Runescape: Can we survive?

Started by Izy August 15th, 2007 2:51 PM
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Posted December 21st, 2009
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Ok for everyone that actually plays Runescape i hope this is a good story. For others that don't... Well I suppose you can still understand it a little. There are some parts in here where there is swearing. just a warning. in chapters 2 and three. But i won't post those unless I get good advice and stuff on the first.


Memo


Name: Isabella Marie Rockrohr

Image: Sholder-length brown hair always in a bobble hat with blone bangs. A some-what pointed nose and light blue eyes and small lips. Her… nevermind here's just a picture:

Personality: Sporty, Tom-boyish, some of her friends are girls, but her closest friends are boys. She jokes around a lot and is very clumsy. Everyone that she doesn’t consider a friend hates her. They hate her because of her and everything she has. She has a lot of stuff, mostly given to her by her friends.

Skills: She can lick her elbow (try it and if you can message me), is better with range rather than magic and combat. She’s never missed a mark with a bow and arrow. She must be rich if she can afford all the materials right? Right! (You thought I’d say wrong didn’t you?) She needs two banks to fit everything she’s ever gotten. But don’t worry, she’s not a snob. She’s probably the nicest person you’ve met on runescape.

Friends: Her friends are: Andrew, Chuck I., Megan, Stephanie, Parker, and Brandon.

On with the story! Oh and sorry for the picture being so big :knockedou



Part 1

BRIIIIIIIING! BRIIIIIIIIING!
The alarm clock buzzed and almost woke up Isabella immediately. She got up out of her green wooden bed with turtle covers and walked over to her turtle bureau. She sat down and picked out her clothes. Then she got up and she closed the bedroom door and got dressed into her clothes.
Isabella walked down the stairs into the kitchen. Her mother was making pancakes just as she always does on Wednesday. Isabella walked over to her mother and took a finger full out of the batter and stuck it in her mouth. It tasted bitter, like the only thing in there was the eggs, flour, and salt. She spit it out and looked at her mother.
“You always stick a finger into the batter and put it in your mouth, Isabella. This way you won’t think about doing it because you’ll never know when I’ll use that trick again.” Her mother explained.
Isabella looked at her and pouted until the pancakes were finished. It was childish, but she wanted batter to hold her off until the pancakes were ready.
“Mom, that wasn’t fair.” Isabella complained.
“Oh, yes it was Isabella. This way the batter won’t entirely be infected by your unwashed hands.” Her mother clarified for her.
“Why do you always play those kinds of tricks on me Mom?” Isabella wondered.
“It’s to get rid of your bad manners. I don’t want my only daughter to grow up to be someone who goes to a fancy dinner and eats everything with her hands.” Her mother replied. “Isabella get dressed for school after breakfast.”
“Mom! I just got dressed!” Isabella told her mother.
“Well,” Isabella’s mother said, pointing to her clothes. “You aren’t going to school in your pajamas.”
Isabella looked down and saw her pajamas were still on. She must’ve taken out her clothes, taken off her pajamas and put them back on. Isabella laughed nervously and ran back up to her room to change, again.
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1 hour later she was at school, moving from class to class. In history class she got a note. She looked around the room to see if anyone was looking at her. No one was. She stuck the note in her pocket until after school to open, and then she would have no chance of getting in trouble. She looked around the room one more time to see if anyone was looking at her. Still no one.
“Hello, Isabella?” Her teacher, Mrs. Hesporn asked her.
“What? Can you ask the question again?” She asked. Everyone in the class started laughing. Isabella blushed.
“Isabella you were drifting into your little dream world again weren’t you?” Mrs. Hesporn assumed.
“Um, yes. Sorry Mrs. Hesporn” Isabella apologized. Mrs. Hesporn had long blonde hair going down to her hips. She was unusually fat and had very big glasses.
Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing! The bell to end the day rang.
“Isabella! Wait up! I want to talk to you!” Chuckie yelled running after her. Isabella had a crush on him for a few months and seemed to be clumsier around him. “Isabella, I saw someone handing you a note. What’s it say?”
Isabella had been wondering that the whole history class and took out the note finally.
She opened it and read aloud, “Since you have opened this note you will wake up tomorrow in a different world. It will be a world of mid-evil times and killing animals, humans, goblins, insects, monsters, just so you won’t be killed.
If you wish for friends to help you out in this world you must say their names into the note in the next 2 hours. You will be scored by levels and you will have stats to determine your levels. You must make money and a living for if you die in this world you will have to start over, unless your stats are high enough. If you die 3 times your life is over, permanently.
There is an up-side to this world though. You will see beautiful and green sights and will meet new friends that, if you wish and they wish, when you come back will come back into the world with you. You may trade with other players for stuff they give you too, but only if they agree.
Go, you have only 1 hour and 57 minutes left to find your friends and get their approval to come into this fascinating world with you. The world is Runescape.”
“Oh my gosh…” Isabella whispered, looking at the ground.
“Um, Isabella, if you don’t mind, I’ll go with you.” Chuckie offered.
“Oh my gosh, THAT IS THE BIGGEST LOAD OF CRAP I’VE EVER READ!!” Isabella shouted. A teacher rebuked her for shouting in the hall. Isabella turned and ran to her locker, got all of her stuff and rushed out to the bus.
The sky was clear, not a cloud in sight. Just the way she liked it. She smiled and looked up to the sky. She looked back down as the bus started to arrive.
As Isabella got onto the bus she took out the note to say Chuckie’s name into it. Then Annabelle Norton pushed her into the next bus seat onto a boy’s lap, he pushed her back to the other seat with another boy on it. Annabelle Norton is the snottiest girl you’ll ever meet. If she could find someone to push around, she’d push them around. Today’s target was Isabella.
Soon everyone was chanting, “Fight! Fight! Fight! Fight!” and all that was happening was a game of pin ball, with Isabella as the little ball. She was being pushed into every seat in the bus, and back again. Isabella was just fighting to keep balance but everyone kept pushing her down again.
Basically Isabella was a bully target. Her being so skinny it was easy for her to push around because she’d be so light in weight. A few more pushes she finally screamed. Everyone on the bus was silent and looking at her. She walked to the back of the bus, falling occasionally because of how horribly dizzy she was. She reached an empty seat finally when Parker, another boy she thought was cute, came and sat down next to her.
“What was that all about?” Parker asked.
“Annabelle,” Isabella said, still holding the note to her mouth.
“She can be really evil sometimes can’t she?” Parker explained, touching her shoulder. She suspected he had a crush on her but still highly doubted it.
“Here, Parker. Read this,” Isabella said, offering him the note.
Parker took it and read it in his head, nodding occasionally. “Well, this is now the worst prank I’ve ever seen pulled on you,” He finally said. “This is really stupid… but…. If you want, I’ll come…” And with that he said his name into the note.
Isabella arrived home, said a few more names into the note, finished her homework, watched T.V. and went to bed, eager for tomorrow, wondering if it was true.

Part 2

A bright sunny morning at 6:00 A.M. Isabella gets up. She walks over to her dresser to pick out the clothes for the day. She opens the first drawer to pick out a shirt when she sees that none of her clothes are it there! There are clothes, yes. But none of them are hers.
“Mom! Where are my clothes?” She yelled down stairs. No one answered. “Mom!” she yelled again. No answer.
Isabella ran down the stairs and looked outside. There were a lot of people walking around, more people than usual. It wasn’t even her street. It didn’t look like it anyway. She walked through a door to go outside. She looked down and saw she was in her pajamas in public!
Isabella dashed inside and ran up to her room. She walked to the dresser and changed into the pair of clothes given to her that she liked best. She wore a blue sleeveless shirt that was kind of torn at the bottom. It showed a little bit of her stomach but not too much. She wore white capris, also kind of torn. She looked in a mirror and liked what she saw.
Isabella walked downstairs and outside. She was confused. Some people had skulls on their heads; some were holding pieces of paper out to people who were shaking their heads.
“Where am I?” Isabella asked, hoping someone would hear her and answer. No one even looked at her. She ran up and followed someone and asked, “What happened?”
“I don’t really like the changes they’ve made here either,” The stranger replied.
“What do you mean ‘changes?! The whole world has gone mid-evil!” Isabella explained. The stranger laughed. “You know what? You’re kind of good at pretending you don’t know what’s going on here.” Isabella laughed nervously. “Umm… What is this?” The stranger could tell from her face that Isabella had no idea.
“You’re not pretending? How did you get past Tutorial Island??” The stranger asked. “What’s a tutorial island? Does it hurt? Am I not supposed to pass it? I don’t do the best in social studies so… as long as it’s not a test about that, I’m ok.” Isabella panicked.
“You don’t know anything do you? Did someone make the account for you?” The man asked.
Isabella just looked around, confused and annoyed, so she changed the subject. “Hi, I’m Isabella.” Isabella introduced herself. “Isabella, huh? My name is Brandon. Actually, I’m not doing anything special today so I could help you. Look in your pocket, how much money do you have?” Isabella looked in her pockets and took out a big pile of coins (P.S. 1 cent is 1 gold piece). Isabella looked puzzled about how one hundred dollars could get turned to one hundred thousand gold coins, just like that.
Brandon held out his hand and told Isabella to show him how much. She understood and followed. Isabella thought it was very funny how fast his facial expression changed. It went from saying It couldn’t be over 2k with what she’s wearing to oh my gosh I can’t believe she’s carrying this much around with her! Instead he said “pretty good Isabella. That’s pretty good. Follow me to a bank, lets see exactly what you have.”
As they were on their way to a bank Isabella spotted someone.
“Chuckie? Parker? Is that you?” Isabella walked over to her friends and explained that the note couldn’t have been a fake. They just started to laugh. “Too late now” Parker chuckled.
“Hey, Isabella who’re they?” Brandon asked from behind.
“Brandon, meet Chuckie and Parker. Chuckie and Parker, meet Brandon. Brandon helped me understand all this a little more.” She made everyone shake hands.
“How much money did you guys have on you last night before you went to bed? In your pockets I mean?” Isabella asked. “1 cent here is one gold piece. I have 100,000 coins right now in my pockets. And you guys know how much I have in my bank.
“Wait, you’re rich?” Chuckie asked, completely baffled. “When were you going to tell me this?”
Everyone started laughing.
“Hey Brandon, you wanted to go to the bank?” Isabella asked.
“Yeah can we go now?” Brandon asked.
“Yup, let’s go!” Isabella exclaimed.
Brandon motioned for everyone to follow him and after a while Isabella spotted someone else…
“Brandon, stop!” Isabella said. She started walking away so Brandon and everyone else followed. Isabella walked over to two other girls sitting on the ground next to a building made out of wood.
“Steph, Megan, what’s up?” Isabella asked as she stood in front of them.
“Isabella, what happened here? The whole world has gone mid-evil!” Stephanie exclaimed. Stephanie and Megan both had shoulder length hair. Stephanie’s hair was a dirty blonde and always kept in a ponytail, while Megan’s hair was a very light blonde and always kept down unless she was playing a sport.
“That’s what I said.” Isabella giggled. Brandon just stood there. “Isabella, how many people have the same story as you?” Isabella explained everything to Brandon, Stephanie, and Megan, who all look confusingly at her.
“Okay, can we please go to a bank now?” Brandon asked impatiently.
“Hold your horses, Brandon,” Isabella retorted. “Okay, Okay. You’ve been waiting let’s go. Come on guys follow him. He’s the only one who knows where we’re going.”
As Isabella and the gang walked to the bank following Brandon, everyone was thinking either: How did I get here? Or, I wonder what’s in my bank? Or even, everyone looks soo weird here.
Finally they all arrived at a bank after Brandon kept telling everyone who followed the group that it wasn’t a drop party or free giveaway.
“How can you hear in here?” Isabella shouted. It was so loud to her. “Everyone’s so loud!”
Brandon laughed. “You’re pretty funny” He turned and faced everyone. “Go check the stuff in your bank.” He said.
Everyone ran to a bank stall. Parker sighed. But his hopes were still up. He had 65 thousand gold. He also had full mithrel and addy.
Chuckie looked and found full wizard (g), (t), and every other wizard robes, EVERY, every wizard staff, EVERY, and 88 thousand gold.
Steph had a mithrel, addy, and rune pick axes, mithrel bars, ores, and everything below that along with 120 thousand coins.
Megan had a lot of clay, hides, and many different other craft supplies, along with 54 thousand coins.
Isabella had a great bank, too. She had leather, studded leather, hard leather, green, red, blue, and black dragon hide armor. Along with every bow, 20,00 mithrel arrows, 10,000 addy, and 1,000 rune. 409 million coins she found.
“Hey guys, I have to go now. Talk to ya later?” Brandon said.
“Yeah. Bye.” Isabella said.
Brandon started to walk away. “OH, Brandon, WAIT! Take this.” Isabella said running after. She handed him a walkie-talkie. “It’s so we can keep in touch. Ya know, cause we’re more special than you” and with that she smiled and ran back to the bank.
“Man, I knew loving archery would pay off! What’d you guys get?” Isabella asked.
“Magic.” Said Chuckie. “I got armor and swords, sweet!” Parker exclaimed.
“Eww I got cow hide and really gross smelly stuff… What is it for!?” Magen yelled with the hide in her hand.
“Haha! Someone’s a noob... That’s for crafting. You know what that is right?” Someone said behind them.
“No and who are you?” Megan asked.
“My name is Andrew, noob.” Andrew said.
“Hey back off!” Stephanie said moving in front of Megan trying to hold up a pick-axe.
“Haha you guys make me laugh.” Andrew said. He flicked Stehpanie on the arm causing her to drop the pick-axe on megan’s foot. The cowhide flew out of her hand as she went down to cradle her foot and landed on parker’s face. Parker yelled, dropped his sword and tripped over Chuckie. Chuckie and parker fell to the ground. Isabella looked at Andrew.
“What was that for?!” Isabella asked while looking at everyone on the ground.
“You guys are noobs and therefore deserve to have fools made of yourselves.” Andrew said. “Except you’re kinda cute.”
Isabella blushed, “Back off!”
Andrew smiled. “Only if you’ll be my girlfriend.” And he winked
Isabella scowled and stomped on his foot. Andrew bowed his head in pain and Isabella kneed it up. Andrew was sitting on the ground holding his nose and foot looking up in fear. Isabella kicked him so he fell on his back and she put her foot on his chest. She bent down to his ear and whispered “I meant it” and she kicked him in the stomach and told everyone that they should get out of there.
“Damn Isabella, I know not to mess with you now” Parker said impressed.
Isabella looked at him with an evil look in her eye. “Shut it” And she looked back at the ground.
“Well So-o-o-orry!” Parker said. Isabella punched him in the gut.
“You shoulda quit while you were ahead” Chuckie said helping him up.
Isabella threw two walky-talkies at them. “Here” She said. “I wanna go walk around and I don’t want you following me so if you wanna talk to me talk through these.”
And with that she walked away.

K sorry for that being kinda short, my other ones are longer. Ok constuctive critisizim (sp -_-') is appreciated. Oh and tell me what you think of the pic. i like being told I'm good at stuff ~_~

MrCheeseyPuff

Stealth CoOwner:The Ninja Club

Age 31
In a place. With air. I hope.
Seen April 22nd, 2013
Posted June 11th, 2008
260 posts
17.3 Years
I thought it was pretty good, Izy. I've played a little RuneScape, but not very much, so I was kinda lost on some of the parts. Other than that, great story. A couple things though:
1. When one person is talking, and then another person starts talking, you need to start a new paragraph. There weren't too many mistakes like that, but I did notice a couple.
2. At the beginning of Part One, you keep referring to Isabella by her name. A couple of those could be replaced by pronouns.
Those were the only two things I really noticed. The pic is good, definitely better than I would be able to do. :P And I like the idea of actually BEING in the game, instead of sitting at a computer tapping away at the keyboard and moving the mouse. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
BTW, what was the "Her… nevermind", or is it something that is not for small children?:\


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MrCheeseyPuff

Stealth CoOwner:The Ninja Club

Age 31
In a place. With air. I hope.
Seen April 22nd, 2013
Posted June 11th, 2008
260 posts
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Well, yeah, but I was wondering about the "Her..... nevermind" thing.... Oh well. Is there any more for to read?


Always remember: Sirloin tames monsters better than beefjerky, porkchops, and ribs.
Current song I got STUCK IN MY 'EAD: Whatever ~ Godsmack
JOIN THE ALIEN REVOLUTION!
Somewhere I Belong.
Seen August 11th, 2011
Posted July 17th, 2009
609 posts
16.5 Years
that was pretty nice, I played runescape for a bit, do you play it? (well duh sorry) my username is: mithos kid


anyways on topic: thats a really nice story, you should give them each seperate usernames though, are you going to make more?

EDIT: pic is 8/10 it's not really runescape related =/
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