Spriters Showcase Thread Page 66

Started by Signomi April 21st, 2006 11:30 AM
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Oripoke

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Posted September 2nd, 2019
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Aww. :3 You picked the shades of blue well. And it's cute, too. However, there are a few things about it that look... unprofessional. First off: you copy-pasted the feet. I can see that. Every foot is the same. That, my friend, is being lazy. :P Feet look different from different angles. Also, define the different bones of the leg-- try to show a difference between the ankle and the ulna/radius and the elbow.

Additionally, it would be very uncomfortable for the dragon to hold its tail out straight like that. It would be sitting on the ground. :3

The wings... well, they aren't realistic. What is the purpose of sectioning the membrane if it's stretched out straight? Membranes generally only section out like that when they fold in on themselves or there's another phalange in there. Also, the bone on the top of the wing should be much thicker-- it has to support the dragon in flight, after all. This wouldn't.

Hope that helps. :D
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Posted January 4th, 2008
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15.6 Years
Aww. :3 You picked the shades of blue well. And it's cute, too. However, there are a few things about it that look... unprofessional. First off: you copy-pasted the feet. I can see that. Every foot is the same. That, my friend, is being lazy. :P Feet look different from different angles. Also, define the different bones of the leg-- try to show a difference between the ankle and the ulna/radius and the elbow.

Additionally, it would be very uncomfortable for the dragon to hold its tail out straight like that. It would be sitting on the ground. :3

The wings... well, they aren't realistic. What is the purpose of sectioning the membrane if it's stretched out straight? Membranes generally only section out like that when they fold in on themselves or there's another phalange in there. Also, the bone on the top of the wing should be much thicker-- it has to support the dragon in flight, after all. This wouldn't.

Hope that helps. :D
Thanks. When I do another dragon, I'll keep this info all in mind.


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Posted October 12th, 2008
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Yeah my first attempt at pixel art.Dark Mew. I just coloured and outlined it on paint.
It is probably extremely bad to your standards but i like it for a first attempt.
I got the outline from Adept-eX.
If it showed up bigger you'd see some of the small details I added....


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Anastasia.R

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Hm ... what happen to the rocks? Anyhow nice job. Just plain to me that's all.

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Anastasia.R

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I can't see your "Dark" Mew.
There's no shade or lightsoucre. :P Just dark black. Nothing more ... okay it's only black and there's isn't much to see.

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There's no shade or lightsoucre. :P Just dark black. Nothing more ... okay it's only black and there's isn't much to see.

~A.R
yeah it came in too small and all i have is paint.............i didnt even do the outline like i said......


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Anastasia.R

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yeah it came in too small and all i have is paint.............i didnt even do the outline like i said......
So you have paint. So do I! And all you need is to learn how to do pixel overs or whatever you did.



^That wasn't my greatest. :P

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So you have paint. So do I! And all you need is to learn how to do pixel overs or whatever you did.



^That wasn't my greatest. :P

~A.R
ok....but all i found was 1 shade of black..................i wasnt mockin paint or anything.

Edit:by the way nice meta.......


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Anastasia.R

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Its NineTails recoulored with smoochum! Tell me if nothing needs to be changed and if stuff needs to be changed let me know! Also tell me if i need to add shading
The shading is in thw wrong place. Also you need to get the outlines too.

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Its NineTails recoulored with smoochum! Tell me if nothing needs to be changed and if stuff needs to be changed let me know! Also tell me if i need to add shading
I'm sorry but, It just doesn't look right. I think the colors are mixed up for the shading. Keep trying.:D
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Can you please tell me why it seems off?
You see the tops of the tail is dark when it's suspose to be light. Smoochum doesn't have enough shade color to be used with a Ninetails.
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Ok I think i fixed it



if you dont c a change refresh after about 1 minute

edit:sorry didnt clsoe tags
it still isn't right. the top part of the tails are the lightest and as you go down, it gets darker.
Spezs are another name for sunglasses.