Kanto Adventures

Started by NoOb GaMeMaKeR September 10th, 2007 4:11 PM
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[NovaPirate]

And the rest went riding on.

In that cardboard box down the street.
Seen February 13th, 2011
Posted December 28th, 2009
802 posts
17.5 Years
Is this a joke? Seriously. I'm not sure.

Well, anyways, you skipped about.. three/four comics worth of information, you used badly edited overworlds (But a good attempt at the Pokemon), and I'm completely confused. YOur character robbed Prof. Oak, battled someone, and went through all of Viridian City in two comics. Talk about steroids 0.0;;

Gaah.
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But dun worry.
It will most likely stay like this FOREVAH.
Because I'm nowhere near as active as I used to be.
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J-Rad

In ur comp h4xing ur interwebz

Age 29
reading a good book
Seen October 31st, 2016
Posted June 24th, 2009
1,187 posts
15.8 Years
pretty good, but pidgey looks like dragonite.

Typhlosion used Solarbeam!
Regirock lost 100% of its health!
Regirock used Rockslide!
Typhlosion lost 101% of its health!
J-Rad's Typhlosion fainted!
Teh_Pie_Knight wins!
This actualy happened to me when battleing my friend...
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Age 31
Colwyn Bay, Wales.
Seen August 13th, 2013
Posted December 13th, 2011
15 posts
15.7 Years
Dont just sit there feeling sorry for yourself, people dont hate it, there are good things and bad things about your comic and people are telling you he bad things so you can change it and make it better, not because they hate it. Its called constructive criticism ;)

[NovaPirate]

And the rest went riding on.

In that cardboard box down the street.
Seen February 13th, 2011
Posted December 28th, 2009
802 posts
17.5 Years
I'm sorry if I came across flaming, here's what I meant to say.

Is this one of those jokes? It's not very funny if it is.

I'm sorry if it isn't, it's just that there has been an increase in people making fun of n00bs. No that you're a n00b. You're more like a n00bie. A beginner. You haven't trained yet.

Well, I like that you didn't use the MD overworlds, and instead tried spriting you're own. You should try to generally not skip that much. Keep in as much pointful (Not pointless) information in as possible.
Unfortunately, you used a way over-used battling the gyms plot. Also, the Squirtle is very weak, and should not know Water Gun. I don't think Squirtle ever learns Water Gun. But it learns Bubble. Brock also has an Onix.

I like your attempt at a custom hero sprite, but from behind it looks like the normal Fr/Lg sprite.
That's all.

Gaah.
This signature is under construction.
But dun worry.
It will most likely stay like this FOREVAH.
Because I'm nowhere near as active as I used to be.
-[NP]
Age 30
I am sobbing with Mew...He is dying...
Seen April 12th, 2016
Posted February 14th, 2008
337 posts
17.4 Years
Alright NoOb GaMeMaKeR as you are probably aware from everyone elses critism, your comic is not the best. But that does not matter. Personally I think your comic is not that good, here are the reasons.

1. The characters jump places real quick.
2. The speech boxes are not very nice to look at.

But other than that, the comic is fine. The overworld Pokemon look nice and about Squirtle learning Water Gun, well I don't really think that matters, that is up to you.

And the water gun looked nice. I actually think this is impressive for a first comic, not the best, but not awful.

I will rate this comic 5/10, Half way there, just try to improve a little.
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