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Here is Chapter 2!
Chapter 2: The last Dragon
Dawn woke up to see Ash relaxing in the hot spring.
" Dawn, you're up!" said Ash, " You should get in the spring. It's so relaxing. It's also helping my injuries." Dawn got up.
" Maybe it is a good idea." said Dawn, " I'm lucky I have my bathing suit." She got up and walked behind a bush to change. Once she was done, she came out, put her hat on the ground and went in. Dawn could feel the heat. It WAS relaxing. " Wow, Ash, this IS relaxing," said Dawn. She swam to the middle of the spring. Ash followed.
" Dawn, I don't know why but my injuries are gone!" said Ash. Just then the water started vibrating.
"
Ash, whats happening?" asked Dawn. Her voice was was being messed with by the vibrations. Dawn held on to Ash.
" The spring is being drained!" yelled Ash. The spring's water level kept getting lower. After 1 minute the spring was completly drained. Ash and Dawn started slipping down towards the giant hole that drained the spring. The ground was too wet and too steep.Dawn shrieked in terror.
" Oh crap!" yelled Ash. Chills went down his spine. They fell in. Dawn's shrieking echoed through the giant hole.
Brock awoke to find pikachu staring at his face.
" Pikachu?" asked Brock. Then he gasped. " Where's Ash and Dawn?!" asked Brock
" Pika" said pikachu, pointing at the direction Ash fell.
" Oh My Gawd!" said Brock. Pikachu jumped on his shoulder. Brock started running where Ash fell.
Ash awoke. He found himself surrounded by people. They were chattering. Dawn was awake beside him.
" Ash, whats happening?" asked Dawn. She was terrorfied.
" I don't know," said Ash. Then the people seperated, showing an older woman.
" It's true." said the woman, " The proficy was true."
" What proficy?! Who are you people?! And what the heck's going on?! I demand an explanation now!" Ash yelled.
" Come, come, children. You will get an explanation soon enough," said the elderly woman. She leaded them to a wall. " This, is the proficy." she said, " It says that one day, a young couple shall fall from the kapatika well, and into the village. There the couple shall get some supplies and armor and then set off to the magical world of The Dawn of Ash. There they shall travel to the lair of The Last Dragon. They will defeat the dragon and come back as heroes of the village."
" That's weird. And we can't slay a dragon! It's impossible!" Dawn complained.
" Do not worry children." siad the woman, " you shall get powers you never dreamed of once you enter The Dawn of Ash."
Brock and Pikachu got to the hot spring. It was filled. And Ash and Dawn's equipment were gone.
" Oh No." said Brock. " They probably went off to the closest town!"
Ash and Dawn were in leather armor and had swords and sheilds. They were ready.
" Once you go through the gate, search for the dragon's lair." said the woman.
" Understood," said Ash. Ash and Dawn gulped. They stepped through the gate.
Do Ash and Dawn have what it takes to survive? Find out!
Next time, Chapter 3: The Dawn of Ash