Alright, I think I made it a little better this time. I also changed a few things
Name: Zachary Talon
Age: 11
Gender: Male
Dorm: Raikou Dorm
Appearance: Zachary has spiky silver hair and green eyes. He wears a red short-sleeved T-Shirt with a purple vest and Blue wrist bands. Also has light blue jeans and red sneakers.
Personality:
When anyone looks at Zachary they're first impression would simply be "Lazy"... and they're right. He's probably the most laid back guy you'll ever meet. He usually just spends his time sleeping or relaxing under the sun. Now you may think this is a bad thing, but actually this nature of his always keeps him calm in the most crazy situations. His reactions may not show it, but he's constantly thinking of a new strategies to win.
Now being lazy also makes it so Felix never likes to train, so his pokemon are usually the underdogs in battle. However this does not interfere with his ambition to win. He usually likes to battle and that's how he mostly trains his pokemon.
History:
Zachary grew up in Johto in the town Cherrygrove City. He lived with his mother, father, and younger sister. His father used to be a pokemon trainer and his mother was a coordinator. He received Cyndaquil at the young age of eight. He found him hurt on the outskirts of the town and brought him all the way back to the pokemon center. Since then Cyndaquil always hung around and adventually Zachary decided to name him Flare. However, it wasn't until he turned ten when he actually caught Flare. After that he began to challenge other people to battles. When he did this his father started to train him, mostly by force.
With his fathers guidance, Zachary became the top trainer in the town with Flare alone by the time he was eleven. At first he was happy, but then it got really boring. He got tired of facing the same people over and over again. Then one day a trainer entered the town. When Zachary saw him he immediately challenged him to a match. The trainer accepted then easily defeated Zachary. The trainer then helped bring Flare to the pokemon center to heal. He then finally introduced himself as Ken. He told Zachary that he was challenging all the gyms in the region to challenge himself. In the end, Ken was actually very impressed with Zachary's skills since he's been stuck in a town all his life. He then handed Zachary Solosis and told him that he had the potential to be a great trainer. Zachary excitedly took the Solosis and thanked Ken as he left for the next gym.
The next day Zachary was all pumped up and motivated to get better. Only problem was, he didn't know how. Then he saw the commercial on tv for the Pokemon Academy. Zachary knew he could get better there, so he immediately put in an application to join.
Pokémon:
Species: Cyndaquil
Nickname: Flare
Personality: Super hyper active. Cyndaquil can never stop moving, even his flames go wild every time he's released from his pokeball, mostly by his own will too.
Lvl: 10
Moves:
1) Tackle
2) Smokescreen
3) Ember
4) Overheat
Species: Solosis
Nickname: Sylo
Personality: Easily scared by large foes. He doesn't usually like to fight often but when he knows Felix depends on him he'll go all out.
Lvl: 5
Moves:
1) Psywave
2) Reflect
