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Old August 4th, 2009 (12:33 AM).
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    Hey, I'm new here, and I was drawn in by the fanfic forums. I was wondering...I already have the beginning of my story, and was wondering if anybody wanted to offer suggestions/criticisim. feedback please! you can find a link to the story in my signature.
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    “Shinx, use bite on it!” Then, the voice’s owner stepped out of the trees and Kira was stunned to see Kalak, especially commanding a Pokémon
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    Old August 4th, 2009 (6:35 AM).
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      If you want us to offer feedback to your story, then you should post it over here, instead of telling people to go off-site.
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