The Vulpix Girl

Started by Miss Reyna June 20th, 2004 4:33 PM
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i awoke to the same things. the soft grass and the tall cold tombstone. the air smell like the sea but with the mix of scented candles. the sound of the prayers but i enjoy the sonund of the sea. then i hread a growl. i look around then there it was again. and then i saw it came from my stomach. i was hungry so i got up to get my favorite berries. RAZZ BERRIES!!!!!

i got up from behide my bed-like tombstone. then i hread a cry. it came from a human girl. she was crying over a newly made grave. it read "HERE LIES CARA'S NINETAILS. SHE WAS CAUGTH HERE AND WAS LAY HERE" i hate people who have or caugth vulpixs. then i hread the girl say "i had a vulpix like you. but she was more pre e e tt errrrrrrrrr" so she cry more and then i ran.

then i hread a vocie of a duskull. it said "dus dus kull" but i understunded it like always he was my friend Bones the not far behide his friend and my friend Spook the shuppet. these 2 guys like scaring some of the humans here. Bones said "hey Razz off to get some of those razz barries of yours. there are a lot of them today"

Spook said "ya. but don't worry we didn't eat any." seeing that i got anger.

i said "for a minuit i thougth you guys ate some"

Bones said "na we know you love those things"

Spook said with a yarn "man we just got done scaring a idoit trainer."

Bones added with a yarn."he was a blazeken and use Skyuppercut" and laugh then countinued "that was no effect"

Spook laugh and said " 1stie we grab his backpack and he scream and Bones was his hat to slap him"

Bones said "then he saw it was us and attack us with Skyuppercut"

Spook said with a yarn "maaaaannnnn we tired but watch out he look like he looking for a vulpix."

i said angery "well he not geting me nor any when i here!!!"

Bones said "well take care" and floated away

i began to walk and look back and said "nigth" to them.

i countined to walk and then i hit a blazekin and a trainer was not far behind.
he saw me

he said "blazekin there one lets get it!!!!!!!!!!"
♪We live to become happy♪

♪And live on to make others happy♪
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Once heard those word I spread out on all four legs getting ready to attack. I gave out vul vul pix vul! pix vul vul! to the blaziken saying that I not going to be capture by your trainer! And I deify not going to be beat by you!

The blaziken gave out blaz blaz! saying I will win for Jay (must be the trainers name) and you will be his!

This got me mad and I was going to say something back but the very tall trainer (but all these trainers look tall to me) with a orange jacket said blaziken use your blaze kick

The fiery attack hit me on the mark. But I didnt even try to dodge it. Instead of feeling pain, I felt a great power rise in me. A great fire burn in me grew. The trainer was not paying attention because he told his pokemon to issue another fire attack. This time it was a flamethrower. The blast of fire came flying to me and I just stay where I was and felt the heat as it grew in me. Now I knew it was time to attack. I got up and I said vul vul pix saying now you going to get it.

The blaziken trainer look at me and said we got her now one more flamethrower. The blaziken look worry but it did.

I saw this saw I attack with a quick attack. I move to fast for him to aim. I appear behind him and gave out a powerful flamethrower. The blaziken didnt know what hit him. And with a boom. He fell.

The orange coated trainer look outrage and it look like he was going to get out another red ball that use to capture us. I walk by him when he was going to say go.. but he stop and look down at me walking past him and he said where you going you little vulpix! Our battle not over!

I said vuuuuuull pix pix vull pix translated to for me it is over and then I aim a flamethrower at his head. His head was burn and a piece of his hair was on fire. Then it look like he was going to throw the red ball at me but I was to fast and I use smokescreen to get away. The trainer was lost and I escape running to by razz berries. Man! Spook and Bones were right that trainer is stupid!
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♪And live on to make others happy♪
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It's really cool and good fan fiction.
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You're chapters are getting quite short... and you're grammer is... not the best. "I could hardly understand what you were trying to get through to me. Try to work on that for the next segment.
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I could smell hose razz berries now. The nice mild smell of the berries put a taste in my month, but wait I smell another thing to. It smells like a pokemon. Now I made sure that everybody knows that they should not eat my berries not unless the want to get hurt. I walk up to the bushes that hide and surround my berry bush. I look to see what I against. I saw a small little pokemon with a white body with a giant yellow hat on that looks kinda like a star and it had 3 tags on the 3 corners of the hat-looking thing. I walk up to him then he started to get up when he saw me. I said, Dont run! I not going to hurt you. My name is Razz his scare look disappears and was replaced with a happy look.
He handed me a berry and said, My name is Jirachi. Man I hungry. I have been asleep for a thousand years. I he stop when he saw my surprise look
WHAT!?!?! I said surprising, You been asleep for 1000 years. How is that possible!? Where do you sleep!? he look confuse and just nod.
Well I just do. After doing a few big things I just get tired and sleep in a cave or like one time in the ocean bottom. Now I woke up cold after that one!! BRRRR. I get chills just thinking about that one. Said Jirachi.
I look at he tree and said, I said I wish we had more berries to eat. Sawing that the tree was almost empty. Then all of a sudden there was an orange glow and then a flash. I look at the tree and saw more berries on it. Hoow
It was like Jirachi read my mind and said, It was I. Making wishes come true is what I do. But please dont make me do that all the time or I will go asleep. Pleasssssseeee.
I said Wow that is cool. And yeah I wont do that not unless I near death. (Thinking that that will never happen but I wont do that) Want a berry? I grab two berries and gave one to Jirachi.
Sure he said and he ate it.
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jirachi and me spent all morning talking and eating razz berries. then i hread some thing. jirachi so this in me and ask "what wrong?"

think should i tell him. i mean it could be some trainer wanting to catch me. "i thougt i hread something." then we hread two voices

the first vocie was of a human man saying "houndoom do you smell anything?" the second voice was dark and deep pokemon voice saying "yes master. i smell him over there behind those bushes" the human said "so he over there. ok let go." what is this guy talking about? is he looking for a pokemon? in the bushes? these bushes? and a guy? then is he looking for jirachi? then jirachi is in troble. jirachi saw the worry look on my face.

jirachi said "you think they are looking for me?" i think i should say but i saw jirachi knew my answer and said "then lets hide." then out of no where the bushes in front of us were burning and a guy and a houndoom were there standing
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sorry my last post was so short. this one i think is longer

The houndoom was tall and the guy was dress in black pants and a red shirt but it was what was on the shirt. It had a giant black M on it. It looks kind like a mountain. The memories it brought me. The evil those people had done a year ago. How things were after they left. One in blue and the other in red. One took the famous red orb the other took the also famous blue orb. Hours later it started to rain hard in drops then the sun shine as intense rays and how it burned. The plants and berries died. Some at Mt. Pyre wanted to leave but after they heard it was the same everywhere else few decide to leave. It may have lasted for a few days but it felt like years. Many of us suffer. Many of us starve. Some had pains as if they wanted to die. Some even lost their love ones. then a green ligth from the sky came and every thing was back to normal. "Razz are you crying?" Jirachi said.

"houndoom attack the jirachi. he will be ours. use your flamethrower!!!" the guy with the big M on shirt said. these guys want Jirachi then they need to go througt me!! the flamethrower cmae close to jirachi but i took the hit.

"jirachi run. they want you!! let me take care of these guys." jirachi seem to hear this and flouted away into the forest.

"so you protecting jirachi. well i just i going have to destory you if i want to make my wish." the houndoom seem to agree and just said "rigth Adams"

"who said i was protecting jirachi. i just giving him time to hide and that what i doing now. see ya!!!" and i started to run into the forest as fast as i can."

"go camerupt. chase after that vulpix." i could hear the camerupt going and breaking do trees as i ran and saying "chase chase chase chase CHASE CHASE CHASE CHASE" getting louder and louder and louder. so i ran faster. i dare not to look back and then BOOM, i was hit. his camerupt takle me. he trash me around and hit me. then i saw him the guy name Adams (which was the guy wearing the M on his shirt).

"so you all whats left of jirachi defense. well here a pokeball for all your efforts." i saw the pokeball in his hand he was going to capture me. this is the end for me. after all that trying.

"no razz it would not end like this" i hread spook.

"we promise ypur mother that we will not leting no harm come to you and that what we going to do!!" said bones

spook added "now run. let us take care of this guy!"

"you guys are the best. thank you" after saying that i was what left of my stength and run.

"so you guys are protecting jirachi to so use crunch on them houndoom" the pain of crunch i hread from them. i hread spook said "NOOOOOO" and bones cries. then in a flash of red ligth the were gone. i want to do something go back and help but i knew they will do something to save me.

then the camerupt hit me again. i flew and hit a tree. "so you thougth they will stop me" said adams "well they weren't any good." then at the coner of my eye. i saw jirachi hiding behide a tree and watching. sorry kid but this is near death but i helping you.

in a loud voice i scream in hoping jirachi can hear me i said "i wish that these guys will stop looking for me and that jirachi is able to escape these guys" and then jirachi came from behide the tree and glowed oragen. i hread the Adams said "there you are" but he was to slow. a flash of oragen ligth happen and then an explorson from jirachi and he flew fast into the sky. the adams and his pokemon ran i guess to find him.
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♪And live on to make others happy♪
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Age 34
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19 Years
ok. this one is a bit pg-13 for breif nudity. but it is good. so enjoy :D


I woke up with a massive headache. I also feel different too. Like I am bigger. I cant hear as well as I use to and I feel cold. Then I saw a kid. It was the same kid with the blaziken I defeated earlier this mourning. I hope he wont see me in the state I am in because I am what a trainer would call a perfect condition to catch. The kid look this way and came towards me and said hey are you ooo-oooooo-ka-ka. Okaaaayy? as he moves the bush that was in front of the tree I slam into. Then he just stood there and stare at me.

Man this stupid human has found me and at a bad time. This is exactly what I need right now as a pokemon. I said this while noticing that my voice sounds different.

Excuse me but this stupid human can hear you and I dont know why you saying that because you are human too. Just take a look at your self. Even thought I think you knows this since you have been alive this long. Said the kid who just stopped staring at me.

I was going to say something back but I took a look at myself first and yelled O-O-OHHHHH MY GOOO-DDDNNEEESS. WHAT HAPPEN TO ME!?!?!?!?!?!? I was cover in pale human skin from head to toe. I had long legs like the humans and they have feet on the end with those things call toes. Their was a smooth spot between my legs whish I had no idea what was that. I had a human chest on me then I had two things hanging from the top of the chest right next to each other doing nothing. I seen them on the female humans but what are they? My face also change too. I had a human month and that long nose thing and eyes too with those hair things they call lash. I feel an ear on the side of my head it felt soft but it feels ugly. I felt my hair and I look at it. It was long and red just like my fur I had before. I felt the hair near my eyes and I had three curls on there and hair like before and on the end of my hair had six big curls. Oh my! What happen to me? How did I become a human!

The trainer looks at me and said, Are you ok. What do you mean became a human? You must have notice that you a human since you were born. And then he touches the things hanging from me chest. It was soft but it felt uncomfortable so I slap his hand. Then he said Sorry I never touch there or even seen a naked girl before

Dont touch me! It doesnt feel right. Then he look puzzled so I said So I am human for sure and you can see me as a human. He nodded I added Does a pokemon see me as human? he grab a red and white ball and took out his blaziken and ask does he see me as a human and his pokemon nodded. So I am a really human. But how?

The human look a bit puzzle still and ask What do you mean human. What are you? the guy was confussed and didnt look like he understand what was happening.

I saw his confussion so I ask him Do you want too listen to what has been happening to me. But you need to listen and not say a thing. The guy look to his blazikin and nodded. I told him about how I am a vulpix and how I meant jirachi and the fun time we had. Then the guy with the giant M on his shrit name Adams. How he chase us. Then the wish I made to save Jirachi and me. While I was telling this story his blazikin was sniffing me. The guy was in amazement. By the things I was telling him. Then at last got to the part of me being a human and he finding me here. So do you believe me?

I not sure said the kid. it pretty far-fetch then look towards his blaziken What do you think

His Blaziken was still sniffing me and then said blaz blaz iken when he said that i understood everything he said. I still can understand pokespeech. He said Yes it smeels like a vulpix. The same vulpix who beat us up a time ago

he said he believe me i told the kid. i still understand pokespeech

the kid look around then said I know what he said. I his trainer. And by the way my name is Jay

I was impress that he told me his name so i told him mines Well my name is Razz
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♪And live on to make others happy♪
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Here another chapter. i think i misspell Clothes. if i did would some one tell me and then spell it rigth for me. Please :cross-eye

There we were. I was on the ground. He and Blaze were just standing there and stared until he broke the silence. So what now? You naked and I am not in the mood in catching a vulpix now that I hanging out with one. Then saw that I was still naked.

Well, dont you have any um.. human colthes. I said not believe what I just said.

Then Jay said nervously. Well. I do have clothes but they are a bit big for you. Then he took out a pair of what seems to be long and loosely blue things that look like they go around the human legs.

What I want to know is why I turn human? I asked

then Jay took out a "i don't know what" and said Maybe it was the wording of the wish. Jirachi must meant you asked something else. What was the wish again?

I try to remember what the wish was then i said I think it was 'I wish that Jirachi was able to escape Adams and that he would not look for me'. That what i think it was.

Then Jay pull out a shirt then said That were he misunderstood. The 'he would not look for me' part. He must have been in a hurry and thought the way he would not look for you if you were not a Vulpix. That what i think what happen. Then he laid the clothing on the ground.

Then their was a rustle from a tree. And Blaze said Its a human. Female

Then a girl with short brown hair, black tight 'jeans' I think they call them, a red 'top' they called. Then the female said after looking at me then at Jay Well. Jay I never thought that you were that kind of person. I mean taking her out here and thenwell you know take it to the next level. Then she laugth and said I never knew you had a girlfriend.

a girlfriend? What is that? I asked.

The the girl gave me a look and said Well you seem like a person with knowledge. then look around and continued Well do you love running around nude or it just me that I see no girl clothes around.

I was about to say something but Jay beat me too it and he said She lost her clothes and she is not my girlfriend. She my ...um ... friend. What do you want, Jessica. (i believe that is the girl name. Jessica. That a strange name.) You came out here for a reason.

The girl raise an 'eyebrow' and said Well, i hread you were looking for a Vulpix. So I thought it was because I beat you for the 5th time. And I do hate waiting so i thought I bring the battle to you now. Then she look at the clothing on the ground and said You dressing her in those? Hahaha. Those are to big for her and you have no and I mean no taste in fashion."

Then she drag me and i was force to walk. Walking on two legs is hard. i had no balence. I try but then i just say "No. I ok with the clothes. I like them."

But it did no good. She just drag me on to some bushes ans said, "No i not going to believe that. I have some extras i can let you have and they should fit you alrigth." Then once there I fell to the ground and she snap at me "Get up!!"

I tried but it was a bit hard. In the end i was up and use a tree branch to hold balance. Then she took her bag and lay some clothes down. What it seem like an hour we finally were done. (It took ten mintues to learn how to put clothes on and another ten for i can learn how to walk.)

Jay then said, "You look nice. Better then before"

What i was wearing was a red top. A black skirt and red tigths. What i did not like was the shoes. They were to diffucult to learn who to wear and put on. There was other things she told me about and i didn't question her. She also gave me a small black bag full of other clothes and said it was for other things.

"Well, thank you, but i want to leave now" i said to her wanting to find a way to become a Vulpix again. Then Jay was following me.

Then Jessica raise an eyebrow and said "You not going anywhere with that boy. Because he is going to battle me!"
♪We live to become happy♪

♪And live on to make others happy♪
♪Fellow HCSC: Midori Chi and Pink Tiger♪

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19 Years
I wanted to be more descrpted but didn't want to push a Parental Ratings so keep it like that for the last chapter. Here another one enjoy :rambo:

Jay looked a bit uncertain then he pointed to Blaze and said, Blaze! You up first to battle!

Blaze said, I ready!! and then walk up to the clearing where the battle was going to take place.

Jessica then grab the red and white prison ball and say, Go Seviper! and in a flash of white light a Seviper appear.

The Seviper then look at Blaze and said, It you again. Didnt you and your trainer had enoethe the last time we beat you.

Blaze seem a bit angry and yelled back at the pokemon Jay and me will never give up! We are going to win!

Jessica then said You can go first. It the least I can do. Then she wave her hand to show she skip her turn.

Jay seem a bit angry too. This is when I knew I should help them. They been beaten by this person before and they need to move on so I will help him by using my knowledge of battle. I said, Jay watch out. Her pokemon has the type advantage since it a poison type.

Thanks, but I know Blaze can beat this one. said Jay rudy back. Use flamethrower!!

Blaze then blew a powerful flame at the snake pokemon. Seviper try to be quick and dodge it but it wasnt fast enothe. The attack hit it mark but the snake was still up for battle.

Use poison tail!! said Jessica. With this said the blade tail of Seviper glowed purple and slam into Blaze. He seem a bit shock but he soon recover.

When I saw that I said, Watch it Blaze. That thing is pretty fast. Just dont get poison.

Jay seem a bit angry with me saying that but Blaze said back, Thanks, Razz. I keep that in mind.

Well that a hit but next time i make sure you get poison!! said the Seviper. Then it jump up and attack with another Poison Tail.

Blazekin seem prepare this time and jump out of the way. Use Blaze Kick. Blaze was in the air and then kick down towards the Seviper. The firely kick hit the snake.

Jessica laguth and said Use Poison Fang!!

Seviper two frount fangs glow purple and bit into Blaze's left leg. Blaze let out a cry of pain. Seviper then took the this time to escape and dug hole. It was performing a Dig attack.

Blaze then kneed down in pain. It look like it was poison. I hread him say Where is it and he was searching for something in its fist fur. Then he pull out a small round berry. It was a Lum Berry. These thing are good when a person is in battle and it heals anything.

Jay smile and said I knew that was going to come in handly. Then he look towards the ground and said Blaze watch the ground. Seviper use Dig.

Blaze was waiting then at a moment later he jump up. When he did that Seviper appear where he was but once Blaze saw him he use Flamethrower. Jay Could be hread congratuating Blaze for what he did. Seviper then fainted after that attack.

I then yelled, So there is a brain up in that head of yours. Who Knew?

Jay seem angry. Then Jessica said, That what I always say after he beat my Seviper. She then return her pokemon and sent out another from her bag. This one was a Kecleon.

Kecleon was just moving it's eyes and not saying a thing.

Flamethrower, Blaze. said Jay.

This thing again said Jessica.

This must be where Jay seem to use the battle. Now I must help him but how?

When the Flamethrower attack hit the Kecleon. It turn red. Then Jessica order Kecleon Use Slam!! The Kecleon send out it tongue to slam into Blaze side.

Use Flamethrower again. Said Jay seeming that he doesn't know what to do.

This time the attack seem to do less damage. Jessica smirk and said Use Cut! The Kecleon send out it tongue again and slash Blaze on his chest.

Jay not knowing on what to do. This is when I decide to help him because I know her plan. Jay, I know what the Kecleon. It using it Color Change ability to change his type to the same type as the attack so it won't hurt it self as much. Thus it can attack more to do more damage.

Jessica just laugh and said Well that big coming from a girl who did not know how to put on a pair of jeans.

Jay seem interested and said Then how do i beat Kecleon?

I thought about it and then I told him. Do you have a ground type pokemon?

Yes but it also a poison type too. He told me back.


Never hread of that type but it may work better. I told Jay Use a fighting attack

Jay was confuse but yelled to Blaze, Use Double Kick. Both attacks hit and this change Kecleon color to a brownish-red.

Focus Punch Said Jessica. Kecleon focus himself then fire a punch.

Jay then return Blaze and send out a purple and brown pokemon that I never seen before. Nidoking Use Protect!! The giant pokemon took the hit and was undamaged.

Tell Ni-do-king to use a poison attack I told Jay.

Nidoking just stood there and said I taking no orders except from my master.

I was upset by this remark and said back Well i helping your master so just play along.

Jay was a bit confuse with this conversation but then said Nidoking use Sludge Bomb

Soon a fury of sludge hit Kecleon and he was badly hurt but he got up. Now He was purple.

Giga Drain. Jessica seem confident by this order. Kecleon ran then jump and lash it tongue out sent a shock to drain Nidoking of it health but he seem to stay prepare to fight.

Now use and ground attack. I told Jay and seem to smile.

Jay then send a smile and said I know which one to use. Then he look at Nidoking and said Use Earthquake!!

Nidoking smiled too and said That how I like it.! He then stomp the ground and made it shake. This attack did major damage to Kecleon and it could not stood up too the attack and fainted.

What?!?!?! How is that possible. No one have been able to counter my Kecleon's Color Change. Said Jessica in surprise while she return her pokemon.

Jay return his Nidoking and said, Couldn't have done it without Razz helping me though. She did gave me the idea to counter after counter. Simple type disadvantage.

I seem to be a bit embrass with this kind of flattery and i said Well, I just though that I could help him. That was a simple plan. Not much of a way to counter it. Then I went to stand beside Jay.

Well see you loser later. Jessica said and then left towards the forest. Then wave at us good bye and siad You guys may want to take a look at the Pokemon Contest in Lilycove City. You may find them interseting.

Contest? I said not knowing what that was.

Well let go to Lilycove City. I need to heal my pokemon. So let go. Like I said I hanging out with a Vulpix and I guess I should help you became a vulpix.

I laugth and said I don't need your help but I travel with you until I become back to normal. Until then I help you become a better trainer because your battling skills are pretty bad.

Jay took some time to think about what I just said then he understood what I said and i ran with him chasing after me.
♪We live to become happy♪

♪And live on to make others happy♪
♪Fellow HCSC: Midori Chi and Pink Tiger♪

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19 Years
Time for a new Chapter ;)

Jay and me walked down the path to the exit of the mountain. Then Jay pointed out to a small little house near the exit. He asked, Who lives in that house?

I look towards the house and said, You know what? The house looks so much smaller now. I mean when I was a vulpix. The house was bigger.

Jay was a bit annoyed but said The house was bigger to you because you were short. Now you are taller. So what about the house. Who lives there? then pointed to the house again.

I took a look of the house again and said The guardians live there. They protect the Mt. Prye.

Jay gave me a puzzle look and said, Guardians? What do they do? Then shook his head and said Are you talking about those two old couple?

I nodded and said They may be old but there are very powerful. They see things. They got the orb back.

We continued walking down the path and he then said What they see. How they got the orb back?

You don't know about the orb that help keep the balance of nature!! The orbs that if separated! They will cause endless rain and sunlight for days. Weren't you here a year ago when the nature balance was off! I said then stop and began to talk softly and continued to say, When those men took the... orb. When they... I stop there. Jay is just a human. He won't understand.

He said What were you going to say? Who did what?

I compose myself and said It nothing. The men with the red coats and with the M-symbol came and took the orb.

You talking about Team Magma and when the weather went crazy. Jay said. I didn't even know they had a name. He nodded and said I didn't know that they started that stuff. I remember that. I also remember a green light and then the crazy stuff stop.

The Guardians sent two children trainer, one male and one female, no older then you to retrieve the orb. I didn't believe in him, but they came back . With the orb in their hands. I smile and said They saw that they were special and they knew they could do it.

Jay smile and said You crazy. The world could not be save by some two kids. I know I could not do it and they can't do it too. You must have been disullsional at the time.

We reach the water and I said How do we cross the water? I don't know how to swim.

Jay smile and said We don't swim. We will surf. With that said he grab a blue, red and white ball and open it. With that a blue ball sea pokemon appear. This pokemon is called wailmer.

This pokemon then said Err. Where to now?

Hey Hydro! Jay said to the wailmer. That must be it's name. Just swim us back to the shore a bit north of here.

We got on the pokemon. It didn't feel right. I also almost fell into the water. I don't like getting wet!!

Hydro then said Who this human girl? I know that Jay has no girlfriend.

I snapped back at him and said I can understand you, unlike Jay, and my name is Razz. I also not a human. I a vulpix.

Hydro chuckled and said That funny, Razz. You think you a vulpix? Well I a torchic.

I got mad at him and said back I really am a vulpix!!

He chuckled again and said Believe what you like.

When we reach the shore. Thank goodness. Then I bit Hydro. When I bite him. It hurts a lot. It was different when I was a pokemon. Didn't hurt as much.

What you did that for? asked Jay.

Nothing. Lets get to where we need to go. I told Jay.

We walked to a building in a place that was surrounded by other buildings that were mush more bigger then the one we entered. I was about to asked what is this place. A female human dress in white came up to Jay.

She then said to him and said Are you Jay Away?

Jay nodded and said Why?

The red headed female then said You have a message on the PC.
♪We live to become happy♪

♪And live on to make others happy♪
♪Fellow HCSC: Midori Chi and Pink Tiger♪

Age 37
Here I am now both white and red; all so the stone to quicken the dead
Seen July 17th, 2005
Posted June 15th, 2005
27 posts
18.2 Years
You have a very interesting plotline, but your delivery is completely shot by your lack of proper spelling, punctuation, grammar, and diction in general. Work on your sentence and paragraph construction and also your chapter length (your chapters are very short; ask yourself if a chapter would be better suited to be a part of the previous chapter; or, perhaps several of these mini-chapters would be better suited as one entire chapter?). A little less redoubling your letters and/or punctuation would be nice, also. :)

Do you save your chapters to a computer? If so, you shouldn't be so hasty to post each bit that you write immediately after you write it. You should proofread before posting, and you should check to see if the chapter contains a complete thought.
Age 34
A place where happiness grows on tress
Seen March 23rd, 2009
Posted March 23rd, 2009
1,895 posts
19 Years
Jay seem happy and ran towards a large white thing with a screen. I guess this is the PC the red headed lady spoke about. When I caught up to Jay, I saw him speaking to a man with a small white beard. Hi Uncle Jim! said Jay to the guy in the screen.

The guy responded back, who I guess was Uncle Jim, said, Well, how is my favorite pokemon master in training? Keeping up with your training right?

Jay said, Like always. Just got done beating a trainer.

The Uncle Jim smiled back and said Well good. Then he shot a look at me and said Who the young lady? But, let me introduce myself first. I am Professor Jim Away. I am Jay's uncle.

I was not sure what to do. A man inside a white box was talking to me. So I acted like I was talking to Jay. I told the man in the box, My name is Razz and I am a... That was when Jay cover my mouth.

He whisper into my ear and said My uncle does not need to know that you are a vulpix.

Then we were interrupted by his uncle who said, What was she going to say?

Jay finish my sentence by saying My friend Razz is a vulpix fan. A very big one. She even wish she was a vulpix.

His Uncle Jim gave me a strange look and said, Well ok. I called to wish you happy birthday and give you your gift.

Jay was filled with excitement and said Thanks! What is it?

Well it from the place I working right now and I could get in trouble but it be ok. said his Uncle Jim.

Jay seem a bit surprise and said Where are you working now? Last time you called you were in Mt. Silver in Johto. Is it a larvitar? Those pokemon are very rare.

His uncle shook his head and said, No. I left that place months ago. Now I here in Cinnabar Island in the Kanto region. Working on a fossil pokemon project. Then he lower his voice and said We bring fossil pokemon back to live here. That what your present is.

Then a machine next to us beeped. Then in a flash of light a red and white ball appear. Jay ran to it and said What is it?

His uncle Jim look around and said, It an aerodactyl. This one is a clam one so you be able to control it. I was able to sneak past the guys yo be able to give it to you. So happy birthday. I best leave before the rest of the guys asked what I doing. Bye Jay and bye Miss Razz. With that said the screen turned black.

What happened? I asked. Is he stuck inside that box. Can we free him?

That was my Uncle Jim. He a pokemon researcher. He research pokemon and he was just calling me to give me this pokemon as my birthday present. You do know what a birthday is right?

I nodded and said, Yes. Is it like a hatching-day celebration? That when a pokemon is hatch from an egg. That reminded me of my oldest sister, Ruby.

She had ruby red eyes. Hate to say it but she was more beautiful then me. Her coat was bright red and and smooth silkily tails to match. I believe today is her birthday too. Today is also the day that she was taken away from me. She was capture in one of those red and white balls by a female human.

He then nodded and asked So what now?

I look up at him and said Well I want to speak to the guardians and ask for their help.

He look at me strange but the red headed lady said Are you speaking about the elders of Mt. Prye. They were just here. I think they said they were going to the pokemon contest at the pokemon contest hall. You may want to go see if they are there.

Then we go to the contest hall. Jay said and then he grabbed my arm and pull me out of the building and before I knew it. I was inside another building.

Where are we?, I asked and look around to see if I can find the guardians. Then I heard a familiar voice. It sounded like my sister, Ruby. I look around and saw a ninetails. She may look different but I can tell that she was my sister. I started to walk towards her.

Jay was about to answer my question until he saw me leaving his side. He asked, What are you doing?

The girl walk away from the ninetails which left me alone with the ninetails. I walk up to the ninetails and asked, Excuse me, but is your name Ruby?

The ninetails look up and answered in surprise, Yes, but how do you know that? I haven't been called that in a long time.

I thought to myself that, she is my sister. Nobody talks back like that to anybody she may not know I responded back and said, This may sound far out but I am you sister, Razz.

My sister, Ruby, eyes widen when I told her the last part. She then look deep into my eyes. After a moment of silence she put her head on my human shoulder and said What happen? How?

I then told her everything that has happen since she left. I told her about dad and our little sister. The Team Magma and the green light. Finally I told her about Adams, Jirachi and the wish. I saw a tear fell from her eyes and I wiped it off.

Razz, I not sure who is in it worse. You or me? Ive been miserable. She then look down and then into my face and continued, I may have won a few of these 'contests' and I have been groomed and well taken care of, but this human, Anna, has given me a name I hate.

I was interested and asked What is your name that this human name you? It can't be worse then the one that was named Sarafe.

OHHH! It even worse! She then look and around and said, She named me, Lisa

I scream and said, EEEEE. You are right. She named you like you were a pet. Lisa is such an ugly name. I said in response to her name.

Jay then tap my shoulder and said, Sorry to interrupt but her owner is coming. I think you may want to leave now.

I was angry how that girl named my older sister and I said No. I may be a human but I need to do something to help my sister.

The girl was dressed in a short red mini skirt, a red and white strip blouse and a red hat to cover her shoulder long brown hair. She then saw me how I was near her ninetails and asked, Why are you like that to my Lisa?

You own her! Do you know how sad she is. She is so miserable. I told her.

She then got angry too and told me back, And who are you to tell me my Lisa is not happy. I treat her like a queen even when she does lose a contest.

I then said I am ... but, once again, Jay interrupted me and said, This girl is able to tell if a pokemon is happy.

The girl then smile and said, So you one of those people who can look into ones pokemon's feelings and tell if its happy. Why is she so unhappy?

I was uncertain but said, Yes. I am one of those people. then I heard her question and said, She unhappy not because you don't treat her good but, she hates her name. She doesn't like her name. She hates the name Lisa.

The girl then said, She never complain before.

I then laugh and said, How can you tell? Can you understand pokespeech? I shock my head and thought what a silly human.

Then I heard my sister and said Tell her what name I want. My true name.

I then nodded and said Your ninetails like the name Ruby. It describes her beauty. It describes her eyes which shows up a lot.

Jay then added and said If you renamed her that she will be happier, and the chance of winning contests will be raised higher.

She then put up a smile and said I think I saw a renaming guy around this city. I think I name her Ruby like you said. I saw my sister smile and then the girl left with Ruby following her.

I then smile and said under my breath, Happy hatching-day celebration, Ruby.
♪We live to become happy♪

♪And live on to make others happy♪
♪Fellow HCSC: Midori Chi and Pink Tiger♪