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Old February 12th, 2016 (11:28 PM). Edited February 13th, 2016 by bobandbill.
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Love is in the air as Valentine’s Day is upon us (run. RUN!), and once again many of us aspiring Pokémon Trainers may find ourselves in a sticky situation. What do we get for that special someone of ours? Worry not, as Pokémon Center has got the perfect gift. They might not be Pokéballs, but they’re certainly just as cool.

If you’re looking for the perfect Valentine’s card, the online store is selling a selection of Pokémon-themed cards. Available in packs of twelve with little Pokémon stickers to seal them with, each card adorns a unique Pokémon along with a sweet (and witty) phrase. Some of which are sure to make even the coldest of hearts melt. We're talking to you, Sabrina!

Some of the more memorable ones include Zorua with “Our love is no illusion,” Inkay and “I’m flipping over you!” and an Espurr with “Be mine.” Because who wouldn’t love a Valentine’s card with one of the creepiest Pokémon in existence, staring deep into your soul? We know we would.

We’d be doing you a disservice if we forgot about Slowpoke and its “Happy New Year.”

Totally. Charming.

Of course, these are just a few from many possible options. You can check the full range here.

Here’s hoping they’ll capture the heart of your one true love this Valentine’s Day!
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Old February 13th, 2016 (4:57 AM). Edited February 13th, 2016 by curiousnathan.
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Cover photo sorted:
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Other images to be included:

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Poor Slowpoke. It's always been somewhat... behind the times.


Could then possibly have a small rotation of the ones mentioned in the article and a few others at the bottom/toward the end:
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With 42 different cards to choose from, there are plenty of options for finding the perfect one!
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Old February 13th, 2016 (5:21 AM).
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If you’re looking for the perfect Valentine’s card, the store is selling a selection of Pokémon-themed cards
the online store, perhaps, for those who don't know about the Pokemon Center. (urgh american spelling). I'd also link to the main page for it in the first paragraph separately.
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I’m talking to you Sabrina!
"We're" (as you use 'We' elsewhere and it's best to be consistent, and we as in the Daily team suits this better than 'I' imo). Also put in a comma before "Sabrina" - commas before names, nicknames, etc when used to address someone.

Looks good otherwise! Images can be added as well. =)
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Some of the more memorable ones include Zorua with “Our love is no illusion,” Inkay and “I’m flipping over you!” and an Espurr with “Be mine.”
I think this would look better if you changed that first 'and' with 'with', or the second 'and' with 'as well as' or something similar.

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Should this change to 'we' as well?

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Old February 13th, 2016 (8:30 PM).
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Be mine, Nathan.
No need to ask. I'm already yours
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