Prepare 4 Trouble: Make It Double

Started by RocketMemberMichael September 19th, 2007 9:07 AM
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Prepare 4 Trouble: Make It Double! It is back, I don't know if you read the first comic, Prepare 4 Trouble, but the link is in my signiture, it has been ended for a year now and here it is, a sequal.

Inspired By: MattSilver, he created the remake of his old comic so I thought I'll do mine, and I am pleased, thanks Matt!

Credit To:
The Spriters Resource...
VG Maps...

Chapter 1: A Whole New Adventure I hope you enjoy this, even if you have not read the original you can still read this.

Comic 001
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Latest Comic: 003



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Pokemon: (Any...Even rares!)
Other: (Any other info)

Thanks and I hope you enjoy Make It Double.
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Age 31
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Where Giving Up Is Not An Option
Seen December 1st, 2014
Posted November 14th, 2010
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17.6 Years
ALrighty then, 1st post and all:

First thing that catches my eye is the size - it's kind of blurry and out of focus. Did you save as a JPEG or something?

Sprites: Original enough, good to look at. No super bad recolours - that's good.

Speech Bubbles: Good, well organised - no problems there.

PLot: Original and pretty cool man. It's full of drama and stuff - not a journey. Nice title too (Make it Double!)

Credit: Where's the credit list? I think people will acuse you of not crediting, and maybe even stealing.

That's the only problems I see. If you do fix them, I'm happy to edit my post and make it seem like Im saying all positive! :D

Keep it up!

PS (Off topic): Did you get my PM? If you did, reply maybe?
Age 30
I am sobbing with Mew...He is dying...
Seen April 12th, 2016
Posted February 14th, 2008
337 posts
17.4 Years
Thanks Matt

The Credit List is there if you read it properly.

Is it blurry? Well I will fix that problem.

I did get your pm and I will pm you back later :)

New comic later, you will enjoy it, btw I edited my post, now you can join.
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Pein

Pein + Konan= EVIL!!!

Underneath Ashe's red leather thing duh! XD
Seen January 21st, 2009
Posted October 1st, 2007
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Wow you're setting the scene for me really!!1

I'm getting the feeling that Maxie is going to be killed by someone a little niffed off when he goes into speech mode.

High quality text bubbles and good characters sprites I like!!!

I'll say one thing: you've got me hooked
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I'm random and depressed (and I have a spoon!!!)
Age 30
I am sobbing with Mew...He is dying...
Seen April 12th, 2016
Posted February 14th, 2008
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17.4 Years
Great, it is good to see I have got someone hooked, I am guessing you did not read the first one Pein did you, BTW Matt yeah it is blurry, I will fix that, I have another comic, read that one too...

I am not making a comic today, I might update my other one, Besides the more post the more comics.

Pein thanks for your post, keep reading and about the Maxie comment, yeah speech mode is funny...He will do that alot, Giovanni did that in the original, By the way look at the girl swimming in the corner...He he he...
PM me for a battle! Here is my name and freindcode!

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Age 31
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Where Giving Up Is Not An Option
Seen December 1st, 2014
Posted November 14th, 2010
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17.6 Years
Thanks Matt

The Credit List is there if you read it properly.

Is it blurry? Well I will fix that problem.

I did get your pm and I will pm you back later :)

New comic later, you will enjoy it, btw I edited my post, now you can join.
Sorry. Didn't see the credit list (Shouldn't it be a little bigger?)
I might join up later - we'll see.

:D