Chris's Ranger Quest

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Posted January 19th, 2008
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Chris's Ranger Quest

Chapter One: Recruitment

"Alright Maggots! Show me what you got!"
Those were the words that Chris have heard all Summer. Everyday Chris has been training to be a Pokemon Ranger. The instructors would give the trainees pokemon. The trainees would have to use the pokemon to get past obstacles like giant walls of hay and ponds. The instructors would also show them the proper way to use tools. But finally all those weeks of work would pay off. In two days Chris would graduate from the P.R.A. (Pokemon Ranger Academy) and become a Pokemon Ranger. He would get all of his gear, his uniform, and a special Mystery Gift.

"Sir! There is only one maggot, Sir!" said Chris.
Every week, a new couple of trainees woud arrive. However they would quit after the first few days. They couldnt handle all the tough work so they just said "Sayonara!".

"Sorry Chris. Im just so used to saying that. We used to get so many people here. I just dont know what happened." Said Sgt. Mills, " You know what Chris. Why dont you take the rest of the week off. You deserve it for all the hard work you put up with this summer." Then Chris said, "Really Sir? Thanks a bunch!" Chris then started to run off until Sgt. Mills said, "Not so fast Chris. I want to see a strategy you can use while being a Pokemon Ranger. A 100 word essay by tomorrow." "Alright! Im sure to come up with something!" replied Chris.


* * *

"I cant believe it! Its already 9:30 PM and i havent thought of anything!" said Chris," Well the fact that the TV is on wont help me at all." Chris was about to turn of the TV until a show called Pokemyths turned on. It was Chris's favorite show so he decided to watch a little of it. the reporeter started talking about a mysterious stone that made pokemon "prevolve" which makes pokemon go back one form. "Hmm. That gives me an idea! Eevee can evolve into 7 different forms, all with different types and moves! Maybe if i use the mysterious stone, I could solve all my problems with one pokemon!!" said Chris. He started writing it all down, not even stopping at all. He gave so many examples that the paper came up to more that 500 words! Right after he was done, he went right to sleep.

* * *

"Heres my paper sir." said Chris as he walked up to Sgt. Mills. Sgt. Mills read the paper and looked at it in amazement. "Chris this is amazing!" said Sgt. Mills. Then he got to the part about "prevolving" and said, "Wait a minute, Chris you know there is no such sort of a stone that makes pokemon move back one form. That is, unless....." "Unless what?" replied Chris. "Oh nothing, nevermind. Because of your effort you can go do whatever you want today. I got to go do some work of my own." said Sgt. Mills. "Wow! Thanks Sgt. Mills! You Rock! Thanks to pokemyths as well!" said Chris. "What was that?" said Sgt. Mills. "Oh, nothing." said Chris as he ran off into the fields.

* * *

"Well i know he said it was impossible, b ut just thinking about it made me want to catch an Eevee," said chris to his sister Shannon."So I went ahead and caught one!" " Wow Chris! Thats so cool. I just caught a Castform! im going to use it when i become a Pokemon Coordinator." said Shannon. "Well guess who just beat Orebourgh Gym with my new Shellos?" said his bother Sean, who just walked through the door. "Who, was it Micheal Jackson?" said Chris in a sarcastic way. "Oh, haha very funny. But it was me who did it! I got my first Gym Badge. im on my way to being a Pokemon Master!" replied Sean. "Well Im going to call my instructor and tell him about my Eevee" said Chris as he walked over to the phone.

"Hello?" "Hey Sir! It's Chris. Guess what i caught." "What did u catch?" "An Eevee!" "Well thats great! Now I dont have to catch one!" "What was that?" "Oh, nevermind. I got to go so I'll see you tomorrow. Bye Chris!" "Bye."

Chris then yawned and said," Its getting late guys, im going to bed. Good Night!" said chris as he walked upstairs to his room.


* * *

"Hey Chris. Wake up honey. Hey Chris. Chris? Fine then Ill do this the hard way. CHRIS IF YOU WANT TO GRADUATE YOU MIGHT WANT TO WAKE UP!!!" It was his mother who suddenly waked Chris up. Chris then said, "Oh Snap!! I'll be right down! Just let me get dressed!" He got in some dress clothes and walked downstairs. He got in his mom's car and they drove to the P.R.A.. He was the only one graduating so obviously everybody there was there for one reason only. Chris. The graduating ceremony then started with the president of the P.R.A. making a speech. Then Chris got his diploma and the luncheon started. During the luncheon Sgt. Mills stood up and said, "Could I please have all of your attention. Chris has worked very hard all summer and now i would like to give him his tools, uniform, ID Card, and his Mystery Gift. The Mystery Gift is something I made called an EvoArm. When I read your paper i remembered that when I was a Pokemon Ranger I found a mysterious stone that makes pokemn 'prevolve'. I called it the Backwards Stone. I never had real use of it so i kept at my house for all of these years. Now I took out the substance that makes pokemon evolve in the Bcakwards Stone, Fire Stone, Thunder Stone, Water Stone, Dawn Stone, Dusk Stone, Leaf Stone, and Ice Stone. I mixed it all together and filled it in the EvoArm. When you put the EvoArm on you can never take it off. It will be attached and become a part of your DNA. Then whenever you yell out the name of the type you want your Eevee to evolve into. Then it will evolve into the pokemon with that type. It sounds pretty complicated but when you try it it's pretty simple." "Wow Sir, I dont know what to say." said Chris. "Well thank you would be nice." said Sarge. Everybody then started to laugh. Chris had great time at that party and he knew he would have a fun time being a ranger. He put on the EvoArm right when he got home. He was going to start his journey tomorrow and he knew it would be a fun one.



Ill be posting a new chapeter every week.
If you guys could, would u rate it for me.
Thx a bunch and byes!!
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Seen September 18th, 2007
Posted September 12th, 2007
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Ahhh the font! It hurts! Really!

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