The island of forgotten dreams

Hello, everyone. My name is King Peek. I am creating an RPG MAker game on my RPG Maker XP.

It is called "Island of Forgotten Dreams"

Story :
You are the captain on a ship called the "SS. Voyager". You are on an expedition to find the so-called Island of Forgotten Dreams. One of your crew members sees a wierd figure in the horizon. It was... Thorn. The Monster of destruction. He was speeding towards your ship...
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The rest will be revealed ingame :)

Screenies:
(Attacment)
1 - Title Screen [Thanks to Peekimon]
2 - The Bridge [Help from Peekimon]

very cool logo! lemme' guess it's for RPG Maker XP!
looks like an okay plot aswell! can't wait for some screens!

I updated the starting post ^^

Well, I wish you a lot of luck on this game of yours! <- Does that make sense??

I'm not sure..... anyway, I think Ican guess what happens, he speeds to your ship and destroys it, you wake up on the shore of an island and your mission is to get off the island?

Am I right?

Cool, but there is something wrong it the map

You missed a part of the shadow and the other conor of the wall.

Other then that, kepp it up.

PS: Why does everybody uses RTP grafics for a non-Pokemon RMXP game?

well no u are not right and i cant tell you more but take a look at the screen shot

Is there a door? if so why is that there? You can walk in the room with the opening
at the bottom :P. Oh well..that is just me.

Looks very nice. ^^ Good luck with it.