Spriters Showcase Thread Page 117

Started by Signomi April 21st, 2006 11:30 AM
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Blazers

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Ok guys i have a problem and seeing if you can help me out.
I have this concept here its a sneasel prevo, and i drew it and scanned it onto my computer.
I was went over it in black , but when i want to resize im having the hardest time. Any suggestions?


http://img26.picoodle.com/img/img26/3/1/10/f_sneaselprevm_b68f45f.png
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That was pretty uncalled for. Although I think you're a good critic, I also see you as headstrong and at times offensive. I'm not trying to start an argument here but i will tell you, people don't take kindly to personal jibes here.

Ikwaylx

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Hey guys, I decided to try out a bit of pixel art because I usually enjoy trying out new uses for my creativity. Starting out simply here with an edit, which I hope it counts as.. Still learning the terminology, of the Pokemon Shuckle (My favourite btw.) with its shiny sprite.

I used all 3 known sprites as a bit of inspiration and to get some ideas on the colour, hopefully it came out pretty well, but all criticsm is more than welcome! I'd love to work my way up to improved spriting sometime in the future.

Ikwaylx

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is that shuckle a scratch?
It may seem like a scratch, but I used the shell from the D/P sprite and then added some new shading. The head was also from the D/P sprite, but brought down with a changed expression. I also flipped it horizontally in the neck.
The FG/LG inspiration is from the neck, although it came out a little different than I expected, while the G/S/C inspiration is from the legs... kinda.

It may seem a bit different, but it is an edit, I'm no good at scratches... At all.

Reck

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This is my very first sprite. I spent about 20minutes on it. I looks good to me. How does it look to you. Please don't hold back on your comment make as harsh as you want and tell how to improve it. Its a very basic house. Looks pokemon'ish.



I don't have school tomorrow(snow day) so ill make some more then. Until then grade this one.

Zee.kthxbai

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This is my very first sprite. I spent about 20minutes on it. I looks good to me. How does it look to you. Please don't hold back on your comment make as harsh as you want and tell how to improve it. Its a very basic house. Looks pokemon'ish.



I don't have school tomorrow(snow day) so ill make some more then. Until then grade this one.
Ok, lets begin with your glaring issues:

Your lighting is absolutely wrong, unless the sun is about a mile directly west of this sprite. Even then, you're using 54 colors and that is absolutely too many for an appropriately styled game sprite.

Next, your windows don't look like windows but more like colored bars, and the black outline seperates each plank of the wood to the point that it looks like this is supposed to be an accordian house. The door is too big for the style, as well as being one of those odd left-handed outside doors I almost never see on houses.

My suggestion : Look at a house in the style you want to emulate and study all the nuances and such of it. Then come back to this, and you'll see what I mean.

Yume Tsuki

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Hey guys, I made my first revamp today and I'm looking for some crit.

Before:
After:

awesome =D great revamp!

Ikwaylx

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I have some more sprites that would be worth some criticsm if anyone doesn't mind. I don't want to create a thread, but here's quite a few more sprites.

This is mostly practicing various things such as slight scratching, shading and recolouring for shinies.

Marowak


Bulbasaur


Ivysaur


Primeape


Cubone
Phew, that's quite a few, I'm not sure if it's against this thread or not since I posted well more than 5 sprites.
The reason why I don't want to make a thread is because other threads in this board are much more impressive and are of much more effort. If it's against this thread, I'll gladly reduce the post to one sprite.

Blazers

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I have some more sprites that would be worth some criticsm if anyone doesn't mind. I don't want to create a thread, but here's quite a few more sprites.

This is mostly practicing various things such as slight scratching, shading and recolouring for shinies.

Marowak


Bulbasaur


Ivysaur


Primeape


Cubone
Phew, that's quite a few, I'm not sure if it's against this thread or not since I posted well more than 5 sprites.
The reason why I don't want to make a thread is because other threads in this board are much more impressive and are of much more effort. If it's against this thread, I'll gladly reduce the post to one sprite.
Are all of these scratch?

Ikwaylx

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Are all of these scratch?
Mostly, I make the body a scratch, but sometimes the faces are out of the question, I suck at spriting faces, so I use another sprite as a base and change the features so that they look new.
However, I DID make one all from scratch: Caterpie, but I'm really really unsatisfied with it.

I think it's the pose, I wanted the body go around the back, but it looks like Caterpie is laying on his side. Regardless, this one IS a total scratch.

These are my first sprites technically as well, I just started and found I had a little bit of a knack for it, so I would like to get even better.

Yume Tsuki

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eew it's staring very scary at me D: and the face is badly rounded.. making the face more ugly.. now it's more scary than cute..

Ikwaylx

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eew it's staring very scary at me D: and the face is badly rounded.. making the face more ugly.. now it's more scary than cute..
Thanks, I'll fix the whole badly rounded face thing, and I'll try and get the pose to be a little bit better.

Sublime

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Hey guys, I tried out some devamps to. Mind giving some crit? This is my first time devamping, by the way ^^
I really like this one myself ^^
I don't like this one very much..:/
The flames were way to annoying, so I edited them off..
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eew it's staring very scary at me D: and the face is badly rounded.. making the face more ugly.. now it's more scary than cute..
That's pretty rude, especially considering your sprites suffer from huge anatomy issues.

I think the caterpie is pretty cool, just needs some refining.

Hey guys, I tried out some devamps to. Mind giving some crit? This is my first time devamping, by the way ^^
I really like this one myself ^^
I don't like this one very much..:/
The flames were way to annoying, so I edited them off..
I almost mistook you as someone posting GSC sprites. They're really well done.