Spriters Showcase Thread Page 48

Started by Signomi April 21st, 2006 11:30 AM
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[NovaPirate]

And the rest went riding on.

In that cardboard box down the street.
Seen February 13th, 2011
Posted December 28th, 2009
802 posts
17.5 Years
Well, good, I guess...
On the first one, I'm not entirely sure you used shading, take a look at a tutoriall And don't use paint default colors, use colors from other poke'mon/trainers.

Pachirisu
Not a sprite, but it's pixel art...
Another recolor, which aren't so hard, that lacks shading. Shading is god, you must okease Shading!
Also, decrease the size, on paint, use the Select tool and select Pachirisu and put it by the girl, and then, using the blue boxes around the rim of the white box, shrink it so there s enough space for the to of them. Granted, don't give them too little space, they have to breath ya know xD

Gaah.
This signature is under construction.
But dun worry.
It will most likely stay like this FOREVAH.
Because I'm nowhere near as active as I used to be.
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Age 32
Male
Seen May 16th, 2011
Posted October 28th, 2010
5,058 posts
18.3 Years
Yup, true. Also Shadow Wolf on Pixeltendo, Opacus on Pixelation, Opacus on Pixel, and Opacus on the GMC. Thanks.
Am I correct in thinking you were Shadow wolf here once as well?

Pikachulover, try to avoid using default paint colours, you really should include shading in your pieces.
Age 29
England.
Seen January 5th, 2008
Posted August 8th, 2007
4,419 posts
18.7 Years
A present for Goatman.

He's not exactly a close friend of mine, but I noticed that he watches me on Da, and he still provides some of the best comics I know of, so he deserves a present

I hope he still likes lickitungs XD
yay for no comments, or C and C

MegaFuz

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Bubbletown
Seen February 11th, 2011
Posted December 11th, 2009
4,565 posts
17.9 Years
yay for no comments, or C and C
The shading would look a lot better if you used a few more colors. As it is now, the shading doesn't look quite gradual enough. Especially the inside of the mouth, as you only used one color. I don't like how you have the dark pixels around some of the border either. The border just looks too cluttered on the left side. The lineart is pretty well done though, and I love the expression on its face. It's a decent piece as it is now, but a few slight adjustments could really help it out a lot.
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Age 28
Somewhere where u want to know!
Seen June 24th, 2007
Posted March 4th, 2007
16 posts
16.2 Years
Here's an edit:
Your AA was far too thick and flawed. Some lines were screwed too. And most of all: It didn't really look like Lickitung.
yah the tounge looks rolled now, but i like the shading of Esupio's lickatung
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Bubbletown
Seen February 11th, 2011
Posted December 11th, 2009
4,565 posts
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Here's an edit:

Your AA was far too thick and flawed. Some lines were screwed too. And most of all: It didn't really look like Lickitung.
You should really ask before you edit someone else's work, man. =X
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Seen December 11th, 2008
Posted August 10th, 2008
358 posts
16.6 Years
It's a little heavy on the dithering, try smoothing it out a little.
Well the tutorial i used said dithering is a friend. And i thought it looked quite good. But being quite novice at photoshop means i am not very good.

I know what you mean by smooth it out but the problem is i don't know how or what tool to use! So advice would be greatly appreciated

MegaFuz

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Bubbletown
Seen February 11th, 2011
Posted December 11th, 2009
4,565 posts
17.9 Years
Its the first time i've really AA'd at all.
Yeah, you definitely went a little overboard in a few places. No worries though. There's a first time for everything.

Since I can't seem to get a comment in my thread, could I get some C & C on this please? Scratch Snubbull.

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Age 31
The Netherlands
Seen January 6th, 2010
Posted February 8th, 2009
128 posts
16.2 Years
You should really ask before you edit someone else's work, man. =X
Well, I go to Pixelation, Pixeltendo, Pixel and Pixel Joint. And on all those places, people actually want edits. And my English is good, but I can't bring all techniques and such to words yet, so I let my edit speak for me.

EDIT: Small update on the tank:
Check out my pixel art thread:
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Age 28
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Seen June 24th, 2007
Posted March 4th, 2007
16 posts
16.2 Years
Yeah, you definitely went a little overboard in a few places. No worries though. There's a first time for everything.

Since I can't seem to get a comment in my thread, could I get some C & C on this please?
looks great, i see no problems really
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Bubbletown
Seen February 11th, 2011
Posted December 11th, 2009
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17.9 Years
No one has ever asked Nintendo/Gamefreak if they could edit the official pokemon sprites =/
That's really completely different. Those are finished, professional sprites from an official game on the market where the creators are actually making money. =\

Well, I go to Pixelation, Pixeltendo, Pixel and Pixel Joint. And on all those places, people actually want edits. And my English is good, but I can't bring all techniques and such to words yet, so I let my edit speak for me.

EDIT: Small update on the tank:
It really isn't that hard to actually type out the things wrong with a sprite. I know personally, I'd rather be given specifics about what to improve than have someone just completely change my original sprite. If Esupio doesn't mind though, there's no point in discussing this.

I love the tank sprite, Opacus. The palette looks wonderful and the animation pwns. Thank god you fixed the angle of the wheels though. It looked awkward originally, but now it looks excellent. XD
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Seen June 24th, 2007
Posted March 4th, 2007
16 posts
16.2 Years
ooooh the tank looks really really nice! i like the colors! the colors are really nicely done, thats what i think!
Nemo Emo Me!
I'll Get Better
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