Spriters Showcase Thread Page 80

Started by Signomi April 21st, 2006 11:30 AM
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Germany
Seen May 4th, 2012
Posted September 6th, 2010
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hmmm...i know that sprite is in my thread but could you comment it please...

this is supposed to be the first stage of a thistle inspired line
Challenges Done:
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HGSS Monotype Challenge: Fighting, Grass


Current Challenge:
HGSS Monotype Challenge: Fire Type
DPPt Monotype Challenge: Ghost


Seen September 12th, 2009
Posted December 27th, 2008
145 posts
15.4 Years
hmmm...i know that sprite is in my thread but could you comment it please...

this is supposed to be the first stage of a thistle inspired line
Even though I don't know what it's meant to be, I like it. The shading suits it very well but the line on the right legs going through the middle strikes you too much. I would prefer it in a darker green. The eye is well done, did you make it yourself? Also, the horns are made perfectly because I usually find horns the most difficult part to draw on a pokémon, well done!


Germany
Seen May 4th, 2012
Posted September 6th, 2010
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well a thistle is a spiky flower found very often in germany^^if you meant that...
could you mark the line you´re talking, and send it to me via pm?
yeah made it completely from scratch...my thread was clos to die^^
Challenges Done:
Spoiler:

HGSS Monotype Challenge: Fighting, Grass


Current Challenge:
HGSS Monotype Challenge: Fire Type
DPPt Monotype Challenge: Ghost


Seen September 12th, 2009
Posted December 27th, 2008
145 posts
15.4 Years
I made a new scratch too.

He's Fire/Psychic.
I like the shading and colours used on this sprite. The pattern on the legs look cool but I don't really understand the bulb thing on the back... Also, the fron't legs should look more like the hind legs (it needs claw). Also, I think it could look pretty good standing on it's hind legs.


Age 30
The Netherlands
Seen February 22nd, 2020
Posted December 27th, 2009
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I like the shading and colours used on this sprite. The pattern on the legs look cool but I don't really understand the bulb thing on the back... Also, the fron't legs should look more like the hind legs (it needs claw). Also, I think it could look pretty good standing on it's hind legs.
The thing on it's back is like a volcano.
I gave him claws:
Seen September 12th, 2009
Posted December 27th, 2008
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I gave him claws:
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It looks great now, more realistic. This is only a suggestion, but how about a pre-evolution or evolution? I think it would suit it well.



I kinda revise this so give it a comment!
The blue part of his hair and hand, also the ball, have very neon like colours and little shading to give them shape. Also, the eye thing looks weird...


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Seen February 13th, 2011
Posted December 28th, 2009
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I kinda revise this so give it a comment!
Do not under any circumstances EVER for any reason at all use default paint colors. Those are the ones at the bottom of the tool bar.

Steal colors from other sprites. You also need to shade the streak of hair.

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Seen September 12th, 2009
Posted December 27th, 2008
145 posts
15.4 Years
Could someone please comment on my Bulbasaur revamp? I'm fairly new at this, and tips are more than welcome.

This is amazing! I love everything about this revamp! The shading is good, the outline colours are good, everything is good! Even though your new your pixel artwork seems proffesional to me.


Anastasia.R

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Seen October 9th, 2017
Posted October 9th, 2017
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Could someone please comment on my Bulbasaur revamp? I'm fairly new at this, and tips are more than welcome.

Hmmm ... The outlines (well some of them) need some work, but not bad, Anela. ;)

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Seen February 16th, 2017
Posted October 18th, 2008
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Yep, its the same as my last one except made a female version and a dark ball which I made as I got bored lol.
Rate and comment please. :)
Making the background black makes it quite difficult to rate, because we have no idea about the outline..well but they look quite good, the male one looks better but the hat or hoodie or however you wanna call it looks unnatural as the bottom line is straight

Superjub

Pokémon Aureolin

Age 28
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Hoenn
Seen August 23rd, 2022
Posted November 5th, 2014
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It's weird. Now I got vista whenever I get a sprite of pe2k it has a black background. Anyway, whenever I try to fill the background with white it deletes some parts of the sprite. Anyway, i tried my best to sort the sprite:

BurstX

Some old fart

Age 29
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New York
Seen January 23rd, 2023
Posted September 28th, 2014
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ok there a couple of things wrong with this sprite, one how is the highlight of the bandanas facing away from the light source of the rest of the sprite, two never ever mix different generations, it doesnt look good, and finally dont use pe2k sprites, use spriters resource, they dont usually have tranceparencies(thats why it has black all around it)...woah, that was a fun c&c...lol

[NovaPirate]

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Posted December 28th, 2009
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Actually, I use pe2k sprites, it's handier than having to push through a pile of rubbish sprites. Use print screen on all the sprites you need (usually they fit in one click) and then get rid of the eggshell white. Then your good to go and with black outlines!

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It's weird. Now I got vista whenever I get a sprite of pe2k it has a black background. Anyway, whenever I try to fill the background with white it deletes some parts of the sprite. Anyway, i tried my best to sort the sprite:
It happens on XP too. Just screenshot the sprite when it's in the white webpage, then open in paint =P



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Seen August 3rd, 2022
Posted July 14th, 2008
194 posts
15.3 Years
ok one the girl needs extreme shading work, and dont use white to shade black, use grays, also the other sprite is just a recolor as far as i see so good job i guess
Thank you Burst Ninja. This is my first time doing a leather-clad sprite so I didn't know whether or not to make it super-shiny or not.

Also, I've got a new sprite made for a hack I'm involved in. I've decided to almmost completely start over on it, as completely scratching sprites isn't working so well. This one is sort of a fusion (using steven's pose and a rocket's appearance/head). I'm not quite ready to shade it just yet, so can you guys give me a crit on anatomy and the pose?

Hey guys, I'm still alive. Not really sure if I want to continue Twisted Path though.
Seen February 16th, 2017
Posted October 18th, 2008
77 posts
15.4 Years
The breast is very pale, you have made one arm with the glove, the other one doesnt have this glove, besides the lightsource is completly wrong, it should come from left, up and it does on the had, because you took it from the original spirte but not on the body...

the whole breast has NO shading at all

here a revamp, i made today:
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Seen August 3rd, 2022
Posted July 14th, 2008
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The breast is very pale, you have made one arm with the glove, the other one doesnt have this glove, besides the lightsource is completly wrong, it should come from left, up and it does on the had, because you took it from the original spirte but not on the body...

the whole breast has NO shading at all

here a revamp, i made today:
Well, like I said, I was afraid to touch the shading and lighting because I figured I might end up mucking something decent up. I intend to work on that shortly.

But you do think the positioning looks decent though, right? I wanna make sure I have at least that down before I hit the coloring job.
Hey guys, I'm still alive. Not really sure if I want to continue Twisted Path though.