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Old February 24th, 2016 (2:20 AM). Edited April 22nd, 2016 by gimmepie.
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So, as pretty much everyone on staff knows at this point, I'm an enormous fan of this pokemon and think it's quite underrated. I'd like to contribute an article in the same style as ddrox13's Quagsire and Frosslass ones (for continuity) exploring Bronzing's viability in the OU tier as well as looking at its weaknesses and alternatives.

For anyone unfamiliar with ddrox's format it goes something like

Glossary of Terms
Summary of the Pokemon
Recommended Set(s)
Pros/Cons of Use
Alternatives

Although I think I'd probably do away with the Glossary and include a section about good teammates for the pokemon.
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This article will introduce you to a Pokémon that is often overlooked, often forgotten and rarely used in the OverUsed (OU) tier (yes that's an RU pun). Despite its unpopularity though, this Pokémon is actually pretty cool and if you use it well, it can be highly effective. As the title suggests, this wonderful Pokémon is Bronzong, the Psychic/Steel type introduced to us in the depths of Mt. Coronet.

We're going to look at what makes Bronzong great and we'll also examine its weaknesses. We'll be focusing primarily on the OU tier, however in the case of Bronzong much of what is true of it in OU is more or less the same in its home tier of RU, UU and even Ubers. Few Pokémon can boast to being usable in four tiers, just one of the many things I like about it.

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#437 Bronzong
Classification: The Bronze Bell Pokémon
Type: Psychic, Steel
Abilities: Levitate, Heat Proof, Heavy Metal
Weaknesses: Fire, Ghost, Dark and Ground (if not Levitate)
Resistances: Normal, Grass, Ice, Flying, Psychic, Rock, Dragon, Steel, Fairy
Immunity: Poison, Ground (If Levitate)
Evolves From: Bronzor at Lv. 33
Height: 1.3m
Weight: 187.0kg
Tier: RU
January OU Usage: 0.49783% (164th)

Base Stats (Range at Lv 100)
HP: 67 (244-338)
Attack: 89 (201-304)
Defence: 116 (260-364)
Special Attack: 79 (179-282)
Special Defence: 116 (260-364)
Speed: 33 (78-181)
Base Stat Total: 500

With mediocre Speed and offensive stats that aren't much better, it is obvious that Bronzong is no sweeper. However, Bronzong has a lot to boast about defensively. It possesses a grand total of nine resistances, including some of the most common offensive types, and with the Levitate ability (which should always be the ability you choose) two immunities on top of that.

With its great defensive stats and its plethora of resistances Bronzong checks a lot of dangerous threats present in the OU metagame. Thanks to Levitate, this includes many Pokémon that other Steel types have to fear since Ground pretty much owns the meta and Earthquake is very widely spread. In fact, out of the top ten most-used Pokémon in the OU tier, several struggle with Bronzong (depending on the sets used).

Another bonus to Bronzong, is that it takes no damage at all from Spikes and resists the omnipresent threat of Stealth Rock. Furthermore, Bronzong has access to Stealth Rock, Trick Room and Toxic so it is also a useful utility Pokémon in many respects instead of being a passive wall.

Unfortunately, Bronzong does have a number of flaws. With the Steel type's nerf in Generation Six, Bronzong now has to fear common Dark-typed sweepers as well as some other Psychic types since most have access to Shadow Ball. It iss also weak to Fire attacks which are very widespread. It doesn't end there either, with no means of recovery outside of the Leftovers item, Bronzong is going to rack up the hits quickly. This problem could also be exacerbated by a Scald burn from Keldeo or Slowbro since, despite being based on a bell, Bronzong cannot learn Heal Bell. This means that you can't rely on Bronzong to be a consistent wall. It should instead be used as a defensive pivot to slow down your opponent's momentum whilst setting up things that will benefit your team such as Trick Room or Stealth Rock.

Essentially, Bronzong has a lot of pros, but its cons leave it very situational. It shouldn't be discounted, but if you're going to use Bronzong you will need to be careful and not rely too heavily on it.


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The Sets

Special Tank/Defensive Pivot
Bronzong @Leftovers
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252HP / 4 Atk / 252 SDef
Nature: Sassy (+SDef -Speed)
-Gyro Ball
-Earthquake
-Stealth Rock
-Hidden Power (Ice)/Protect/Toxic

This is the set I prefer to use on Bronzong and one that is more or less the same no matter the tier you plan to use it in, although I use it in OU. Gyro Ball is Bronzong's primary method of dealing damage. A Sassy nature and no Speed IVs make Bronzong as slow as possible, raising its base power to the highest it can be. This move can hit a lot of the fast sweepers that Bronzong checks surprisingly hard.

Bronzong's Attack is pretty average, so Earthquake is not going to straight up murder things like you're used to seeing. What it does though, is allow you to take a sizeable chunk out of threats that are likely to switch into Bronzong such as Bisharp or Manectric.

Stealth Rock is one of Bronzong's biggest assets to a team and the earlier you get it up the better. Switch Bronzong in against a Pokémon that can't touch it like non-Knock Off Landorus sets, Fairies or Celebi and use the forced switch to set up Stealth Rock. Fast Defoggers fear Gyro Ball, so that's a bonus here.

The last move slot here comes with a few viable options. If you want an extra deterrent to Ground Pokémon that are likely to switch in, Hidden Power (Ice) hits them super-effectively. If you're worried about taking dangerous hits from unexpected moves, Protect is a good way to scout things out and might make your loveable Bronzong last a bit longer. The truth of the matter though, is that with no EVs invested in your Special Attack, Hidden Power isn't going to do very much damage (you're probably better off just using Gyro Ball in many cases) and Protect is just delaying the inevitable when Leftovers are the only recovery you have available. That's where Toxic comes in. Toxic is a nasty move that will poison the inevitable Fire, Water or Ground switch-in, gradually whittling the health of the Pokémon down and helping your team in the long term. This is especially helpful if your opponent runs a Life Orb.

Trick Room Lead
Bronzong @Mental Herb/Focus Sash/Normal Gem
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 SDef
Nature: Sassy (+SDef, -Speed)
-Trick Room
-Stealth Rock
-Gyro Ball
-Explosion

This is the other kind of set you can use with Bronzong. It's much more gimmicky than the set I mentioned above, but it also has a lot of potential to be quite potent. The first thing you'll notice is that this Pokémon has a lot of potential items and longevity isn't really the goal. The Mental Herb, for one turn, prevents Lead Bronzong from being rendered totally useless by Taunt. The Focus Sash prevents a Fire or Dark Pokemon from knocking you out in one turn, leaving Bronzong just enough HP left to set up Trick Room or Stealth Rock (depending on which is more important to you) before it gets wiped out during the next turn. The Normal Gem is basically just to allow Bronzong to make the biggest boom possible if it explodes.

Trick Room is the ultimate support for a team full of normally slow Pokemon (like Bronzong) and turns the tables on fast offensive teams forcing the faster Pokemon to move after the slower. It turns slow, bulky attackers into dangerous and potent sweepers. The trouble here is that when you run into defensive or stall teams, you're sometimes more likely to be doing them a favour than hurt them by using Trick Room.

Explosion turns Bronzong into a suicide bomber. Once it has set up Stealth Rock and/or Trick Room and doesn't really provide any more benefit to your team, use Explosion to rip a hole into your opposition and give you a safe switch into your next Pokémon.

Gyro Ball and Stealth Rock work the same as with the other set, the only difference here is that as a Trick Room setter, Bronzong is basically a suicide lead. It exists to set up your team and then explode rather than to repeatedly wall and irritate dangerous threats. Personally, I feel like the former set makes better use of Bronzong's strengths, but you can definitely make this one work.

To Use or Not to Use...

Pros
-Great defensive stats with 116 for both Defence and Special Defence.
-Nine resistances including those to common offensive types.
-Two immunities.
-Immune to Spikes and Toxic Spike, resists Stealth Rock.
-Effective user of Stealth Rock, Toxic and Trick Room.
-Checks common threats in four tiers.

Cons
-Weak to common Dark, Ghost and Fire attacks. In particular Pursuit and Knock Off are dangerous.
-Vulnerable to burns.
-No recovery outside Leftovers.
-For some reason can't learn Heal Bell.
-Extremely slow.
-Poor offensive stats can leave it as setup fodder or Taunt bait.
-Either situational or gimmicky.


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Points of Comparison

Jirachi: Jirachi can check a lot of the same Pokémon that Bronzong can. However it is also a lot more versatile having a decent Speed tier, a very nasty flinching set when combined with a Choice Scarf and a huge movepool. Its defences are a bit weaker than Bronzong's though and it lacks its key immunity to Ground-types which hit it very hard - especially if you chose to use it offensively. Jirachi also suffers more from paralysis or burn (although Wish sets worry far less about burns).

Metagross: Same as Jirachi, Metagross checks many of the same things as Bronzong but also has a lot more offensive power. On top of that, it has access to a dangerous Mega Evolution with an ability that makes its already powerful contact moves 33% stronger. Furthermore, Metagross actually has a higher Defence stat than Bronzong, especially when Mega-Evolved, although its Special Defence is lower. Like Jirachi though, Metagross is extremely vulnerable to Paralysis and Burn and doesn't have Bronzong's immunity to Ground attacks and Spikes.

Azelf: Azelf is good competition for Bronzong as a suicide lead. It might not have all of Bronzong's resistances and defensive abilities but those aren't really requirements for a suicide lead. Azelf is capable of setting up Trick Room and Stealth Rock just as efficiently but will also do a lot more damage with Explosion. It is worth noting though, that because of its excellent Speed, Trick Room will work against it.

Smeargle: Smeargle is the ultimate suicide lead in many ways. It has access to almost every move in the game and doesn't fear Shadow Sneak or Sucker Punch since it rarely uses offensive moves and is immune to the former. It has access to literally every kind of entry hazard, lots of nasty status moves - including the particularly unpleasant Spore and Dark Void - and can also be a viable setter of Trick Room. Where it has problems however are its terrible stats. It can't run a Mental Herb to ward of Taunt users like Bronzong because it absolutely needs a Focus Sash to keep it alive long enough to do anything. Furthermore, once its Focus Sash is used up it is extremely vulnerable to priority attacks. Suicide leads tend to be like this, which is why Bronzong's great defensive abilities set it apart from even the great Azelf and Smeargle.

Steelix: Whilst it lacks Bronzong's ability to function in tiers above RU, within its tier Mega-Steelix is a formidable tank and one of the best in the tier. With access to Stealth Rock, great Attack and a positively enormous Defence it gives Bronzong a lot of competition in the tier. It also doesn't take massive hits from Pursuit or Knock Off. Unfortunately for Steelix though, the same lack of a Psychic typing that gives it this protection removes Bronzong's Fighting neutrality. It is also vulnerable to Earthquake which is very widespread in every tier, takes up a Mega slot and has no recovery at all, not even from Leftovers since it needs its Mega Stone.

Registeel: Like Steelix, Registeel can't function in higher tiers but gives Bronzong a run for its money in RU. Registeel has a brilliant 150 for both its Defence and Special Defence and a fantastic ability in Clear Body which prevents those stats from being lowered. It also boasts a pure Steel typing, freeing it from Bronzong's deadly weakness to Pursuit and Knock Off. Even better, it has access to Seismic Toss allowing it to do consistent damage, Curse to boost its mediocre Attack and huge Defence at only the expense of its already useless Speed stat and more importantly Stealth Rock, Thunder Wave and Toxic which can cripple many teams. Unfortunately, it has no recovery outside of the risky Rest, is just as vulnerable to Burns and takes hard hits from common Fighting and Ground attacks.

Ferrothorn: One of the biggest competitors for Bronzong's spot in OU and Ubers teams is Ferrothorn. Like Bronzong, it boasts an incredible nine resistances. It also has great defensive stats with a Special Defense equal to that of Bronzong and superior Defence. What's more is its access to a plethora of great support moves including Stealth Rock, Spikes, Thunder Wave and Leech Seed. Its typing frees it from most Steel-typed Pokemon's fear of Ground moves and its ability punishes anything that dares attack it with moves that make contact. Leech Seed also gives it slightly more reliable recovery than Bronzong. Unfortunately the typing that protects it from the deadly Earthquake also leaves it wide open to a 4x weakness to Fire attacks as well as a weakness to common Fighting attacks. A point worth noting here is that Fire and Fighting moves are common amongst Pokémon Ferrothorn is meant to check.

Skarmory: Skarmory is the last contender for Bronzong's slot and also functions in both OU and the Ubers tier. Boasting eight resistances, a whopping 140 Defence and the same two immunities, Skarmory has a lot going for it. Skarmory also has a key advantage over Bronzong thanks to its access to Roost, allowing it reliable recovery. It also can lay Spikes as well as Stealth Rock and has Whirlwind allowing it to phase out threats. On top of that it can also use Defog, removing hazards that are bothering your team (although also removing your own). Access to Taunt can also cause problems for your opponent. Unfortunately for Skarmory, it has distinct disadvantages also. Whilst it has a beastly Defence, its Special Defence is shocking and its typing leaves it weak to common Fire and Electric attacks. This combination of weaknesses and its low Special Defence leave it very vulnerable to notable Special Attackers although its ability does prevent it from being taken out in one shot.


Teammates

Aromatisse: In RU, Aromatisse makes for a great teammate for Bronzong. Aromatisse is a bulky Pokémon that can easily take a Dark attack whilst Bronzong covers its weaknesses to Poison and Steel. Additionally Aromatisse can provide Wish support to make up for Bronzong's lack of recovery.

Exploud: Another great choice for an RU teammate, Exploud is generally too slow to function as a sweeper. However, with Trick Room support from Bronzong can turn into a beast. With an absurdly strong Boomburst as well as a wide range of coverage moves, Exploud can rip through Pokémon that could cause problems for Bronzong. One particularly notable element here is its ability to get a free switch into a Ghost attack and then likely take out the offending Ghost with a Scrappy Boomburst.

Tentacruel: A good option for a partner in UU or OU is Tentacruel. The two have great type synergy, resisting most of each others weaknesses. In addition Tentacruel has access to Rapid Spin allowing it to remove Stealth Rock which would otherwise gradually take a toll on Bronzong. It also adds to the utility of a team with potential to burn or poison the opponent's Pokémon.

Chesnaught: Also a great teammate for Bronzong in UU or OU is Chesnaught. Chesnaught resists Dark moves like the omnipresent Knock Off, which cripples Bronzong and is immune to Shadow Ball, a move that is quite widely spread and hits Bronzong hard. In addition, it also adds further utility to the team by having access to Leech Seed and Spikes. Due to its low Speed (but great Attack), it benefits hugely from Bronzong's Trick Room.

Keldeo: Keldeo is one of the best special sweepers in the OU tier and also works fantastically with Bronzong. It resists most of Bronzong's most common checks and can answer back hard with extremely powerful STAB moves with a chance of inflicting a Scald burn whilst it's at it. Meanwhile, Bronzong checks a lot of the Pokémon that threaten Keldeo such as the majority of Flying Pokémon and, in particular, the very common Latios and Latias.

Slowbro: Slowbro makes for a great partner to Trick Lead Bronzong, in particular in OU. Able to switch into notable Fire-typed threats, such as Talonflame and Charizard X, Slowbro not only covers a key weakness of Bronzong's, but also benefits greatly from Trick Room support due to its decent Special Attack and horrible Speed tier. It must be said though, that Slowbro shares two of Bronzong's weaknesses.

Heracross: Another good OU partner for Bronzong is Mega Heracross. Bisharp and Weavile are common in the OU tier and through their potent STAB-boosted Knock Off pose an enormous threat to the Dark weak Bronzong. Mega-Heracross can switch into a Dark move with ease and then punish the opponents with its enormously powerful multi-hit moves. In addition to this, Mega-Heracross appreciates Trick Room support due to its low Speed.

Arceus (Water): Bronzong's great defensive typing, stats and access to Toxic, Trick Room and Stealth Rock make for a niche as a surprisingly effective support Pokémon in the Ubers tier. In particular, it has the ability to set up Stealth Rock against a large number of Pokémon that check or threaten other Stealth Rock setters. Unfortunately though, Ho-Oh and Primal Groudon exist. Water Arceus however completely walls Ho-Oh and in a pinch can at least hurt Groudon making it a great teammate for Bronzong.

Latios and Latias: Latios and Latias are also a good partners for Bronzong, particularly in Ubers where they can function as a check for the common Ho-Oh and Primal Groudon due to their Fire resistance and immunity to Earthquake/Precipice Blades. In addition to this, access to the Soul Dew item in Ubers allows them to answer back with attacks even more powerful than those of their Mega Evolution whilst Defog can remove Stealth Rock that might be troubling your Bronzong over a longer period of time, although it unfortunately removes your own also. It is worth noting here that Latios is generally preferred due to its offensive presence and that both share Bronzong's weaknesses to Ghost and Dark.


In Conclusion

Bronzong is very underrated and an extremely useful utility or lead Pokémon with great defences, typing and ability as well as access to fantastic support moves in the form of Stealth Rock, Toxic and Trick Room. Boasting nine resistances and two immunities, Bronzong has the ability to check or counter a good number of very common threats. Due to these factors, it can function well across four tiers, a trait rare amongst Pokémon. Despite these positives though, Bronzong faces problems due to a lack of reliable recovery, weak offence and weaknesses to common Dark and Fire sweepers/attacks.

Before you decide if these, admittedly notable, flaws make Bronzong unworthy of your time though, remember that it will not be the only Pokémon on your team. With the right companions, such as slow Fighting types, bulky Water types and/or Wish support, Bronzong can become a force to be reckoned with. It's definitely not going to fit on every team, but under the right conditions Bronzong is extremely effective and I think that its many positives should earn it some consideration.


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    I noticed that there's a lot of instances where you have "it's" when you need "its" for the possessive.

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    Despite it's unpopularity though
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    With it's great defensive stats
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    raising it's base power to the highest it can be
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    It's defences are a bit weaker than Bronzong's though
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    an ability that makes it's already powerful contact moves 33% stronger
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    although it's Special Defence is lower
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    however are it's terrible stats.
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    once it's Focus Sash is used up
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    It's typing frees it
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    it's ability punishes anything
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    although it's ability does prevent it
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    Bronzong covers it's weaknesses to Poison and Steel
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    due to it's low Speed
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    due to it's decent Special Attack and horrible Speed tier
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    punish the opponent with it's enormously powerful multi-hit moves
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    due to it's Fire resistance
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    that it's many positives
    Whew! I think that's all of them!

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    Switch Bronzong in against a pokemon that can't touch it like Excadrill
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    pokemon that threaten Keldeo such as the majority of Flying Pokemon
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    surprisingly effective support pokemon in the Ubers tier.
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    a large number of pokemon that check or threaten
    All of these need to be "Pokémon".

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    the same lack of a Psychic typing that gives it this protection loses it Bronzong's Fighting neutrality
    Don't need that "it" there.

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    "Before you decide if these..."
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    I'll look over this tomorrow.
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    Minor nitpick:
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    Aromatisse: In RU, Aromatisse makes for a great teammate for Bronzong. Aromatisse is a bulky Pokémon that can easily take a Dark attack or specially-oriented Fire attack whilst Bronzong covers it's weaknesses to Poison and Steel. Additionally Aromatisse can provide Wish support to make up for Bronzong's lack of recovery.
    Aromatisse can do everything you mentioned there except take Fire-type attacks. Delphox, Mega Camerupt, and Houndoom rip through it:

    252 SpA Life Orb Delphox Fire Blast vs. 252 HP / 0 SpD Aromatisse: 235-278 (57.8 - 68.4%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Leftovers recovery
    176+ SpA Sheer Force Mega Camerupt Fire Blast vs. 252 HP / 0 SpD Aromatisse: 292-345 (71.9 - 84.9%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Leftovers recovery
    252 SpA Life Orb Houndoom Fire Blast vs. 252 HP / 0 SpD Aromatisse: 230-270 (56.6 - 66.5%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Leftovers recovery

    Obviously, 'every team has six Pokemon' so the balance teams that Bronzong and Aromatisse fit on will obviously carry some form of Fire-type insurance, such as Blastoise or Choiced Flygon. Aromatisse is still a good teammate... it just can't do that :P
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    Alright, this looks pretty good, I talked with you about it on Skype though. But might as well post it here.

    I don't really think you should compare Bronzong to Metagross. Why do I say this? I just feel like you shouldn't compare Pokemons with different roles, Metagross is bulky, yes. But it's not a tank, it's not there to take hits, set hazards, etc. It does a different thing, I understand that both check the same Pokemons, but that's just thanks to typing. That's just my thought, maybe I'm wrong. But comparing Pokemons just for typing, I don't like the idea behind it.

    Jirachi kinda does the same thing, but it can be a mult-role. I don't see the problem on having it on the list.

    Also, there's some bits that you could change, they aren't wrong, though.

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    Excadrill gets through Bronzong with Mold Breaker, Lando can carry Knock Off. it doesn't kill Bronzong, but you're going to lose Leftovers, which is really needed. It doesn't get a free chance against this Pokemons.

    That's all I found there, looks really good though.
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    Thanks for the help there guys. I completely forgot about Mold Breaker and don't know the RU meta very well so it's much appreciated. I'll tweak the article a bit when I go through and make Asty's changes to allow for that. Will also make note of Latios as doing the same thing as Latias.

    As for Metagross, I feel it's use in checking most of the same pokemon does warrant its inclusion.
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    Title should be "How to Battle with Bronzong". Use this image. Yours shows up with a black background for me. Looks great otherwise, nice job.

    Grammar checks are below. Sorry for the length. I should probably start making edits inside the quote if that'll be more convenient.

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    I think you can remove the parentheses from Hidden Power Ice and put paralysis and burn in lowercase, but it's not important.

    Also, you use "also" and "just" too much. Read through Skarmory's section for an example. But yeah, it's something to keep in mind when writing future articles.
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    As the title suggests, this wonderful Pokémon is Bronzong, the Psychic/Steel type introduced to us lurking in the depths of Mt. Coronet.
    I say pick either "introduced to us" or "lurking." Sounds weird if you use both of them.
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    Few pokemon can boast to being usable in four tiers, just one of the many things I like about it.
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    Weaknesses: Fire, Ghost, Dark and Ground (if not Levitate)
    Fire (if not Heatproof)
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    It possesses a grand total of nine resistances, including to some of the most common offensive types, and with the Levitate ability (which should always be the ability you choose) two immunities on top of that.
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    With its great defensive stats and its plethora of resistances Bronzong checks a lot of dangerous threats present in the OU meta-game.
    Metagame doesn't need a hyphen.
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    In fact, of the top ten most-used Pokémon in the OU tier, seven of them can't touch Bronzong.
    out of the top ten

    Also, this isn't true. In order of usage, Landorus-T can use Knock Off, Garchomp can use Fire Blast, Ferrothorn can stall it out with Leech Seed, Talonflame and Heatran are self-explanatory, Rotom-W can use Hydro Pump and burn it, Gengar can use Shadow Ball, Azumarill takes little from Gyro Ball and 2HKOes it with Waterfall (if CB), SDef Clefable takes only ~35% from Gyro Ball and can stall out its PP while setting up, and Excadrill can bypass Levitate with Mold Breaker. With that said, Zong can still check Lando and Chomp, but they can definitely touch/weaken it heavily. Zong loses to everything else.
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    Furthermore, Bronzong has access to Stealth Rock, Trick Room and Toxic itself so it is also a useful utility Pokémon in many respects instead of being a passive wall.
    "Itself" isn't needed here.
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    With the Steel type's nerf in Generation six, Bronzong now has to fear common Dark-typed sweepers as well as some other Psychic types since most have access to Shadow Ball.
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    Dark-type sweepers
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    This problem could also be exacerbated by a Scald burn from Keldeo or Slowbro since, despite being based on a bell, Bronzong cannot learn Heal Bell.
    Pretty sure the comma should go before "since."
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    This means that you can't rely on Bronzong to be a consistent wall, it should instead be used as a defensive pivot to slow down your opponent's momentum whilst setting up things that will benefit your team such as Trick Room or Stealth Rock.
    Put a period after "wall."
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    A Sassy nature and no Speed IVs makes Bronzong as slow as possible, raising its base power to the highest it can be.
    make
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    This move can hit a lot of the fast sweepers that Bronzong checks surprisingly hard.
    "Surprisingly well" sounds better in my opinion.
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    Switch Bronzong in against a Pokémon that can't touch it like many Landorus sets or Celebi and use the forced switch to set up Stealth Rock.
    Careful, Knock Off is very popular on Lando:
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     | Moves                                  | 
     | Earthquake 98.221%                     | 
     | U-turn 82.948%                         | 
     | Stone Edge 64.266%                     | 
     | Stealth Rock 49.420%                   | 
     | Knock Off 47.399%                      |
    I suggest changing that to "non-Knock Off Landorus." You can also plug in Fairy-types here, since Zong will be switching into them the most.
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    If you want an extra deterrent to Latios and Latias that come in wanting to remove the rocks you've just set up, Hidden Power (Ice) hits them super-effectively.
    Gyro Ball is significantly more powerful. HP Ice is used for Lando, Garchomp, and Gliscor. It's a bit useless against the Latis.
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    The truth of the matter though, is that with no EVs invested in your Special Attack, Hidden Power isn't going to do very much damage (you're probably better off just using Gyro Ball) and Protect is just delaying the inevitable when Leftovers are the only recovery you have available.
    "Leftovers is." Pretty sure Leftovers is considered singular, since it's one item. Might be wrong on that.
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    Toxic is a nasty move that will poison the inevitable Fire or Ground switch-in, gradually whittling the health of the Pokémon down and helping your team in the long term.
    Water switch-ins hate Toxic too.
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    Much more gimmicky than the set I mentioned above, but it also has a lot of potential to be quite potent.
    It's much more gimmicky
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    The first thing you'll notice is that this Pokémon has a lot of potential items and longevity isn't really the goal with any.
    Remove "with any".
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    The Normal Gem is basically just to make Bronzong make the biggest boom possible if it explodes.
    is basically just to allow Bronzong to make
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    The trouble here is that when you run into defensive or stall teams, you're more likely to be doing them a favour than hurt them by using Trick Room.
    I'd say "you're sometimes likely." TR teams tend to be slow enough to outrun stall teams, but it depends on the team.
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    Once it's set up Stealth Rock and/or Trick Room and doesn't really provide anymore benefit to your team, use Explosion to rip a hole into your opposition and give you a safe switch into your next Pokémon.
    it has set up

    any more benefit
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    -Poor Offensive Stats
    I suggest adding to this with a mention about Zong being set-up fodder and weak to Taunt.
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    However it is also a lot more versatile having a decent speed tier, a very nasty flinching set when combined with a Choice Scarf and a huge movepool.
    Speed tier, and a very
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    Jirachi also suffers more from Paralysis or Burn.
    Paralysis and burn can be lowercase. Rachi has an easier time with burns thanks to Wish.
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    On top of that, it has access to a dangerous mega-evolution with an ability that makes its already powerful contact moves 33% stronger.
    Mega Evolution
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    Furthermore, Metagross actually has a higher Defence stat than Bronzong, especially when mega-evolved, although its Special Defence is lower.
    Mega-Evolved
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    It is worth noting though, that because of its excellent speed, Trick Room will work against it.
    Speed
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    Unfortunately for Steelix though, the same lack of a Psychic typing that gives it this protection loses Bronzong's Fighting neutrality.
    loses Bronzong's Fighting weakness

    Can also use removes or gets rid of in place of loses.
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    It is also vulnerable to Earthquake which is very widespread in every tier, takes up a mega slot and has no recovery at all, not even from Leftovers since it needs its mega stone.
    Mega slot

    Mega Stone
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    Its typing frees it from most Steel-typed Pokemon's fear of Ground moves and its ability punishes anything that dares attack it with moves that make contact.
    Steel-type Pokémon's
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    This combination of of a weaknesses and its low Special Defence leave it very vulnerable to notable Special Attackers although it's ability does prevent it from being taken out in one shot.
    combination of weaknesses

    although its ability
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    Another great choice for an RU teammate, Exploud is generally too slow to function as a sweeper but with Trick Room support from Bronzong can turn into a beast.
    sweeper. However, with Trick Room from Bronzong it can
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    In addition Tentacruel has access to Rapid Spin allowing it to remove Stealth Rock which would otherwise gradually take a toll on Bronzong who lacks recovery.
    Remove "who lacks recovery". Sounds better without it, and it's unnecessary.
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    Chesnaught resists Dark moves like the omnipresent Knock-Off, which cripples Bronzong and is immune to Shadow Ball, a move that is quite widely spread and hits Bronzong hard.
    Knock Off has no hyphen.
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    In addition, it also adds further utility to the team having access to Leech Seed and Spikes and due to its low Speed (but great Attack) benefits hugely from Bronzong's Trick Room.
    team by having access to Leech Seed and Spikes. Due to its low Speed (but great Attack, it benefits
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    Meanwhile, Bronzong checks a lot of the pokemon that threaten Keldeo such as the majority of Flying Pokémon and, in particular, the very common Latios and Latias.
    Pokémon that threaten
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    Able to switch into notable Fire-typed threats such as Talonflame and Charizard X, Slowbro not only covers a key weakness of Bronzong's but also benefits greatly from Trick Room support due to its decent Special Attack and horrible Speed tier.
    It's able to switch into notable Fire-type threats, such as Talonflame and Charizard X. Slowbro not only covers a key weakness of Bronzong's, but also benefits greatly from Trick Room support due to its decent Special Attack and horrible Speed tier.
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    Another good OU partner for Bronzong is Mega-Heracross. Bisharp and Weavile are common in the OU tier and through their potent STAB-boosted Knock-Off pose an enormous thread to the Dark weak Bronzong. Mega-Heracross can switch into a Dark move with ease and then punish the opponent with its enormously powerful multi-hit moves. In addition to this, Mega-Heracross appreciates Trick Room support due to its low Speed.
    enormous threat

    Mega Heracross and Knock Off don't need hyphens.
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    Bronzong's great defensive typing and stats and access to Toxic, Trick Room and Stealth Rock make for a niche as a surprisingly effective support Pokémon in the Ubers tier.
    typing, stats and access
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    Unfortunately though, Ho-oh and Primal Groudon exist. Water Arceus however completely walls Ho-oh and in a pinch can at least hurt Groudon making it a great teammate for Bronzong.

    Latios and Latias: Latios and Latias are also a good partners for Bronzong, particularly in Ubers where they can function as a check for the common Ho-oh and Primal Groudon due to their Fire resistance and immunity to Earthquake/Precipice Blades.
    The "Oh" in Ho-Oh should be capitalized.
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    In addition to this, access to the Soul Dew item in Ubers allows them to answer back with attacks even more powerful than those of their mega-evolution whilst Defog can remove Stealth Rock that might be troubling your Bronzong over a longer period of time, although it unfortunately removes your own also.
    Mega Evolution
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    It is worth noting here that Latios is generally preferred due to it's offensive presence and that both share Bronzong's weaknesses to Ghost and Dark.
    its offensive
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    Boasting nine resistances and two immunities, Bronzong has the ability to check or counter a good number of very common threats and can function well across four tiers, a trait rare amongst Pokémon.
    threats. It can
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    It's definitely not going to fit on every team, but on the right teams Bronzong is extremely effective and I think that its many positives earn it a look in on those teams.
    earn it a consideration on those
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    I'll go through and make the relevant changes later on. I think it would be easier if you just put the changes inside the quote in bold or a different colour, it'd make things much easier in the future.

    I do have one query though, doesn't Heatproof simply halve damage taken from Fire attacks, not grant Bronzong a resistance? I was under the impression that these were two different things. It's still weak to Fire, so isn't the damage calculated with a 2X weakness then halved?
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    Went through and made most of the changes suggested by Wolf. I left some of them though because the alterations proposed read kind of weird to me.
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