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Old June 20th, 2017 (10:36 PM).
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Thank you for the points. I'm never really one who cared about the technicalities of writing as I only wanted really to express myself. I also intended for the second and fourth lines to end with the same thing and the last stanza not having a definite rhyme scheme (in my ears, it sound like abcb) was also intended.

Anyway, here's a new poem. (not entirely new, but whatever)

Good Mourning

I woke up, alone in my bed
For the first time in a long while
There's a pain in my arms and a ringing in my head
And a loneliness in my heart and a tear in my smile

I have forgotten how quiet this place was
As your voice filled it with every passing hour
The silence is so deafening, I often pause
And wonder, when did sweet turned sour

I paced the room, looking for any sign of you
But I scrubbed it down, many times already
Even if it was mine, it's a home I never knew
The memories grew there, steady

The sun is up, going on regardless
I closed the blinds, let the curtain fall
I lay in bed, embracing the darkness
Good mourning, if you mourned at all.
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Old June 21st, 2017 (10:32 PM).
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Something about love again.

It's Hard

It's hard loving someone.

Who doesn't see the things you do
Who doesn't appreciate your presence
Who doesn't consider you someone worthy of their time

Who distrusts your happiness as unreal
Who disregards you sadness as petty
Who discredits your anger as passing

Who makes you bottle up all your frustrations and your anger and your sadness and your mistakes because it's not important
Who requires you to keep track o f a lot of things but can't remember if you had something planned together already
Who only thinks of you as an afterthought and not a constant image in their head

Who doesn't care if you're already shaking in anger
Who doesn't care if you're already wet with tears
Who doesn't care if you're frustrated because you bared your heart out and all she did is roll her eyes

Who can't even stay for one night to accompany you in your depression
Who can't even give you one hug when you're feeling anxious
Who can't even hold your hand just to stop the shaking

Who doesn't understand the fact that for you to fall asleep, all you need is her arms around your neck
Who doesn't understand that after all the pain you went through and is going through, you chose to stay
Who doesn't understand the fact that you're hurting because you love her

I's hard loving someone
Who doesn't love you
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Old June 26th, 2017 (7:15 PM).
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For a Loveless Heart

Knocking on your door
I just hear an empty house
Forever silent
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Old July 12th, 2017 (1:00 AM).
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We are the Kids

We never grew up the way they wanted us to be
We never became prim and proper
We outgrew our ideals when we were kids
We were the strangers they warned us not to talk to

We grew reckless
We drove fast and passed speed limits
We had little care for the world is our playground now
We are the reason why we need to check both sides of the road

We lost our ways
We took the beaten path somewhere down the road
We never returned and traveled further down the darkness
We are the monsters under our bed

We are the generation of idiots
We seldom do the right thing and even seldom for the right reason
We do things on a whim, on impulse, barely thinking
We are the kids our parents told us to never become

And yet, here we are.
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Old July 13th, 2017 (8:05 PM).
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As love always is

Love. The moment of intense clarity. Sometimes teasing, sometimes real. Always fun. Always remembered. As love always is.

Love! A sudden rise of emotions. A swelling. A crest on the wave. The ups to the downs. Confusing. As love always is.

Love? Questions. The why it do happen. The why it didn't happen. Mystery. Answers. As love always is.

Love; a pause. The beginning to an end. The screech before the halt. The denoument. The final wave. As love always is.

Love. The end. Giving up. A dead end. As love always is.

Love. No more. As love always is.
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Old July 14th, 2017 (12:12 AM).
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She

She is the love I found
Amidst the darkness abound
But I was not the love she found
My love, I crashed aground
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Old July 18th, 2017 (11:07 PM).
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To Love is to be Constantly Hurt

To love
Is to be constantly hurt
By words and actions you never thought would hurt you

To love
Is to be constantly hurt
Seeing another person happy without you

To love
Is to be constantly hurt
Feeling empty arms hug you when you need one the most

To love
Is to be constantly hurt
Realizing you love the pain more than the emptiness
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Old July 23rd, 2017 (10:58 PM).
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You Hear it Best

You can hear it best
In silence
When no sound pervades
And all you can hear is
Your heart thumping
Your blood flowing
Through the veins and your body
Giving you life
Reborn anew

You can hear it best
In silence
When no sound pervades
All all you can hear is
The wind whistling
The leaves swaying
Bending to the breeze's whim
Surrendering to the power
Tyranny of good men

You can hear it best
In silence
When no sound pervades
And all you can hear is
The creaking of the house
The footsteps in your mind
Filling your mind with irrational fear
Scared of the unknown

You can hear it best
In silence
When no sound pervades
Love.
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