Lucky Cat

Started by Manaphy1128 August 23rd, 2007 7:47 AM
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Age 26
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*shoots self*
Seen December 11th, 2010
Posted September 18th, 2010
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15.9 Years
Okay, you hate me over here, I know, I know. But give me this chance to write this short story. Either two or three parts, I don't know. It may be a little boring to some or a little rushed or fast or something, but I just need to write this down before I forget anything. Part one isn't that good, but the others will be. Promise.

Lucky Cat
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"It seems she has run off in the direction of Tex-"
"Urrrggghhhh." Darren said, switching off his TV. "This stupid girl isn't going to bring doomsday to the country. That's total crap."
He moved from his seat at the table, grabbing his bag.
"Of course, a 10-year old living on his own is crap also. Maybe if I go to him at the Ork he can do something about it....Okay then, it's decided. I don't really need anything, only two hours there. Maybe a few things that are already in here...""
So he secured his bag, and stepped outside.

"So that stupid girl escaped. Lucky...What a weird name." Darren said to himself.
According to some prophecy, this girl was supposed to bring an end to my country. Of course it was just all sortsa prophecy s*** those idiots got in there head. How can a girl bring an entire country to end? Some giant atoma-bomb that's hidden underground? Seriously...
He heard a sound. Someone was crying nearby.
"Better not be some kid..."
He looked around the bend of a tree and a girl no older than 11 was sitting on a tree, crying out her eyes. What the hell is her problem....? Darren thought to himself.
"Hello..?" he asked.
The girl looked up, her red rimmed eyes staring intently. She suddenly brightened. "Oh! Maybe you can help!"
"Help?"
"You see," she started, wiping away her tears, “I need to get to the Ork, but I don't know how to get there and I can't get to it myself."
Darren stiffened, but it cleared away in a second.
"Okay." he answered.
She stood up and heartily shook his hand. "Well then, we can be partners." she suggested.
"I guess..." he replied, looking the other way.
"Good then."

By 1 hour and 30 minutes, they were almost there. Darren realized he didn't even know her name.
"Hey," he told her, running to catch up with the cherry bouncy soul."What’s your name?"
She stared at him for a second, and then said, "Its Lucky-" she looked as though she immediately regretted saying it.
And for good reason.
"Wait...the Lucky that will bring an end to all? That one?"
Her eyes locked on him, her's horror filled and even more red rimmed then before.
"You know..." she stated.
She quickly ran into the forest opening, her hands covering her face as dirt flew up behind her.
"Wait! It's okay! WAIT!"

Darren had been searching for 10 minutes, which felt more like an hour.
"LUCKY!" he yelled through the crowded forest. "C'mon! It's okay!"
He heard the same whimpering as before.
Lucky's crying.
He quickly scanned the area. Nothing seemed to have the sound coming from it.
"Where is that girl....?"
Nothing, only her soft crying.
"Urgh." he said to himself, then tripping over a tree root.
"Just my luck and-"
He looked up from his laying position. He saw a pair of shoes.
He quickly grabbed one and a startled cry came from behind the bush.
"No-"
"It's okay. Now come out. I won't do anything."
She reluctantly came out from her hiding place, scratched and torn all over, her hair a mess, bleeding in some places.
'The thorns and branches get you?" he asked.
"Yes."
"Well then if you want to go, now is the time. Remember. Now follow me. I know the way out."

After their episode in the forest, they headed back through onto the path leading to the Ork.
"If I had known it was this easy to get there, I would have done it myself." Lucky told Darren when they got out.
"Well, I guess it is..." Darren replied to her.
"Look! We made it!" Lucky yelled.
She pointed to the beautiful white building, its dome shape looming over everything. It was stained with grey and black in some places, its windows reflecting off the evening sunset.
"Yeah, I go here every week anyway." Darren said to a dumbfounded Lucky.
"This is my first visit!"
"I can tell."
Please. Darren thought. Please don't be where she can see you. I know she will hate me if she found out....
"Hey!" Lucky said to him, waving in his face, snapping him out of his thoughts.
"Let's go!"

Please.
Don't be there.
If you are, don't tell her.


Lucky swung the heavy door open, revealing more white. White walls, white tile, white curtains, white everything.
"It's like a hospital in here." Lucky said to Darren.
"Hey!"
A voice called out from the back.
S***, Darren thought. He is here. And he'll probably tell her something.
"What-" Lucky said and gasped.
Parker was sitting in a chair staring at her.
"Why-You both look exactly the same. Like someone pasted twice! What is this?!"
No, Darren thought. Don't say it.
Parker laughed."You think you know this guy? Get this-

He's my CLONE."

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I like part two better. But until then-

~Manaphy1128

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"What-?"
"You heard me. The guys my friggin clone."
Lucky turned to stare at Darren. He smiled an "I'm innocent" smile at her, like he was lying through his teeth.
She then pointed at him and said to him, "F*** you! F*** you to Hell!" she pointed for another second, and then ran down the hall way opposite her.
"WAIT! LUCKY! COME BACK! I CAN EXPLAIN-!"
"Don't try it." Parker said from behind. "It was your idea in the first place. Pressure get cha?"
Darren took one last menacing glare at him, and told him, "Screw You". He then turned and ran down the hallway Lucky did.

Listen. Just promise me you'll trust me again.
I don't care what I am.
Trust me again, Lucky


As he dashed down the hallways, he looked through the glass doors lining the hall. He quickly glanced at each one, seeing if one contained Lucky.
He stopped.
One door was pitch black.
What...? He thought. He abruptly opened the door and walked in.

Lucky was leaning against one wall, weak and scratched up, a bloody mess.
She looked up when he came in.
"I told you," she said while glaring, "you go to hell. Why are you here?"
He reached down to pull her up. She reacted quick, biting down hard on his hand, breaking the skin.
He recoiled, a startled expression on his face.
"What happened? You used to be..." He stated, not knowing what to say.
"They were right on the mark. I was born with a suicide wish for myself, a death note for those around me. We will all die.." She was staring at the wall, stumbling on her words.
"Listen," he said, "Lucky I can tell you why-"
She turned angrily towards him. "I DON'T FRICKIN CARE ANYMORE!" she screamed.
A sharp pain stabbed at Darren's face. He raised his hand to the source. A hot sticky liquid came off on his hands.
Blood, He told himself. She's making me bleed.
The room started to shake violently.
They were right. She will kill everyone as told. She has a power to kill. An instinct.
Lights crashed down everywhere, many stabbing them both. Lucky didn't flinch. She had a dull, blank expression on her face.
"Get out...' she told him softly. "I hate you. F*** you..."

I won't.
So what you hate me?
Does it matter if I save you in the end?
She reminds me of mother.
Her way or no way...


"I SAID!" she screamed again, snapping Darren out of thoughts, "GET OUT! GO TO HELL! GET AWAY FROM ME!"
All he did was gently touch her shoulder. She didn't move. The same dull expression had replaced her mask of fury. She allowed herself to be cradled in his arms.
"Now Lucky," she started, twirling a strand of her jet black hair, "I know you hate me. I know I'm such an awful little s***. But we have to get through that boundary. We have to survive and live on."
"Really?" she asked, still looking at the floor.
"Really."

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~Manaphy1128

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Age 31
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Santa Isabel, Mexico
Seen July 7th, 2018
Posted February 2nd, 2016
4,000 posts
18.9 Years
It may be a little boring to some or a little rushed or fast or something, but I just need to write this down before I forget anything.
You could just have made notes about the plot instead of rushing this. :/

Weak grammar, lots of spelling mistakes, lack of narration and description...

Oh please, and you know you can't swear here, not even in fan fics.

So yeah, I'm sorry, but well...

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