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You have a nice tempo, the only thing that irritates me is that 'lay' is past tense, while the rest of the verses are always present tense in your poem.
I agree that your poems are depressing yet good.
Poem's dont have to be happy to be good. It just has to express emotion.
Your poems are sad and really make a point. That's what makes them intresting.
I'd love to read more of your poems.
Keep up the good work ;)
You have a nice tempo, the only thing that irritates me is that 'lay' is past tense, while the rest of the verses are always present tense in your poem.
I like this! It is depressing, but it has a good rhythm. And it rhymes!
I didn't know people still wrote depressing poetry that rhymes.
Also, just had to address this one:
Actually, if English class is still with me, lay is present tense. Laid is past tense.
... I think.
Lay is one of those weird words that you can never get the right form of.
But currently the title is wrong; lie is a fib. Lay was correct, I believe.