, Tyranitar bounced away from Mewtwo. The barrier that Mewtwo used must be invisible! Black Jack thought.

                      Gotta use a long range attack! John said in frustration. Tyranitar! Hyper Beam attack!

                      Tyranitar leaned backwards as he breathed in. Mane and Mewtwo just stood where they were. Whats the matter, Mane? John taunted. Scared?
                      Well, this is hardly a horror movie, Mane replied.

                      Tyranitar shot out a huge hyper beam of his own. Mewtwo! Mirror Coat attack! Mane yelled.

                      Mewtwo raised his arm as his eyes glowed again. The beam bounced right off his hand and it hit Tyranitar instead in the gut, knocking him out!

                      After seeing that knockout, John had disbelief on his face. No he whispered NO!
                      I told you that you shouldve save the best for last, didnt I Johnny? Mane taunted.
                      Tyranitar is only one of my best, John replied, getting back his determination. Magmar! Go!

                      Magmar popped out of his pokeball. Magmar

                      Magmar! John shouted. Flamethrower attack!

                      Magmar spat out a huge flame out of his mouth, aiming for Mewtwo. Mewtwo easily dodged out of the way, making the flame going for Mane.

                      Thats it! John cried. Scorch him good!

                      John mustve wanted Magmar to hurt Mane instead of Mewtwo! Ash said.
                      I bet you would do the same if Mane hurt your family as well, Black Jack replied.

                      Mane stood calm as the flame was reaching for him. But all of the sudden, Mewtwo stopped the attack with his psychic powers. He formed the flame into a ball and tossed it back at Magmar, causing an explosion on impact.

                      Magmar fell to the floor, heavily damaged. He slowly picked himself. Magmar! John cried. Are you alright?

                      Magmar nodded in response, as he knew what was on the line.

                      Alright then! John said. Magmar! Fire punch attack!

                      Magmar quickly ran at Mewtwo as fireballs appeared on his fist. What a bore! Mane commented. Mewtwo! Psychic attack! he ordered as he snapped his fingers.

                      Mewtwos eyes glowed again as he stopped Magmar in his tracks. Magmar was lifted into the air; he was then slammed down on the ground numerous times. Now Mewtwo! Mane commanded. Mega Punch attack!

                      Mewtwo, still using his psychic powers he brought Magmar close to him and he punched him in the gut sending him flying, unconscious.

                      Someone tell me I didnt see that! Brock said.
                      That Magmar Misty said, feeling sorry for it.
                      Things are looking really bad now, Cecilia said.

                      Five of my pokemon gone John said after calling back Magmar. Rattata, youre my only hope now.

                      John sent out his Rattata. The pokemon stood his ground, waiting to receive orders.

                      A Rattata? Mane replied with a smirk. Its your last pokemon and its a Rattata? Well, I guess the truth is that you spend more time with your products than you spend time training. Guess you didnt see this battle coming, didnt you? Mewtwo return!
                      Huh? Why are you returning your Mewtwo?
                      I just felt theres one more surprise I need to show you and our dearly beloved audience.

                      Great, thought Black Jack in a down tone. Whats next?

                      Go! Pokeball! Mane cried as he threw out another pokeball, containing a Rayquaza!

                      Shock expressions came on to everyones faces again. Only Black Jack snarled in frustration.

                      Rayquaza! Mane shouted. Hyper Beam attack!
                      Sandra Alice I lost, John said, losing all hope after seeing Rayquaza. Im so sorry

                      Rayquaza leaned his head backwards as he breathed in and then he let out a huge Hyper Beam. John shut his eyes slowly as it hit Rattata, causing a huge explosion on impact. After Rattata lay on the ground unconscious, John looked down in defeated manner as he called back his last defeated pokemon.

                      There are no more pokemon you can use, Mane said. That means you lose, my stout fellow. You have also lost your only chance of saving your dear wife and child. But dont worry, I do have a proposition for you.

                      He snapped his fingers and another man in a suit came out carrying another briefcase. The man held out the briefcase to Mane and opened it. Mane took out a contract and a pen.

                      If you want to be with your family, all you need to do is sign here, he said in joyful tone.
                      Whats the catch? John asked.
                      Nothing much, you just have to hand over your company to me. And you and your family will be employed as my servants. If not, youll have to spend the rest of your life wallowing in sadness as you sit by your desk

                      As much as John hated to do this, he wanted to be with his family even more, so he had no choice. He took the pen out of Manes hand and his hand shook, as he was about to sign. Suddenly, a hand knocked off the pen off Johns hand. I pick door number three! Black Jack shouted. It was him who knocked down the pen.

                      Mane, Black Jack snarled. Just because you used those rare pokemon, it doesnt mean you are the strongest. I challenge you to a battle and if I win, youll release John and his family and never hurt them again!
                      This is certainly interesting, Mane replied.

                      Before he could say another word, Ash interrupted. Hold it!

                      He jumped down from the audience stands and walked over to them. You cant use mind control on the pokemon! he yelled. You cant treat them this way! Either you release those pokemon or you can have a real taste of a trainer!

                      Even more interesting, Mane replied. Okay then, how about this? Tomorrow is the grand final, isnt it? I suggest that the better trainer can challenge me. If Black Jack wins and defeat me, Johns family will be released. If Ketchum wins, then he can challenge me to gain the pokemons freedom.

                      Ash and Black Jacks eyes turned from anger to shock. Wait a minute! Ash demanded. How about it if one of us beats you, youll release the pokemon AND Johns family?
                      Nice try, Mane replied. But Id be losing everything at once.
                      You were born to lose, Black Jack muttered.

                      Mane turned to John. My dear fellow, Johnny, he said. Why dont you spend more time with your brother.
                      What? John replied in shock. How did you know?
                      It doesnt matter, he replied as he turned around to leave the stadium.

                      Mane, wait a minute! John cried. What about my wife and child?
                      Oh, theyll be fine, I assure you, Mane replied as he continued to walk away. hahahaha HAHAHAHA!

                      No! Wait! John cried as he tried to go after Mane. Mane s men stepped in front of him and were about to beat him up.

                      Lay one finger on him, Black Jack warned, clenching his fist. And youre dead.

                      The men took a few steps back, scared of Black Jack. Hold it right there! Ash demanded. But Black Jack stopped him.

                      No kid, he replied. You shouldnt. If we go after Mane and his men, who knows what he will do to Johns family. For now, we have no choice but to play his game.

                      John fell to his knees with tears flowing coming down his eyes. Black Jack walked over to him.

                      Elsewhere in the stadium, Jesse, James and Meowth had seen and heard everything. Now what, Jess? Meowth asked.
                      Well, whether its Black Jack or the little brat that wins the battle, we can follow them to where Manes hiding the pokemon and himself. Finding the pokemons exact location will be the most difficult.
                      Nice one, Jesse, James said as the three sneaky trio sneaked away from the stadium while sjirachiing.

                      Why? John sobbed as he looked down on the ground. Why is this happening to me?
                      Im sorry, brother, Black Jack as he kneeled down and took out a photo, containing two kids and two adults, which turned out to be John and Black Jacks family when they were children. We have lost one family, but I wont let you lose another.

                      John looked up to Black Jack. Thank you Ill never forget this.

                      John hugged his missed brother and sobbed like no one has sobbed before. Black Jacks head turned to look at Ash.

                      I guess we cant hold it any longer, Ash thought.
                      Just a couple more fights, Black Jack thought. Just a couple more.

                      Next episode: Its Black Jack Vs Ash Ketchum! And the championship isnt the only thing on the line!
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                      Old December 7th, 2004 (3:33 AM).
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                        Episode 7: Black Jack Vs Ash Ketchum

                        Chapter 1

                        It was nighttime. John was sitting in one of the audience member seats looking down on the field. Black Jack walked in and spotted his brother there, he then walked over to him to start a conversation.

                        John.
                        John turned around to see his brother. Jack.
                        It has been a long time.
                        Far too long if you asked me. It has been fifteen since you last called me.
                        Sorry. But I have been a bit busy.
                        So, whats happening with you lately?

                        Black Jack sat down next to his brother and began his life story

                        Meanwhile, Ashs pokemon (Pikachu, Bayleef, Charizard, Swellow, Snorlax, and Tauros) and Black Jacks pokemon were sitting around a campfire, warming themselves up from the cold night air. Nidoking remembered that Tyranitar wasnt shocked earlier about the fact John was Black Jacks brother.

                        (Authors note: The pokemon will be talking in this part, so I decided to do a little bit of translation.)

                        I noticed that you were not surprised, when Black Jack said that Johns his brother, Pikachu said.
                        Im Jacks first pokemon, Ive been with him since I was a baby Larvitar, Tyranitar replied. He wouldnt keep any secrets from me.
                        Well then, Feraligatr said. If you were a baby when you first met Jack, where were you at birth?

                        Tyranitar looked down in sadness. I also suffered the same loss that Jack did

                        My mom was giving birth to me and my brother. After she gave birth, she passed away, leaving my dad to take care of us. We never got to know our mom, since we were only eggs.

                        At one point, we hatched out of our eggs. Our dad loved us so much and we loved him back. We ate together, we bathed together, we watched the stars together, we did everything together.

                        Everything was great until a lot of poachers wanted to capture us. Our dad told us to run for our lives because he didnt want to see us captured. We ran deep into the forest until heard a gunshot. We felt that we need to run back to find out what happened. We saw our answer our own dad shot dead we had no one to protect us but ourselves

                        Somehow we walked into a city nearby. It was full of humans, who were strangers to us. We were hoping someone would help us out but it was no good, nobody wanted to help us, until Jack and John came

                        -Flashback-

                        Two Larvitar were very tired and hungry as they walked round in a park. They sat down next to a tree, thinking that no one would be there to help them. But to their relief, two little boys, who were a few inches taller than them, came round holding some cookies and sweets. They were both identical twins as they wore stripped jumpers and overalls; they also had brown eyes and brown hair.

                        They offered the two hungry Larvitar some of their goodies and they quickly and happily accepted. They ate the food so quick that began to choke, much to the amusement of the twins, yet they helped them to choke out the food.

                        -End Flashback-

                        We played each other all day that day. After learning that we were lost, Jack and his brother took us in. I had a feeling that Jack saw me more than a pet, he saw me more as a friend.

                        Jack likes to wander about all the time, his lifes ambition was to travel. His parents agreed to let him do so when he reached the age of ten. But Jacks happy life didnt last forever. We discovered that both his parents died of murder. Jack wanted to find the murderer, but John wouldnt let him.

                        The next day, his dream came when they gave him his trainer card, certifying him that hes a pokemon trainer. And I went along with him. The saddest part was when I had to leave my brother behind. If I can talk human language, I wouldve told Jack about it.

                        Feraligatrs head leaned against a nearby tree and started crying. Thats the saddest story Ive ever heard, he sobbed.

                        Tyranitar smiled at Feraligatrs sympathy. He got up and patted him on the back. Its all right, he replied. Im the one who was supposed to be crying, not you.
                        Feraligatr immediately stopped crying and smiled. Oh yeah, he replied in a low realised tone.

                        So thats why hes never in a good mood, even when something good turns up, Pikachu said as Tyranitar and Feraligatr sat back down.
                        Theres more to it then that, Blaziken replied. He used to be a Team Rocket agent.
                        TEAM ROCKET!? all of Ashs pokemon cried in shock.
                        Yep, Tyranitar replied. But he was forced into it, just to protect us from harm.
                        Yeah, Nidoking replied. They had guns aiming at us.
                        So, Tyranitar continued, ignoring Nidokings remark. Jack worked for them for so long, he became a bad guy himself, earning himself the nickname Black Jack. Having enough of treating pokemon badly he quitted and helped us destroy one of the Team Rocket bases.

                        Wow! Bayleef commented. Mustve taken a lot of guts to get out of there. Isnt that right, Snorlax?

                        She turned to Snorlax for a reply, but he was already asleep. She then had a small anime sweat drop at the back of her head.

                        Well, thats my story, Tyranitar said. Anyone want to share something?

                        I have a question for you guys, Salamence said. Do you make friends with a trainer first or does he have to face you first?
                        Usually, Ash make friends first before battling them, Tauros answered. I guess having a great bond with us made us stronger than just our usual training.
                        I second that, Pikachu replied. But we all have other reasons that goes along with that and I got another reason why.

                        I dont battle for Ash, I battle with him. Outside of battle, we spend a lot of time together, and have fun together. When I get in danger, Ash is always there to help me out. When I get hurt and theres no pokemon center nearby, hell heal me up and help me recover. But we also had our bad times as well. One time, despite my fear, he wanted me to face a gym leader in Vermilion City. When I did, I figured out why the other pokemon had to visit the emergency rooms.

                        Pikachu looked at Charizard. Hey, Charizard. You had some bad times with Ash as well right?
                        Yeah, Charizard replied. When I was a Charmander, I became Ashs pokemon after I heard that creep, Darryl, abandoned me. Called me a weakling he did. After some time, I evolved into Charmeleon. Ever since that time, I felt the need to battle worthy opponents without Ashs guidance.

                        At some level, we were at one of the Orange Islands and a trainer and his Poliwrath challenged us. Ash ordered me what attacks to use, but as usual I fought this battle my way and it caused nothing but trouble as Poliwraths Ice Beam attack froze me. If it wasnt for Ash that cared for me that time, I wouldve been hurt for the rest of my life, or worst. While I was being unfroze I noticed that Ash really cared about me. Ever since then, I became stronger because of him.

                        At some point, we were on the Johto region and I had to make a choice whether to stay with Ash or stay at the Charizard village to become stronger. Ash made the choice easier for me, he realised how much I wanted to stay at that place. I was happy on the outside, but seeing Ash running away and leaving me behind I couldnt stand it.

                        Its a good thing I came back to save his butt a couple of times. And I also became part of the Johto League Championship, where I had to face a Blaziken. It was one of the toughest battle I have ever faced, let me tell ya.

                        Charizard and Blaziken stared at each other with determination, knowing that they might be facing each other tomorrow.

                        I wonder if its fate that gets us along with our human pals, Nidoking said. If my fate was to stay with Black Jack forever, then Im thankful for it. I mean, just look at Feraligatr and me. When we were Nidoran and Totodile, our dream was to become the toughest pokemon in the entire world. If it wasnt for Jack we wouldnt be so tough.

                        Ahh, sweet memories, Feraligatr said in a relaxed tone as he looked at the stars. We remember the time when we first met Tyranitar, well, when he was a Larvitar. He had a difficult time trying to get an apple of a tree. Me and Nidoking, I mean Nidoran, tried to help out to grab the apple but we were too short to reach them. Luckily, Jack came by and helped us out by grabbing a bunch of apples for us. That was then we found out that Larvitar was Jacks pokemon. Not wanting to see our friend go away, we decided to tag along.

                        There was a moment of silence. Each pokemon were remembering the time theyve first met their trainers.

                        Blaziken stood up. Well, thats enough talk about the past, he said. We got a big day tomorrow.
                        Yeah! Pikachu replied as he stood up with determination in his eyes. You guys have been strong in your previous battles. But tomorrow, we all must do our best, because everything is at stake.
                        We must do our best tomorrow! Charizard yelled. For everybody!
                        YEAH! everyone cried as they stood up and raised their paws in a triumphant manner, except Snorlax, who was still sleeping.

                        Back at the stadium, Black Jack had just finished off his story.

                        So you were a member of Team Rocket? John asked.
                        Yeah, I felt so bad, I never had the guts to call you anymore, Black Jack replied.
                        That doesnt matter, what matter is that blood is thicker than water.
                        Hey?
                        No matter what you do, youre still my brother.

                        Black Jack smiled at that remark. Thanks, bro. So whats been happening with you lately?
                        Oh, my familys been captured but you already knew that didnt you?
                        I know that, but why? What does Mane want with you?
                        I was told that he wanted to get hold of all of my work at Burg Corp. He gave me a choice, either I give my work to him or I give up my family. It was a difficult decision for me to choose, but then he gave me a third choice, he said that if I battle against him and win, he would release my family and I would never hear from him again. I chose the third option and well you know the rest.

                        John buried his face in his hands as he went into tears, thinking of what it would be like without his wife and daughter. Seeing that, Black Jack wasnt going to let Mane get away with it.

                        Dont worry, Johnny, said Black Jack. Ill battle and defeat Ketchum and Mane, not for the championship, but for your family.
                        John lifted his face from his hands. Do you promise?
                        I swear it.

                        Black Jack got up from his seat and began to walk away. Jack, John called.
                        What? Black Jack asked as he turned around.
                        Youre family as well.

                        Black Jack smiled. Thanks, bro.

                        Elsewhere in the arena, Ash was at an entranceway underneath the audience stands. He listened to both Black Jack and Johns story. I got to do everything I can to help Black Jack, he said to himself.

                        He turned round to see a green ninja who was standing behind him. I can give a suggestion, the ninja said.
                        Who are you? Ash asked.
                        I am Seed, a friend of Black Jack.

                        Ash looked up and down on Seed, felt nothing but suspicious about this man. What can you do to help? he asked.

                        The only thing you can do to help him is to battle him in the finals, Seed replied.
                        So you secretly watched the match between John and Mane, huh? Ash asked.
                        Correct, Mane has been using some underhanded technology to command the pokemon. A bad omen to this world.
                        I realised that. But why that suggestion?
                        Itll help you two to get stronger and to also find out which one of you two would battle Mane.

                        Ash looked down in doubt. What if he defeats Black Jack? Then Black Jack will never see his family. What if Black Jack defeats him? Then Mane would use the powerful pokemon for any sick purpose. Then again

                        He rose his head and said, Seed, I huh?

                        Seed had already disappeared. Ash became puzzled, but he showed his face of determination. I will get stronger Black Jack will get stronger Mane will be sorry that he ever messed with us!
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                        Old December 8th, 2004 (6:06 AM).
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                          Chapter 2

                          It was a bright afternoon at the Hoenn League stadium. It was the grand final of the tournament. Fireworks were exploding in the sky and the audience were waiting patiently for the finalists of the Hoenn League championship. Ash and his Pikachu came out of the entrance and made their way to his respective part of the arena.

                          Introducing first, from Pallet Town of Kanto Ash Ketchum!

                          Ash Ketchum: Before he started his pokemon journey, he made a vow that he would become the greatest pokemon master ever. He grew up his whole life training his pokemon to be the absolute best. He participated in four different regions so far, the Kanto region, the Orange region, the Johto region and the Hoenn region. He was in the top six in the Kanto region; he was the Orange League champion, he participated in the Johto region League and at the moment hes at the grand final of Hoenn League championship tournament. He grew up his whole life wanting to do this. Pokemon was his life and destiny.

                          As soon as Ash and Pikachu stood in their respective part of the arena, Black Jack made his way out.

                          And his opponent, the man on his winning streak of 2003 0 Black Jack!

                          Black Jack: He and his pokemon earned the reputation as the toughest SOBs of the pokemon world today. He started his pokemon journey at the age of ten a few months later after discovering that his parents died of murder. After twenty years of training, no one has more will to win than him. No one was more intense than him. No one had more wins than him. His current winning streak was at 2003 0. But much the same can be said for his opponent, Ash Ketchum.

                          They both stood in their respective parts of the arena as the announcer told everyone about the rules. In the final round, he cried. Both trainers will use all six of their pokemon each, but only one at a time! The trainer who defeats the oppositions sixth and last pokemon will be the winner and the Hoenn League champion! Now get ready for one of the most historic battles ever!

                          Almost everyone who Ash and Black Jack have met and known on separate occasions were there as part as the audience, most noticeably Misty, Brock, Max, May, Delia, Professor Oak, Tracey, Gary Oak, John, Cecilia, Cassandra, her Gardevior, Lao Ping and others. Half of the audience were cheering for Ash, while the other half were cheering for Black Jack.

                          The man in a red tuxedo walked down the stairs and looked at his ticket to see where his seat was. Following him was a man in a black suit. Ah, he said. Over there.

                          Cassandra noticed the man in the red tux and immediately recognised him. Mane, she snarled quietly with evil look in her eyes. That caught the others attention; they turned to her to see what Cassandra was looking at. They turned to see Mane and gave him a nasty look. Mane spotted them and responded by waving politely at them while showing a polite smile. What nice people, he said as he sat down, while the man in the suit sat next to him, which turned out to be his henchman.

                          The big screen of the stadium selected Black Jack to be the first to pick his pokemon. Before we start, kid, Black Jack said. I just want you to know that itll be a real honour battling you. And youll be always be the kid that Ill respect the most.
                          Likewise, Ash replied as he showed a small smile.
                          Having said that, Black Jack continued. Dont expect me to go easy on you and I want you to give me your best shot, cos you know that theres more on the line here than the title.

                          Hes right, Ash thought. He wants his family free from Mane. I want Mane to release them too but I also want the pokemon released as well, but Mane would just keep either Black Jacks family or the pokemon no matter who wins. But I cant hold anything back, because if I lose, Mane would use the pokemon for whatever sick use he has in his mind.

                          Now without further ado, the announcer cried. LETS GET READY TO RUMBLE!

                          Alright, Ketchum! Black Jack said. Get ready to be broken! Go! Feraligatr!

                          He tossed out a pokeball and Feraligatr came out, giving a loud roar as he prepared for battle.

                          Well see who gets broken! Ash replied. Tauros! I choose you!

                          He tossed out his pokeball and Tauros came out, ready to battle.

                          Hows that for starters? Brock commented.
                          Not much advantage I see here, Cecilia said. Normally, the trainer who picks first would be at a disadvantage. We all know that Ash has a Pikachu at his disposal that would or could take out Feraligatr in a single electric blast. But seeing Black Jack battle during the whole tournament, Ash sees that Black Jacks has an uncanny ability of being unpredictable. Therefore, Ash, being cautious, would be using Pikachu for later use. Even though Ash is using Tauros, Tauros is not the pokemon to be messed about with.
                          Wow! Max thought as he heard everything Cassandra said. It looks like Im not the only pokemon encyclopaedia around here.

                          Tauros! Ash cried. Tackle attack!

                          Tauros charged at Feraligatr like a speeding bullet.

                          Feraligatr! Black Jack cried. Grab his horns!

                          Feraligatr grabbed his horns to stop him from charging. Both pokemon struggled to push or throw each other. Feraligatr! Black Jack cried. Headbutt attack!

                          Feraligatr lifted his head and smashed his head against Tauros. Only Feraligatr received damage, but Tauros wasnt even fazed.

                          Shoot! Black Jack thought. That didnt work, Tauros head is harder than Feraligatrs!

                          Now! Tauros! Ash cried as he noticed Feraligatr was losing strength and balance. Seismic Toss!

                          Tauros used his horns to throw Feraligatr up into the air. Feraligatr instantly recovered from his dizziness and regained his balance as he somersaulted and landed on Tauros back, squashing him.

                          What?! Ash shouted in shock.
                          Shouldve predicted that, shouldnt you Ketchum? Black Jack replied. If Nidoking can do that, so can Feraligatr.

                          Feraligatr quickly jumped off Tauros back. Tauros quickly stood up also. Although Tauros didnt show it, he felt the pain on his back.

                          Back at the audience balcony, everyone was amazed of what Feraligatr did.
                          You see? Cecilia said. Even when Black Jacks pokemon are struggling against the opposition, they always manage to come back big time.
                          I agree, Cassandra replied. I never predicted what his Salamence did to my Absol in our battle.

                          (Authors note: For Cassandras battle with Black Jack, refer to Episode three: Rustboro Ghetto, chapter five).

                          Hmm? Max murmured. You know, Black Jack has age and experience on his side. That must be the reason why Black Jack is unpredictable.
                          I think youre right there, Brock continued. Knowing Ash for so long, he has also gained experience but not as much as Black Jack, but he and his pokemon does have youth and agility on their side and he also relies on his instincts than on knowledge. Both of them have high trainer statistics to become pokemon masters, Gary said. Even though Ash and Black Jack have weaknesses and strengths against each other, they have one thing that is very high and mostly equal their will to win.
                          Wow May said to herself. My brain hurts.

                          Back on the battlefield, Feraligatr and Tauros stood up again to receive more orders from their trainers.

                          Feraligatr! Black Jack yelled. Hydro Pump attack!

                          Feraligatr leaned back as he breathed in heavily.

                          Tauros! Ash yelled. Tackle attack!

                          Feraligatr then blasted out a huge foam of water out of his mouth aiming at Tauros. But Tauros dodged the attack and ran until he headbutted Feraligatr right in the gut, sending him flying.

                          Feral Feraligatr groaned as he struggled to get to his feet.
                          That Tauros tackle attack is one of a kind, Black Jack thought as he noticed his pokemon being in pain. Feraligatr may not last much longer.

                          Tauros! Ash cried. Tackle again while hes getting up!
                          Youre overconfidence has gotten the best of you! Black Jack shouted. Feraligatr! Hydro Pump!

                          Feraligatr quickly shot out a bigger foam of water out his mouth and the water shoved Tauros right into the arena walls, creating a huge crack on it. As the attack finished, Tauros was knocked out.

                          Tauros! No! Ash cried as he ran to him. Are you okay?

                          Tauros couldnt answer, as he was unconscious. Ash picked out a pokeball off his belt. Tauros return!

                          He picked out another pokeball. Swellow! he cried as he tossed it out. I choose you!

                          Swellow popped out of his pokeball and flew over to the field as he prepared himself for battle. Swellow! he cried.

                          Hmma Swellow, Black Jack murmured to himself. Ive heard that Swellows have the ability of never backing down. Lets see if the rumours are true.

                          Swellow! Ash cried. Wing attack!
                          Feraligatr! Black Jack yelled. Hydro Pump!

                          As Swellow flew towards Feraligatr, he leaned his head backwards as he heavily breathed in the air. Feraligatrs charging himself for a big attack, Ash thought. Swellow has to get him before he lets it out.

                          Swellow flew directly at Feraligatr like a speeding bullet while Feraligatr was still breathing in. Noticing this, Black Jack ordered, Feraligatr! Mega Punch attack!
                          What! Ash cried in shock.

                          Feraligatr closed his mouth tightly as he went to punch Swellow. Swellow! Dodge! Ash commanded.

                          Ferlaigatr barely missed Swellow as Swellow flew slightly back. Release the attack now! Black Jack ordered.

                          Feraligatr opened his mouth widely and shot a huge and powerful water jet, catching Swellow off guard as the jet shoved him right into the wall of the arena making another huge crack in it.

                          After the attack ended, both pokemon were down but not out. Swellow was struggling to get up, as he felt pain in almost every part of his body. Feraligatr was breathing heavily after his Hydro Pump attack, but evertime he breathed his felt pain in his gut due to the damage caused by Tauros earlier on.

                          Feraligatr, are you okay? Black Jack asked noticing Feraligatrs pain with concern. In response, Feraligatr gave a thumbs up.

                          Swellow slowly picked himself and flew back into the field. Black Jack smiled at Swellows guts. So its true, Black Jack said. That swellow of yours never backs down from anything, Ketchum. Im impressed.
                          Ha! The best has yet to come! Ash replied.
                          The best huh? Lets end this round then! Feraligatr! Focus Punch!
                          Swellow! Sky Attack!

                          Feraligatr ducked down as he charged up the remaining of his energies while Swellow flew up high. Swellow dived directly down at Feraligatr with the speed of a meteor while he and Black Jack waited for the right moment to attack. As Swellow dived down, he felt a scorching heat surrounding him.

                          Brace yourself, Feraligatr Black Jack said as he waited. NOW!

                          Feraligatr gave a huge mighty swing at Swellow. When the two collided, there was an explosive impact, which almost reached Black Jack and Ash. Everyone protected their eyes from the bright light of the explosion. As the dust of the explosion cleared, both pokemon lay unconscious; both pokemon also had burnt and bruised marks on almost every part of their bodies. Both pokemon are no longer able to battle, Black Jack still leads 2-1.

                          Ash and Black Jack ran onto the field to check on their pokemon, while Pikachu followed Ash closely. Swellow Ash whispered softly with concern. Swellow came round and looked at his trainer and smiled. Im glad youre okay, Ash whispered again. Pika pika! Pikachu cried, trying to cheer Ash up.

                          You okay? Black Jack asked with concern as he ran up to Feraligatr. Feraligatr opened his eyes slowly and smiled at Black Jack, who was also smiling. Feraligatr then felt that something was in his mouth; he reached inside his mouth and found a lost tooth inside it, he looked it and frowned as an anime sweat drop appeared on his face.

                          Itll grow back in a day, Black Jack said while smiling, almost enough to chuckle. Get back inside, you big baby.

                          Black Jack took out his pokeball and Feraligatr went back in. Just be happy that youve did youre best and Im very proud of you, Black Jack said as he looked at the pokeball.

                          Ash called back Swellow back into his pokeball and noticed Black Jack smiling. Even though hes rough on the outside, Ash thought. He is caring on the inside. But I dont think he will ever admit it.

                          In the audience balcony, Mane was applauding at what he saw so far. Oh, that was so much fun. Haha!

                          Shall we continue with the battle? the ref asked. Both Ash and Black Jack stared at each other in the eyes with determination.
                          You have to ask? Black Jack replied. Neither of us has shown our best yet.
                          I agree! Ash said. This battles far from over!
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                          Old December 9th, 2004 (4:54 AM).
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                            Chapter 3

                            Black Jack and Ash were in the grand final of the Hoenn League Championship. Their friends were part of the audience as they focused on the competition. All of them knew that there was something more at stake than the title of the Hoenn League champion. If Black Jack defeats Ash, hell get the chance to battle the villainous Mane to rescue his brothers family. If Ash wins, hell get the opportunity to battle Mane but its for the freedom of the pokemon that Mane captured using underhanded technology. At that moment, Black Jack was winning 2-1.

                            I have never seen a battle like this, Prof. Oak said. Feraligatrs Focus Punch and Swellows Sky Attack sure made quite an impact.
                            Mane must be scared stiff after seeing that attack, Cassandra said.
                            He better be, John replied with an angry tone. After what he has done to me and my family if he laid a finger on them
                            Calm down, Brock said. Ash wanted to save your family as well but Mane saw this coming and set up this stipulation. The way I see it, being in a tournament is like a test to Ash and Black Jack, they both see this match as a test to see who would be fit enough to battle Mane. In some ways, they found a way to help each other.
                            Dont worry, John, Misty said. One way or another, well help you get youre family back.
                            John slightly smiled. I dont know how we are going to do it, but Im certain we will. Thank you, Misty.

                            Back on the battlefield, Black Jack and Ash were waiting for the big screen to select the trainer to pick his pokemon since the last round ended in a draw. The big screen selected Black Jack again to pick his pokemon.

                            Not a problem with me, Black Jack said as he picked out a pokeball off his belt. Go! Nidoking!

                            Nidoking popped out of his pokeball and gave a loud roar as he prepared for battle. My turn! Ash cried. Go! Snorlax!

                            Snorlax popped out of his pokeball and caused an earthquake as he landed. Black Jack smiled as he predicts that this round would be something else.

                            Nidoking! Black Jack cried. Mega Punch attack!

                            Nidoking gave Snorlax a hefty punch to the face, giving a major damage, so hard that it sounded like thunder. Snorlax staggered backwards and Ash instantly saw what Black Jack was up to.

                            So, you want to see if Snorlax is as strong as Nidoking, huh? Ash said. Black Jack smiled and sjirachied in response, so did Nidoking. Snorlax, give Nidoking YOUR Mega Punch!

                            Snorlaxs paw glowed as he gave Nidoking a thunderous punch to the face. Nidoking staggered backwards, only slightly further away than Snorlax did when Nidoking punched him.

                            Nice, Black Jack commented. Nidoking! Again!

                            Nidoking punched Snorlax in the face again. This time, Snorlax saw this punch coming and stood his ground after he received that punch. Nidoking smiled at the fact that he was facing a tough opponent.

                            Snorlax! You do that too! Ash cried.

                            Snorlax punched back at Nidoking again, this time, Nidoking stood his ground. He and Snorlax then looked at each other with determined look on their faces while their trainers also had determined look on their faces. They kept on ordering their pokemon to repeatedly use Mega Punch over and over until one of them gets knocked down. Each time Nidoking and Snorlax punched each other, it sounded like huge thunder coming down near you or on you.

                            Finally, Nidoking knocked down Snorlax. Got you now, Ketchum! Black Jack yelled. Nidoking! Get ready to grab his neck and slam him!

                            Nidoking raised his clawed paw, ready to grab Snorlax by the neck while Snorlax was struggling to get up. Snorlax! Dont turn around! Ash cried. Snorlax, feeling quite dizzy, turned round and got snatched by the neck.

                            But Snorlax weighs way over a thousand pounds! Max cried. Theres no way Nidoking can get him up!
                            Well find out about that, Cassandra replied, remembering the time when Black Jacks Feraligatr gave a wild Steelix a Seismic Toss attack.

                            To everyones surprise, Nidoking used his great strength as he lifted Snorlax up but Ash saw the weak moment of that move. Snorlax, slip out of that move!

                            What? Black Jack cried as Snorlax used his body to slip out of Nidokings grip.
                            Now! Give Nidoking your Dynamic Punch! Ash cried.

                            Snorlaxs paw glowed more vigorously than his Mega Punch attack as he quickly punched the confused Nidoking in the face, sending him flying.

                            Nidoking landed hard on the field on his back. Nidoking! Black Jack yelled. Get up!

                            Nidoking struggled to but to no avail as he suddenly fainted. Nidoking is no longer able to battle! the ref cried. Snorlax is the winner! Now both trainers are drawing two all!

                            Black Jack smiled at the fact that Snorlax was another tough cookie like Ashs Tauros and Swellow. You did well, Nidoking, Black Jack said as he took out his pokeball with a smile. Return!

                            Phew! Prof. Oak said, wiping the sweat off her forehead. I thought Snorlax was a goner. That was a breathtaking moment.
                            I know, Misty thought deeply. Ash is battling to save the pokemon and Black Jack is battling to save Johns family. Both of them wanted to save everyone but Mane, being the creep that he is, made the stipulation. I just wish I just wish that both of them get what they want in the end.

                            Mane clapped his hands as he was enjoying the match. Superb, he said. Snorlax defeated the pokemon who seemed to be on the winning end. Life is so full of surprises.

                            Black Jack closed his eyes, thinking of whom to battle with next. He then quickly opened his eyes and picked out a pokeball off his belt. Metagross! Go! he cried as he tossed out his pokeball.

                            Metagross came out of his pokeball and yelled out his battle cry. Metagross! Ash thought as he showed his determined face. This is going to be a tough one, even for Snorlax.

                            Metagross! Black Jack yelled. Psybeam attack!
                            Snorlax! Ash cried. Dodge it!

                            Metagross shot out two psybeams out of its eyes but it barely missed as Snorlax moved out of harms way.

                            Now, Snorlax, Ash yelled. Dynamic Punch now!

                            Snorlaxs paw glowed again as he went to deliver his devastating punch.

                            Metagross! Black Jack yelled. Counter attack!

                            Metagross glowed a strange colour as Snorlax delivered his punch. Unfortunately for Snorlax, he bounced off Metagross and was sent flying.

                            No way! Ash cried after seeing his attack backfired.
                            Now Metagross! Black Jack yelled. Body Slam attack!

                            Metagross leaped into the air and dived his head down on the Snorlax, who was falling caused by the counter attack. After Snorlax was caught by Metagrosss attack, Metagross slammed his body to the ground, creating a small but powerful earthquake.

                            Snorlax lay on the floor. Snorlax! Ash cried. Try to get up!

                            But Snorlax wasnt able to get up, as he was unconscious. Snorlax is no longer able to battle, the ref cried. Metagross wins and Black Jack leads again three-two!

                            Ash called back Snorlax. I need something to beat that Metagross I got it! he thought as he took out another.

                            Bayleef! he cried as he tossed it out. I choose you!

                            Bayleef popped out of her pokeball and yelled out her battle cry. Bay!

                            Upon seeing Bayleef on the battlefield, Black Jack noticed how weak Bayleef was compared to Metagross, just by looking at her. Sorry, Ketchum, he said. But Metagross will beat Bayleef with one shot! Metagross! Hyper Beam attack!

                            Metagross shot out two Hyper Beams out of his eyes, but Bayleef barely dodged out of the way. If she did get hit, it would be curtains for her straight away.

                            Bayleef! Ash cried. Razor Leaf!

                            Bay eef! Bayleef cried as she swung the leaf on her forehead as the leaves came flying at Metagross. The move connected, but Metagross wasnt even hurt by it.

                            What! Ash cried, as he couldnt believe that the attack didnt affect them.
                            Bay! Bayleef cried, as she couldnt believe that either.
                            You shouldnt have sent out that Bayleef, Ketchum, Black Jack said. Even though shes tougher than her pre-evolved form, her attacks wont even weaken Metagross. I admire your guts, Ketchum, but I dont think that all of your pokemon combined can beat it.

                            Bayleefs eyes narrowed and grew angry upon hearing that. No one insults her dear trainer, her pokemon friends and human friends and gets away with it!

                            To everyones surprise, she started to glow and started to change shape. Interesting, Black Jack said with a smile. Its evolving!

                            Bayleef evolved into Meganium! Thats more like it! Black Jack shouted. Now lets see if shes any stronger!
                            Youll soon see! Ash yelled. Meganium! Vine Whip!

                            Two green vines sprouted out of Meganiums neck. It quickly reached Metagrosss legs before Black Jack can react. Meganiums vines lifted the shocked Metagross up and tossed him into the far distance, knocking it out as it crashed on the ground.

                            Metagross! Black Jack worryingly. Metagross couldnt respond as it was knocked out.

                            Metagross is no longer able to battle, the ref cried. Bay, I mean, Meganium wins the round! Ash Ketchum draws again with Black Jack at three all!

                            Yeah! Ash cried. Great work, Meganium!

                            Meg! Meg! Meganium cried as she happily ran to Ash and tackled him, knocking him down.

                            Ash quickly picked himself, but was still feeling happy about Meganiums victory over a strong pokemon like Metagross.

                            Metagross! Return! Black Jack ordered as Metagross returned back to its pokeball. Looks weve overestimated them a bit, huh?

                            Black Jack smiled at the fact that Meganium liked Ash a lot, maybe even loved him. But love doesnt conquer everything, as Black Jack was about to show as he picked out another pokeball.

                            Go! Salamence! Black Jack yelled.

                            Salamence popped out of his pokeball and gave a loud roar. Ash and Meganiums eyes narrowed at her opponent, knowing that hell also be tough to defeat.

                            Salamence! Black Jack yelled. Fly and Flamethrower attack!

                            Salamence flew high in the skies and shot out countless Flamethrowers, only to have Meganium dodge each and every one of them. Meganium! Ash cried. Razor Leaf attack!

                            Meganium shot out her Razor Leaf attack but Salamence shot out his flamethrower again and burned them to a crisp. No! Ash cried.

                            Black Jack noticed that Meganium was getting tired out caused by limitless dodging. Now, Salamence! Black Jack yelled. Seismic Toss attack now!

                            Meganium! Ash cried as Salamence was diving down at Meganium. Dodge the attack!

                            But Meganium was too tired to move as Salamence swooped down and grabbed her. He lifted her up high in the air of a hundred feet!

                            Salamence was holding her around her middle, and everyone knew what was coming next.

                            Upon seeing that, Ash became desperate to save Meganium from getting hurt. Black Jack, dont! Ash cried. I dont want Meganium hurt this way!

                            All of Ashs friends stood up and yelled out things in an attempt to stop Black Jack and Salamence finishing their attack.

                            Black Jack! Dont do this!
                            Dont become as low as someone you hate!

                            Wrong answer, people! Black Jack yelled. Salamence, say happy landings to Meganium!

                            Salamence released Meganium and she fell a hundred feet from the air! Ash can only watch in awe as one of his beloved pokemon crashed on the battlefield like a ton of bricks!

                            After Meganium fell, Ash and Pikachu ran over to her with tears in Ashs eyes. Meganium! he cried. When he touched her to comfort her, she let a small but painful cry.

                            The ref was also shocked at Black Jacks actions but he soon came round and announced that Meganium was beaten and Black Jack was in the lead again of four-to-three.

                            Why, Black Jack? Ash demanded. Why did you harm Meganium this way?
                            Pika! Pikachu cried also demanding Black Jacks answer.

                            Black Jack looked down, feeling sad and sorry for injuring Meganium. I didnt want to do it, he thought to himself.

                            He suddenly came round and changed his expression to anger. You shouldve been prepared for anything, Ketchum! he yelled. That is one of the things I plan to do to Mane for harming my brothers family!

                            Ash looked at his hurt Meganium. Meg she whispered in pain.

                            Ash knew that Meganium was trying to say something. Its okay, Meganium, he said quietly as he took out Meganiums pokeball. Return.

                            Ash looked at Black Jack and saw the determination in his eyes, even though he was wearing sunglasses. Ash doesnt know much about Black Jack, but recently he and his friends noticed that he does have a soft side that never wanted to hurt pokemon so badly.

                            That move was a bit rough, Black Jack, Ash said as he smiled at his devotion. But trust me he continued as he picked out another pokeball. I have a rough side too, as youll soon find out!
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                            Old December 10th, 2004 (5:31 AM).
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                              Chapter 4

                              Black Jack and Ash stood in their respective spots of the battlefield. Ash had two available pokemon left while Black Jack had three and his Salamence was standing on the field waiting for his next opponent.

                              Ash picked out another pokeball of his belt. Go! Charizard!

                              He tossed out his pokeball and Charizard came out, letting out a big roar. Salamence roared back in response. Both dragon-like pokemon kept on roaring to each other louder and louder to intemidate each other.

                              Roaring is not going to get us anywhere, Black Jack said. Salamence! Reach for the skies!

                              Salamence flew high in the skies.

                              You too, Charizard! Ash yelled. Charizard also took flight.

                              In the skies, Charizard used his flamethrower attack at Salamence. But he dodged the attack and tackled Charizard in the belly. Charizard retaliated by punching Salamence in the face heavily.

                              Salamence used his flamethrower at Charizard, but it was blocked as he used a flamethrower attack of his own.

                              This time, Salamence shot out a Fire Blast attack. Charizard realised that his flamethrower wouldnt be able to stop it, so he used paws to stop the attack. Charizard used his strength to hold the attack away from him.

                              Suddenly, he finally found the strength to push it right back at Salamence. Salamence became shocked and could do nothing but dodge the attack. The Fire Blast attack was coming down on the audience. They stared in fright, but the attack disappeared before it reached them.

                              Scary, wasnt it? Black Jack asked as he looked at the disappearing Fire Blast. He then turned his attention to the battle. He knew that neither he nor Ash were able to command the pokemon while they were air-borne as they were too far away to hear them.

                              Both Salamence and Charizard kept on tackling other and each tackle had given out more pain than the last.

                              As Charizard charged at Salamence, Salamence shot out his flamethrower to surprise and hurt him. But Charizard saw that coming and dodged the attack. While dodging the attack, Charizard quickly grabbed hold of Salamence flew around the stadium while taking Salamence with him.

                              That Charizard has got Salamence! Black Jack thought as he sweated. And theres no way to get out of that hold!
                              Weve got him now, Charizard! Ash yelled. Slam him now!

                              Charizard dived down and slammed him on the ground, head first! The blue dragon was knocked unconscious.

                              Salamence is no longer able to battle! the ref announced. Ash and Black Jack draw once again four-all!

                              Well done, Ketchum, Black Jack said. Not only you have avenged your Meganium, youve also taken out one of the rarest, but one of my best pokemon as well.
                              I told you that I would play rough, Black Jack! Ash replied. Why didnt you believe me?
                              I guess you can be unpredictable too. Now its time to fight fire with fire.

                              Black Jack picked another pokeball off his belt and tossed it out. Blaziken! You got what you wanted! A match against Charizard!
                              I knew you would use Blaziken against Charizard, Ash said. This is what he wanted too.

                              As Blaziken and Charizard stood face-to-face, their eyes burned with passion, a passion to battle each other.

                              Be careful, Charizard, Ash said. We have battled a Blaziken before, but this ones different.

                              Charizard growled in reply and Ash understood what that meant.

                              Charizard! Flamethrower attack! Ash cried.
                              Blaziken! Black Jack yelled. Hi Jump Kick!

                              Charizard flew high in the air and shot out a lick of flame out of his mouth at Blaziken, but missed as Blaziken leaped into the air to dodge the attack and performed a Hi Jump Kick attack at Charizard in the head, knocking him down.

                              Chrizard quickly picked himself up and punched Blaziken in the gut, knocking him down. Charizard held his hurt head, while Blaziken held his hurt gut. Both pokemon delivered heavy damage to each other already.

                              Charizard may have received some damage from Salamence from the last round, Ash thought. But Blaziken added more. We have to be careful. Otherwise, Pikachu will be my last hope of saving the legendary pokemon.

                              Charizard have received damage from Salamence and Blaziken, Black Jack thought. But by looking at Blaziken right now, there may be a chance that Blaziken may be knocked out after Charizards next attack cos he is strong but knowing Blaziken, he would never let anyone down.

                              Blaziken! he yelled. Low Kick attack!

                              Blaziken ran at Charizard, attempting to perform a sliding kick at Charizard but missed as Charizard flew up into the sky, putting Blaziken at a disadvantage.

                              Now, Charizard! Ash yelled. Seismic Toss!

                              Chariazrd swooped down on Blaziken and grabbed hold of him. As he held him tightly he flew around the stadium multiple times, making Blaziken grow dizzy. He then attempted to drive Blazikens back to the floor.

                              Blaziken! Counter that now! Black Jack yelled.

                              To everyones shock, Blaziken countered by flipping Charizard over, slamming Chariazrd on his back. Charizards stomach also got damaged when Blaziken landed onto his when he countered the attack, but Blaziken also suffered the same damage.

                              Everyones mouths were wide open.

                              I have never seen that counter before! Gary said.
                              Unreal! Max commented. Just before Blaziken was about to be slammed to his defeat, he flipped Charizard over!
                              I bet Mane never saw that coming! John thought to himself.

                              Elsewhere in the audience balcony, Mane was watching the match with interest. Shame on you, Ashy boy, he said. You never saw that coming did you?

                              Both Blaziken and Charizard lay on the floor trying to catch their breath after Blazikens counter. They started to get up slowly. As Blaziken turned round, Ash saw the chance to finish him off.

                              Charizard! Ash cried. Mega Punch attack!
                              Dodge it, Blaziken! Black Jack yelled.

                              Charizard ran at Blaziken to punch him in the face, but Blaziken ducked it. Blaze Kick now! Black Jack yelled.

                              Blaziken spun round and gave Charizard a flaming roundhouse kick to the face. The impact was so hard that most of the audience members felt it. Charizard felt dizzy as he fell on his front. He was down and out!

                              Charizard is no longer able to battle! the ref announced. Black Jack leads again and Ash has one last pokemon left!

                              Blaziken slowly walked over to Charizard and tapped him on the head. Charizard woke up and saw what he would call from that day forward, a new rival. Charizard picked himself up and smiled. Blaziken also smiled as they tapped paws in respect.

                              Ash and Black Jack smiled at the sportsmanship between the two pokemon that had fought valiantly against each other. Charizard turned round and smiled at Ash, giving a light growl.

                              Im very proud of you, Ash said as he took out his pokeball. Charizard, return!

                              Ash placed the pokeball on his belt. Ready, Pikachu? he asked in an encouraging tone.
                              Pika! Pikachu cried in return as he ran on to the field.

                              Pikachus is evolved form of Pichu, Black Jack thought. But he is also one evolution away from being a Raichu. Out of all the pokemon that Ash has captured, Pikachus the most experienced in his group. But I cant tell whether hes the strongest or weakest, therefore, I must not underestimate him.

                              He looked at his Blaziken with concern as Blaziken was still feeling great pains in his gut. Blaziken, Black Jack said. Do you want to battle Pikachu?

                              Blaziken turned his head to Black Jack and nodded.

                              Pikachu! Ash cried. Thundershock attack!

                              Pikachu leapt into the air and gave massive cry as a bolt lightning was shot out of his body, aiming for Blaziken.

                              Dodge it, Blaziken! Black Jack cried.

                              Blaziken was barely able to dodge the attack. If Blazikens gut wasnt hurting anymore, he wouldve avoided it more easily.

                              Blaziken! Black Jack yelled. Hi Jump Kick!

                              Blaziken leapt into the air to perform the attack. Pikachu! Ash cried. Thunderbolt!

                              Blaziken saw the attack and was about to dodge it, but he suddenly felt the pain in his gut again, distracting him from dodging the attack and making the electric struck him.

                              Blaziken! Black Jack yelled in a worried tone.

                              As Blaziken fell on his front, everyone thought that he was knocked out but he struggled to get to his feet and was still holding his gut, trying to stop the pain.

                              That Blazikens not giving up! Ash said. But were not giving up either, right, Pikachu?

                              Pikachu! Pikachu cried.

                              Blaziken! Black Jack yelled as he took out his pokeball. Re

                              Blaziken raised his hand to stop him. Black Jack understood what Blaziken wanted to do. Blaziken wanted to battle strong opponents but he also wanted to help Black Jack bring back his brothers family. Respecting Blazikens wishes, he decided to let Blaziken to possibly finish the round and the battle.

                              Ash noticed what was going on. Black Jack doesnt like a lot of people, he thought to himself. But he loves his pokemon. Even though he doesnt want Blaziken to get hurt anymore, he never failed to respect his wishes.

                              Pikachu! he yelled. Finish him off with a quick attack!

                              Pikachu yelled out another cry and dashed towards Blaziken.

                              Mega Punch attack! Black Jack yelled.

                              Blaziken aimed his punch directly at Pikachu, but barely missed as Pikachu dodged out of the way and hit Blaziken in injured part of his body. Blaziken staggered backwards as he held his mid-section again.

                              Pikachu leapt again and spun round to give Blaziken an Iron Tail attack to the face, knocking him down. Black Jack gasped in shock.

                              Blaziken fell on his back. He struggled to pick himself up. Blazi he whispered to himself, which meant master. Then, he fell unconscious.

                              Blaziken is no longer able to battle, yelled the ref. Pikachu wins!

                              Way to go, Pikachu! Ash cried happily.
                              Pikachu! Pikachu cried happily in reply.

                              This is my last chance, Black Jack thought in a low tone as he picked another pokeball.

                              Go! Tyranitar! he yelled as he tossed out the pokeball. Tyranitar came out of the pokeball and gave a loud roar.

                              That roar did not intimidate Pikachu one bit. Pika! he cried in determination.

                              Black Jack looked at both Tyranitar and Pikachu. Ketchum, he said. Pikachu won the last round because Blaziken was weakened from his battle with your Charizard. But now, from the looks of this situation, it seems that there is a high chance that Tyranitar will knock the stuffing out of Pikachu. Why dont you just give up?

                              Ash clenched his fist. He was nowhere giving up, and he knew that Pikachu was nowhere near it either. No way, Black Jack, Ash replied. We have gone too far to give up now!
                              Thats it! Thats the answer I was looking for! Black Jack shouted. I was expecting no less from you, Ketchum! Id rather take you down when you fight your hardest!
                              Everything is at stake here, Ash thought as he closed his eyes. The tournament, Black Jacks family, the rare and powerful pokemon, no matter how strong Black Jack and no matter how many cheating ways Mane has, I have to win to save to everyone.
                              Pikapi! Pikachu cried, catching Ashs attention.

                              Pikachu also knew what was on the line, and Ash noticed that. Lets finish this, Black Jack! he yelled.
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                              Old December 13th, 2004 (7:31 AM).
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                                Chapter 5

                                Both trainers were down to their last pokemon. Black Jack was using Tyranitar and Ash was using Pikachu.

                                Black Jack, Ash called.
                                Ketchum? Black Jack asked.
                                It has been a real honour battling you.
                                Likewise. And Im sure our pokemon feel the same way. But now, we must finsh this match to see who gets to battle Mane!

                                At the audience balcony, tensions were so high that you could cut the atmosphere with a knife.
                                Both of them are down to their last pokemon, Max said.
                                There will be some heavy fighting, Brock said.
                                Pikachu shouldnt be counted out here, Cecilia said. Despite Tyranitars size and power advantage, Pikachus electric attacks are effective against him and his speed is much higher.
                                Im getting so nervous, just watching this, Mrs Ketchum said, knowing what was on the line in this battle.
                                I feel it too, Misty replied, also knowing what was the line.

                                Tyranitar! Black Jack yelled. Dynamic Punch!
                                Pikachu! Ash cried. Dodge it!

                                Tyranitar clenched paw glowed energetically as he aimed it to slam Pikachu. But missed as Pikachu leapt into the air to dodge it, making him punch ground instead, creating a deep hole.

                                Pikachu safely landed on Tyranitars head. We got them now, Pikachu! Ash cried. Thunderbolt it!

                                Pikachu gave a massive cry as his electricity spread onto Tyranitars body! Tyranitar! Black Jack yelled. Shake it off!

                                Tyranitar ran round the field like a madman as he tried desperately tried to shake Pikachu off and his electric powers. After a long run, Tyranitar began to slow down.

                                Tyranitar fell to his knees and then on his front. Pikachu was still wearing out Tyranitar with his electric attack. Thats enough, Pikachu! Ash cried. You can come off now!
                                Pika! Pikachu cried as he leapt off Tyranitars back.

                                Black Jacks face became emotionless, even after seeing his Tyranitar lying unconscious on the floor.

                                The ref raised his flag. Tyranitar is

                                Suddenly, Tyranitar quickly stood straight up as Black Jack smiled confidently.

                                Standing up! the ref cried in shock. Pikachu and Ash were also shocked.

                                You shouldve used Pikachu against Feraligatr! Black Jack said in a confident tone. Now get ready for a pounding of a lifetime!

                                Tyranitar! he ordered. Dynamic Punch again!

                                Tyranitars clenched paw glowed again as he aimed his attack on Pikachu.

                                Pikachu, dodge it! Ash yelled.

                                Pikachu leapt into the air and was about land on Tyranitar again but the opposition saw it coming. The same trick doesnt work twice, Black Jack said. Tyranitar grab it!

                                Tyranitar quickly stopped his Dynamic Punch attack to successfully grab Pikachu in mid-air.

                                Now Body Slam and Fissure attack! Black Jack yelled.
                                Fissure!? Ash cried.

                                Oh no! Brock yelled from the audience balcony. A one-hit attack like fissure and its all over!
                                That means Ash wont be able to save the pokemon, Misty cried.

                                TAAAR! Tyranitar cried, which meant Big one!

                                Tyranitar slammed Pikachu hard on the floor like he was nothing. The impact was so hard that it made a huge crack on the floor.

                                After the slam, Tyranitar looked down on Pikachu and smiled, thinking that hes knocked out. But to everyones shock, Pikachu slowly started to get his feet. Unlike Tyranitar, he was battered and bruised. Im impressed, Pikachu, Black Jack said. You do have a lot of guts.

                                Pikachu Ash whispered with worry. Pikachu instinctively sensed Ashs worry and turned to give a determined look.

                                Pika Pikachu! Pika Pipi Pikachu! Pikachu cried, which meant, Ash, dont give up because of me! We cant let Mane get away like this!

                                Ash couldnt understand what Pikachu was saying but by the tone of Pikachus voice, he knows that Pikachu wouldnt give up when something very important was on the line. He gathered his courage again. Okay! he cried. Pikachu, quick attack!

                                Pikachu ran at Tyranitar with the speed of a speeding bullet. Tyranitar! Black Jack yelled. Mega Punch attack!

                                Tyranitar aimed his punches at Pikachu but kept on missing as Pikachu kept on dodging and attacking at the same time.

                                Pikachu! Ash cried. Jump on Tyranitars arm and paralyse it with your Thunder Wave!

                                Pikachu leapt on Tyranitars left arm and shocked it until the arm was paralysed, while Tyranitar let out a huge roar in pain. After Pikachus Thunder Wave attack, Tyranitar quickly grabbed him and slammed him on the ground, injuring it even further.

                                Pikachu quickly stood up, trying to ignore the aching pain with every inch of his body, while Tyranitar was suffering the paralysing pain on his left arm.

                                Tyranitar! Black Jack yelled. Dynamic Punch attack!
                                Pikachu! Ash yelled. Thunder attack!

                                Tyranitars clenched paw glowed more energetically than his previous Dynamic Punch attacks as he charged forward at Pikachu, while Pikachu gathered his electric powers as he charged at him. A huge explosion came upon impact. The explosion was the same size as the explosion a battle with Feraligatr and Swellow!

                                After the impact, Tyranitar and Pikachu were knocked down but they slowly got back up to their feet, much to the surprise of the audience.

                                I never thought Ash and his Pikachu would be so tough against Black Jack and his Tyranitar, Gary thought. He has certainly came a long way since the Johto League!

                                Both Tyranitar and Pikachu were breathing heavily for air. Both pokemon were sweating, they have been battered, bloodied and bruised.

                                Suddenly, a strange dark and light aura surrounded Black Jack. The same aura also surrounded Tyranitar. But neither of them could feel it nor see it.

                                A strange aura also surrounded Ash and Pikachu, but it was mixture of the colours of the rainbow but they, too, couldnt feel it or see it.

                                Everyone in the audience couldnt believe their eyes as they stared in bewilderment and shock, seeing what was happening between the trainers and their pokemon.

                                Whats going on? Misty asked in shock.
                                Could it be? Cecilia said. Are they?

                                This has been an awesome match, Black Jack, Ash said.
                                Yeah, Black Jack replied. You fought well, Ketchum, and I dont want this to end. But it must end now!
                                Good idea! Lets end this with one final attack to see who gets to battle Mane!

                                Both trainers yelled their attack at the same time.

                                Tyranitar! Hyper Beam attack!
                                Pikachu! Thunder attack!

                                Tyranitar quickly shot out a gigantic and powerful Hyper Beam out of his mouth while Pikachu screamed his battle cry as he shot out an enormous lightning out of his body.

                                What the? Max cried in astonishment. Ive never seen a Hyper Beam that big!
                                I never a Thunder attack that big in my entire life! Prof. Oak cried, also in astonishment.

                                Before anyone could say another word, both attacks collided and caused a massive explosion upon impact! The explosion was much bigger than the collision impact caused by Swellow and Feraligatr earlier as it knocked Black Jack and Ash off their feet. Everyone covered their eyes to protect themselves from the blinding light and dust of the explosion.

                                As the dust cleared, Black Jack and Ash slowly picked themselves up and saw their pokemon unconscious on the field. No one knew who was knocked out first. Even the replay cameras had no idea of who fainted first because the explosion covered up the cameras.

                                Everyone seemed confused about the whole situation, except the Black Jack and Ash as they ran to their unconscious pokemon.

                                Pikachu! Ash cried as he ran to him.
                                Tyranitar! Black Jack cried as he ran to him.

                                As they touched their pokemon, both pokemon slowly opened their eyes as they woke up from their unconsciousness. Both trainers became relieved after seeing that.

                                Looks like we have healing hands, Ketchum, Black Jack said. Ash smiled at that remark.

                                Both pokemon are no longer able to battle! the ref cried. This means that this battle is a draw!

                                A short old man walked out on the battlefield with a confused look on his face. He had long white beard and long white hair. He also wore shorts, trainers and cap. This never happened before, he said.

                                President Goodshow! Ash said. Its been a while.
                                A long while if you ask me, Ash, Goodshow replied. I like to have a chat, but I have to decide to pick the winner of this league since we never had a draw before.
                                Let Black Jack have it, Ash said. He has been away for so long from pokemon leagues. Now its his turn to take the glory.

                                I dont think so, kid, Black Jack replied. He took Ash a few distances away from Goodshow so that he wouldnt be able to hear what he was about to say. I had my reasons why I participated this tournament, he said. One of them was to find someone who was to find someone worthy challenge me. After what you have done in this battle, Ketchum, I knew that you were the one.

                                Another reason why you should take the title is because of what I have done in the past. I was a grunt of Team Rocket, I have been injuring pokemon and people and stealing and selling stolen goods. Even though I knew that everything I did was wrong, I did those to protect my pokemon. After the pokemon have been toughened up, we decided to give up our wrong ways and started our winning streak by battling trainers who had the potential to become pokemon masters, but they were all small fries to us. We saw ourselves as tough nuts to crack, but after helping Cassandra out with the kids, I had second doubts about it

                                Black Jack then remained silent for a few seconds, thinking about the questions that he asked himself a lot. So until I can find myself, I want you to take the title. I wont be needing it anyway, I dont need a title to make a name for myself.

                                Ash smiled. I admire you, Black Jack, he said. And besides, I heard everything last night. For a trainer who looks like a bad guy, youre not all bad.

                                Black Jack smiled at remark. Tell you what, Ash said. Why dont we let Goodshow decide. After all, we could arguing about who keeps the title all day.

                                Good idea, Black Jack replied as Ash offered his hand of friendship to him. Black Jack accepted it as they both shook hands. What sportsmanship!

                                They both walked back and told him about their discussion. This is going to be tricky, Goodshow said as he scratched his head. Then he had an idea. I know! How about I make you both joint champions!

                                The trainers, ref and announcer gasped at that announcement. Whos going to keep the cup? Ash asked.
                                I cant take it, Black Jack replied. I have no where to put it anyway.
                                Well, it cant remain here, Goodshow said.
                                I have an idea, Ash said with a smile.

                                After he, Black Jack and Goodshow discussed the idea, they all nodded in agreement. President Goodshow has made both Ash and Black Jack joint Hoenn League champions! the announcer cried.

                                Back on the audience balcony, the crowd went wild, except Misty, Brock, May, Max, Lao Ping, Cassandra, Cecilia, John, Prof. Oak, Gary and Delia.

                                So now that Ash and Black Jack have drawn, May said. Who is going to face Mane?

                                A tear was dropped from Johns eyes as he began to sob again. Even if Black Jack doesnt get to face Mane, he thought to himself. I cant help but thanking him for trying his best

                                The others couldnt help but feel sad for John.

                                Elsewhere, Mane smiled as his henchman, who was sitting next to him asked, Sir, now that Ketchum and Black Jack have drawn in this match, should we cancel your match?
                                No, Mane replied. I have a better idea Ill challenge them both!

                                His henchman became shocked at that announcement. Sir But why?? he asked.
                                I like a little bit of challenge, Mane replied confidently. Hmhmhm

                                The next day, an old janitor was sweeping around inside a corridor. The corridor he was sweeping was famously known as the Hoenn Leagues Hall of Fame. The janitor stopped to look at the photo that contained Ash and Black Jack and all the pokemon that they used in battle. Behind the photo was the cup that was given to the joint champions. I have never seen a match that was good as that, he said with a smile. And there wont be another one like it. He he.

                                Next episode: Black Jack and Ash gets invited by Mane into his base for one last battle before Johns family and the legendary pokemon can be released. What does Mane have up his sleeve?
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                                Old December 13th, 2004 (7:32 AM).
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                                  Chapter 5

                                  Both trainers were down to their last pokemon. Black Jack was using Tyranitar and Ash was using Pikachu.

                                  Black Jack, Ash called.
                                  Ketchum? Black Jack asked.
                                  It has been a real honour battling you.
                                  Likewise. And Im sure our pokemon feel the same way. But now, we must finsh this match to see who gets to battle Mane!

                                  At the audience balcony, tensions were so high that you could cut the atmosphere with a knife.
                                  Both of them are down to their last pokemon, Max said.
                                  There will be some heavy fighting, Brock said.
                                  Pikachu shouldnt be counted out here, Cecilia said. Despite Tyranitars size and power advantage, Pikachus electric attacks are effective against him and his speed is much higher.
                                  Im getting so nervous, just watching this, Mrs Ketchum said, knowing what was on the line in this battle.
                                  I feel it too, Misty replied, also knowing what was the line.

                                  Tyranitar! Black Jack yelled. Dynamic Punch!
                                  Pikachu! Ash cried. Dodge it!

                                  Tyranitar clenched paw glowed energetically as he aimed it to slam Pikachu. But missed as Pikachu leapt into the air to dodge it, making him punch ground instead, creating a deep hole.

                                  Pikachu safely landed on Tyranitars head. We got them now, Pikachu! Ash cried. Thunderbolt it!

                                  Pikachu gave a massive cry as his electricity spread onto Tyranitars body! Tyranitar! Black Jack yelled. Shake it off!

                                  Tyranitar ran round the field like a madman as he tried desperately tried to shake Pikachu off and his electric powers. After a long run, Tyranitar began to slow down.

                                  Tyranitar fell to his knees and then on his front. Pikachu was still wearing out Tyranitar with his electric attack. Thats enough, Pikachu! Ash cried. You can come off now!
                                  Pika! Pikachu cried as he leapt off Tyranitars back.

                                  Black Jacks face became emotionless, even after seeing his Tyranitar lying unconscious on the floor.

                                  The ref raised his flag. Tyranitar is

                                  Suddenly, Tyranitar quickly stood straight up as Black Jack smiled confidently.

                                  Standing up! the ref cried in shock. Pikachu and Ash were also shocked.

                                  You shouldve used Pikachu against Feraligatr! Black Jack said in a confident tone. Now get ready for a pounding of a lifetime!

                                  Tyranitar! he ordered. Dynamic Punch again!

                                  Tyranitars clenched paw glowed again as he aimed his attack on Pikachu.

                                  Pikachu, dodge it! Ash yelled.

                                  Pikachu leapt into the air and was about land on Tyranitar again but the opposition saw it coming. The same trick doesnt work twice, Black Jack said. Tyranitar grab it!

                                  Tyranitar quickly stopped his Dynamic Punch attack to successfully grab Pikachu in mid-air.

                                  Now Body Slam and Fissure attack! Black Jack yelled.
                                  Fissure!? Ash cried.

                                  Oh no! Brock yelled from the audience balcony. A one-hit attack like fissure and its all over!
                                  That means Ash wont be able to save the pokemon, Misty cried.

                                  TAAAR! Tyranitar cried, which meant Big one!

                                  Tyranitar slammed Pikachu hard on the floor like he was nothing. The impact was so hard that it made a huge crack on the floor.

                                  After the slam, Tyranitar looked down on Pikachu and smiled, thinking that hes knocked out. But to everyones shock, Pikachu slowly started to get his feet. Unlike Tyranitar, he was battered and bruised. Im impressed, Pikachu, Black Jack said. You do have a lot of guts.

                                  Pikachu Ash whispered with worry. Pikachu instinctively sensed Ashs worry and turned to give a determined look.

                                  Pika Pikachu! Pika Pipi Pikachu! Pikachu cried, which meant, Ash, dont give up because of me! We cant let Mane get away like this!

                                  Ash couldnt understand what Pikachu was saying but by the tone of Pikachus voice, he knows that Pikachu wouldnt give up when something very important was on the line. He gathered his courage again. Okay! he cried. Pikachu, quick attack!

                                  Pikachu ran at Tyranitar with the speed of a speeding bullet. Tyranitar! Black Jack yelled. Mega Punch attack!

                                  Tyranitar aimed his punches at Pikachu but kept on missing as Pikachu kept on dodging and attacking at the same time.

                                  Pikachu! Ash cried. Jump on Tyranitars arm and paralyse it with your Thunder Wave!

                                  Pikachu leapt on Tyranitars left arm and shocked it until the arm was paralysed, while Tyranitar let out a huge roar in pain. After Pikachus Thunder Wave attack, Tyranitar quickly grabbed him and slammed him on the ground, injuring it even further.

                                  Pikachu quickly stood up, trying to ignore the aching pain with every inch of his body, while Tyranitar was suffering the paralysing pain on his left arm.

                                  Tyranitar! Black Jack yelled. Dynamic Punch attack!
                                  Pikachu! Ash yelled. Thunder attack!

                                  Tyranitars clenched paw glowed more energetically than his previous Dynamic Punch attacks as he charged forward at Pikachu, while Pikachu gathered his electric powers as he charged at him. A huge explosion came upon impact. The explosion was the same size as the explosion a battle with Feraligatr and Swellow!

                                  After the impact, Tyranitar and Pikachu were knocked down but they slowly got back up to their feet, much to the surprise of the audience.

                                  I never thought Ash and his Pikachu would be so tough against Black Jack and his Tyranitar, Gary thought. He has certainly came a long way since the Johto League!

                                  Both Tyranitar and Pikachu were breathing heavily for air. Both pokemon were sweating, they have been battered, bloodied and bruised.

                                  Suddenly, a strange dark and light aura surrounded Black Jack. The same aura also surrounded Tyranitar. But neither of them could feel it nor see it.

                                  A strange aura also surrounded Ash and Pikachu, but it was mixture of the colours of the rainbow but they, too, couldnt feel it or see it.

                                  Everyone in the audience couldnt believe their eyes as they stared in bewilderment and shock, seeing what was happening between the trainers and their pokemon.

                                  Whats going on? Misty asked in shock.
                                  Could it be? Cecilia said. Are they?

                                  This has been an awesome match, Black Jack, Ash said.
                                  Yeah, Black Jack replied. You fought well, Ketchum, and I dont want this to end. But it must end now!
                                  Good idea! Lets end this with one final attack to see who gets to battle Mane!

                                  Both trainers yelled their attack at the same time.

                                  Tyranitar! Hyper Beam attack!
                                  Pikachu! Thunder attack!

                                  Tyranitar quickly shot out a gigantic and powerful Hyper Beam out of his mouth while Pikachu screamed his battle cry as he shot out an enormous lightning out of his body.

                                  What the? Max cried in astonishment. Ive never seen a Hyper Beam that big!
                                  I never a Thunder attack that big in my entire life! Prof. Oak cried, also in astonishment.

                                  Before anyone could say another word, both attacks collided and caused a massive explosion upon impact! The explosion was much bigger than the collision impact caused by Swellow and Feraligatr earlier as it knocked Black Jack and Ash off their feet. Everyone covered their eyes to protect themselves from the blinding light and dust of the explosion.

                                  As the dust cleared, Black Jack and Ash slowly picked themselves up and saw their pokemon unconscious on the field. No one knew who was knocked out first. Even the replay cameras had no idea of who fainted first because the explosion covered up the cameras.

                                  Everyone seemed confused about the whole situation, except the Black Jack and Ash as they ran to their unconscious pokemon.

                                  Pikachu! Ash cried as he ran to him.
                                  Tyranitar! Black Jack cried as he ran to him.

                                  As they touched their pokemon, both pokemon slowly opened their eyes as they woke up from their unconsciousness. Both trainers became relieved after seeing that.

                                  Looks like we have healing hands, Ketchum, Black Jack said. Ash smiled at that remark.

                                  Both pokemon are no longer able to battle! the ref cried. This means that this battle is a draw!

                                  A short old man walked out on the battlefield with a confused look on his face. He had long white beard and long white hair. He also wore shorts, trainers and cap. This never happened before, he said.

                                  President Goodshow! Ash said. Its been a while.
                                  A long while if you ask me, Ash, Goodshow replied. I like to have a chat, but I have to decide to pick the winner of this league since we never had a draw before.
                                  Let Black Jack have it, Ash said. He has been away for so long from pokemon leagues. Now its his turn to take the glory.

                                  I dont think so, kid, Black Jack replied. He took Ash a few distances away from Goodshow so that he wouldnt be able to hear what he was about to say. I had my reasons why I participated this tournament, he said. One of them was to find someone who was to find someone worthy challenge me. After what you have done in this battle, Ketchum, I knew that you were the one.

                                  Another reason why you should take the title is because of what I have done in the past. I was a grunt of Team Rocket, I have been injuring pokemon and people and stealing and selling stolen goods. Even though I knew that everything I did was wrong, I did those to protect my pokemon. After the pokemon have been toughened up, we decided to give up our wrong ways and started our winning streak by battling trainers who had the potential to become pokemon masters, but they were all small fries to us. We saw ourselves as tough nuts to crack, but after helping Cassandra out with the kids, I had second doubts about it

                                  Black Jack then remained silent for a few seconds, thinking about the questions that he asked himself a lot. So until I can find myself, I want you to take the title. I wont be needing it anyway, I dont need a title to make a name for myself.

                                  Ash smiled. I admire you, Black Jack, he said. And besides, I heard everything last night. For a trainer who looks like a bad guy, youre not all bad.

                                  Black Jack smiled at remark. Tell you what, Ash said. Why dont we let Goodshow decide. After all, we could arguing about who keeps the title all day.

                                  Good idea, Black Jack replied as Ash offered his hand of friendship to him. Black Jack accepted it as they both shook hands. What sportsmanship!

                                  They both walked back and told him about their discussion. This is going to be tricky, Goodshow said as he scratched his head. Then he had an idea. I know! How about I make you both joint champions!

                                  The trainers, ref and announcer gasped at that announcement. Whos going to keep the cup? Ash asked.
                                  I cant take it, Black Jack replied. I have no where to put it anyway.
                                  Well, it cant remain here, Goodshow said.
                                  I have an idea, Ash said with a smile.

                                  After he, Black Jack and Goodshow discussed the idea, they all nodded in agreement. President Goodshow has made both Ash and Black Jack joint Hoenn League champions! the announcer cried.

                                  Back on the audience balcony, the crowd went wild, except Misty, Brock, May, Max, Lao Ping, Cassandra, Cecilia, John, Prof. Oak, Gary and Delia.

                                  So now that Ash and Black Jack have drawn, May said. Who is going to face Mane?

                                  A tear was dropped from Johns eyes as he began to sob again. Even if Black Jack doesnt get to face Mane, he thought to himself. I cant help but thanking him for trying his best

                                  The others couldnt help but feel sad for John.

                                  Elsewhere, Mane smiled as his henchman, who was sitting next to him asked, Sir, now that Ketchum and Black Jack have drawn in this match, should we cancel your match?
                                  No, Mane replied. I have a better idea Ill challenge them both!

                                  His henchman became shocked at that announcement. Sir But why?? he asked.
                                  I like a little bit of challenge, Mane replied confidently. Hmhmhm

                                  The next day, an old janitor was sweeping around inside a corridor. The corridor he was sweeping was famously known as the Hoenn Leagues Hall of Fame. The janitor stopped to look at the photo that contained Ash and Black Jack and all the pokemon that they used in battle. Behind the photo was the cup that was given to the joint champions. I have never seen a match that was good as that, he said with a smile. And there wont be another one like it. He he.

                                  Next episode: Black Jack and Ash gets invited by Mane into his base for one last battle before Johns family and the legendary pokemon can be released. What does Mane have up his sleeve?
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                                  Old December 14th, 2004 (6:58 AM).
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                                    Episode 8: Two birds versus one stone

                                    Chapter 1

                                    It was a sunny morning and Black Jack was standing outside a luxury mansion. The mansion belonged to his brother John and he invited him to be a guest, along with Ash, Pikachu and others.

                                    It was nearly a week after he and Ash fought each other to determine the champion and Manes opponent for the freedom of either Johns family or the pokemon. It turned out that Black Jack and Ash came to a draw in the grand final match and they both became joint Hoenn League Champions. Even more good news was that Mane decided that both Black Jack and Ash can challenge him. Everyone was happy about that but Black Jack had his suspicions.

                                    Mane must have something up his dirty sleeve, setting up a two-on-one pokemon battle, Black Jack thought as he looked up into the blue sky. No matter what, Im the one whos gonna put him out of his misery.

                                    He had been standing outside of the mansion for quite sometime. One of the reasons why he was because he didnt want to disturb the others sleeping, he was also waiting for one of Manes henchmen to arrive.

                                    Black Jack, said a voice. Black Jack turned round to see the person catching his attention. It was Cassandra.
                                    Im just waiting for one of Manes bozos to come pick me up, Black Jack replied, as he knew what Cassandra was going to ask him.
                                    Arent you going to wait for Ash? Cassandra asked.
                                    If he comes late, thats his loss. I spotted him leaving earlier to go to the nearest pokemon center to check on his Meganium after what Salamence did.
                                    Treating Meganium like that wasnt really necessary.
                                    I know. But Ash needs to know about the cruelty of our upcoming battle like Mane showed us when he battled John.

                                    Whether Cassandra liked it or not, Black Jack made a good point. Both Ash and Black Jack love pokemon but with a difference. Ash trains his pokemon in a healthy kind of way: spending time with his pokemon, training them without hurting them, learning from them, etc. But Black Jack, he trains his pokemon in a harsh way because he takes battling more seriously than Ash, although Black Jack and his pokemon do share times of friendship bonding, as they like to fight a lot for fun, whether its against themselves or others.

                                    Hmm Im going to the pokemon center, Cassandra said.
                                    Suit yourself, Black Jack replied.

                                    Meanwhile, Ash, Pikachu, Lao Ping and Misty were walking to the pokemon center. Ash looked down in a sad manner.

                                    I knew that Black Jack wouldnt want to go easy on me, Ash said. But I never knew that he would go that far
                                    Pika pikachu, Pikachu said, comforting his human friend.
                                    I know, no one did, Lao Ping replied. I never thought that he would use such violence, even with his brothers family on the line.

                                    While Lao Ping was concerned about Black Jacks behaviour, Misty couldnt stop noticing Ashs sorry feelings about Meganium. Ash, are you okay? Misty asked. Meganiums going to be fine. You know that and I know that. Because she is strong, just like you.

                                    Ash smiled in response and said. Thanks, Mist.

                                    They arrived at the pokemon center, with Ash leading the way. Nurse Joy, Ash said as he made it to the desk. Hows my Meganium doing?
                                    Shes still recovering, Ash, the nurse replied. She still needs time.

                                    Ash remembered that since he had drawn with Black Jack in the grand final, Mane gave them both the opportunity to defeat him for the freedom of the pokemon and Black Jacks family in a two-on-one trainer battle. That match would happen on that very day.

                                    Can I see her? he asked.
                                    Sure you can, she replied as she granted them entrance.

                                    Ash and the others went into one of the rooms to see how Meganium was doing. She was wrapped in bandages, and she was heavily bruised caused by Salamence. Ash kneeled down to look at Meganiums sleepy face.

                                    Poor Meganium Misty said sadly.

                                    Meganium slowly opened her eyes to see Ash, her best friend and trainer. Meg she said weakly.
                                    Meganium, Ash said with a small smile. Are you okay, buddy?

                                    Meganium nodded her head slightly. Her face then showed that she realized something and tried to turn away from him, feeling rather ashamed of herself.

                                    Its okay, Meganium, Ash said. Its not your fault it was my fault Ive made a mistake
                                    Ash, you shouldnt blame yourself, Misty said.

                                    Ash remained silent. He remembered what Black Jack said regarding the match against Mane.

                                    -Flashback-

                                    Salamence dropped Meganium a hundred feet while flying in the air. Ash had a look of shock and fear in his eyes, so did everyone else.

                                    Now do you see how I battle other trainers? Black Jack shouted. I treat them with no mercy thats exactly what I plan to do when I face Mane!!

                                    -Flashback ended-

                                    Er Ash, Lao Ping said. If Meganium is going to stay here for the next few days, who is going to replace her?

                                    Meganium became shocked of what Lao Ping said. Meganium! she cried. She struggled to get out of bed, but every time she tried to move, she felt the aches and pains in her body. Ash and Pikachu hurried to calm her down.

                                    Meganium! Ash cried, getting her attention. I know how much you want to battle. But after what Black Jack has done to you, I want you to stay and rest. Even though you cant battle today, youll always be part of the team.

                                    Meganium felt happy when Ash mentioned those words as she nuzzled her head against his. Misty was also happy, as she felt a great bond between those two. Somehow, this made her feel that she had a completely different bond with him but that was also special.

                                    Suddenly, a loud thud can be heard from outside. Ash and the others ran to the entrance of the pokemon center. They saw Black Jack holding an unconscious man in a suit on his shoulder. Cassandra, May, Max and Brock were standing beside him.

                                    This brat thinks that he can take me to Mane without you, Ketchum, Black Jack complained as he dropped the man in the suit.
                                    Ash, hows Meganium doing? Brock asked worryingly.
                                    Not good, Ash replied. Meganium still needs to stay here for a few days.
                                    If Meganiums injured, Cassandra said. Why not use another pokemon?

                                    Ash looked at Black Jack, who had an evil smile one his face as he looked down on the man in the suit. Ash had one pokemon in mind, a pokemon who always had the mind to fight.

                                    Ash called Prof. Oak by videophone. After the Hoenn League tournament was finished, Professor Oak immediately went back to Pallet town along with Tracey.

                                    Hello, Professor, Ash said.
                                    Oh, hello Ash! Prof. Oak replied.
                                    Listen, Professor. I need a pokemon from you.
                                    Oh? Dont you already have six on you?
                                    Yeah, but after what happened to Meganium, she needs to stay here in the pokemon center for a few days.
                                    Oh, I see.
                                    So, can I get a pokemon from you?
                                    Alright, who do you need?
                                    Sceptile.
                                    Hmm yes, Sceptile will be fine. He was fully recovered yesterday, but since then he has been picking fights with the other pokemon, so I think it would be best that he would be sent to you.
                                    Great! Thanks, Professor.

                                    A few moments after getting Sceptile from Prof. Oak, he released him. Sceptile looked around and found that he was in the pokemon center. Great to see you again, Sceptile, Ash said happily.

                                    Sceptile turned his back on Ash, not wanting to look at him. Ash fully understood why Sceptile was being like this. Sceptile, Ash said. Im sorry for replacing you for Charizard, but I havent seen him for a long time, please try to understand.
                                    Pika pika! Pikachu cried trying to get Sceptile to listen to him.

                                    (Authors note: Another pokemon translation)

                                    Sceptiles eyes turned towards Pikachu.
                                    Cmon, Sceptile, Pikachu said. You dont know how much you mean to Ash.

                                    Sceptile remained silent, but he listened to Pikachu intently. Ash always gives you what you want. I know it was a bit hard on you not taking part in the grand final of the Hoenn League, but Ash hasnt seen Charizard for a while. Besides, the beatings you took in the first round werent helping you heal well.
                                    Sceptile smiled and said, Youre right, bud. Maybe I have been looking forward to it too much.

                                    Sceptile looked down in guilt. Charizard wasnt the only pokemon that Ash cared about. Sceptile himself, Pikachu, Heracross, Swellow, Bulbasaur, and all the other pokemon Ash has on him and back at Prof Oaks lab in Pallet Town.

                                    Sceptile turned round to face Ash and gave a thumbs up.

                                    (Authors note: Translation ended.)

                                    Ha! This is great! Great to have you back with us! Ash said.
                                    You had us worried there, Sceptile, Brock said.
                                    Suddenly, a fist came charging at the back of Sceptiles head. Sceptile confidently moved his head at a side to avoid the attack.
                                    Black Jack! Ash shouted. What are you doing?
                                    Just testing, Black Jack replied, as it was him who attacked Sceptile.

                                    Sceptile turned round to see Black Jack standing near him. Not bad, Black Jack said while smiling. I just hope youre good enough to battle Mane.

                                    Scept? Sceptile croaked.
                                    Pika pikachu, Pikachu replied, which meant, Ill explain everything.

                                    After some explanation, Sceptile understood why Black Jack and Ash needed his help at that very moment. Sceptile clenched his paw, as he couldnt wait to battle.

                                    Just one problem, Brock said. What about that guy?

                                    Black Jack grabbed the collar of the mans suit and began slapping him. Wake up, you dimwit! Black Jack shouted.
                                    Ow! Stop hitting me! cried the man in the suit.
                                    Take us to Mane! Now!
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                                    Old December 15th, 2004 (4:02 AM).
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                                      Chapter 2

                                      Back at Johns mansion, the man in the suit walked Ash and Black Jack to his car. This better not be a trap, Black Jack warned.
                                      Why would anyone set up a trap for this occasion? the man asked.
                                      Ill take my motorcycle, Black Jack said. Ill follow you from behind.
                                      Ill go with you, Ash said.
                                      Pikachu! Pikachu said.
                                      You two are very suspicious, the man said smiling.

                                      As the man got into the car, Black Jack, Ash and Pikachu got onto the motorcycle. The car drove off while they followed. Little did Ash and Black Jack knew that they were being spied upon.

                                      A helicopter was hovering high in the sky as the man driving it was looking down on them. Sir, he said, communicating into a walkie-talkie. Black Jack and Ash are following Johnson by motorcycle.
                                      Let them be, replied the man, who had a posh accent. Dont follow them in case they get suspicious. Return to base.
                                      Yes sir, replied the helicopter driver. Over and out.

                                      He drove the helicopter away from Johns mansion and into the direction of the base.

                                      John looked outside of the window and saw the helicopter that was spying on Black Jack and Ash flying away. Brock, Misty, Delia, Cassandra, her Gardevior and Lao Ping were also there. Im going there, he said.

                                      It wasnt long until Black Jack, Ash and Pikachu made it to a base, which was surrounded by a forest full of trees and bushes. This place looks familiar, Black Jack thought. As they got off the motorcycle, the man came out of the car. Welcome to one of Team Missiles headquarters, said the man.
                                      Team Missile? Black Jack asked curiously.
                                      Correct, a team of organised terrorists who steal pokemon and merchandise and sell them for money.
                                      Thats what Team Rocket does, Ash thought.
                                      Now proceed into the
                                      Hold it! interrupted a voice.

                                      Ash and Black Jacks friends came out from the bushes. The man was shocked seeing them. I didnt expect your friends to come here, he said. Under my masters orders, I will not allow anyone else but Ash Ketchum and Black Jack to enter.
                                      Ha! John said. This has everything to do with us, cos we are family!
                                      Your boss shouldnt worry about us! May continued. He should worry about Ash instead!
                                      Ahem! Black Jack coughed.
                                      And Black Jack
                                      We wont interfere, we wont even lift a finger, Lao Ping said confidently. Cos they are more than a match for him.
                                      Ash and Black Jack couldnt help but smile, appreciating the support theyre getting from their friends and families. Thanks, you guys, Ash said quietly as he looked down.
                                      Ready? Black Jack asked.
                                      Ready! Ash replied.
                                      Pika! Pikachu replied in a determined tone.

                                      Their friends gave their last words of encouragement as they entered the base. Suddenly, the door quickly shut behind Black Jack, Ash and Pikachu, sealing them in. There was only one path in front of them. The whole corridor was made of metal and electricity, like the corridors youd see in industrial places. As they walked down the corridor, a voice was heard from a hidden speaker.

                                      Good morning, Ash and Black Jack, said a man with a posh accent.
                                      Mane Black Jack snarled.
                                      Pi Pikachu! Pikachu cried angrily.
                                      And welcome to Team Missiles base. I know that Im scheduled to battle you in a two-on-one pokemon battle. But I also set up some challenges for you two, you know, so you two can warm up.
                                      Either that or Mane is trying to weaken us, Ash said.
                                      Now why would I do a thing like that? Mane asked.
                                      Cos youre a thieving scumbag? Black Jack asked in reply.
                                      Hmhm, Black Jack, you and your sarcasm, enjoy your training.

                                      They saw a huge room up ahead. As they entered, they looked around. The room made them looked like that they were inside a dome, big enough to fit a battlefield for pokemon battles. At the other end of the room was another corridor.

                                      Suddenly, a small but thundering earthquake was felt and heard. Ash and Pikachu cautiously looked round to see where the earthquake was coming from, while Black Jack stayed calm. Soon, an eight-foot muscular man came from the other side of the corridor.

                                      My name is Brickster Tomb! he shouted in a huge voice. Ive heard and seen a lot about you two. But to me, you two are not fit to become league champions, let alone beat the true master of strength like me!
                                      Huh! Who paid you to become a critic? Black Jack snarled.
                                      I know, the truth hurts, doesnt it? Brickster asked. Now which one of you two will battle me first?
                                      Hold on! Ash said. We dont know the stipulations of this match yet!
                                      Only one of you will battle me! If you win, you can continue to the next room. If you lose, and you will, you can get the boot out of this base and be the laughing stock of the pokemon world!
                                      Sounds good to me, Black Jack replied. Got a coin, Ketchum?
                                      Ash shrugged in response, meaning he has no money on him. I think I mustve some money at Johns place, he confessed.
                                      Only one thing for it. Rock, paper, and scissors it is.

                                      And they started playing that game. During twenty minutes of playing, they kept on getting a draw. Mane was watching them on a huge via a spy camera and was getting confused about the whole situation. Brickster was also getting confused until finally Black Jack won the match when he showed his hand in a form of a stone while Ash showed his in a form of some scissors.

                                      Looks like Ill be going first, said Black Jack confidently.
                                      Well use one pokemon each for this battle, Brickster said.
                                      Agreed, and since you want to see if Im good or not, Ill choose my pokemon first.

                                      Black Jack picked out a pokeball and tossed it. Time to whip some, Feraligatr! he cried.

                                      Feraligatr popped out of his pokeball and prepared himself ready for battle.

                                      Too bad you wont be able to beat my fighting pokemon, Brickster replied. Go! Machamp!

                                      Black Jack stood calm and confident with his arms folded. A Machamp, he said. All muscle, I bet his brain is made of muscle as well.
                                      No matter! Brickster shouted. Machamp will pound your Feraligatr and you all the way to oblivion!
                                      Then call your attack and find out.
                                      You asked for it! Machamp! Comet Punch!

                                      Machamp dashed at and swung many punches at Feraligatr but kept on missing as Feraligatr kept on dodging without moving from where he stood.

                                      Slowpoke, Black Jack said. Keep on swinging like that and Feraligatr might catch a cold.

                                      Machamp jumped away from Feraligatr, not knowing what to do after several of his punches missed.

                                      Machamp, Brickster yelled as he was sweating. High Jump Kick!

                                      Machamp leapt into the air and dive kicked at Feraligatr but Feraligatr and Black Jack saw it coming. Too predictable, Black Jack said. Feraligatr! Mega Punch attack!

                                      Feraligatr dodged Machamps attack and punched him in the gut. Machamp fell to the floor holding it.

                                      But how can this be!? Brickster yelled.
                                      You relied on nothing except physical strength and ruthless fighting, Ash replied, who was standing by the sideline. You forgot one small thing that would make a pokemon even stronger, and that is your heart connected to your Machamps.
                                      Not to mention other abilities and statistics like smarts, Black Jack continued, mocking his opponents. Speaking of ruthless and physical strength, Ill show you how Feraligatr fights his opponents! Feraligatr! Focus punch attack!

                                      Feraligatr ducked down while he charged himself up. Brickster and Machamp saw this as a chance to attack him, as they knew the weakness of the Focus Punch attack. The weakness was that no pokemon could move while charging up until they are fully powered up. Machamp! Brickster yelled. Mega Punch! Now!

                                      Machamp ran at Feraligatr to punch him, but surprisingly Feraligatr barely dodged out of the way and heavily punched Machmap in the gut again. This time the punch knocked him unconscious.

                                      NO! WHY! HOW COME! Brickster yelled as he saw his Machamp defeated, meaning that Black Jack and Feraligatr won the battle.
                                      Lets just say that I have my own ways of training pokemon, Black Jack said.

                                      Brickster fell on his knees in disbelief. No one has beaten me this easily before, he thought to himself.

                                      Black Jack looked at him with disappointment. Huh! Waste of time, Black Jack snarled quietly as he walked over to Brickster. He kneeled down and said. And yes, the truth does hurt.

                                      Black Jack picked himself up and looked at Ash. Cmon, Ketchum, he said. Another victim awaits us.

                                      Ash looked at Black Jack with mixture of feelings. Theres something weird about this guy, he thought to himself as they walked into the corridor.
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                                          Chapter 3

                                          As Black Jack and Ash walked down the corridor, Manes voice came on again. Congratulations, Black Jack, he said. For your victory over Brickster, though he can be a bit slow sometimes.

                                          Black Jack gave a small sjirachi at that remark.

                                          Now since Black Jack has participated in his battle, how about you take the next challenge, Mr. Ketchum?
                                          Huh! I thought fairness wasnt in your vocabulary, Ash replied. You captured a mans wife and daughter, challenged him in an unfair battle, set up a stipulation that no one was happy about and now youre trying to weaken us before we can take you on. What are you afraid of, Mane?
                                          Oh, nothing much, a few bug and ghost pokemon here and there. But let me give you a little tip about your upcoming battle, Mr. Ketchum. This trainer has met you on one but memorial occasion.
                                          Huh? Anything else?
                                          Pika? Pikachu wondered.
                                          Thats all I can give you for now. If I give you anymore, I might ruin the surprise, Mane said as he laughed.
                                          We will see who surprises whom, Mane!
                                          Haha! Enjoy your battle, Mr. Ketchum!

                                          As they finished talking, Black Jack couldnt help but seeing everything around him so familiar. Even Mane looked familiar to him the last time he saw him. Before he could think any further they entered into another room.

                                          The room looked exactly the same as it did before when Black Jack battled Brickster. In front of Ash and Black Jack, stood a middle-aged man wearing a lab coat. He was almost completely bald but he had ginger hair and moustache. Ash and Black Jack became shocked at the mans appearance.

                                          Nanba! they both cried.
                                          Pikachu! Pikachu cried.
                                          Hello, my young friends, the professor said. It has been a while.

                                          Huh! Black Jack thought. Somethings fishy here. Everything here looks like a Team Rocket base and Nanba is one of the professors of Team Rocket. Unless

                                          You may have beaten me last time, young one, Nanba said as he pointed at Ash. But not this time! Ill defeat you and finish you off for good!
                                          What have you got this time, Nanba? Ash demanded.
                                          Ill be pleased to answer that to you! Last time, you defeated Electabuzz who was boosted by the power of Lugias pure rage! This time, Ill be using both Lugia and Mewtwos pure rage to boost even more power!

                                          Pure rage, huh? Black Jack thought. Big mistake there, Nanba.

                                          Nanba picked a pokeball off his belt. With this kind of power at my disposal, you dont stand a chance! he said confidently as he tossed out his pokeball. Go! Electabuzz!

                                          Electabuzz popped out his pokeball and let out a large battle cry. He had a small gadget attached to his head.

                                          You still havent learned youre lesson! Ash yelled. Go! Pikachu!
                                          Pika! Pikachu cried as he ran into battle.

                                          Electabuzz! Use your raging Thunderpunch! Nanba ordered as he took out a controller.

                                          Electabuzzs fist glowed as he aimed it at Pikachu. Luckily, Pikachu barely dodged out of harms way, making Electabuzzs attack hit the floor instead, making a huge crack on the floor.

                                          Black Jack, who was observing the match, became amazed at Electabuzzs strength. Impressive, he thought.

                                          Pikachu! Ash yelled. Thunderbolt attack!

                                          Pikachu leapt into the air as he charged up his attack, and released it while giving out a large cry.

                                          A waste of energy! Nanba taunted. Electabuzz! Light Screen!

                                          Electabuzz created a glass like barrier to protect himself as the electric attack bounced off the other way.

                                          Ash saw that coming as he smiled. I knew that youd use that move! he said. Pikachu! Quick attack!

                                          What! Nanba cried, as Pikachu tackled the mid-section of Electabuzz, making him staggering backwards but he quickly recovered.

                                          Nanba growled in an annoyed tone. Electabuzz! Enraged Thuderbolt!

                                          Electabuzz charged up his electrical powers, and let out a huge shout as he released it, but Pikachu saw it coming and dodge out of the way.

                                          Electabuzz, we cannot be defeated this way! Nanba snarled as he pressed a button on the controller. Enraged Thunderpunch! Show him no mercy!

                                          Electabuzz kept on aiming his punches at Pikachu but kept on missing as Pikachu kept on dodging.

                                          Black Jack gave a small sjirachi and Nanba noticed it.
                                          Hey! Nanba said as he noticed. Whats so funny?
                                          Youve made a grave mistake. Even though that gadget powers up youre Electabuzz, you havent trained your pokemon properly, Black Jack replied. The chances of you winning this are zero.
                                          Well find out, wont we?
                                          Youve spent so much time on that thingamajig that you have been stuck with your old tactics and moves while Ash and Pikachu has gained experience as he learned other tactics and moves. All the moves that you and your Electabuzz has are Thunderpunch, Light Screen and Thunderbolt.

                                          Nanba was beginning to sweat as he heard Black Jacks theory. No matter, he yelled. Ill still finish that Pikachu and off and itll be game over for you two!

                                          As Nanba pressed another one of the buttons on his controller, the gadget on Electabuzzs head turned from blue to red, meaning the powers has increased. Electabuzz roared with anger. Electabuzz! Finish it now! Thunderbolt attack!

                                          As Electabuzz charged up his powers, Pikachu and Ash waited for Electabuzz to shoot out his attack so that Pikachu can dodge the attack. Just as Electabuzz was about to release his full power, the gadget on his head exploded! So did the controller in Nanbas hands! The devices couldnt control anymore of Electabuzzs power!

                                          Nanba screamed in shock as that happened. Electabuzzs felt dizzied by the explosion and his head was covered with burnt marks and dirt.

                                          Youve increased too much power that your little toys couldnt take anymore, Black Jack said. This is what happens when you dont train your Electabuzz properly.
                                          You also never believed in nothing but winning at all costs! Ash shouted. If you had trust in your pokemon, you dont need those stupid gadgets! Let me show how you can bring out a pokemons true power!

                                          Nanba had a frightened look on his face, as he knew what was coming. Pikachu! Ash cried. Iron Tail attack!

                                          Pikachus tail glowed as he swiped his tail at Electabuzzs weakened head, knocking him down. As Electabuzz slowly picked himself up, Ash called for another attack.

                                          Pikachu! Ash cried. Thunder attack now!

                                          Pikachu once again charged himself to his fullest. He then let out a large cry and he shot out his strongest attack, shocking Electabuzz and sending him flying, falling unconsciously on Nanba.

                                          Not again Nanba groaned and fainted with swirly eyes.

                                          Ash smiled for his victory with Pikachu. Like old times, eh, Pikachu? he asked.
                                          Pikapi! Pi Pikachu! Pikachu happily cried as he held up a V sign on his paws.

                                          Not bad, Ketchum, Black Jack commented. Not bad.

                                          He looked down on at the unconscious Nanba. He walked over to him and shook by the collar of his lab coat, waking him up.

                                          Nanba! Black Jack snarled. Why did you leave Team Rocket? Was it about the money?
                                          Its its a little confusing Nanba replied. There was this raid from a police force in one of our bases with Giovanni in it. After he was arrested, William Mane came took over as the new boss and changed the organisations name from Team Rocket to Team Missile.

                                          I knew I saw Manes face somewhere before, Black Jack thought. He was one of Giovannis assistants.

                                          Team Missile Ash thought deeply. With Mane as their new boss, they could be more trouble than Team Rocket. Mane may have really rare pokemon by his side, but we cannot be beaten! No matter what!

                                          After hearing everything Nanba said, Black Jack smiled. Night night, he said as he squeezed Nanbas shoulder to put him to sleep.

                                          Black Jack picked himself up and walked into the next corridor with Ash to find and battle their next opponent.
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                                          Old December 17th, 2004 (5:53 AM). Edited January 14th, 2005 by Legendary Trainer.
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                                            Chapter 4

                                            Black Jack, Ash and Pikachu were walking through another corridor. So thats why this place looks so familiar, Black Jack said. Nothing but Team Rocket scrap.
                                            Dont you mean Team Missile? asked a voice, who spoke through a hidden speaker. I thank you not to insult my lifes work that way.
                                            What about my brothers, Mane? Black Jack snarled in reply. Why cant you just do your own real work instead of taking others, like Giovannis?
                                            Excuse me, but I work real hard. Stealing, selling, advertising, those kind of things. Those things were pretty dull, so I wanted to get a promotion such as taking over the organisation, but Giovanni wouldnt let me have it, so I decided to play a little bit rough.
                                            So youre the one who phoned the police how surprising
                                            Youre lower than Giovanni ever was! Ash said.
                                            Oh, I wouldnt call that low, Mane replied. By the way, congratulations on your victory with Professor Nanba. And Black Jack was right, that Electabuzz was getting chubby. On your next challenge, itll involve you two to act as a team. And your opponents are very familiar to both of you.

                                            If Black Jack was once with Team Rocket, then he must know the two thats always causing me trouble, Ash thought.
                                            Lets see Black Jack thought, trying to remember if any Team Rocket grunts that were good teammates. Nope, cant think of one.
                                            Good luck on your next match, Mane replied.

                                            Black Jack and Ash entered the next room. It looked like the same room before as it also had the usual battlefield.

                                            Prepare for an impact of a trouble, said a womans voice.
                                            Make it an impact of a double, said a mans croaky voice.

                                            Two figures leapt out of nowhere and landed safely on the field. One of them was a blond woman who had a womans Team Rocket uniform on but without an R but with an M. Another one was a man with green hair, who had a mans uniform that had an M on as well.

                                            To infect the world with devastation
                                            To blight all peoples within every nation
                                            To denounce the goodness of truth and love
                                            To extend our wrath to the stars above
                                            Cassidy
                                            Butch
                                            Team Missile, circulating Earth all day and night
                                            Surrender to us now or youll surely lose the fight!

                                            Black Jack placed his hand on his face in embarrassment. Gaah! he thought. Another reason why I left whatever the heck they are!
                                            Cassidy and Butch! Ash shouted. Next to Jesse and James, I had a slight hunch it was you two!
                                            Pipikachu! Pikachu cried in frustration, seeing the evil duos faces.
                                            Life is full of surprises, kid, Cassidy replied. And you, Black Jack, its been a while.
                                            Dont talk to me, Black Jack replied in disgust. Lets start the battle, so I can whip Manes butt!
                                            Fine by us, Butch replied. We all use one pokemon each in a tag battle. At least this way we can finish you guys off before our lunch hour.
                                            Dont be so sure, replied Black Jack as he picked out his pokeball. And since you guys want to finish this match quickly, then take this!

                                            He tossed his pokeball and out popped Metagross! But neither Butch nor Cassidy were shocked to see it.

                                            Ash took out his pokeball and tossed it out. I choose you! Sceptile!

                                            Sceptile popped out of his pokeball and prepared for battle. Sceptile! the gecko pokemon cried.

                                            They have no clue of what strategy we have to get rid of their pokemon, Cassidy thought. We have the type advantages against theirs.

                                            She picked out a pokeball and tossed it out. Go! Nidoqueen!
                                            You too, Typhlosion! Butch yelled as he tossed out his.

                                            Both pokemon popped out of their pokeballs and yelled out their battle cry.

                                            The eyes of Black Jack and Ash turned to look at each other, knowing that to defeat the duo of Butch and Cassidy, theyre going to have to work as a team. They may have the type advantages against ours, Black Jack thought. But they wont be confident for long.
                                            I have tagged with other people, Ash thought. But Black Jack will be a whole new experience. Here goes

                                            Sceptile! he cried as he pointed at his opponents. Leaf Blade attack!

                                            Sceptile swung both his arms to make the leaves of his fly out and spin like ninja stars, aiming for both Nidoqueen and Typhlosion.

                                            Typhlosion! Butch yelled. Flamethrower attack!

                                            Typhlosion shot out a huge blast of flame at the leaves, burning them to crisp. The flame was reaching for Sceptile but he dodged out of the way. Ash smiled as he said, we have just taken a page of your book!
                                            What!? the Missile duo yelled.
                                            Metagross! Psybeam attack! Black Jack yelled.

                                            Metagross did as he was instructed as he shot out two powerful psybeams out of his eyes and it hit both pokemon of Butch and Cassidy, knocking them down.

                                            You see that!? Ash yelled. You two may have been battling as a tag team for so long, but Black Jack and I will show you the true meaning of teamwork!
                                            Pika! Pikachu cried as he clenched his paws.
                                            Hehe! Black Jack sjirachied. Ketchum couldve easily won the Hoenn League if it wasnt for me, but I can smash heads easily.

                                            Black Jack snapped his fingers as he continued saying, Just like that. Lights out. The confident smirk that he made turned serious. Now, while theyre down! he shouted. Metagross! Stomp attack!

                                            Metagross leapt into the air and his feet were about to land on the heads of both Tyrphlosion and Nidoqueen.

                                            Dodge the attack, Nidoqueen! Cassidy yelled.
                                            You too, Typhlosion! Butch yelled.

                                            Nidoqueen and Typhlosion rolled out of harms way as Metagrosss feet landed on the ground, which caused an earthquake, making the trainers and pokemon to lose their balance.

                                            Now, Metagross! Black Jack yelled. While everyones distracted, shoot out your Psybeams at Nidoqueen!
                                            Your overconfidence will be your loss, Butch replied. Tyhplosion! Flamethrower behind Metagross!

                                            Typhlosion shot out a lick of flame at the back of Metagross, causing major damage!

                                            Metagross! Black Jack and Ash cried.
                                            Pika!
                                            Scept!

                                            Sceptile! Ash cried. Use your Mega Punch at Typhlosion!

                                            Sceptile dashed towards Typhlosion to attack him with his Mega Punch.

                                            Too bad, Cassidy said confidently. Nidoqueen! Ice Beam!

                                            Nidoqueen shot out a powerful Ice Beam at Sceptile out of her horn, also causing major damage!

                                            No! Ash cried.

                                            Black Jack snarled at the fact that both pokemon that he was battling with suffered huge damages caused by Butch and Cassidys underhanded moves. Metagross and Sceptile were lying on the floor, desperately trying to get up.

                                            We told you that this will finish before the start of our lunch hour, Cassidy said. Nidoqueen! Freeze Metagross with your Ice Beam!

                                            Nidoqueen shot out another Ice Beam out of her horn, creating a huge iceberg around Metagross so that it wont be able to move. Black Jack snarled again in frustration.

                                            Butch and Cassidy then turned their attention to Sceptile, who was still trying to get up. Call yourself a champion now, kid? Butch asked. Typhlosion! Hyper Beam attack now!

                                            Typhlosion held back his head as he charged up his powers, with Sceptile still struggling to get to his feet, but suddenly he felt that his spirit was broken. Ash had his determined look in his eyes. Sceptile! Get up! You cant give up! he yelled.

                                            Typhlosion shot out his Hyper Beam attack at Sceptile. All Sceptile could do at that point was look at the attack coming to him.

                                            An explosion occurred upon impact. Thats it! Butch shouted as he moved his thumb across his throat. You two are done!

                                            As the dusts of the explosion cleared, it came a shock to everyone apart from Black Jack. Metagross was standing in front of Sceptile!

                                            What! Cassidy yelled. But that Metagross was frozen in that Iceberg!
                                            Metagross teleported out of there, Black Jack replied in an angry tone. Still using the two-on-one tactics I see! You two havent improved one bit since I last met you two!

                                            Metagross turned round to check on his teammate. Sceptile smiled as he gained back his fighting spirit thanks to the friendship of Ash, Pikachu, Black Jack and Metagross.

                                            Tag Teams arent about two guys picking on one when theres a chance, Ash shouted. You need to trust your team mates if you want to have any chance of winning!

                                            Speaking of two-on-one, Black Jack said. Metagross! Show them YOUR Hyper Beam attack!

                                            Butch and Cassidy and their pokemon noticed how angry Black Jack and Ash were as they began to have cold sweats. Metagross shot out two huge Hyper Beams out of its eyes at both Nidoqueen and Typhlosion, causing an explosion on impact.

                                            Sceptile jumped to his feet, ready to receive an attack order from Ash. He turned his head round to look at Ash and nodded. Ash nodded in response and yelled, Sceptile! Use your Revenge attack and get your own back!

                                            Sceptile dashed at the severely injured Typhlosion and Nidoqueen and knocked them into the air with a single but strong punch. They were sent flying until their backs hit the wall, falling down unconsciously. Butch and Cassidy screamed in disbelief.

                                            I cant believe we lost! Cassidy cried.
                                            Lost to a traitor and a stupid kid! Butch cried.
                                            Oh, cry somewhere else, you big babies! complained a familiar voice.
                                            Mane again! Ash cried as Butch and Cassidy walked away with shame.
                                            Pi Pikachu! Pikachu cried.
                                            Congratulations on your third and final challenge, you two, Mane said. Now you get to face me in a pokemon battle.
                                            Huh! You sound confident, regardless of what were gonna do to you, Black Jack said.
                                            Well, if you plan to ruin my plans for world domination, I wish you lots of success. Please proceed to the next and final room.

                                            Black Jack and Ash called back their pokemon and nodded to each other, signalling that ready to give Mane a beating of a lifetime.

                                            That wish is going to come true, Black Jack thought as he and Ash walked through the corridor. Were gonna do more than defeat you were gonna rip you apart!
                                            Watch yourself, Mane! Ash thought. Were not gonna lose to you never!

                                            Mane stood in a room similar to the one that Ash and Black Jack battled in and waited. If you two think you can walk in here and defeat me just like that, then youve underestimated my abilities youll see what I mean Hmhmhm

                                            Next episode: This is it! The final task for Ash and Black Jack! Do they have what it takes to defeat Mane and his controlled yet improved legendary pokemon? Find out next episode!
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                                            Old January 4th, 2005 (2:36 AM).
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                                              Chapter 1

                                              Black Jack and Ash arrived in another dome like room, only this time they have met the man they have to defeat to save everyone Mane.

                                              Mane applauded Black Jack and Ash for completing the challenges he set up for them. Bravo you two for getting this far, he said. Now, Im no fortune teller, but everythings turning out as I predicted.

                                              Did you also predict what Im going to do you after what you did, messing around with Johns family?

                                              All I can predict is that you two will be working for me.

                                              What? both Ash and Black Jack yelled.

                                              Beat me in this battle and Ill release everyone as promised, but fail and not only your family and pokemon will remain in their cells but you two will work for me!

                                              Black Jack smiled at Manes confidence. Ash couldnt help but being suspicious about Manes plans.

                                              Somethings wrong here! Ash said. Whats going on, Mane? You set this two-on-one handicap trainer match and you seem confident regardless of what were going to do to you!

                                              Ash, Mane replied. You are so suspicious. I just like a little bit of challenge, thats all.

                                              Enough secrets, Mane! What have you got planned for this battle?

                                              Lets just say that I have been training my pokemon, yknow, to toughen them up a little bit.

                                              Black Jack suddenly became suspicious upon hearing that. I doubt that, he thought. He must be scheming something.

                                              So are we ready to battle? Mane asked. Or are we going to have lunch?

                                              Black Jack suddenly felt something inside his head, as he smiled sadistically. I just need to do a few moves, Mane, he said. To teach you a lesson you will never forget!

                                              Well teach him something alright! Ash said. Well show you why you dont set up a two-on-one matches, especially against us!

                                              Outside the base, a huge Meowth balloon was hovering over it. Inside the balloon basket were a man and a woman in their Team Rocket uniforms and a Meowth.

                                              So dis is da place where dat twerp and Black Jack went to, the Meowth said as he looked at the location.

                                              The man looked at the base and became shocked at what he saw. Jesse! he cried. Come and look at this! They stole the Team Rocket designs and made a base of their own! Only they changed the letter R to M!

                                              What! Out of the way, James! the woman cried as she shoved him out of the way. She too became shocked at what she saw. I dont believe it! Well show them that they cant take Team Rockets looks! Lets teach them a lesson!

                                              Wot? Meowth cried. Just da three of us?

                                              Yes! Jesse yelled. And along the way, we can steal those legendary pokemon back to the boss!

                                              Dat one I like!

                                              The three gathered round as they lowered the balloon into a nearby space of the forest. Go! Team Rocket! they cried as a Wobbuffet popped out of Jesses pokeball and he cried, Wobbuffet!!

                                              Back to the started battle, Black Jack decided to start as he picked out a pokeball. Ill choose first! Go, Nidoking!

                                              He chucked out the pokeball and Nidoking came out as he gave out a loud roar. Pretty scary, for some people, Mane said. I think I choose mine second, just to be fair.

                                              He picked out a pokeball out of the briefcase, held by his henchman who was standing near him. Go! Suicune! he cried as he chucked out his pokeball.

                                              Black Jacks eyes narrowed upon looking at Suicune in battle. Ash picked out his pokeball. Sceptile! he cried. I choose you!

                                              He chucked his pokeball out and Sceptile popped out, yelling out his battle cry.

                                              This is it, Ketchum, Black Jack said as he smiled. This is a good chance to see if we deserved to win that tournament.

                                              You got that right, Ash replied. Cos Mane is using some fancy gadget to catch and command those pokemon.

                                              How true, Mane thought to himself. And I got more tricks up my sleeve.

                                              Suicune! he cried. Aurora Beam!

                                              Suicune opened its mouth and shot out a shining beam out of its mouth but Nidoking and Sceptile managed to dodge out of the way.

                                              Nidoking! Black Jack yelled. Tackle attack!

                                              Nidoking aimed his horn and charged at Suicune but it leaped into the air to dodge it. Suddenly, Sceptile jumped into the air to grab Suicune to bring it down.

                                              Oh no! Mane cried in a fake worried tone. I had no idea your double teaming techniques would be too much for me!

                                              Ash gnashed his teeth, as he knew that Mane was making fun of them. Dont let him anger you, Ketchum, Black Jack said. Anger can sometimes cause you to make a mistake. One wrong move can cost you everything you worked so hard for.

                                              Ash understood everything he said. Okay yeah!

                                              Sceptile! he cried. Hold Suicune for Nidokings attack!

                                              Sceptile held tightly around Suicunes middle as he waited for Nidoking to attack. Nidoking! Black Jack cried. Seismic Toss!

                                              Nidoking quickly grabbed Suicune. He and Sceptile looked at each other and smiled, as they predicted they were going to do some heavy damage on Suicune.

                                              They both slammed Suicune on its back and then threw it up in the air. Nidoking pointed upwards, signalling that he wanted to slam Suicune while airborne. Sceptile crouched down and laid his paws out. Nidoking stepped on Secptiles paws and Sceptile quickly lifted his paws while Nidoking jumped off it, giving Nidoking extra height to leap.

                                              Suicune! Mane shouted. Counter with your Ice Beam!

                                              Just when Nidoking was about to grab Suicune, it recovered as it spun round in mid-air and shot out a huge Ice Beam out of its mouth. The attack, much to the shock of his friends, caught Nidoking.

                                              Nidoking wasnt frozen, but he fell hard on his back and started shivering like mad. Black Jack ran over to him to check on him. When Black Jack touched him, his eyes widened with shock as he felt the coldness of his body. He looked at Mane with narrowed eyes.

                                              Youve powered them up with those gadgets, didnt you, Mane? Black Jack snarled.

                                              Correct, Mane replied. Youve won todays star prize, a one-way ticket to your defeat.

                                              So thats it! Ash yelled. Well, youre going to have to keep that prize for yourself.

                                              Black Jack down at Nidoking with concern as he took out his pokeball. Return, Nidoking! he said. He picked out another pokeball. Feraligatr! he cried. Go for it!

                                              Feraligatr came out of his pokeball and let out a loud roar.

                                              A water type versus water type? Mane asked. This should be very interesting.

                                              You can either shut your mouth or I can shut it for you! Black Jack snarled. Go, Feraligatr! Slash attack!

                                              Guys! Wait! Ash yelled. Dont run up to it!

                                              Suicune! Mane cried. Ice Beam attack!

                                              Too late! Ash thought.

                                              Suicune opened its mouth to shoot out another Ice Beam. But to its surprise, Feraligatr spat out a small spit on its face, distracting it while Feraligatr scratched its face and created scars on it.

                                              Mane was shocked of Feraligatrs trickery. How dare you spit at such a beautiful pokemon! Mane shouted angrily. How insulting! Tackle him, Suicune!

                                              Suicune ran up to Feraligatr and rammed him until Feraligatrs head and back hit the wall, making him slightly dizzy.

                                              Sceptile! Ash yelled. Razor Leaf attack!

                                              Sceptile leapt into the air and shot out a number of leaves out of his arms like a ninja that throws his ninja stars.

                                              Suicune! Mane cried. Use Ice Beam on Sceptile!

                                              Suddenly a spit reached Suicunes face, making it distracted while the leaves hit it numerous times. What! Mane yelled. Whats happening?

                                              Feraligatr! Black Jack yelled. Dynamic Punch!

                                              A clenched blue paw came rushing in on Suicunes face. That punch belonged to none than Feralitrs. After the thunderous impact for an attack, Suicune became knocked out.

                                              No! Mane yelled. Impossible! I cant believe you two would hurt my beloved Suicune that way! You two are so mean!

                                              I am angry that Mane hurt Johns family, Black Jack thought. But that big baby should calm down after that loss.

                                              Fine! Mane shouted loudly as he called back Suicune. I estimated you two! Fun times are off!

                                              Get ready, Ketchum, Black Jack said.

                                              You got it, Ash replied as he nodded.

                                              Go! Zapdos! Mane yelled as he chucked his chosen pokeball.

                                              Zapdos popped out of its pokeball as it gave a loud screech.

                                              Sceptile! Razor Leaf! Ash commanded.

                                              Feraligatr! Water Gun! Black Jack commanded.

                                              Both pokemon aimed their attack at Zapdos. But Zapdos dodged the attack with its lightning speed and dodged every attack thrown.

                                              Zapdos is too fast in mid-air! Ash yelled.

                                              Feraligatr looked back at Black Jack and nodded to him, agreeing with Ash.

                                              Good idea, cos this aint working Black Jack said as he took out his pokeball. Feraligatr return!

                                              Feraligatr returned while Sceptile was still trying to hit Zapdos with his Razor Leaf.

                                              Zapdos! Mane yelled. Drill Peck attack!

                                              Ash took out his pokeball and was about to call back his Sceptile but it was too late, as Zapdos knocked Sceptile away until his back violently hit the wall. Ash and Pikachu ran to check on him.

                                              Sceptile! Ash cried. Sceptile! Wake up!

                                              Pikachu! Pikachu cried.

                                              Scpetile struggled to pick himself up but every time he tried to, he kept on falling down. Sceptile, Ash said. Its going to be okay you need to rest.

                                              Sceptile shook his head sideways, which meant no.

                                              I know how much you love battling, Ash said. And I know that you know that there are lives at stake, I understand that. But I cant let you risk yourself anymore because you are one of my best friends and no one wants to be saved that way.

                                              Sceptile looked up at Ash and smiled. Ash smiled back and got him to return back into his pokeball.

                                              How sweet, Mane commented. Pity that you two have five pokemon each left.

                                              That makes it ten in total, Black Jack said. Dont be too confident, you have five pokemon left yourself.

                                              I never knew that you were good at maths.

                                              Since we cant battle you from the grounds, Black Jack said as he took out another pokeball. Well battle you in mid-air!

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                                                Chapter 2

                                                Jesse, James and Meowth were sneaking around the Team Missile base to find the rare pokemon. Their backs were against a wall near a corner.

                                                Hey, Jess, Meowth whispered. Found anyone yet?

                                                Jesse spotted a man in a lab coat walking towards them from around the corner.

                                                Spotted one! Jesse whispered back in reply.

                                                As the man in the lab coat walked passed, Jesse hit him on a head with a huge paper fan, knocking him out.

                                                She searched through the lab coat and found the mans ID card, meaning that theyll be able to get through any door.

                                                We did it! James said excitedly.

                                                We? Jesse said as her eyes narrowed.

                                                Back at the battle, Mane knocked out Black Jacks Nidoking and Ashs Sceptile while they knocked out his Suicune. At that moment, Manes Zapdos was on the battlefield.

                                                Looks like Mane has used this gadget to boost up the speed of his Zapdos, Black Jack said. Well have to use our flying pokemon to beat that thing.

                                                Good idea, Ash replied. Swellow! I choose you!

                                                He threw out his pokeball and Swellow flew out of it. Swellow! Swellow!

                                                Salamence! Black Jack yelled. Time to fly!

                                                He chucked out his pokeball and Salamence flew out giving out a loud roar.

                                                Salamence! Flamethrower attack! Black Jack yelled.

                                                Salamence breathed in as he charged up his attack, and then he shot out a huge lick of flame directly.

                                                Zapdos! Mane yelled. Quick attack!

                                                Zapdos quickly dodged the attack and zoomed directly at Salamence, but the dragon saw it coming and barely dodged out of the way.

                                                Swellow! Ash yelled. Wing attack!

                                                Salamence! Black Jack yelled. Tackle it!

                                                Swellow teamed up to take down Zapdos with their combined attacks. Zapdos! Mane yelled. Drill peck!

                                                Zapdos began to spin round, and flew twice as fast as the two attacking pokemon, aiming the attack at them. Its attack hit them both simultaneously and caused a lot of damage.

                                                Salamence and Swellow staggered after the impact. Zapdos is quite a speedster, wouldnt you say, you two? Mane asked. Next to Nanbas Electabuzz, your pokemon look a little chubby as well.

                                                Black Jack smiled confidently. Youre reminding me of Nanba right now, Mane, he said. You spent so much time with your machines that you made your training skills a flat line. And theres a down side about those microchips, even though they increase your pokemons powers, they have no control of their will because of the mind controlling ability of those chips and you know what than means.

                                                Mane giggled. Maybe, just dont forget whos using the legendary pokemon. Zapdos! Thundershock attack!

                                                Zapdos shot the electric attack at Swellow.

                                                Swellow! Ash yelled, as he knew the attack was coming for his pokemon. Agility and Quick attack!

                                                Swellow dodged the attack and at the same time aimed his attack at Zapdos, which the same as Zapdoss when he used Drill Peck attack. The move connected, and Zapdos was sent quite a distance away but managed to regain its balance as it kept on flying to avoid hitting its back against the wall.

                                                Surprised, Mane? Ash asked. Technology is not the way to show a pokemons true power!

                                                Swellow has weakened Zapdos and it is close to that wall, Black Jack thought as he looked at Ash, who also looked back. Now its time to smash!

                                                Swellow! Ash yelled. Sky attack!

                                                Swellow glowed as he flew directly at Zapdos at meteor speed. But Zapdos barely dodged the attack, but Swellows attack was a decoy for Salamences attack as he dived down on Zapdos!

                                                Salamence! Body Slam attack! Black Jack yelled.

                                                Salamence caught Zapdos and aimed its head towards the floor slamming it. Zapdos became knocked out after that thunderous impact!

                                                No! Mane cried. My poor Zapdos!

                                                It wasnt even yours to begin with, Black Jack said. No one can own any pokemon!

                                                You just gave pokemon training a bad name, Mane, Ash yelled. To battle, you cannot force pokemon into it, youll have to treat them with the respect they deserve!

                                                Just save your breath for the rest of the battle, Mane said as he called back Zapdos. For I have big surprises for you two.

                                                Ash and Black Jacks eyes narrowed in suspicion, not knowing what kind of pokemon Mane has up his sleeve. Go, Pokeball! Mane cried as he tossed it out.

                                                A rainbow-bird-like pokemon popped out of its pokeball with Black Jack and Ash staring in awe. HO-OH!? they cried.

                                                Yes, quite a surprise, isnt it? Mane replied. Ho-oh! Flamethrower!

                                                Ho-oh shot a huge lick of flame out of its beak. Salamence and Swellow barely avoided the attack.

                                                Swellow! Ash yelled. Retaliate with your quick attack!

                                                Swellow did as he was instructed as he dived directly at Ho-oh. The move hit Ho-oh in the midsection, Swellow quickly moved away from him.

                                                Now, Salamence! Black Jack yelled. Hyper Beam attack!

                                                Salamence quickly shot out a huge beam of energy directly at Ho-oh. Counter with your Fire Blast, Ho-oh! Mane yelled.

                                                Ho-oh quickly shot out a huge fire blast, which showed a Chinese symbol.

                                                Both attacks connected. Salamence, using his Hyper Beam attack, struggled to push the Fire Blast attack away. Swellow! Ash yelled. Help Salamence out! Use Sky attack!

                                                As Swellow dived down towards the two strong attacks, he glowed vigorously and collided with them. But instead of all three attacks exploding, Swellow used all of his strength to push the Fire Blast attack towards Ho-oh, with the help of Salamences Hyper Beam. The was a blinding explosion on impact, as all three attacks zoomed in on Ho-ohs midsection, much to the trainers surprise.

                                                After the impact, Swellow and Ho-oh fell to the floor. Ash and Pikachu ran over to Swellow to see if he was seriously hurt.

                                                Swellow! Ash cried.

                                                Pikachu! Pikachu cried.

                                                Swellows just unconscious, Black Jack said. Taking three strong attacks has taken a lot out of him.

                                                I agree, Ash said. Swellow, return.

                                                Swellow returned back to his pokeball. As Ash and Black Jack looked at Ho-ohs direction, the legendary bird had bruises and dirt all over its body, but its face showed no expressions of pain as it began fly up again.

                                                Its still there? Ash asked in a shocked tone. How come?

                                                Its the microchip on one of the parts of its body, Black Jack replied.

                                                Why of course, Mane said. Ho-ohs a legendary pokemon, yknow.

                                                Ho-oh must by a very strong pokemon next to Lugia in the orange islands, Ash thought. I just hope that Mane hasnt caught him.

                                                Ash picked out another pokeball off his belt. Charizard! he yelled. I choose you!

                                                Charizard came out of his pokeball and gave out a loud roar. Salamence flew down and glanced at him, not forgetting his defeat in the final against him. Ash and Black Jack noticed that their pokemon saw each other as rivals.

                                                Both dragon-like pokemon looked at the legendary pokemon, Ho-oh, and decided to put their rivalry aside as they flew high in the air. They were so high up that they wouldnt be able to hear their trainers instructions. With instructions or not, Black Jack and Ash had faith in their pokemon.

                                                Both Charizard and Salamence flew directly towards Ho-oh and shot out their Flamethrower attacks at it. Ho-oh managed to dodge the attack quite confidently, as it flew upwards.

                                                Both Charizard and Salamence looked at each other and with determination. Salamence shot another flamethrower at Ho-oh, who confidently dodged the attack again. But that was a decoy as Charizard flew directly at it and punched it directly in the face.

                                                Ho-oh spun round uncontrollably as Salamence dashed at it and tackled it in the right wing. As Ho-oh finished spinning around, Salamence and Charizard dashed towards it to make their final attack on it. But it shot out a huge Hyper Beam at the shocked Salamence. Seeing the danger, Charizard shoved Salamence out of the way and got hit instead.

                                                CHARIZARD! Ash cried as Charizard fell to the floor.

                                                PIKA! Pikachu cried.

                                                Salamence continued the attack that he and Charizard thought of earlier shoved Ho-oh down until it crashed on the ground.

                                                Mane let out a huge scream with shock and disbelief at the fact that another of his pokemon being defeated. No! He cried. This cant truly be happening!

                                                Salamence then flew over to check on his rival and friend. Charizard, despite the pains and bruises on parts of his body, quickly picked himself and gave out a loud roar, knowing that world history has been made a Charizard and a Salamence took down a legendary pokemon, Ho-oh. But suddenly, he felt a bit disappointed as he remembered that Ho-oh was being brain controlled by a microchip.

                                                Seeing that, Ash was relieved that Charizard was still able to stand up, even after the Hyper Beam attack by Ho-oh.

                                                Those two have proven worthy of becoming Team Missile soldiers, Mane thought. I must make a deal with them.

                                                Oh, boys, he called out. Why dont we end this nonsense battling and you two come and work for me. I promise a good maximum wage.

                                                Black Jack and Ash looked sternly at Mane, letting Mane know what that meant without saying a word.

                                                Alright, five thousand, final offer.

                                                Fat chance, Black Jack snarled in reply.

                                                What part of no dont you understand? Ash said.

                                                Fine, Mane replied back. You two will be working for me anyway. Its only a matter of time, you two. HAHAHA!

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                                                Old January 6th, 2005 (3:27 AM).
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                                                  Chapter 3

                                                  Cmon, Mane! Ash shouted. Any more tricks up your sleeve?

                                                  So far, Ash and Black Jack knocked out three out of the six pokemon that Mane was using, while Mane defeated three of the heroes combination of twelve. Ash had his Charizard on the field while Black Jack had Salamence.

                                                  I wouldnt call them tricks, Mane replied. But this pokemon may surprise you. Go! Pokeball!

                                                  He chucked out another pokeball and out popped the legendary silver bird pokemon Lugia!


                                                  No! Ash thought. Not Lugia as well.

                                                  Pika! Pikachu gasped.

                                                  Another tough pokemon, Black Jack thought. A tough pokemon controlled by an F graded trainer.

                                                  Beautiful, isnt it? Mane said.

                                                  How did you capture it? Ash demanded. I hope its not from the Orange islands.

                                                  Im sorry to disappoint you, Mr. Ketchum, but it is. But dont worry, I was well aware of this prophecy and I heard that you were involved in it. Arent you going to say hello to your friend?

                                                  Ash looked at Lugia worryingly, but he also felt angry at the fact that Mane knew some things about him. Does that mean that Mane has Ashs trainer skills as data?

                                                  Black Jack didnt looked half surprised. It would be obvious to him that Mane does have data of his trainer skills due to the fact that he used to work for Team Rocket, which was changed to Team Missile.

                                                  Cmon, Mane! Black Jack said. Show us your worst!

                                                  As long as you have your overconfidence, Black Jack, Mane said. Youre your own worst enemy. Lugia! Aeroblast!

                                                  Lugia flew high in the air and shot out a bright yellow beam at Salamence and Charizard, but they managed to dodge the attack. The blast hit the floor, causing an explosion that knocked Black Jack off his feet and fell hard to the floor.

                                                  Charizard, Salamence, Ash and Pikachu saw what happened and looked at Black Jack with concern. Black Jack! Ash cried. Are you okay?

                                                  Im fine! Black Jack replied as he quickly got back up. But if I did get hit, I wouldve been knocked out!

                                                  He angrily looked at Mane, getting the feeling that Mane wanted Lugia to attack him on purpose. What? Mane asked as he shrugged. It was an accident.

                                                  Salamence, attack! Black Jack yelled. Hyper Beam!

                                                  Salamence felt the anger within Black Jack, which made him angry as well. He gathered up his energy and blasted a huge white beam at Lugia

                                                  Meanwhile, somewhere inside the base, Jesse, James and Meowth were walking around corridors looking for the door that will lead them to find rare pokemon. Somehow, they noticed that everything around them looked exactly the same.

                                                  Not only did they steal the Team Rocket base look, they copied the colour of the inside our base! Jesse growled.

                                                  Well, da people around here arent decorators, Meowth said.

                                                  Were not expert ourselves, yknow, James continued.

                                                  A Wobbuffet popped out of nowhere. Wobba Wobbuffet!

                                                  They found a door and opened it using the security card. They entered a room where there were a lot monitors viewing different rooms. There was also a computer. One of them showed Black Jack and Ash battling Mane with pokemon. The other showed legendary pokemon stuck in their cells in another room. Two other monitors showed a woman and a child stuck in their cells but in different rooms.

                                                  Interesting, Jesse said. James, try to look for the code that will break the pokemon out of their cells.

                                                  At lightning speed, James replied as he immediately sat at the computer and started typing on the keyboard.

                                                  Meowth, make sure that the cameras have changed views.

                                                  Im on it!

                                                  Meowth ran over to the monitors to switch control of the cameras.

                                                  Back at the battle

                                                  Salamence shot out his Hyper Beam attack, but Lugia barely dodged the attack. Charizard shot his flamethrower but that missed as well.

                                                  Both pokemon kept on shooting their attacks, but Lugia dodged each and everyone of them. This is getting a little bit boring, Mane said after he yawned. Lugia, blow Charizard away with your Hyper Beam attack.

                                                  Lugia charged up his powers as a small bright yellow began to form in his mouth. He then shot out a huge beam and it was coming for Charizard. But Salamence saw it coming and flew to protect Charizard from harm, getting caught in the beam himself.

                                                  Salamence! No! Black Jack cried as the attack exploded upon impact on the blue dragon. Salamence fell while growling softly, which meant, Jack, I believe in you.

                                                  Salamence became unconscious when he crashed to the floor. Charizard flew back to the ground and landed safely on his feet to check on his friend and rival. How splendid, two arch-rivals have now become best of friends, Mane said.

                                                  Unlike you, we have friends, Ash replied.

                                                  Salamence, return! Black Jack said as he held out a pokeball. Salamence returned back to his pokeball and Black Jack took out another. Metagross! Its your turn!

                                                  Black Jack tossed out another pokeball and Metagroos popped out, yelling out his battle cry.

                                                  A pokemon that cant fly? Mane criticised. Looks like Charizard is battling alone on this occasion.

                                                  Huh! Black Jack replied with a smile. Why use one hyper beam attack at a time when you could use two? Metagross! Show them your Hyper Beam attack!

                                                  Metagross aimed his eyes at Lugia and shot out two huge energy beams out of his eyes. But Lugia dodged out of the way.

                                                  Charizard! Ash cried. Tackle attack!

                                                  Charizard flew directly at Lugia and tackled him in the midsection. Lugia retaliated by knocking Charizard down with its Wing attack. But Charizard recovered and countered back with his Flamethrower attack.

                                                  Lugia screamed as he felt the scorching pain on his weakened midsection.

                                                  Metagross! While hes distracted, Black Jack yelled. Hyper Beam attack!

                                                  Metagross aimed his eyes at Lugia again and blasted out his Hyper Beams again. This time, the move did make contact and caused another explosion on impact. Lugia unconsciously fell to the floor.

                                                  Im sorry, Lugia Ash whispered in a sad tone.

                                                  Thank you said a mysterious voice.

                                                  Ash was surprised at that point, but he finally figured out that it was Lugia talking to him in spirit.

                                                  No! Mane cried. Not my beloved Lugia as well!

                                                  Four down, two to go, Ash said with a smile.

                                                  Dont get too cocky, Ketchum, Black Jack warned. Manes using the legendary pokemon in this battle.

                                                  Right, I almost forgot, Mane said sarcastically. Say hello to Rayquaza! Its time, Rayquaza!

                                                  Mane tossed out another pokeball. Rayquaza popped out and gave a loud roar.

                                                  This isnt good, Ash thought.

                                                  Charizard! Ash yelled. Flamethrower!

                                                  Metagross! Black Jack yelled. Psybeam attack!

                                                  Both pokemon repeatedly shot out their attacks, but Rayquaza easily dodged each one of them.

                                                  Hold still, you giant worm! Black Jack snarled.

                                                  Dont them anger you, Black Jack, Ash said with a smile. Black Jack smiled back at him, remembering that he said that earlier. Ash was now giving him some lectures.

                                                  Charizard! Ash yelled. Mega Punch attack!

                                                  Charizard flew directly towards Rayquaza, aiming his clenched paw at its face. Rayquaza! Mane shouted. Slash attack!

                                                  The green dragons claws were coming down on Charizard but he dodged the attack as he punched Raquaza in face, flying passed him.

                                                  Metagross, Psybeam attack! Black Jack yelled. Metagross wasted no time aiming and shot out two Psybeams out of his eyes. Rayquaza shook off his dizziness and saw the attacks coming at it.

                                                  Charizard! Ash yelled. Mega Punch again!

                                                  Charizard, again, flew towards it again. Let me pull another stunt of my own, Mane said. Rayquaza, counter attack!

                                                  Rayquaza used its claws to knock the Psybeam away from him, making the attack towards Charizard. His eyes widened as he saw the attack coming towards him. Charizard! Ash cried. Dodge it!

                                                  But it was too late, as Charizard was hit by the attack and suddenly became dizzy. Charizard! Ash cried worryingly.

                                                  Metagross! Black Jack yelled. Help Charizard out! Hyper Beam attack now!

                                                  Metagrosss eyes glowed, as it was about to fire. Im afraid not, Mane replied. Rayquaza, Extreme Speed.

                                                  Rayquaza flew directly at Metagross faster than a speed of sound, knocking him down and stopping his attack. No! Black Jack yelled.

                                                  Now get Charizard, Rayquaza! Mane yelled. The legendary dragoon flew towards the confused Charizard and knocked him down to the floor. The impact on the floor was so hard that it sounded like a rock smashed into pieces.

                                                  Charizard, No! Ash cried as he and Pikachu ran over to him. Are you okay?

                                                  Pika? Pikachu cried in concern.

                                                  The red fiery lizard couldnt answer, as it was unconscious. Ash got him to return to his pokeball. He then stared angrily at Mane, for all the bad things he has done while Mane smiled confidently at Metagross who was being stalked by Rayquaza.

                                                  Finish Metagross off, Rayquaza Mane said. Hyper Beam attack.

                                                  Cmon, Metagross, get up! Black Jack yelled as Rayquaza was charging his attack.

                                                  Suddenly, a Snorlax grabbed hold of its tail, stopping it in its tracks to attack Metagross. That Snorlax belonged to none other than Ash.

                                                  Rayquaza looked back at Snorlax and shot out another Hyper Beam attack, but he dodged out of the way.

                                                  Rayquaza turned his attention back at Metagross, but what it saw was two Hyper Beams coming directly at him, which caused an explosion on impact.

                                                  GROSS! Metagross yelled triumphantly. He was the one that shot out the beams while Snorlax distracted Rayquaza.

                                                  So, Mane, Black Jack said. How does it feel to be cheated?

                                                  Its not fair! Mane cried in disbelief. He then started to get angry. Now Im really mad! This is the pokemon that no one can defeat!

                                                  Mane chucked out his sixth and last pokeball. The pokemon inside it was Mewtwo!

                                                  Black Jack and Ash had determined look on their faces. As much as they dont want to hurt anymore just to save the ones they love, they had no choice but to battle their friend.

                                                  I was afraid that he would use him, Ash said.

                                                  I bet Mewtwo prefers to be beaten like a punch bag by us than to be a slave to Mane, Black Jack replied. So no worries there.

                                                  Dont call Mewtwo my slave, Mane said confidently. He is my pet. You two wont be my slaves either after this battle, oh no, you two will be working as my free workers!

                                                  Next episode: Mane is now on his last pokemon, Mewtwo! But Mewtwos powers have increased to take out any living pokemon! Can Metagross and Snorlax take him out (or at least weaken him) to save everyone?
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                                                  Old January 7th, 2005 (1:48 AM). Edited January 20th, 2005 by Legendary Trainer.
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                                                    Episode 10: Final round

                                                    Chapter 1:

                                                    Ash and Black Jacks friends were standing outside the Team Missile base. Each of them had their hands on top of each others, praying in their hearts and minds that Black Jack and Ash would beat Mane to free Johns family and the pokemon.

                                                    Back at the battlefield inside the base, Black Jacks Metagross was on the field, so was Ashs Snorlax. Mane had only one pokemon left on the field, the most rare and powerful pokemon of all Mewtwo.

                                                    Mewtwos clenched paws were shaking and he was sweating with a lot of pressure. Black Jack and Ash noticed and realised that Mewtwo was trying to fight off the power of the microchip that was attached somewhere on his body.

                                                    Dont worry, Mewtwo, Black Jack thought. Well help you out.

                                                    Snorlax, return! Ash cried holding out a pokeball.

                                                    After Snorlax returned back to his pokeball, Ash took out another pokeball and tossed it out. Tauros! I choose you!

                                                    Tauros popped out of his pokeball and yelled out his battle cry. Black Jack looked at Tauros and wondered if he was strong enough to take down Mewtwo. Tauros may be a strong pokemon, he thought. But it would take more than him to take down Mewtwo. I just hope Ash knows that but at least wed be able to weaken him first.

                                                    Ash met Mewtwo on two occasions. The first time Ash met Mewtwo, Mewtwo had the power to destroy the entire world but Ash made him saw the error of his ways when he sacrificed himself to stop him and Mew fighting.

                                                    The second time Ash met Mewtwo, he promised to help him protect his clones from Giovanni. In the process, Mewtwo saved Pikachu from danger and Ash saved him in return. At the end of that event, Mewtwo was grateful for Ash saving his life and saw that he also lived in this world.

                                                    Black Jack also met Mewtwo on two occasions but at different times. When he was a Team Rocket grunt, he met Mewtwo in some kind of armour. They had a little conversation about their former boss, Giovanni and his thoughts about Pokemon. Black Jack had a strong feeling inside him that Pokemon shouldnt be slaves to humans.

                                                    The second time that Black Jack met Mewtwo, he challenged him into a pokemon battle with a bit of a twist. If either trainer ran out of pokemon, they would have to participate in the battle as well. In the process, they both got engaged in a fight to see who was the strongest out of both of them. After a hard and vicious battle, the contest ended in a draw. After some rest, they found out they had to defend themselves against a group of people in black clothing. The group was defeated, but being cautious, Mewtwo and Black Jack decided to part ways.

                                                    Black Jack remembered that event and had a suspicion that the people in black were Manes henchmen, it became clear to him that they were since Mane finally caught Mewtwo.

                                                    Metagross! he cried. Hyper Beam attack!

                                                    Metagross shot out two huge beams out of his eyes.

                                                    Mewtwo! Mane yelled. Mirror Coat!

                                                    Mewtwo struggled to not to use the attack but to no avail as he raised his arm to deflect Metagross attack. The attack bounced and the beams became stronger and faster as they came zooming not only at Metagross, but also at Tauros. They couldnt react in time as the attack caused an explosion upon impact, knocking them out!

                                                    Metagross! Black Jack cried.
                                                    Tauros! Ash cried.
                                                    Pika! Pikachu cried.
                                                    No! Mewtwo cried in thought.

                                                    Metagross and Tauros fell hard on the floor and their trainers called them back. Mane laughed at them both.

                                                    Whats the matter? Mane said confidently. Is Mewtwo too powerful for you? Perhaps I could let you go easy and you two can be laughing stocks for the rest of your lives.
                                                    The only laughing stock around here is you, Mane, Ash replied. Youre battling with technology not skill and youve disrespected the pokemon youve caught. And those two problems will block your way to winning.
                                                    Ashy boy, your softness and compassion for pokemon are your problems to winning and Black Jacks overconfidence and frustration will be his downfall.
                                                    Maybe in the end, novice, Black Jack replied. But not on this occasion.

                                                    Black Jack took out another pokeball. My fifth one, he thought as he tossed it out. Tyranitar! Go!

                                                    Tyranitar popped out of his pokeball and let out a loud roar. Lets go, Pikachu! Ash yelled. Pikachu jumped to the field, ready to battle.

                                                    Im afraid that you two need more than strength and speed to survive this round, you two, Mane said.
                                                    How right you are! Ash replied. Pikachu! Thunderbolt attack!

                                                    Pikachu leapt into the air as he charged himself up, he then let out a loud battle cry as he released his attack at Mewtwo.

                                                    Mewtwo struggled again to not block the attack but to no avail as he slowly raised his arm up to deflect Pikachus attack. Pikachu knew that the same trick wouldnt work twice as he dodged out of the way.

                                                    Tyranitar! Dynamic Punch attack! Black Jack yelled.

                                                    Tyranitar ran like a speeding bullet and punched Mewtwo in the face, sending him flying until he fell hard on the ground. Mewtwo struggled not to get up but the microchip attached to him made him do so.

                                                    Tyranitar! Black Jack yelled.
                                                    Pikachu! Ash yelled.
                                                    Tackle attack! they both yelled together.

                                                    Tyranitar and Pikachu ran at Mewtwo and tackled him, sending him flying again. Mewtwo smiled at Black Jack and Ashs understanding about his suffering, working for Mane, and smiled at the fact that he was going to be free soon.

                                                    But the microchip started to act up again and that made Mewtwo retaliate to shoot out a fireball at the opposing pokemon, but they barely dodged the attack.

                                                    Were not going let them get away with that! Mane yelled. Mewtwo! Hyper Beam!

                                                    Mewtwo shot out his Hyper Beam attack at Tyranitar. But he moved out of the way, it was then that the attack was coming for Ash!

                                                    Ketchum! Black Jack yelled. Move out of the way!

                                                    But Ashs eyes widened as he saw the attack coming but his body was not able to move because of his shock, thus getting hit from the blast, causing an explosion upon impact!

                                                    Ketchum! Black Jack cried.
                                                    Pikapi! Pikachu cried.
                                                    Tar! Tyranitar cried.
                                                    What have I done? Mewtwo said, who was also shocked.

                                                    As the dust cleared, Ash stood like a normal person would. But then he fell to his knees and then on his front.

                                                    Outside the base, all of Ash and Black Jacks friends felt a shocking feeling inside their hearts.

                                                    No! Brock said worryingly. Somethings happened to Ash!
                                                    He cant be Delia said.
                                                    Please Misty whispered in a sad tone. Please be okay, Ash

                                                    Back at the battle, Black Jack, Tyranitar and Pikachu ran over to the motionless Ash. Black Jack checked Ashs pulse.

                                                    I cant feel anything he whispered. He cant be
                                                    Pikapi Pikachu whispered sadly.

                                                    Pikachu charged up his powers to use Thundershock attack to wake Ash up, but to no avail. He tried again, but again no reaction. No matter how many attempts he tried to wake Ash up, it was no use. After realising that, tears dropped from his eyes. Pikapi he sobbed.

                                                    Black Jack noticed that Ashs pokeballs attached to his belt shaking about and knew what the pokemon felt. Stay in there, Black Jack whispered. Ill take care of this. Upon saying that, the pokeballs stopped shaking.

                                                    He then clenched his fists. Why? he whispered angrily. Why is this happening again? First, my family now Ketchum
                                                    Get over it, Mane said. If the boy isnt strong enough to withstand an attack, then he shouldnt be a pokemon trainer in the first place.

                                                    Mewtwos eyes narrowed as his eyes looked back on Mane. As much as he wanted get his paws on Mane, there was no way he could unless he was commanded to because of the microchip that was attached to the back of his neck.

                                                    Shut your mouth! Black Jack yelled as he got up. You have the age of a man, but Ketchum is twice the man youll ever be!
                                                    Pika! Pikachu cried angrily as he leapt back into the battlefield.
                                                    Black Jack, youre rival means so much to you, doesnt he? Mane asked in a sarcastic caring tone. I am touched by your devotion
                                                    I told you to shut it! You made Mewtwo hit Ketchum with that attack on purpose, just so you could beat me one-on-one! But youll lose either way because I show no mercy to any pompous creeps like you!
                                                    Hmhm I also admire your determination, Mr. Black Jack. Very well, let the game continue.

                                                    Tyranitar! Black Jack yelled as he took out his pokeball. Return!

                                                    Tyranitar returned back into his pokeball and Black Jack took out another pokeball. Blaziken! he yelled as he tossed it out. Go for it!

                                                    Blaziken popped out of his pokeball and safely landed on his feet. He got into his fighting stance as he prepared for battle.

                                                    A Fighting type battling a Psychic type? Mane asked. Surely, you must be more stupid than I thought.
                                                    I said shut it, Mane! Black Jack yelled.

                                                    Blazikens eyes widened as he remembered an old enemy of his mentioning that name.

                                                    -Flashback-

                                                    Tomorrow, Mr. Mane, I shall have that school, and I have a lot to thank you for.

                                                    Infuriated of what he heard, Blaziken kicked the door down. Inside the room was a man in a suit on a phone, the man became shocked and immediately hanged up the phone.

                                                    Whos this Mane guy? Black Jack demanded.
                                                    That does not concern you! Who are you? The man in the suit demanded.
                                                    Black Jack! And yours?
                                                    I am Mr. Min. And you have no business in my office without permission or appointment. Get out!
                                                    We dont need any permission or appointment to kick your ***, cos you disrespected that Flaming Fist School by poisoning the teacher!

                                                    -Flashback ended-

                                                    Blazikens eyes narrowed as they burned with anger, passion and heart.

                                                    Mewtwo sensed what Black Jack and the pokemon were feeling at that moment and that made him felt that there was hope.

                                                    Because of the microchip attached to his neck, he had great difficulty struggling to talk into Black Jacks mind secretly without anyone noticing but he managed to do so.

                                                    Black Jack, Mewtwo said. I must speak with you now.
                                                    Mewtwo! Black Jack thought deeply as Mewtwo went into his mind.
                                                    Ill get straight to the plan, I feel that this cursed microchip is acting up, trying to stop me using my psychic powers to talk to you.
                                                    Let me guess. The microchips the weak spot isnt it?
                                                    Yes. Whatever attack you use, you must aim for the microchip on the back of my neck. That way, Mane will lose control of my mind, body and

                                                    Before Mewtwo could say another word, he felt a shocking pain in his mind, which was pulling him away out of Black Jacks mind.

                                                    Please! Mewtwo said as he struggled. You must defeat me and Mane no matter what!

                                                    With that, he disappeared out of Black Jacks mind.

                                                    Black Jacks eyes narrowed as he faced, possibly, his strongest opponent. He then looked down on the determined Pikachu. Pikachu, he said. I have three words to ask you are you ready?
                                                    Pikachu! Pikachu cried in reply.
                                                    Good. Cos Ketchum is counting on you.
                                                    Pika pika!

                                                    Black Jack looked at Blaziken. Blaziken, he said. The Poison Fist School are the ones that have murdered sensei Wong, but we both now know that Mane was also involved in it. Now its time to get your revenge!

                                                    Blaziken clenched his paws in response. Blazi!

                                                    Blaziken and Pikachu! Black Jack yelled. Attack Mewtwo together!
                                                    Mewtwo, Mane said. Send them airborne with the power of your psychic attack!

                                                    Flames engulfed on Blazikens paws while Pikachus charged up his electric powers. Both of them charged at Mewtwo while Mewtwos aura surrounded him as he charged up his powers and charged directly at them
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