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I prefer having an introduction (hence example one), so readers have a better sense of what to expect when they start reading the article. That's just my preference.

That said, It may be worth having the individual quotes as their own paragraphs, as we can make them look like quotes on the WordPress side. See this article for an example of that formatting.

Also, when you write the article, do you want to do it in this thread or in the privacy of the Editor's Workshop? If the latter, i'll copy a post of yours into a new thread there so you can get started in there.
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E3 Reactions: PokéCommunity's take on Nintendo's E3 Treehouse event!


Hi there, everyone! Name's Angelica here, also known as colours on PokeCommunity! Here, I'll cover the Sun & Moon E3 reactions from many of our users around PC, as well as toss in some of my own opinions. First and foremost, I want to start off by getting the opinion of Blue, who's a huge regular of the Sun & Moon section here on PC! And boy, did he have quite a lot to say about what he found most interesting about the presentation:

"I thought the Pokémon Sun & Moon segmant of E3 offered a great deal of new information. It was nice to see some actual gameplay footage to get a feel of how the games move and look in live action. The first feature that stood out for me was the new User Interface in battle. This feature allows you to see any stat increases/reductions and assists the player on what moves are super effective or not super effective against their target amongst other things. This is something that will help me out greatly at times and I really appreciate the smaller details that are going into these games."

It's not surprising that the level of detail manages to catch his eye, after all. It doesn't stop there, though! There was even more that he was impressed with such as the visuals of the games, as well:

"The graphics was another thing that really stood out for me. Seeing how the player moves through the areas really gave a better perspective to what it will be like when we actually get to play the games. I love how colourful and vibrant the region looks, this footage was just from the first Island but I'm really looking forward to seeing how the remaining Islands look and feel. It seems that each Island has a different enviroment and it will be interesting to see how they differ to each other and what role each Island plays in the storyline."

I also managed to have an opportunity to get Dragon's opinion on this, and he shared very similar sentiments:

"I think the content shown for s/m was pretty exciting! I really like the whole guardians bit, and how the battle system is more fleshed out, so we could see the in-game trainers on screen, as well as seeing the statistics on the battle (i.e. Attack power down indicators)."

I also managed to find a very interesting post by user baceevee that was also very pleased with what they saw at E3:

"After seeing the live stream, I have to say I am very happy with what they've shown us so far. The region looks so very detailed and fleshed out. I like the fact that stat changes are easily accessible in the bottom screen battle menu. Also want to point out the fact that I LOVE the new battle menu! I am also very intrigued by the fact that the trainers are now going to be shown behind the Pokémon in battle. That will give us an interesting scale of Pokémon size compared to trainer size. Although that may be a small detail, it is one that I look forward to.

Honestly, the type effectiveness showing up under each move depending on what Pokémon the trainer has out is not something that I personally like, but I understand why they are doing it. They are trying to appeal to the masses, and there is nothing wrong with that. Those of us that have gripes about that and other 'hand holding mechanics' (myself included) have to keep in mind that these games are generally geared towards children, and they want to make it as easy as possible for any given individual to just pick up the game and play. I imagine they will have something in the options menu that could turn that specific feature on and off, but I'm not expecting it necessarily."

And while these users in particular were impressed, there were some concers with certain parts of the gameply, most notably the menu where you select your moves, as pointed out by Satoshi:

"Was screaming in another thread, but I'll roll into this one.

I looove the battle backgrounds, so much detail. It's come a long way. ;;

Also, the graphics and other things aren't disappointing at all, and I'm super excited for the battle royale feature. The one thing that concerns me is that the moves are labeled to make battles easier, and I hope there's a way to turn that off, or maybe it'll only stick around towards the beginning of the game?

Because this:



Will kind of take away from newer players having to actually learn what moves and what types work the best on their own. I think that's a crucial part of the gameplay, and learning about the games, and also part of what makes battles feel so risky and interesting. I feel like they didn't need to add that in. We've been learning just fine without it for years. :/"

And they're not alone on the visuals department though; I too was extremely impressed with the visuals of this game. It all seems much more polished and well done compared to X/Y or even ORAS. I suppose it kind of makes you think whether or not X/Y and ORAS were some sort of a "test run", so to speak, for the actual 3D games, which is Sun & Moon? Take a look for yourself, readers, and see whether or not the graphics and battle interface changes really are something to marvel about:


This quite honestly shows... an extremely beautiful scenery! For those of you who are unable to watch a video due to slow internet speed, basically, in this gameplay video, we're given an introduction to Alola as a region in a way while one of the E3 hosts gives us a short tour through our first battle with Hau, who's one of our rivals! At the beginning of the video, we're also introduced to Hala, who's said to be a very strong trainer. Is he a Gym Leader, or is he someone like Red who has very high level Pokémon that you'll battle post-game? Who knows, but personally, I'm hoping for the latter. You're also introduced to Lillie, who was shown in an earlier trailer as Professor Kukui's mysterious assistant. The more keen viewers will see that there's something moving about in her bag... but what is it? Is it a new Pokémon, or something more? I guess we'll see in the coming months, won't we?

There's also more that was revealed during the Treehouse E3; most notably some new Pokémon! There were actually two that rumours say are Corocoro exclusives, but we'll definitely see within the coming days whether or not GameFreak or Corocoro themselves would provide the English names. Anyway, here they are, and with some more opinions from some Sun & Moon regulars, to boot!

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What about the new Pokémon??

Rockruff and Komala



When these two Pokémon were revealed in Corocoro, it was honestly the first sign that things were, at the very least, heading in the right direction!

SERIOUSLY THOUGH, A PUPPY!!!! AND A KOALA!! I want to see what Blue thinks about this one!

"I'm really happy they gave it a Rock typing rather than Normal. Rockruff is another Pokémon I'll probably end up using on my team due to how much I like the design and the fact that it has the potential to be a great Rock-type Pokémon."

Definitely agreeing there! Game Freak has most certainly broken the mold as far as your typical early route dog expectation being a Normal-type. But it certainly brings to mind what kind of evolution Iwankko would have?

At any rate, what about Komala?

"I do like the design but for me it is a little too simplistic to how I envisioned a Koala Bear Pokémon to be."

I suppose he has a point with how simple it does look. An interesting thought to point out is whether or not simplicty in a Pokémon's design is for the better or not, but that's also a really subjective point in and of itself (obviously). Personally, I don't see anything wrong with a simple design in a Pokémon, as long as it's done well.

Yungoose



The first thing anyone noticed about Yungoose was its... well, oversized teeth, if that's a way of putting it. It's pretty cute otherwise, though. This time around, I wanted to see what Dragon thought of this Pokémon, and he had this to share:

"Yungoose is a pretty cool looking Pokémon; the expression is a taaaad weird though. xD BUT I hope it will evolve into a spectacular Pokémon!"

Which is precisely how I feel. It's strange-looking, but it remains to be seen whether or not its evolved form would have bigger teeth a la Raticate or whether it's just a base form thing. And apparently there's also an interesting comparison to Donald Trump, according to Esper's post here.

"Yungoose looks like Donald Trump. Please tell me I'm not the only one who sees it."

I'll leave that to the imagination of the readers!

Pikipek




This one was quite the reveal, and I suppose in a good way. It's revealed to be Normal/Flying, although I'm personally hoping for it to change its typing somewhere down the line. Ultimately, I don't really care so much what direction it goes in, as long as it isn't a useless bird like Unfezant.

One noteworthy thing about Pikipek though, is one of its abilities, Skill Link, which means that any multi-hit moves would be able to hit five times in succession. User Dter ic put it quite nicely in this post:

"I'll consider using Pikipek solely for Skill Link. I wonder what multi hit moves it'll get - most likely ones are Fury Attack and bullet seed from its description. Would be nice if Pikipek got its own flying type tail slap moves for a nice powerful STAB."

I agree, and I'll likely use this Pokémon for the same reason. I hope whatever Pikipek evolves into would make excellent use of its Skill Link ability.

Grubbin



I personally wasn't too impressed with this thing at first. I'l be honest, I can't say too much about my impressions about it because, while it's a Pokémon that's kinda adorable, I also don't personally foresee myself using it a whole lot. Bluntly speaking, it seems rather boring? But perhaps it'll grow on me in the future!

Battle Royal; the match-up that fans have been waiting for!L



Well then. This was quite unexpected.

In the Nintendo Treehouse reveal, a new battle mode was introduced---the Battle Royal--that's basically a four way battle between you and your friends! I have to admit, it's personally very interesting, but moreso is how the rules work here. (Un)fortunately (depending on how you feel, generally), the battle doesn't operate on whoever's the "last man standing", rather, the battle ends once one trainer loses all of their Pokémon. The winner is tallied upon defeated Pokémon as well as the remaining Pokémon a particular player has. It's quite likely that it's done this way to avoid unnecessarily long stall wars.

Personally, I really wish that it was done to the last man, but I can see the reasoning, here. Blackswordsman93 felt the same way, here:

"It's a very fun idea. I just wish the battle didn't end as soon as one trainer lost their Pokémon. There should be an option to play till there's one trainer left standing."

Though if anything, it'd make even more sense to knock out two players first...maybe we'll find out more information about this as more news surfaces? I also managed to get some opinions from Blue about his thoughts on the Battle Royal, and it's as follows:

"The Battle Royal isn't something I'll end up using all that much if I'm honest. A cool concept but I'm just not down with the idea of a four way battle. I didn't like the Rotational or Triple battles from Gen V and this seems like it could feel like a similar concept to me."

I don't blame him for thinking it's probably a gimmicky mode such as Rotational and Triple battles. After all, those battle modes failed to really generate any sort of interest, but I'd blame that on the fact that there were barely any trainers in which you can battle these kinds of modes to begin with in the first place. Maybe there'll be more opportunities in which there will be a four-way battle? I sure hope there are a few battles here and there that will get players accustomed to the idea, at the very least. While I had a conversation with Dragon about his opinions on the Battle Royal, he had this to say:

"The Battle Royal looks interesting, but I'm not sure how it would work on a competitive scale? Perhaps the best strategy is to rely on a really bulky Pokémon, like Slowbro, one who can sponge hits yet hit back? Maybe a hard hitting fast Pokémon too, like Weavile or Alakazam could pull out a vitory before the opponents can react? I'm curious about possible strategies!"

He's has a point. it's hard to really predict viable competitive strategies unless we actually experiment for ourselves. All I know is that pulling off a stall-y like playstale is going to be a huge pain to the other players, as that's going to drag on things for quite some time, but I suppose that's why three players could gang up on one, as to make that strategy basically unviable. I also spoke with Achromatic about his thoughts on the Battle Royal, and he seemed really optimistic about it!

"I just know this is going to be incredibly addicting and I can't wait to play online with friends in this way. We used to do this ourselves back in the days of X/Y so it's good to have a proper way to do it now."

Closing Thoughts


Overall, this E3 (and well, the month of June in general for news) was...interesting, let's put it that way. I'll sum this up with another quote from Achromatic, because this also sums up how I feel about the event (and possibly many others, as well!):

"It was pretty dang exciting and we got way more than I expected. Especially seeing all the new Pokémon just hyped me up so much. This was a fantastic event."

We've got some pretty decent Pokémon reveals (IWANKKO AAAAA) as well as the amazing introduction of the Battle Royale (although let's be real, I really wish it would be the last man standing... isn't that what a Battle Royale is supposed to be about?). With that being said, I really hope we would continue to get more incredible news alongside some new interesting Pokémon! In my eyes, Sun & Moon certainly hasn't disappointed... yet, but let's hope it doesn't, yeah?
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Overall it seems like a good start. I'll save nitpicking on stuff when it's all done, but general comments:

- Don't use the [quote] tag for quotes here, as it's more work in transferring from the forums to WordPress otherwise (we basically have to undo each one). Just have them as a separate paragraph and we'll take the formatting from there for those bits.
- In the first instance of mentioning someone by username, put their username in italics and have said username link to their profile page. When mentioned again, just their username in italics will suffice.
- I'm not keen on clarifying which user is a mod or not. It distracts from the content and isn't important to the reader that one member has so-and-so duties on the forums.
- After an ellipsis (...), use a space (for example... this.)
- In most cases, numbers less than 100 should be written out with letters (so four > 4, three > 3, etc).
- I think we can throw in images (nothing large) of the new Pokemon that could fit in around the text. Again don't worry about formatting beyond inserting the images - I feel that we could try some text wrapping for them within the WordPress article to fit in well.
- If you don't get sufficient responses in PM with opinions, you can refer to posts already made in the Sun/Moon forum section as well. On that note, consider using other people's thoughts than Blue/Dragon's if you haven't already - no harm in a broader range.

Also, please supply me or Jake an email, username (cannot be changed!) and nickname (can be changed; how you'll be listed as an author). This is for creating an account for you on the PC WordPress side which makes for easier/fancier author crediting. You can PM me that info too for privacy.

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    If you want a cover image, do you have any particular suggestions/ideas? The artist team do seem to want more stuff to do. :V
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    i will gladly help you if you like
    what ideas do you have yourself for your article? ^_^
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    I'm going to echo the earlier sentiments that for such a long article it will be better to have a greater scope of sources for the opinions you draw attention to. Aim for four or five (including yourself).

    The following line is also really confusing

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    We've had an early bug line every generation and Venomoth's line isn't even one of them. So either this is misinformation or you need to reword what you mean. Otherwise it's looking fairly good.
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    We've had an early bug line every generation and Venomoth's line isn't even one of them. So either this is misinformation or you need to reword what you mean. Otherwise it's looking fairly good.
    every single generation except gen 5 (and I was referring to butterfly/moths particularly), from quick research, although for some reason I completely forgot about beautify/mothim for some reason.

    i'll fix that as soon as i can. x.x;
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    every single generation except gen 5 (and I was referring to butterfly/moths particularly), from quick research, although for some reason I completely forgot about beautify/mothim for some reason.

    i'll fix that as soon as i can. x.x;
    Wouldn't Leavanny and Scolipede fill that role?
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    ...Leavanny and Scolipede are butterflies/moths?
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      Since you only specify "but I'm personally hoping for this one to evolve into this generation's moth/butterfly/whatever," you might want to just cut out "this generation's" since that would lead to the confusion that gimme (and others) might get when they read that line. You could say something like "Hopefully Grubbin will stick with tradition and evolve into something like a butterfly/moth/whatever."

      I haven't actually read through this yet, though I've skimmed it a few times already. I also agree that more opinions from more people are needed.

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      And this sentence just feels like it's trying to cover a lot of information at once. There's too many parenthetical parts to this, and the sentence gets confusing.
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      ...Leavanny and Scolipede are butterflies/moths?
      Whoops got myself a little mixed up since they're Unova's early bugs. They're definitely not moths or butterflies though lol
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      hey!!

      due to declining health (I'm physically weak among other things like apparent eye/vision issues), this is probably going to take a bit longer than expected, but i let marcin know about this ahead of time. i'll still try and do what i can to get things done, though
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      Hiya Hunter! :> Do you think things look a lot cleaner now? I included two more people's opinions on the intro and then one more person's opinion on Battle Royale. My concern is that I don't want to include too many opinions because the article itself would be way too long, or is that not going to be an issue? D:
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        It does look better! And don't worry about long articles, since we have a way to post those now to WordPress.

        Just some things I noticed.

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        Did you just forget to put a name here?

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        And apparently there's also an interesting comparison to Donald Trump, Esper's post here is to be believed.
        "if Esper's post here is to be believed."

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        I hope whatever Pikipek evolves into would make excellent use of its Skill Link ability?
        You don't need a question mark here at the end of this sentence, since it doesn't read like a question.

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        Personally, I really wish that I was done to the last man
        "wish that it was done to the last man"

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        lets be real,
        Believe both of these are supposed to be "let's."

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        Sun & Moon certainly hasn't disappointed....yet
        Only three dots for an ellipsis.

        This is a much better article in my eyes with the opinions of different people about different things.
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        Thanks so much for the feedback ^_^ Also managed to add Ben's opinion in the article. :o I also fixed the errors that you pointed out! Do you think it's ready for the editing stage now?

        Also changed the title of the article to something...more exciting. xD
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        Overall it reads well! Got a bunch of typos but all minor and a couple other small things, and after that imo it gets approval, so let us know when edits are applied and we'll transfer to Wordpress. =)

        - Need a cover image (any ideas/suggestions?). We also have an art team that may be able to help.
        - Excerpt - a short sentence or two describing the article - is needed.

        Couple more major things - I think the article should also mention the English names for the Pokemon mentioned, now we have them. Idk about changing all the e.g. Iwanko comments, but we should at least reference the official name a few times and make it clear Komola/Nekkoala are one and the same, etc.

        The last one - each case of Pokémon/PokéCommunity should be Pokémon/PokéCommunity (with the é). You can do a find + replace or replace all for those.

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        There was even more that he was impressed with, such as the visuals of the games, as well:
        Remove the ', as well' imo - not necessary for the sentence as you already indicate it's something else he liked.
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        I love how colourful and vibrant the Region looks,
        I wouldn't capitalised 'region' here. (While this is a quote from someone else, any typos/grammar stuff can be changed.)
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        This quite honestly shows...an extremely beautiful scenery!
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        The more keen viewers will see that there's something moving about in her bag...but what is it?
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        The first thing anyone noticed about Yungoose was its...well, oversized teeth
        Have a space after the ellipsis (... like so).
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        Ultimately, I don't really care so much what direction it goes in, as long as it isn't a useless bird like Unfezant. I have to be honest, here.
        Last sentence sounds odd by itself like that. Maybe consider a rewording.
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        I wonder what multi hit moves it'll get - most likely ones are Fury Attack and bullet seed from it's description. Would be nice if Pikipek got it's own flying type tail slap moves for a nice powerful STAB."
        Both "it's" here should be "its".
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        although let's be real, I really wish it would be the last man standing...isn't that what a Battle Royale is supposed to be about?).
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        In my eyes, Sun & Moon certainly hasn't disappointed...yet, but let's hope it doesn't, yeah?
        Space after the ... in both cases here. Note also it is a Battle Royal, not Royale I believe, so that needs changing in all cases.

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        i will gladly help you if you like
        what ideas do you have yourself for your article? ^_^
        Hiya Pebbles! Sorry for the incredibly late response but I wanted to get this article done first and whatnot, I suppose. D: What I had in mind in particular may be kind of complex (I hope not, but idk), but given the theme and the idea of the article, I wanted the cover art to showcase the E3 Pokemon in particular that were revealed. I'm honestly pretty lax on anything else on that front because the article subject makes it pretty flexible to play around with just as long as it has the Pokes and all. ^__^ Sorry if this is unhelpful. ;_;


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        "PokéCommunity user colours gives her own thoughts--as well as the thoughts of many other members of PC--on what they thought of Nintendo's E3 Treehouse reveals!"

        I'll PM you with Wordpress account info, etc.
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          Hiya Pebbles! Sorry for the incredibly late response but I wanted to get this article done first and whatnot, I suppose. D: What I had in mind in particular may be kind of complex (I hope not, but idk), but given the theme and the idea of the article, I wanted the cover art to showcase the E3 Pokemon in particular that were revealed. I'm honestly pretty lax on anything else on that front because the article subject makes it pretty flexible to play around with just as long as it has the Pokes and all. ^__^ Sorry if this is unhelpful. ;_;
          you talking about the pokemon i see above right? preferences in text?
          i will try and make something for you asap^_^
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          you talking about the pokemon i see above right? preferences in text?
          i will try and make something for you asap^_^
          yeah!

          Also, "PokéCommunity on E3!" would be nice. n.n
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            yeah!

            Also, "PokéCommunity on E3!" would be nice. n.n
            hope this is ok

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            YES! That's awesome n.n ty so much Pebbles
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