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Old October 12th, 2012 (10:35 PM).
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    And this is my story:

    You are the brother of Flare, the Pokemon Champion of ]Sergio Region. One day, you were kidnapped by a mysterious member
    of Team Age, a powerful Team in Sergio Region. After they kidnapped you, you escaped and run into a river. The river's wave
    were to strong and you were drowned. After you awake, you realize that you are in Jestist Region which is beside Sergio Region.
    What's more, you lost you're memories and had a amnesia. After that, you found Celebi that told you that you can retrive you're memories
    by finding the pieces of the "Shade of Fate". You're journey began when a man give you a Pokemon which will help you in the searching of your memories.

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    Old October 17th, 2012 (2:21 PM).
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      i'd love to see a pokemon hack with some romance.
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      Old October 19th, 2012 (3:23 PM).
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        Anyone though about putting romance in these games, I liked the story from "thethethe" the other side of Gold, my little idea is that Silver change his attitude and all those bad things about steal's because a girl shows up in his adventure's and it was like love at first sight, so he decide to be a good person because she doesn't like bad guys, then he begins to change his attitude, then she discover that Silver is Giovanni's son, so now she doesn't wanna know anything about Silver, but he try to convince her that he changed.

        Well thats a little idea that popped in my head when I was reading that story, so let me know if is good or bad or need more ideas, thanks.
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        Old October 19th, 2012 (3:26 PM).
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          i'd love to see a pokemon hack with some romance.

          LOL, we think alike, i didn't see your comment before putting mine:D
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          Old October 27th, 2012 (8:40 PM).
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            i'd love to see a pokemon hack with some romance.
            Agree. Most books, movies and tv shows have romance in them. Why not a Pokemon game? I'd make one, but Im a complete hacking noob.
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            Old November 11th, 2012 (2:04 AM).
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              I would like to see a pokemon hack in which you could choose any non legendary pokemon from the first 4 generations as starter.

              You would be forced to play with the starter (not able to deposit it), and the starter would have a total of 500 as base stats. If it is a pokemon that normally has less than 500 as base stats the doctor would tell you that he wants you to have it because it is abnormally strong, if it is a pokemon that normally has more than 500 as base stats, the doctor would tell you that you can have it because other trainers rejected it for being abnormally weak.

              I don't even know if that is possible.
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              Old November 12th, 2012 (8:16 PM).
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                my thought of the story is that the main character name hack is an ordinary boi who who just go to school. in the 1st chapter in the game. there are no pokemons, its like its in our world. do things that we do. then several days later dialga and palkia. we know that they are time and space. so they warp to earth and hack so it. he thought that if he go closer to them he can stop the fight, but he cant stop it. and in the fighting hack was transported in the other world. "parallel world" and in that world. he is the main villain so everybody hates him. (the difference between hack and his parallel self is their hairsyle). He tells to the folks that he's from the parallel world but no1 beleieves him. in the crowded there is 1 man passing by who believes him. and he is invited to his lab. and that was the professor. he know that hack is telling the truth cuz the villain in that world is no other but the son of the professor. he kept it in public that he has a son. and thats all. hack tried to intro. himself and and tells everything. idk if u like it.
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                Old November 15th, 2012 (4:22 PM).
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                  Most likely not going to make any headway on a hack anytime soon. Just throwing a preliminary concept out there.

                  The protectors of the sky, earth, and sea are Rayquaza, Groudon, and Kyogre respectively. At birth you are placed under one of the protection of one of these legends. Depending on which one you have (picked at game start), you will placed in a mountain region, island region, or land region. Everything is peaceful until one day Arceus decides to stir up a conflict among the protectors. Now with the three regions at war, it is your duty as the hero to gain the trust of your region and join forces with your protector Pokemon to take on the other two regions. Along the way, different criminal organizations of present and past stand in your way, including Team Rocket, Team Galatic who has taken control of Giratina, and Cipher with their Shadow Pokemon. Explore new lands while saving the world from devastation caused by the three protectors and other powerful forces.

                  Features (possible)
                  Sprites from all generations
                  Revamped Map and Events
                  Day and Night System with Seasons
                  All Starters catchable
                  Starters for this game (depending on region): Archen, Kabuto, Shieldon
                  Legendaries from Gen 3 on catchable
                  Custom trainers
                  Gyms replaced by Battle Arenas/Battle Frontier
                  Trade evolutions replaced by level up evolution
                  Afterstory including locating the variety of programmers (master AIs) and facing the trials given by Arceus.

                  What do you guys think?
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                  Old November 20th, 2012 (4:46 PM). Edited November 20th, 2012 by DrFuji.
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                    this isn't really a storyline idea more of an event that could happen i hope no one minds but i couldn't find a thread to post this in. how about around istead of the elite four your at the end of victory road your really happy you walk on the elite four steps and you hear a soft cry you dont know what it is but you follow it back in victory road your at the core of the cry and you see an injured celebi you try to pick it up but you get teleported to an pre time temple you go in and find the celebi being hurt by who else but nobunga you yell at him and tell him to stop hurting celebi nobunga says you look weak and that he'll stop if you can beat him he'll give you celebi you say yess to the battle but he says you first have to beat the other people from pokemon conquest i cant remember what there called but you gotta battle the ones that have the groudon and the one with the mewtwo they also have rhyperior galade and two other psy and ground type type its a double battle then you fight nobunga and he has his rayquaza and his zekrom and other dragons and if you beat him (btw he'll be REALLY hard) you'l get celebi to join your team AND black rayquaza so its a event so does it sound like a good event its not a story but i couldn't find the right thread to post in and this one seemed prime so tell me what you think about the event

                    sorry for double post but im the worst hacker ever so that last post is for other hackers to use im not gonna use it just up for grabs :p
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                    Old November 20th, 2012 (5:50 PM).
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                      what about a hack were your raise by combee and their queen but something happens to to queen so you must trade a jar of honey for the item but you meet the regions professer and he gives you a gible denio or begon you became his student and help him (and you speak no human speech but the professer has a slowking) abra teleport you to both protect your hive the lab and the pokemon ranch the professer has had some of his pokemon make for you you craft pokeball from acorns glow flower and berries and even romance and marry one of the follow town people/lab parters i have more idea but i think you get my point

                      the problem is i cant hack soooo anyone can use this idea pm for more details
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                      Old November 22nd, 2012 (10:06 PM).
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                        Quote:
                        Originally Posted by chen12 View Post
                        Most likely not going to make any headway on a hack anytime soon. Just throwing a preliminary concept out there.

                        The protectors of the sky, earth, and sea are Rayquaza, Groudon, and Kyogre respectively. At birth you are placed under one of the protection of one of these legends. Depending on which one you have (picked at game start), you will placed in a mountain region, island region, or land region. Everything is peaceful until one day Arceus decides to stir up a conflict among the protectors. Now with the three regions at war, it is your duty as the hero to gain the trust of your region and join forces with your protector Pokemon to take on the other two regions. Along the way, different criminal organizations of present and past stand in your way, including Team Rocket, Team Galatic who has taken control of Giratina, and Cipher with their Shadow Pokemon. Explore new lands while saving the world from devastation caused by the three protectors and other powerful forces.

                        Features (possible)
                        Sprites from all generations
                        Revamped Map and Events
                        Day and Night System with Seasons
                        All Starters catchable
                        Starters for this game (depending on region): Archen, Kabuto, Shieldon
                        Legendaries from Gen 3 on catchable
                        Custom trainers
                        Gyms replaced by Battle Arenas/Battle Frontier
                        Trade evolutions replaced by level up evolution
                        Afterstory including locating the variety of programmers (master AIs) and facing the trials given by Arceus.

                        What do you guys think?
                        Awesome idea, I'd play it.
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                        Old December 2nd, 2012 (2:34 PM). Edited December 3rd, 2012 by Skyzor91.
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                          Here's my idea but I doubt anything will come of it... plus it would have to be on Fire Red if anything is to come of it.

                          Pokémon Mission Espionage

                          You play the role of a Spy for the PIA (Pokémon Inspection Agency)
                          Your starter Pokémon: Houndour
                          All 386 are in-game but not all are obtainable.
                          Your mission is to obtain further information using the Pokédex to record data.
                          Example: Beedrill are found in swarms, they are defending their forest.
                          Pokédex will be reordered.

                          You also find 8 Specific Gyms, defeat them and then make your way to becoming a Real Pokémon Agent by taking on your boss who is the Pokémon Champion.
                          You'll get access to a Bagon at some point so you'll learn Fly by evolving Bagon up to Salamence as Fly is removed as a HM.
                          Plus... you do wear agent-like uniform.
                          You do have to report suspicious activity. You get to take down an Evil Organisation (No Name Yet though will start with the word Team)

                          Spoilers are not shown, if you do look at the information hidden, then it's your responsibility as to looking in-depth.
                          Spoiler:
                          First Gym - Steel (Replaces Brock)
                          Female Gym Leader
                          No. of Pokémon - 2
                          Best - Skarmory
                          Badge Name - Chrome Badge

                          Second Gym - Water (Replaces Misty)
                          Male Gym Leader
                          No. of Pokémon - 2
                          Best - Lapras
                          Badge Name - Liquid Badge

                          Third Gym - Fighting (Replaces Lt. Surge)
                          Female Gym Leader
                          No. of Pokémon - 3
                          Best - Blaziken
                          Badge Name - Vitality Badge

                          Fourth Gym - Dragon (Replaces Erika)
                          Male Gym Leader
                          No. of Pokémon - 4
                          Best - Kingdra
                          Badge Name - Myth Badge

                          Fifth Gym - Ghost (Replaces Koga)
                          Male Gym Leader
                          No. of Pokémon - 4
                          Best - Gengar
                          Badge Name - Abyss Badge

                          Sixth Gym - Normal (Replaces Sabrina)
                          Male Gym Leader
                          No. of Pokémon - 5
                          Best - Ursaring
                          Badge Name - Shrine Badge

                          Seventh Gym - Fire (Replaces Blaine)
                          Female Gym Leader
                          No. of Pokémon - 5
                          Best - Camerupt
                          Badge Name - Blaze Badge

                          Eighth Gym - Grass (Replaces Giovanni)
                          Male Gym Leader
                          No. of Pokémon - 6
                          Best - Cacturne
                          Badge Name - Leaf Badge


                          HMs:
                          Teleport, Surf, Flash, Cut and Strength.


                          I'll add more into it at some point... just gotta find some maptiles that can be used with permission from the owner.
                          I sort of know how I want the map to look. Again I'll get round to this this another time.

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                          Old December 28th, 2012 (10:31 AM).
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                            i'd love to see a pokemon hack with some romance.
                            Quote:
                            Originally Posted by JuniBoy View Post
                            Anyone though about putting romance in these games, I liked the story from "thethethe" the other side of Gold, my little idea is that Silver change his attitude and all those bad things about steal's because a girl shows up in his adventure's and it was like love at first sight, so he decide to be a good person because she doesn't like bad guys, then he begins to change his attitude, then she discover that Silver is Giovanni's son, so now she doesn't wanna know anything about Silver, but he try to convince her that he changed.

                            Well thats a little idea that popped in my head when I was reading that story, so let me know if is good or bad or need more ideas, thanks.
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                            Agree. Most books, movies and tv shows have romance in them. Why not a Pokemon game? I'd make one, but Im a complete hacking noob.
                            Well assuming that the main character is not a specified gender, one would have to make separate situations for each gender.
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                            Old December 28th, 2012 (10:45 AM).
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                              Originally Posted by chen12 View Post
                              Most likely not going to make any headway on a hack anytime soon. Just throwing a preliminary concept out there.

                              The protectors of the sky, earth, and sea are Rayquaza, Groudon, and Kyogre respectively. At birth you are placed under one of the protection of one of these legends. Depending on which one you have (picked at game start), you will placed in a mountain region, island region, or land region. Everything is peaceful until one day Arceus decides to stir up a conflict among the protectors. Now with the three regions at war, it is your duty as the hero to gain the trust of your region and join forces with your protector Pokemon to take on the other two regions. Along the way, different criminal organizations of present and past stand in your way, including Team Rocket, Team Galatic who has taken control of Giratina, and Cipher with their Shadow Pokemon. Explore new lands while saving the world from devastation caused by the three protectors and other powerful forces.

                              Features (possible)
                              Sprites from all generations
                              Revamped Map and Events
                              Day and Night System with Seasons
                              All Starters catchable
                              Starters for this game (depending on region): Archen, Kabuto, Shieldon
                              Legendaries from Gen 3 on catchable
                              Custom trainers
                              Gyms replaced by Battle Arenas/Battle Frontier
                              Trade evolutions replaced by level up evolution
                              Afterstory including locating the variety of programmers (master AIs) and facing the trials given by Arceus.

                              What do you guys think?
                              I like the idea, but this means you'll have to make 3 different hacks for each guardian. Kind of like ruby, sapphire, and emerald because your having the story line change depending on which guardian they pick.
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                              Old January 8th, 2013 (7:04 AM).
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                                I was basically thinking of doing a RSE rehash, same legendaries but with Pokemon from later gens as well. Also the storyline would be totally different. I have some names reserved: Emerald Sky Version, Sapphire Ocean Version, and Ruby Earth Version. But this would be a project down the road. Might start with a simple hack that adds some Pokemon and patches of grass to a game.
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                                I like the idea, but this means you'll have to make 3 different hacks for each guardian. Kind of like ruby, sapphire, and emerald because your having the story line change depending on which guardian they pick.
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                                Old January 10th, 2013 (2:36 PM). Edited January 10th, 2013 by kj3400.
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                                  I read through 20 pages to make sure my plot wasn't copying off of someone else's and it wasn't, so here goes.

                                  It’s been 3 years since you becamethe youngest gym leader in the Paradise (working name unless not being used)region, 3 years of working at the gym in your hometown granting or denyingtrainers the privilege of carrying on to the second quartet of gym leaders. Oneday you grow weary of the rut you seemed to have dug yourself in, so decide to set your pokèmon free and start from scratch. You head on over to your uncle inthe next town over to collect one of the 3 pokèmon he has for you. He’s Professor Linden (a tree, I checked), the leading authority in this region. I figured instead of the standard fire/grass/water, the starters could be ice, flying and fighting.

                                  On the way to the first gym, youcome upon your childhood friend (haven’t decided gender), whom you hadn’t seensince you became a gym leader. They know you’ve started over and decide to doso too to see who’s really the best. After all, you did beat them out at the Gym Leader Academy.

                                  Later on, before you get your first badge, you meet someone. They were a fan of you when you were a gym leader and when they heard you were starting fresh, did it too in support and decided then and there they'd become your rival. You end up battling them every now and then, as well as your childhood friend, although they disappear before you get your 7th badge. Doesn’t stop them from getting the 8th badge before you do though.

                                  As you collect badges from thepeople you used to know from the Academy, you catch wind of a secretorganization that has plans (either to cause chaos by ruining the earth’s balance or rule the world, whichever is more fun). They plan to do this bycapturing each of the guardian pokèmon on each of the 6 islands that surround Paradise.

                                  Legendaries
                                  Ho-oh - pokèmon of the sun and fire (on a volcanic island)
                                  (Optional) Lugia – guardian of water
                                  Cresselia - pokèmon of the moon (on an island in perpetualnight)
                                  Kyogre - pokèmon of the sea (in an underwater cavern)
                                  Groudon - pokèmon of the land (deep in a cave)
                                  Dialga - pokèmon of time (in the past)
                                  Palkia – pokèmon of space (not quite sure yet, somewherecreepy though)

                                  So naturally you want to get involved, but find out that only elite four champions are allowed access to those islands and only then after a ceremony. So you beatthe elite four to find out someone has beaten them already and begun heading out to each of the islands. In the end they capture all but one of them–Dialga. As such, the earth is plunged in chaos. Earthquakes, torrential rains and blizzards, searing heat waves, eruptions and abnormally long/short nights/days plague the world. Undaunted, you head for the island of the remaining legendary where you are temporarily transported to the past (cue backstory, blah blah, blah) Dialga lets you capture it because it knows you want to help. With Dialga at your side, you march upon the organization’s secret base to find out [spoiler].
                                  You fight the leader and free the pokèmon, which you can now go capture at your leisure.

                                  It's not much, and I'd love to get some input. I want to make a hack, despite not having the slightest idea of how to do it, (but I'm willing to learn) and I figure there's some holes in the story.
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                                  Old January 20th, 2013 (10:40 AM).
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                                  I read through 20 pages to make sure my plot wasn't copying off of someone else's and it wasn't, so here goes.

                                  It’s been 3 years since you becamethe youngest gym leader in the Paradise (working name unless not being used)region, 3 years of working at the gym in your hometown granting or denyingtrainers the privilege of carrying on to the second quartet of gym leaders. Oneday you grow weary of the rut you seemed to have dug yourself in, so decide to set your pokèmon free and start from scratch. You head on over to your uncle inthe next town over to collect one of the 3 pokèmon he has for you. He’s Professor Linden (a tree, I checked), the leading authority in this region. I figured instead of the standard fire/grass/water, the starters could be ice, flying and fighting.

                                  On the way to the first gym, youcome upon your childhood friend (haven’t decided gender), whom you hadn’t seensince you became a gym leader. They know you’ve started over and decide to doso too to see who’s really the best. After all, you did beat them out at the Gym Leader Academy.

                                  Later on, before you get your first badge, you meet someone. They were a fan of you when you were a gym leader and when they heard you were starting fresh, did it too in support and decided then and there they'd become your rival. You end up battling them every now and then, as well as your childhood friend, although they disappear before you get your 7th badge. Doesn’t stop them from getting the 8th badge before you do though.

                                  As you collect badges from thepeople you used to know from the Academy, you catch wind of a secretorganization that has plans (either to cause chaos by ruining the earth’s balance or rule the world, whichever is more fun). They plan to do this bycapturing each of the guardian pokèmon on each of the 6 islands that surround Paradise.

                                  Legendaries
                                  Ho-oh - pokèmon of the sun and fire (on a volcanic island)
                                  (Optional) Lugia – guardian of water
                                  Cresselia - pokèmon of the moon (on an island in perpetualnight)
                                  Kyogre - pokèmon of the sea (in an underwater cavern)
                                  Groudon - pokèmon of the land (deep in a cave)
                                  Dialga - pokèmon of time (in the past)
                                  Palkia – pokèmon of space (not quite sure yet, somewherecreepy though)

                                  So naturally you want to get involved, but find out that only elite four champions are allowed access to those islands and only then after a ceremony. So you beatthe elite four to find out someone has beaten them already and begun heading out to each of the islands. In the end they capture all but one of them–Dialga. As such, the earth is plunged in chaos. Earthquakes, torrential rains and blizzards, searing heat waves, eruptions and abnormally long/short nights/days plague the world. Undaunted, you head for the island of the remaining legendary where you are temporarily transported to the past (cue backstory, blah blah, blah) Dialga lets you capture it because it knows you want to help. With Dialga at your side, you march upon the organization’s secret base to find out [spoiler].
                                  You fight the leader and free the pokèmon, which you can now go capture at your leisure.

                                  It's not much, and I'd love to get some input. I want to make a hack, despite not having the slightest idea of how to do it, (but I'm willing to learn) and I figure there's some holes in the story.
                                  I read the story, though I think that there are some weird and unrelated elements in the story. What's the relationship in being a former Gym Leader and what seems to be the main plot (the evil dudes capturing guardian Pokemon)? There seems to be none, thus the only real purpose of that first part is character development. So unless you're going to go deep into character development and story early on (until you finish the standard gyms), I'd keep the whole history out.

                                  EDIT:
                                  I change my mind, I like the history being in there :P
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                                  Old January 22nd, 2013 (6:17 AM).
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                                  How about a Sword-Art Online style game, where rather than routes and towns there are 'floors' (some of which contain 'towns') and dungeons - beating the dungeon boss lets you progress to the next floor, etc.

                                  Could easily be made to have alternating floors for badges, say a Subordinate on Floor 1, Gym Leader on Floor 2, etc., followed by the elite four to give 20 floors in total.

                                  Throw some story in and a range of environments and it sounds like a solid idea - anyone agree?
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                                    Story for my Hack, waiting for thread approval, need to know if it's too vague, or what...?

                                    The Terrik Region is split into 3 parts, Sicle, Terra and Grash.
                                    Each part has it's own gaurdian which has protecting it since the dawn
                                    of creation. Regice watches over Sicle, Regirock watches over Terra and Registeel
                                    watches over Grash.

                                    It's said that these 3 Pokémon have been a mystery for many centuries, appearing
                                    in almost every legend and myth, and the last words of an ancient civilisation.
                                    Anyone who can get their hands on all three Regi's will surely be able to gain
                                    control of all 3 parts of Terrik.

                                    You live in the Town of Miron, the most northern town in all of Terrik and Sicle,
                                    you're nothing more than a mere child, not many people visit the town, and it's only
                                    on the map, for Maxi's research on Pokémon Forme's and Abilities. But one day,
                                    Maxi tells you a parcel has arrived for you in Worseth Town, and the only way to
                                    get there is with a Pokémon. So naturally he gives you a Pokémon and sets you upon your way.
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                                    Old January 23rd, 2013 (2:08 PM).
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                                    How about a Sword-Art Online style game, where rather than routes and towns there are 'floors' (some of which contain 'towns') and dungeons - beating the dungeon boss lets you progress to the next floor, etc.

                                    Could easily be made to have alternating floors for badges, say a Subordinate on Floor 1, Gym Leader on Floor 2, etc., followed by the elite four to give 20 floors in total.

                                    Throw some story in and a range of environments and it sounds like a solid idea - anyone agree?
                                    I don't know, sounds like just grinding all game. How will you incorporate a story into this?

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                                    Story for my Hack, waiting for thread approval, need to know if it's too vague, or what...?

                                    The Terrik Region is split into 3 parts, Sicle, Terra and Grash.
                                    Each part has it's own gaurdian which has protecting it since the dawn
                                    of creation. Regice watches over Sicle, Regirock watches over Terra and Registeel
                                    watches over Grash.

                                    It's said that these 3 Pokémon have been a mystery for many centuries, appearing
                                    in almost every legend and myth, and the last words of an ancient civilisation.
                                    Anyone who can get their hands on all three Regi's will surely be able to gain
                                    control of all 3 parts of Terrik.

                                    You live in the Town of Miron, the most northern town in all of Terrik and Sicle,
                                    you're nothing more than a mere child, not many people visit the town, and it's only
                                    on the map, for Maxi's research on Pokémon Forme's and Abilities. But one day,
                                    Maxi tells you a parcel has arrived for you in Worseth Town, and the only way to
                                    get there is with a Pokémon. So naturally he gives you a Pokémon and sets you upon your way.
                                    Main character's goal is to capture all 3 of them and become all ruler? It seems he just runs off with a Pokemon for no apparent reason. If the goal is to get all 3 and become an all ruler, then the plot and ingame events can become sinister and I like sinister.
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                                    Old January 23rd, 2013 (2:18 PM).
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                                      I don't know, sounds like just grinding all game. How will you incorporate a story into this?



                                      Main character's goal is to capture all 3 of them and become all ruler? It seems he just runs off with a Pokemon for no apparent reason. If the goal is to get all 3 and become an all ruler, then the plot and ingame events can become sinister and I like sinister.
                                      Ooo, I like that.

                                      But no, my original intention was an evil team would obviously come along to take the Regi's to rule the Region.
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                                      Old January 24th, 2013 (3:16 PM).
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                                        I read the story, though I think that there are some weird and unrelated elements in the story. What's the relationship in being a former Gym Leader and what seems to be the main plot (the evil dudes capturing guardian Pokemon)? There seems to be none, thus the only real purpose of that first part is character development. So unless you're going to go deep into character development and story early on (until you finish the standard gyms), I'd keep the whole history out.

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                                        I change my mind, I like the history being in there :P
                                        Well thankee! I'm making it up as I go XD
                                        The relation is that the main character missed out on being a regular trainer when they became a gym leader so the fact their journey's going to be so extraordinary is pretty unexpected for them :P
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                                        Old January 28th, 2013 (3:48 PM).
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                                          Ok, this is my hack's storyline. I haven't started it, and won't until I've done a lot of training for hacking. It will be a Fire Red Hack and the protaganist will be a 16-year-old Ash Ketchum...


                                          You start off in the Pallet Town Gym, which Ash Ketchum and Gary Oak have been running for the past 5 years. You play as Ash, and it is your turn to battle the challenger, a trainer named Joey from the Johto Region. Pikachu, Bulbasaur, Quilava and Oshawott easily take out Joey's Pidgeotto, Nidorino, Raticate and a strange, blue, squid-like Pokemon you've never seen before. Joey calls it a Tentweel, and when asked about it, he tells Ash he got it from Professor Fig in the Auzza Region.
                                          And so, when Professor Oak announces a competition for two people to accompany him to Gerogo City, Auzza, to help him and Professor Fig with promising research into the legend of the four siblings. Because it's a battle tournament, Ash enters, and, surprisingly, his mother does too, for she sees her life as boring. When she realises her Mr.Mime is quite strong, she wins the tournament, giving her spare ticket to Ash. Just as they leave, May arrives in town to help Gary look after both Oak's Laboratory and the Pallet Town Gym.

                                          Ash's Pokemon:
                                          Pikachu

                                          Mr.Mime (Receives off his mother when the newly-evolved Team Rocket's Persian defeats Pikachu.)

                                          (With permission from his mother, gives Mr.Mime to Nurse Joy of Culca Town, a small seaside town constantly under threat from the Pokemon of Rookie Forest, bordering the town.)

                                          Pillarine

                                          Coona

                                          Egg

                                          Flear

                                          Tentweel

                                          Maga

                                          Mothleem

                                          Dragansik

                                          Flabear

                                          Bulbasaur (Wants to be a Venusaur to "Marry" May's Venusaur)

                                          Ivysaur

                                          Twigtor

                                          Tentwo

                                          (Flabear is released to a town full of Fire-Type Pokemon)

                                          Bushren

                                          Magpey

                                          Venusaur

                                          (Venusaur returns to Pallet Town for May's Venusaur)

                                          Magperick

                                          Tentakowa

                                          Forestor

                                          Dragor

                                          (ASH ACTUALLY HAS A DRAGON TYPE!!!!!!!!!!! :D)
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                                            How about Gary's Oak Story Line???
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                                              Hello! I would like to post the storyline for my new hack, (obviously still in development) Pokémon Orange. I would first like to say, I am adding many new Pokémon. Should I do that? Please say if not, but there are at least 14 new Pokémon essential to my story. This story takes place in the Condur region(new).

                                              The story starts in your home town of LeafGround (I'm kind of bad with names... Could anyone give me help on this?). You are watching your father battle a challenger on the television. Your father is the champion. It is your 12th birthday, and your mother calls for you. You go down the stairs to have the usual lecture about being safe, and she tells you how since today is your birthday, you can choose a Pokémon at Professor Pine's lab. She gives you running shoes (hate it without them should you get them later?) and you walk outside. You notice your bike is gone, so you go to your friend's (rival's) house. They give you back the bike, and you walk to the shore with them where you see the Professor. Your rival is younger than you, so he goes back to his house. The Professor escorts you to the lab. She goes inside, but a mailman knocks you back, and hands you a package from your dad of 5 potions and a Pokéball. You go inside, and you see a strange sight. The three starter Pokémon Grink (grass and dark), Wubble (fighting and water), and Cunda (fire and psychic). They jump through the window, and you run after them. The Professor tells you to stop, but it is too late.
                                              They go into a forest, shadow forest. They fight on one path, and Cunda makes a giant flame that blocks the path. The only other way is on a bike only path. You ride down the bike only path, and there is a Cubco (new normal little bear) crying because of its hurt foot. So you reach down to pet it, and snarls come from the forest. A bunch of Bearousas (new normal fighting giant bears) come out of the forest, and start shooting hyper beams at you. You block one with your bike, and it shatters. The next one head toward your face, but a Monly (new fighting and flying flying monkey, the star (besides you) jumps in the way and blocks it with its wings, sending the bolt back, scattering the Bearousa. You thank the Monly, and think. You ask the Monly to come with you to help break up the Pokémon. It agrees, and the both of you walk through the forest, coming into the occasional Pokémon. You then battle Cunda, and beat him, and take the three starters back to the Professor. You can’t decide which one you want, so the Professor suggests Monly (don’t worry, you can get the starters elsewhere), and Monly chimes in.
                                              So the Professor does the usual catching and teaching drills. You head off to the next town (no name, has a fighting type gym, and a big forest full of spiedirs in it) in hopes of challenging your father. When you reach the town, a Hitmonfly (evolution of Monly and your father’s) drops you a package with a note and an egg inside. The egg is a Grink’s egg. The note says how proud your father is. You stop by the Gym, and suddenly it is stormy. A great shadow passes over the town, and the gym leader comes out to look at it, and sees it to be a floating castle. He runs into the forest to find a way up. You follow him, and in the center of the forest, there is a ramp up. You run up the ramp, and it starts to break. The gym leader uses a Springo (new fighting Pokémon with springy legs) to pull you up. The two of you go into this Castle, and you find a lot of people with psychic Pokémon for team “PUFOOW” (psychic users for our own welfare) On the way, a floating pinkish Pokémon flies by. You fight your way to the end, and you see your father fighting a guy using a Psikie (interchangeable with Alakazam) with his Hitmonfly.
                                              The castle flies away and you have to jump. You fight the gym leader back in the gym, and get your badge. Basically that is all I have except for the end. In the end you go to the top of this large island, and on the top, team PUFOOW (which you call team Puff) if trying to make a legendary Pokémon Miraga (a Pokémon that can turn into any Pokémon) turn into a more powerful Benevad (psychic legendary first Pokémon), the first Pokémon. It does, but in mid process you attack it warping what it becomes, and keeping it frozen in that form. It becomes Malavad (the anti-Benevad, dark, not psychic). The leader takes him and you have to battle them. You end up gaining Benevad’s trust, and catch it with a master ball. There are many legendary events later that would fit into this storyline, but this is all I have so far.

                                              What do you think? If you have any ideas, please tell me, I am aslo coming up with more.
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