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Old September 15th, 2018 (11:58 AM).
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    Alrighty ^^ Looking forward to see what character he'll be!
    Yo u should play thru the game, in video, so we can see everything, and know Exactly how you want everything.
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    Old September 15th, 2018 (3:48 PM).
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    Yo u should play thru the game, in video, so we can see everything, and know Exactly how you want everything.
    I don't want After Human to be exactly like Become Human though :thonkeng:
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    Old September 15th, 2018 (3:51 PM).
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      I don't want After Human to be exactly like Become Human though :thonkeng:
      No, I mean like, the Stratford tower stuff. You know, like how the room looked and stuff. too late for that though, so it's cool. Makes sense not to now. :coolcat:
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      Old September 16th, 2018 (2:06 AM).
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      Very nice SU, gimmepie! Welcome to the RP.
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      Old September 16th, 2018 (6:07 AM).
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      Trask


      Model: AX700

      Date of birth/activation: March 24 2025

      Gender: Male

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      5'10, Brown hair, Brown eyes. A general blank expression on his face.(The only difference from the picture is he wears more casual clothes. Jeans, and a tee-shirt


      Deviant: Yes. He became deviant will pondering his purpose, before the house fire

      History: He worked for the Wittakers for a long time. Life was happy and calm. He reached deviancy one day while doing laundry, but loved his life so did his best to hide it. Which was exellent. Then one day Nigel left for work. His wife made supper, except... a spark caused by Charlene's son, who stick some metal in to a wall socket (he was 5) caused a small fire. The son managed to get away, but didn't make it out alive. Nor did her other son or daughter or other daughter not her. Only Trask made it out. He blamed himself as much as Nigel did when Nigel got home. Nigel sent him back to Cyber Life in a car, like an armored car almost. However some androids broke in to it after killing the driver they checked the back. Trask, and four other androids were in the truck. The news was covered up. No one knew not even Nigel. Trask ran from the deviant androids. After a few months he heard of Jericho. He made three attempts to get there and was foiled ever time. He never had a good sense of direction.

      Personality: Trask was the usual lifeless boring old robot. Since the house burnt he gained a more... hardened criminal type personality, while still being sort of nice. The way he acts is largely dependent on the people he is around. He can fake mean, or super nice. Just depends on who he is around

      Current occupation: Deviant convict, in the run, plotting a way to make it to Jericho.
      This SU isn't accepted yet. You should give a proper reason for Trask turning deviant. They don't just do laundry one day and realize whoops maybe I don't want to obey humans! Maybe it doesn't have to be super traumatic, but something should have triggered the deviancy.

      Also, the personality section basically tells us nothing. He's a deviant now, so he has as much personality as humans do. Please think a bit more on it and re-write it.
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      Old September 16th, 2018 (7:00 AM).
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        This SU isn't accepted yet. You should give a proper reason for Trask turning deviant. They don't just do laundry one day and realize whoops maybe I don't want to obey humans! Maybe it doesn't have to be super traumatic, but something should have triggered the deviancy.

        Also, the personality section basically tells us nothing. He's a deviant now, so he has as much personality as humans do. Please think a bit more on it and re-write it.
        OK. You know, we.have enough deviants,.we don't need trask. And I'm not sure I could do that... I'm not good at.writing...
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        Old September 16th, 2018 (7:02 AM).
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        OK. You know, we.have enough deviants,.we don't need trask. And I'm not sure I could do that... I'm not good at.writing...
        It's all about wanting to learn, and practicing.
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        Old September 16th, 2018 (7:10 AM). Edited September 16th, 2018 by Calzone407.
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          It's all about wanting to learn, and practicing.
          Wow. I never knew you were an inspiratio nal speaker! I will try!

          Edit: I changed it. Probably better now.
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          Old September 16th, 2018 (7:31 AM).
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          Wow. I never knew you were an inspiratio nal speaker! I will try!

          Edit: I changed it. Probably better now.
          Alright, it makes sense he would turn deviant when he's on his way to be dismantled by CyberLife! :)

          His personality section is still the same. So basically, you mean that Trask hasn't really evolved much of a personality himself through his years of living with the Whittaker family? He is a sort of chameleon who adapts to whatever he thinks is required of him depending on whom he is talking to?
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          Old September 16th, 2018 (8:21 AM).
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            Alright, it makes sense he would turn deviant when he's on his way to be dismantled by CyberLife! :)

            His personality section is still the same. So basically, you mean that Trask hasn't really evolved much of a personality himself through his years of living with the Whittaker family? He is a sort of chameleon who adapts to whatever he thinks is required of him depending on whom he is talking to?
            How bout now?
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            Old September 16th, 2018 (9:59 AM).
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            How bout now?
            Sure, that's better d: I'll add him.
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            Old September 17th, 2018 (10:36 AM).
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            Heads up! I will be gone from wednesday 19 sep to friday 21 sep on a trip with work, and can't post during those days. Don't go too wild without me 8) <3

            Calzone, I'm still waiting on a bit of an explanation for Trask's IC post, please.
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            Old November 7th, 2018 (2:06 AM).
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            Due to the situation Sandy is in now, I'm waiting until at least the police arrives until I make my next move so there's no conflict how the college scene will take place. If worse comes to worse though I don't mind the timeskip. I'll admit that stuff got in the way for me also and been dealing with that.
            Understandable :3 I'm having a bit of trouble communicating with Calzone and DSP, and I fear they are feeling a bit off in the RP? But I shall post with Robin at the crime scene at least after gimmepie makes his Malcolm-post, methinks.

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            I'm not stuck just had some stuff come up that is slowing progress.
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            Still kickin and committed to rp, albeit a bit slower, but you know what's going on with me lately

            I think Mrla and Clude are in a pretty versatile position? Am ready to jump into bigger events whenever, but also not opposed to still just getting to know each other, chilling at her house, etc.
            I totally want to awkwardly socialize with Mrla Clude n Bony! And the yet to be named household android girl she has.

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