The Strongest Two

Started by Manaphy1128 September 15th, 2007 7:07 PM
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Age 26
Female
*shoots self*
Seen December 11th, 2010
Posted September 18th, 2010
867 posts
15.9 Years
Okay, after all my science fiction stories and such, I have decided to write a realistic fiction story.

Oh, by the way, I'm just making it up as I go along, I know that is not a good thing, but whatever.

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As much as I'd like to say no, I am a nothing.
Yes, those who are above me, are above me, and nothing more.
I suck.

Prolouge


So I started out in Bombarde's fine, but after that day of October twenty-fourth, two-thousand-seven, it went, "BLOOMP" down and smashed hard.
Okay, fine, exaggeration for me. I always do it. No, it's not like I want attention. Attention wanting is the most retarded thing I have ever heard of. My feeling I always am yearning for is;
DARK, DAMP
Fine, more exaggeration.

But the village here, us "nothings" do suck and never hunger for attention after seeing those brainless brats, namely dubbed by me, "loser/friggin moron/idiotic monkey's/onserovers" so you get the idea of how bad it is. Almost like in "Lois Lowry's Gathering Blue, the Fen, to give you yet another idea of exactly what our minds are.

Oh, they're gonna get it.

They are going to get it so bad.
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I always have short intro's if I even have any. Hopefully I will write the next part in a reasonable amount of time.

Dress up in your best / So I can be proud of you

~Dai-kun~

The black wind howls again...

Age 27
12,000 BC
Seen August 10th, 2016
Posted March 23rd, 2012
515 posts
16.2 Years
Whats so bad about it? I really like it. Not long but I get the picture and I can't wait to see the next chapter though you could of added more. Or if you couldn't just make something short with a cliffhanger that amazes your readers.
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