Spriters Showcase Thread Page 105

Started by Signomi April 21st, 2006 11:30 AM
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Netherlands
Seen March 24th, 2016
Posted December 4th, 2014
654 posts
16.5 Years
Your fusions are rather to simple and you didn't really put much effort into them.
Just don't stop making them for now, you'll see you will get better every try, and you might wanna start recoulering propperly.
Never use the basic colours of paint, always make your own.
Try reading some tutorials about spriting, recoulering etc.

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Netherlands
Seen March 24th, 2016
Posted December 4th, 2014
654 posts
16.5 Years
Two new scratch sprites:

Water/Poison - A very lazy snorlax-like platypus pokemon.

Normal/Flying - Flying squirrel pokemon.

I'm working in R/S/E/FR/LG size limits, just so you know.


They both are in my fakedex.
Well there both shaded pretty good so.
I dont like the beak of that lazy pokemon, it looks copy and pasted, you might wanna change that part.

I don't have much to say about the squirrel, it's good :)
But maybe change the feet? they look really weird when I see them.

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Seen April 5th, 2023
Posted August 21st, 2021
5,853 posts
17 Years
hey im finaly back from hectic school life here is a couple of sprites
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You need at least 4 examples of sprites to merit your own thread, so this shall be merged with the Spriters Showcase/Discussion thread.

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p.hant0m

Studier of ancient legends.

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Seen October 8th, 2011
Posted September 11th, 2011
53 posts
14.8 Years
I wanted to do some scratch but I know i'm far from ready so I did half scratch. The guitar is scratch by me, the mohawk is scratch by me, the poliwrath is however...
not.
Yes, it IS a four-string.

I know the tuning knobs look weird.
He might know screech, metal sound, sonic boom and shockwave.

orangejediman

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Seen July 15th, 2014
Posted March 13th, 2014
81 posts
14.9 Years
Hey, I made it this way for a reason:

1. The hands are an optical illusion. If you look at them long enough, they seem to be reaching out for you.

2. Spiritomb's colors aren't orange. I wanted orange so it would be a "pupkin" like spiritomb.

3. The body of rotoms fan forme looks more pumpkin-y

Thanks for the criticism, though.
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Seen January 5th, 2016
Posted April 21st, 2010
461 posts
16.6 Years
you should bring the hands closer together, maybe put spiritombs colors on and make Rotom the key stone? or put the together completely? it's o.k. but could use improvement.
Hey, I made it this way for a reason:

1. The hands are an optical illusion. If you look at them long enough, they seem to be reaching out for you.

2. Spiritomb's colors aren't orange. I wanted orange so it would be a "pupkin" like spiritomb.

3. The body of rotoms fan forme looks more pumpkin-y

Thanks for the criticism, though.
We aren't allowed to discuss the contest entries here. . .

~Night

EDIT: o.o was this moved here? Because if it wasn't and I just posted here like this then I feel like an idiot

~Night

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Seen January 5th, 2016
Posted April 21st, 2010
461 posts
16.6 Years
I wanted to do some scratch but I know i'm far from ready so I did half scratch. The guitar is scratch by me, the mohawk is scratch by me, the poliwrath is however...
not.
Yes, it IS a four-string.

I know the tuning knobs look weird.
He might know screech, metal sound, sonic boom and shockwave.
You're covering up Poliwrath with the guitar, which makes it look really bad. Maybe you could have the guitar go across Poliwrath's belly instead of eyes?

~Night

Netherlands
Seen March 24th, 2016
Posted December 4th, 2014
654 posts
16.5 Years
It looks kinda weird but not really bad. You might wanna work on the right side of the sock and make it abit more rounder.
other then that it ain't bad ;)

I myself made my somekind of rabbit thing..
Dont ask me why I made it, it looks abit strange to me though...
There are 2 versions, one is big one is smaller. wich one is better ?


Any c&c would be appreciated

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Seen January 23rd, 2011
Posted November 3rd, 2010
1,730 posts
17.4 Years
I liek the smaller one, It is kinda wierd, and yeah I was trying to make it rounder with out making that side too big, I'll keep working, you have any other advice. It was just an off the top thing I thought of while looking at my sock..though that is not my sock.



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p.hant0m

Studier of ancient legends.

Canalave library studying legends.
Seen October 8th, 2011
Posted September 11th, 2011
53 posts
14.8 Years
You're covering up Poliwrath with the guitar, which makes it look really bad. Maybe you could have the guitar go across Poliwrath's belly instead of eyes?

~Night
But then I would've had to move the arms and hands. I originally made the guitar smaller but I got to the strings and found that only maybe two fo them would fit on it.

Other than that it's pretty decent right?
Netherlands
Seen March 24th, 2016
Posted December 4th, 2014
654 posts
16.5 Years
I liek the smaller one, It is kinda wierd, and yeah I was trying to make it rounder with out making that side too big, I'll keep working, you have any other advice. It was just an off the top thing I thought of while looking at my sock..though that is not my sock.
Sorry I dont really have much advice on the sock.
Maybe if you make something else I can give you some better advice :)

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Seen August 15th, 2009
Posted October 24th, 2008
12 posts
15.8 Years
this is my first scratch its pretty bad i think if anyone could give me some pointers it would be much appreciated i want to grow strong in spriting. also i included a trainer aswell. hope u like it
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Name: Manes

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Name: Porpatane
Type: Bug Grass

Please give me some pointers
Ask me any question im glad to help

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Seen June 24th, 2014
Posted February 19th, 2011
317 posts
14.8 Years
Ok...
That will need more than "some" pointers
1. SOOO disproportionate. the arms are flat on top!
2. Outlines, way too thick!
3. Again I'll mention how short the arms are, and the legs are so small!
4. The shading is so incorrect I can't criticize it.
5. What are you, 2? That face is SO messed up. Its a smiley face!
6. What is it?
7. Obviously the concept its part from Scyther!
8.And so many more...

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