Spriters Showcase Thread Page 49

Started by Signomi April 21st, 2006 11:30 AM
  • 343058 views
  • 4411 replies

Samson

no, i don't know milk drink

Age 34
Phoenix, AZ
Seen October 7th, 2015
Posted June 30th, 2011
2,550 posts
16.9 Years
That's really completely different. Those are finished, professional sprites from an official game on the market where the creators are actually making money. =\



It really isn't that hard to actually type out the things wrong with a sprite. I know personally, I'd rather be given specifics about what to improve than have someone just completely change my original sprite. If Esupio doesn't mind though, there's no point in discussing this.

I love the tank sprite, Opacus. The palette looks wonderful and the animation pwns. Thank god you fixed the angle of the wheels though. It looked awkward originally, but now it looks excellent. XD
actually, the angle of the hind wheel seems a little off. it looks awfully wide in comparison to both that band thing and the frontal wheel. the wheel itself doesn't need adjusting, just the contour of the wheel width. but i totally agree... that's an awesome sprite.

[FONT="Calibri"][SIZE="4"][COLOR="gray"]FC: 3497 0883 2077
[/URL]
Age 33
Male
Seen August 16th, 2018
Posted March 31st, 2015
410 posts
18.8 Years

I just made this. First I combined about 4 different D/P sprites, did some customizing (color changes, slight shape changes), then found clouds made by Atari, used a friend's grass, and created a 3-D look; the grass loses color as it moves backward to create depth. Don't forget the shadows and one of my favorites Pokémon, Leafia o: I believe this is the correct location to post this.

I'd like to hear what some of you have to say.
Age 28
Somewhere where u want to know!
Seen June 24th, 2007
Posted March 4th, 2007
16 posts
16.2 Years
htt p://img329.imageshack.us/img329/8467/revmapjl1.gif

Rate! kinda bad i know but rate,

WAAH, Nothing can some1 at least say something about it.....
Nemo Emo Me!
I'll Get Better
A Revmap of my Old Custom!
Pokemon Revoloution For Wii: http://media.wii.ign.com/media/818/818481/vids_1.html
Age 32
Male
Seen May 16th, 2011
Posted October 28th, 2010
5,058 posts
18.3 Years
That's really completely different. Those are finished, professional sprites from an official game on the market where the creators are actually making money. =\
So? People still made the sprites, from scratch, spent time getting them right. Isn;t that the whole reason why people shouldn;t edit others work?
Male
Seen April 5th, 2023
Posted August 21st, 2021
5,853 posts
17 Years
If I showcase a sprite here, I'd rather receive c+c than have someone come along and edit my work. Why? Cause I'd rather have someone point out what's wrong so that I can fix it, and so that I can improve. heh, lot of tags here aye? XD;;

I know other people may think otherwise, but having your work edited by someone else really doesn't benifit you. It's like asking the teacher how to answer a question, and then having it done for you instead of it being explained step by step. And in my opinion, it takes away all the effort you originally put into the piece.

... which is like blowing up a balloon, and then having someone deflate it and blow it back up again ... kinda.

heh, a lot of analogies too XD;;

That being said, Kevin has a point here:
That's really completely different. Those are finished, professional sprites from an official game on the market where the creators are actually making money. =\
Game sprites are done. Finished. To be edited no more. They are not put in the game so that we can fix them up and send them back. We only edit them for our entertainment. While I respect the original creators of the sprites, I agree that editing their work is completely different

And besides, in this case I feel that the edits made by Opacus were way to drastic. Ah well, I suppose it's alright as long as Esupio doesn't mind :<

MegaFuz

Über Title

Bubbletown
Seen February 11th, 2011
Posted December 11th, 2009
4,565 posts
17.9 Years
If I showcase a sprite here, I'd rather receive c+c than have someone come along and edit my work. Why? Cause I'd rather have someone point out what's wrong so that I can fix it, and so that I can improve. heh, lot of tags here aye? XD;;

I know other people may think otherwise, but having your work edited by someone else really doesn't benifit you. It's like asking the teacher how to answer a question, and then having it done for you instead of it being explained step by step. And in my opinion, it takes away all the effort you originally put into the piece.

... which is like blowing up a balloon, and then having someone deflate it and blow it back up again ... kinda.

heh, a lot of analogies too XD;;

That being said, Kevin has a point here:

Game sprites are done. Finished. To be edited no more. They are not put in the game so that we can fix them up and send them back. We only edit them for our entertainment. While I respect the original creators of the sprites, I agree that editing their work is completely different

And besides, in this case I feel that the edits made by Opacus were way to drastic. Ah well, I suppose it's alright as long as Esupio doesn't mind :<
Could not have said it better myself. ^.^
MegaDex: Returning soon?

This is where I'd post my PC family if any of them were still here. D:
Age 28
Somewhere where u want to know!
Seen June 24th, 2007
Posted March 4th, 2007
16 posts
16.2 Years
I was bored and randomly made an Ash Ketchum overworld sprite.
waoh trhose look cool... r they the pkmon firered tri=ainer cus they look like them.
Nemo Emo Me!
I'll Get Better
A Revmap of my Old Custom!
Pokemon Revoloution For Wii: http://media.wii.ign.com/media/818/818481/vids_1.html
Age 28
Somewhere where u want to know!
Seen June 24th, 2007
Posted March 4th, 2007
16 posts
16.2 Years
oh lol nowonder it looked like the fire/red, well that means its good scratch.. (espicially since i thouight it was from the game)


so can anyone -> please?
htt p://img329.imageshack.us/img329/8467/revmapjl1.gif
Nemo Emo Me!
I'll Get Better
A Revmap of my Old Custom!
Pokemon Revoloution For Wii: http://media.wii.ign.com/media/818/818481/vids_1.html
Male
Seen April 5th, 2023
Posted August 21st, 2021
5,853 posts
17 Years
Tyler-chan: Yeah, it looks pretty good. It'd be nice to see you add some more detail to it.

Anywho, the box with the door appears to be separate from the wall. You should move it up a little bit (2-4 pixels) so that the bottom of it connects with the bottom of the larger block. And there are some other minor imperfections, but other than that, good job, especially for a first try.

.:Kaku:.: Well it looks nice, I like the shading that you've done with the hair and face.

Jake: Cool, a road tileset. It looks good, though in my opinion the black dots that you've placed on the road stand out a bit too much. And they seem to uniform, as in the dots should be put in different positions on each of the tiles, just to make it seem more rugged.

~Shadow909~: Hmm, looks like you got the pen tool and drew a random shape. Anywho, you've overused your dithering, and while I can see your attempt to shade the outline, there is supposed to be black as well.

Heh, I guess I was in a commenting mood today~
Age 28
Somewhere where u want to know!
Seen June 24th, 2007
Posted March 4th, 2007
16 posts
16.2 Years
~Shadow909~: Hmm, looks like you got the pen tool and drew a random shape. Anywho, you've overused your dithering, and while I can see your attempt to shade the outline, there is supposed to be black as well.

Heh, I guess I was in a commenting mood today~


thank you! now i know how to make better customs!
Nemo Emo Me!
I'll Get Better
A Revmap of my Old Custom!
Pokemon Revoloution For Wii: http://media.wii.ign.com/media/818/818481/vids_1.html

AJUST

/Kusagaki. The Grass Kid./

Age 35
South Africa
Seen August 31st, 2009
Posted June 2nd, 2009
139 posts
17.7 Years
Thanks to Signomi & esupio for the comments!

Will try to get out some more, but right now getting the comic started. (It's going well!)

Hai-kun & Tyler-san, feel free to use the sprites I released here which are arked with the "free to use" disclaimer. Thank you for adsking, and please let me know how you use them by PM. :D
Age 30
In Your Dreams
Seen December 11th, 2008
Posted August 10th, 2008
358 posts
16.6 Years
Well Signomi wanted to see me add detail. So i did =]. I added window's on one side, another door and a pool on the roof. Still working on it


EDIT: I have done more work on the building. I'm determined to perfect it!


Added window ledges.
Added new doors
Added a pool in the roof
Age 28
Somewhere where u want to know!
Seen June 24th, 2007
Posted March 4th, 2007
16 posts
16.2 Years
waah can some1 edit this!! ill give you major credits!!!

ht tp://img218.imageshack.us/img218/1762/shadow909prjfs8.png
Nemo Emo Me!
I'll Get Better
A Revmap of my Old Custom!
Pokemon Revoloution For Wii: http://media.wii.ign.com/media/818/818481/vids_1.html
Age 30
In Your Dreams
Seen December 11th, 2008
Posted August 10th, 2008
358 posts
16.6 Years
Thanks Myst. I will post the finished version *Fixed Doors* and i will post wy other WIP that is nearly finished soon

Edit!: Here is the finished building.....


And here is the WIP

^ Any ideas for what to put on the roofs or wall or something. Its missing something!

C+C FOR ALL!

And any ideas for outlining. I need lots of help! These are far from perfect
Age 28
Somewhere where u want to know!
Seen June 24th, 2007
Posted March 4th, 2007
16 posts
16.2 Years
Thanks Myst. I will post the finished version *Fixed Doors* and i will post wy other WIP that is nearly finished soon

Edit!: Here is the finished building.....

And any ideas for outlining. I need lots of help! These are far from perfect
i think it looks great!, i dont see anything missing!,

waaah theres new pokemon? and new evolve forms? waah! cool! who r the new legendary pokemon?
Nemo Emo Me!
I'll Get Better
A Revmap of my Old Custom!
Pokemon Revoloution For Wii: http://media.wii.ign.com/media/818/818481/vids_1.html