Spriters Showcase Thread Page 130

Started by Signomi April 21st, 2006 11:30 AM
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Robert Conley

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The Anti Spiral Homeworld
Seen June 17th, 2013
Posted August 17th, 2012
330 posts
14.6 Years
thanks for the critique. and iam not sure whats with the green around the mouth. it just randomly appeared there but when I open it in paint it doesnt show up.

thelaytonmobile

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Age 29
Female
Everywhere. But mostly in the UK.
Seen July 22nd, 2010
Posted May 25th, 2010
173 posts
14.1 Years
Hey, I would like people to comment on my first ever sprites. They are Mime Jr, and are based off a drawing of my own. The only difference is the outlines.

I scanned in a picture of Mime Jr which was just outlines, without shading or colour, and did the outlines, then filled them in.
Please comment so I can improve.
I have posted these before, but recieved no comments.

In response to Misty Sama, maybe it is transparency causing the green, in which case paint over where the green is, even if paint doesn't show it.

Anastasia.R

Female
Boston, MA
Seen October 9th, 2017
Posted October 9th, 2017
1,541 posts
15.8 Years

Hey, I would like people to comment on my first ever sprites. They are Mime Jr, and are based off a drawing of my own. The only difference is the outlines.

I scanned in a picture of Mime Jr which was just outlines, without shading or colour, and did the outlines, then filled them in.
Please comment so I can improve.
I have posted these before, but recieved no comments.

In response to Misty Sama, maybe it is transparency causing the green, in which case paint over where the green is, even if paint doesn't show it.
I like it, it's a cute pose.

However, I suggest working on the head (Err ... the blue part thing on its head) and the eyes. The eyes are too big, I think. The outlines are dark for me, and there's thick outlines in a few places. Thick outlines aren't that great. Other then that, it's pretty cute.

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Pokémon Opal Producer

Age 27
Female
Somewhere!
Seen December 25th, 2022
Posted June 28th, 2011
478 posts
13.9 Years
Please rate my sprites!


it's a scratch, and I know it's not perfect of course! Any suggestions, please? Cuz I really need to get better.
And this is a fakemon made by Kitsunez for my game!
Pokémon Opal has become partner's with another game! We are now hideAki!

ReyRey-Pyon

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Age 29
Seen February 6th, 2015
Posted January 5th, 2012
1,006 posts
14.1 Years
Hey, I would like people to comment on my first ever sprites. They are Mime Jr, and are based off a drawing of my own. The only difference is the outlines.

I scanned in a picture of Mime Jr which was just outlines, without shading or colour, and did the outlines, then filled them in.
Please comment so I can improve.
I have posted these before, but recieved no comments.

In response to Misty Sama, maybe it is transparency causing the green, in which case paint over where the green is, even if paint doesn't show it.
The outlines are fine IMO
but you could use work on the shading, particularly on the head., it looks weird, but that might just be me being blind again

the mouth could use a little work too,
but other wise its very nice

.Tactic.

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Age 26
Male
A Dark Abbyss...
Seen October 7th, 2012
Posted January 28th, 2011
1,309 posts
14.1 Years
It's the first time i'm postig here :D I was bored so i decided to sprite some tiles ;) Here are they:

You can use them but please give credits ;)

~MOP
I thought this was for sprites, not tiles, but anyway i give your tileset 9/10
Hacks that deserve my love
Credits for my sig

Reck

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Age 28
Male
Ohio
Seen July 22nd, 2016
Posted April 12th, 2012
310 posts
14.3 Years
It's the first time i'm postig here :D I was bored so i decided to sprite some tiles ;) Here are they:

You can use them but please give credits ;)

~MOP
Those tiles look very nice. Looks like you put a few hours in these. But they appear to be pillow shaded. Especially the mountain tiles. But besides that they look nice i hope to see more.
HINT:
You have enough to make a thread.

EDIT:
@07harris
Tiles are sprites.
A mysterious place beyond fathom
Seen July 16th, 2009
Posted July 15th, 2009
42 posts
15.5 Years
heres my try at a few trainers ive been working on for about a week and a half on all three.


The guiding hand of grace is a beauty beyond belief.



The darkness of man in physical form beware of his deeds.



A being emotionless neither good or evil, balance in a singularity.
Now how did i get under here?

Anastasia.R

Female
Boston, MA
Seen October 9th, 2017
Posted October 9th, 2017
1,541 posts
15.8 Years

heres my try at a few trainers ive been working on for about a week and a half on all three.


The guiding hand of grace is a beauty beyond belief.



The darkness of man in physical form beware of his deeds.



A being emotionless neither good or evil, balance in a singularity.
You, my friend, used bright colors around. x..x Sorry, but it's a little distracting.

@Domin-8
Wow, great job. =] The only thing I might suggest is MAYBE a little brighter color of yellow/gold. I love the shade of blue you used. Is it me, or do I feel like the head is a little low? D= It could be me, but I'm not sure. By the way, I love the shade of blue you used.

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Spherical Ice

Age 25
Leicester, UK
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Posted February 20th, 2022
5,251 posts
15.5 Years
Sprite:
Name: Phanteddy
Class: Possessed Pokémon
Based On: Teddy Bear/Ghost
'Dex Entry: It's eye is covered by a patch of cloth. When it evolves, little traces of the original teddy bear is seen.
Type: Ghost (/Normal?)
Comments: I was just thinking - what if there was an evil teddy bear? It'd be awesome! And, before you say anything, this pose is not scratched! It's actually based on Teddiursa's Gold sprite. Obviously, I edited it and revamped it.

Please tell me what you think of it!
Age 32
Male
MS Paint
Seen March 7th, 2010
Posted February 14th, 2010
73 posts
13.9 Years
I hope WIPs can be posted here.. If not, let's just say it's lineart.




This is what I have so far, and it's for a certain proyect over at TSR.
Not official pokemon style btw, but a side view instead, as if for a platformer. C+C would be apreciated

Off to colour now.

Anastasia.R

Female
Boston, MA
Seen October 9th, 2017
Posted October 9th, 2017
1,541 posts
15.8 Years

Please rate mine:

Tell me what I need to work on, and duhh, don't be rude. :3
Err. I think the tail, eyes, and feet are a bit tiny. And maybe some work on the colors. You have a pretty dark colors, and the a bright colored tail. =o But that's me. Also, behind the horns kinda bother me. I mean, is there a bump? =o Anyway, that's all I think.

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Nyu~♥!

Pokémon Opal Producer

Age 27
Female
Somewhere!
Seen December 25th, 2022
Posted June 28th, 2011
478 posts
13.9 Years


Err. I think the tail, eyes, and feet are a bit tiny. And maybe some work on the colors. You have a pretty dark colors, and the a bright colored tail. =o But that's me. Also, behind the horns kinda bother me. I mean, is there a bump? =o Anyway, that's all I think.

Thank you! The feet are tiny, yeah. XD The colors were meant to be that way (it has to do with the pokedex entry) The tail, it's that small? o_o and the eyes are suposed to be that way. XD Yes it's a wierd one.
Thank you very much! I appreciate it!
Pokémon Opal has become partner's with another game! We are now hideAki!

Domin-8

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Age 33
Male
Dela-Where?
Seen January 23rd, 2011
Posted November 3rd, 2010
1,730 posts
17.4 Years



@Domin-8
Wow, great job. =] The only thing I might suggest is MAYBE a little brighter color of yellow/gold. I love the shade of blue you used. Is it me, or do I feel like the head is a little low? D= It could be me, but I'm not sure. By the way, I love the shade of blue you used.

The head is a little low, I have it like he is ready to attack, so I figured putting his head low and humping his back up would do the trick



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Massachusetts
Seen November 29th, 2015
Posted November 29th, 2015
1,061 posts
14.3 Years
I hope WIPs can be posted here.. If not, let's just say it's lineart.




This is what I have so far, and it's for a certain proyect over at TSR.
Not official pokemon style btw, but a side view instead, as if for a platformer. C+C would be apreciated

Off to colour now.
This looks nice but one thing bothers me:


The way the front bulges out looks unrealistic to me.Other than that it looks great, good job.
Age 32
Male
MS Paint
Seen March 7th, 2010
Posted February 14th, 2010
73 posts
13.9 Years
I would suggest making the bulge a bit smaller, I see that the body is curving that way, but like Gir? said its a little unrealistic. Otherwise can't wait for final product
I'ts somewhat late, I'd say. I already finished the sprite long ago. :p

I could post it here now, if you all want to see it.


But right now, im working on another:

(Trainer is not mine)

C+C needed. I might take a while with this one.