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Other Anime vs 4th Gen. Legendaries

Note: As you can probably tell... this fanfiction is called Other Anime vs 4th Gen. Legendaries. What does it mean? Read and find out. But... let me make two things clear RIGHT NOW. 1. I will NOT describe ANY of the Pokemon or Pokemon characters in this fic because of where I am posting it. If you don't know what the characters or pokemon look like, and your to lazy to Image Google them or look them up here or somewhere else, that's YOUR problem not mine. Besides, if you don't know what the 4th generation pokemon look like, what are you doing here? Exactly. 2. This is a HUGE crossover fic. Here's the technical crossover: Rurouni KenshinxNarutoxBleachxBoBoBo-Bo-Bo-BoBoxMarxZatch BellxPokemon. Don't worry, I'm not a fool, I'll describe all THOSE characters, just not the Pokemon ones. Don't like that? Get over it or don't read it. That is all. Oh, I'm somewhat known for prologues, but no prologue for this fic. Well... now that my rant is over... read for the first chapter? Oh, and one more thing, since I have to describe ALL of those other characters most of the first couple of chapters will be descriptions of them. Sorry, but would you rather have me not describe them? Exactly. Please just deal with me for now... I PROMISE it'll get MUCH better in time...

Note 2: DO NOT FLAME!!!!!!!!!!!!! FLAMES WILL BE IGNORED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm only saying that once. One chapter per day so I can get back to where I stopped, then one per week. Try to keep up please. Thanks.

Chapter 1: Kenshin's Group!!

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Two people were inside a dojo, seemingly waiting for someone.

One was a pretty muscular guy. He had long red hair that he had in a ponytail. But, the ponytail was still long enough and it went down to the bottom of his back, but above his hip. He had blue eyes and white skin. He had a red, but white on the inside, samurai robe or jacket that was opened at his chest, revealing his chest, and some of his chest muscles. He had some white medical tape on his chest, covering some of his chest and abdomen. It covered a wound that was still healing. He wore a white samurai dress on his legs, white socks, and tan sandals on his feet. A woman was next to him.

This woman had black hair that was in a ponytail as well, but it only went down to below her shoulders. She had black eyes and white skin. She was wearing a yellow kimono that had many decorations of pink flowers on it. She also wore white socks and tan sandals on her feet. They were talking.

"Man, I hope Yahiko and Sanosuke get here soon..." remarked the woman

"Don't worry, I'm sure they'll be here soon Kaoru" assured the man.

Kaoru Kamiya, the woman, quickly got angry as she had an anger mark on her head and her eyes became all white

"They'd better be!! Because I am NOT missing the train!!" declared Kaoru.

Kenshin Himura, the man, just stared somewhat blankly at her. Kaoru calmed down all of a sudden.

"Besides, this is the first vacation we've been able to take, plus, this is the first time we've been able to be together for a long time" informed Kaoru

"Yes, that's true" remarked Kenshin.

All of a sudden, a kid with a wooden Sanin, a wooden practice sword, came bursting into the dojo. It was Yahiko Myoujin.

Yahiko had short, black, spiky hair. He had black eyes and tannic skin. He also wore a samurai robe, but it was yellow with multiple black decorations on it. But, he had it buttoned up at front, so you couldn't see his chest. He was a pretty muscular kid, though. He had a yellowish-tannic samurai dress on with white socks and tannic sandals on his feet, as well. Kaoru and Kenshin noticed Yahiko and turned toward him. Kaoru quickly got in that angry state again.

"There you are Yahiko!! Where have you been?!" demanded Kaoru, of course Yahiko responded angrily as well.

"Hey!! I got here as fast as I could, okay?!" shouted Yahiko. Kenshin quickly got in-between them and stopped them from yelling at one another.

"Now, now you two..." started Kenshin "So... is Sanosuke ready?"

"Yeah, but..." started Yahiko as he looked at Kaoru like she was stupid "I still don't think this'll work"

"Hey!! You have a better idea?! Sanosuke is still wanted you know..." reminded Kaoru.

Kenshin started ignoring them as a puff of smoke formed in the background as Kaoru and Yahiko started pummeling each other.

Kenshin opened the dojo doors, and there was a yellow barrel there. This barrel was normally used to carry food. But, the top of the barrel started lifting off and Sanosuke's head popped up. Kenshin sweatdropped.

Sanosuke had big, black, spiky hair. He had black eyes, white skin, and a red fighter headband on . He was a pretty strong built guy, and pretty muscular, too. He had a white and black jacket on, with no shirt underneath, so you could see Sanosuke's chest muscles as well. On the back of his jacket was the Japanese kanji for "bad." He had white sweat pants on and black shoes.

Sanosuke quickly stood up in the barrel, and Kenshin leaned backwards some, still sweatdropping, and Sanosuke was mad.

"Hey!! You call this a plan?! It's stupid!! Let's do something else!! I'm tired of hiding in this barrel!!" shouted Sanosuke.

Kaoru and Yahiko stopped fighting, and Kaoru quickly rushed over to Sanosuke and was still angry.

"Get over it!! You're still wanted so this is the only way to get you to come with us on our vacation!!"

You see... the plan was to bring the barrel onto the train and say it was just "food for the trip." It probably could of worked, but they would never know that. Kenshin finally stopped all the arguing.

"Guys enough!! We're going to miss the train if we keep stalling like this" informed Kenshin, Kaoru sweatdropped.

"Oh! That's right! Let's get going then!!" decided Kaoru

Sanosuke reluctantly went back into the barrel and Kenshin picked it up and carried it on his back. It was very heavy, obviously, but Kenshin didn't even seem to mind it. As they left, though, the sun was shining brighter than usual, so everyone had to block their eyes with their right arms to prevent from being blinded. But, it kept getting brighter. Kenshin realized something.

"Something's wrong. The sun's NEVER this bright. What's going?" thought Kenshin.

And then, Kenshin's group was gone. Yes, gone, seemingly disappeared into thin air. The barrel Kenshin had fell to the ground and the top had fallen off. The barrel... was empty. Sanosuke was gone, too.

To be continued...

P.S.: I have nothing to say. Review, don't review, do whatever the hell you want. I'm finishing this fanfiction one way or another, so, it doesn't matter to me.
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Note: Naruto fans, I suggest you show up now, because, well, you'll see...

Chapter 2: The Leaf Ninja!!


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There were four people, three kids and an adult, inside a hotel. Every ninja in this town had a blue band with a metal center and the town signia, a spiral that looked like a leaf, etched into the center of the band. All ninja also had blue and white tape on their right leg that held a blue pouch with contained their kunai's, or throwing knives, and a brownish bag behind their left leg containing their shuriken's, or their throwing stars.

One had short, spiky, yellow hair, blue eyes and white skin. His band was on his forehead as a headband. He had an orange, blue, and white jacket on. It was blue on his shoulders and in a horizontal stripe on his waist area and it was white around his neck. It had a red circle on the center on his back with a black spiral in it. He had orange pants on with blue sandal shoes on his feet that only showed his toes. It was Naruto Uzumaki.

One had long, black hair, black eyes, and white skin. He also had his band on his forehead as a headband. He wore a black T-shirt with the Konoha symbol on the center on the back. Which looked like a fishing lure, red on top, white on the bottom. He had white tape on both arms from his elbows to his wrists, with a blue, belt like thing on his right arm, over his tape. He had black pants on with those same blue shoe sandals on his feet. It was Sasuke Uchiha.

One had short, pink hair, green eyes and white skin. She had her band on top of her head as a headband. She had a red tanktop dress on with an outline of a circle near the bottom of the dress and on the center on the back of the dress. She had black shorts on with the blue shoe sandals on her feet. It was Sakura Haruno.

The last was the adult. He had silver, somewhat spiky hair, black eyes, and white skin. His band was in a diagonal, foreword slash. The band covered his right eye, which contained his Sharingan, a special ninja ability to predict and copy the opponent's moves and movements. Sasuke had this as well, except in both eyes and he was born with it. This guy just had his put in. He also had a dark blue bandana covering his mouth and nose. He had a green vest on with the red circle and the black spiral in it on the center on the back of the vest and a dark blue shirt underneath that had a red circle with a black spiral in it on his left shoulder. He had dark blue pants on with the same blue shoe sandals on his feet. Kakashi Hatake, Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura's "sensei" or ninja trainer. A conversation started, but Naruto quickly got angry.

"Why are they coming?! I thought this was suppose to be a vacation with only us and our group!!" declared Naruto

"Naruto, they have worked just as hard as you guys have, so, they deserve a vacation too." informed Kakashi

"Yeah, but, I hope they get here soon. I'd like some time to relax before something else happens" remarked Sakura

"Exactly!!" added Naruto

"Some rest would be nice..." commented Sasuke

"Man... Shikamaru isn't going to come! He's to lazy!!" remarked Naruto

"Actually, I heard Asuma's making him come to "relax with other ninja and not just himself" " informed Kakashi

"Speaking of which..." added Sasuke as he pointed.

Shikamaru Nara, another kid, had shown up.

Shikamaru had black hair that he had in a ponytail. He had black eyes and white skin. He had a gray jacket on with a brown shirt on the inside with a black, fishnet-like shirt covering over that. He had a blue circle outline on his right shoulder with a blue line going down the middle of the circle vertically on his right shoulder and on the center of his back. He had his band on his left shoulder as an armband. He had brown pants on with white and blue tape on his right leg and the same blue shoe sandals on his feet.

"Man... what a drag... I can relax anytime I want, by myself" remarked Shikamaru

"Yeah, well, it's about time you spent some time with other ninja" remarked Kakashi

"Yeah! Besides, we'll have some fun!!" assured Naruto as he smiled big at Shikamaru and gave him a thumbs up with his right hand.

"Yeah... uh-huh..." commented Shikamaru as he sweatdropped

"I am coming, too!!" announced someone.

Everyone looked to see who said that. It was Rock Lee, another kid.

Lee had black, bowl-shaped hair, black bushy eyebrows, black eyes and white skin. He had a green shirt on with white tape from his elbows all the way to his fingers on both arms. He had green pants on with his band on his waist, except his band was reddish-brown. It made it look like a belt, but it wasn't. He had orangish leg coverings on his ankles and the blue shoe sandals on his feet. But, he also had a tannic crutch with him that he leaned on.

"Lee... Guy told me, but, are you sure?" asked Kakashi.

Lee smiled, his teeth shined, and he gave the group a thumbs up as he answered

"Yes. Besides, Guy thinks I might heal faster if I am with other people, other ninja, and am with my friends"

"Alright. Then you're welcome to come with us" smiled Kakashi

But then, a bright light encased the room, and everyone gasped. Kakashi searched the room.

"A teleportation jutsu?! But who... how...?!"
wondered Kakashi.

But, Kakashi had no time to wonder, as everyone in the room seemingly vanished, into thin air. Looks like the group weren't getting their vacation either...

To be continued...

P.S.: Again?! Geez...
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Note: Okay Bleach fans, now it's your turn to show up. To be honest, Bleach is the only reason why this fanfiction is rated T/PG-13, but, oh well. '

Chapter 3: Ryoka?!

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Two people were apparently inside an underground training arena that was full of dirt, rocks, and cliffs. They were both guys, and the training area was below a shop.

One guy had spiky orange hair, blue eyes, and white skin. He had a white shirt on that was red on the sleeves and on the back, and white on the front with an orange skull design on the front as well, around his chest area. He was wearing blue jeans and white shoes. It was a "substitute soul reaper," but this kid had his own soul reaper power as well. A soul reaper killed and cleansed bad souls called "Hollows" and also helped ghosts move on to the soul society, where the dead and the other soul reapers, lived. His name was Ichigo Kurosaki.

His trainer was with him. This man was, basically, teaching Ichigo how to fight "properly" so he could defeat the other soul reapers in the soul society and save his friend that helped him a lot with Hollows and the spiritual stuff in general; Rukia Kuchikii. The guy had dirty blonde hair, green eyes, and tannic yellow skin. He wore a beach-like hat on his head that's color was a vertical stripe pattern of tannic-yellow and green. He had this same kind of color jacket on with a black T-shirt on under it. He had the same tannic-yellow and green vertical stripe pattern on his baggy pants that he was wearing. He wore tannic sandals and white socks on his feet. This man also was the owner of a store with mystical and special items from the soul society. This training facility was under his store. It was Urahara Kisuke.

"All right. Now let's work on your dodging" informed Urahara.

"Alright" remarked Ichigo as he got ready, but, Urahara put up his right hand and shook his index finger left and right.

"Ah, ah, ah. You won't be dodging my attacks" informed Urahara

"Huh? Then who..." started Ichigo, but then, someone showed up.

This guy had black hair, black eyes, and silver rimmed, square glasses over his eyes. He had a white and blue shirt and white and blue pants and white shoes. He had the most blue on his right arm and it looked like a plus sign. It was a Quincy, who just killed Hollows instead of “cleansing” them like soul reapers do, which caused this kid to hate soul reapers. Except Ichigo for some reason. It was Uuryu Ishida.

“Uuryu?!” gasped Ichigo.

Uuryu quickly fixed his glasses with his right hand’s fingers and remarked

“Yes. Is that a problem?” asked Uuryu

“Nope. I’ll dodge your attacks” smirked Ichigo

“Yes, and besides, Uuryu needs some training, too” informed someone.

Ichigo looked to see who said that. But, it wasn’t someone, it was something.

It was just a black cat with green eyes that could talk. It was Urichii. Ichigo sweatdropped.

“Man… I can not get over the fact that cat is able to talk” mumbled Ichigo.

Urichii got angry, though.

“Hey!! I heard that!!” shouted Urichii.

Ichigo sweatdropped again and remarked

“Sorry…”

But then, a bright light encased the group, and they looked for a way to stop it, but couldn’t.

“What’s going on?!” gasped Ichigo

“I don’t know, but stay on guard everyone!!” suggested Urichii.

Then, they were gone.

Meanwhile…

A stuffed lion toy was moving around!! It was Kon, who was a Mod Soul that was made for fighting by the soul society, but it was to powerful, so they trashed them all. It tried to steal Ichigo’s body, but Ichigo stopped it and Kon wised up and started to help Ichigo whenever he needed it. But, it was in a stuffed toy that couldn’t do much. It also was wearing a small headband on its head and throwing punches in the air.

“Alright!! Now I’m ready to save my beloved Rukia!!” remarked Kon.

But then, the bright light encased Kon as well, and Kon tensed up.

“What the?!” gasped Kon.

Kon disappeared, too. What the hell was going on?!

To be continued…

P.S.: Kon?! What’s he going to do? Whine so much he wins? Am I right? ^_^'
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Note: Okay Zatch Bell fans, now it's your turn. ^_^'

Chapter 4: Mamodo and Book Owner

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Two people were inside a bedroom inside a regular sized house. One was a teenager, the other was just a little kid, but, it wasn't the teen's little brother or anything like that. The little kid wasn't even related to the teen.

The teen had black hair, black eyes, and white skin. He had a white button shirt on that was buttoned up all the way. He had black pants on and white shoes. This kid was basically a genius and could solve any equation in school, which is why he always did perfectly in school. He was also a good strategist when it came to fighting. But, everyone in his school didn't like him or would be his friend because of his smarts. That is until the little kid showed up and changed everything, for the better, too. His name was Kiyo Takamine.

The little kid had blond hair, blue eyes, and white skin. He had a dark blue kid dress on with a yellow bow on the dress around the kid's neck. He had dark blue shoes on as well. The kid also had dark lines above and below both his eyes. It was because he was a Mamodo, a kid with special power. His name was Zatch Bell. He helped Kiyo stand up for himself, be strong, and basically help him get friends that he hasn't had for a long time. But, Zatch couldn't remember anything from the Mamodo world, because his memory was erased by his doppelganger, Zeno. Kiyo was helping Zatch get his memory back and helping Zatch's goal of becoming a "kind king."

Kiyo also had a red book with a weird cover and strange lettering inside it with him. You see, the battle for Mamodo King had begun again and the only way the Mamodo could fight was to find a chosen human partner who could read their books. That was the only way to use their spells. They started a conversation.

"We still have to get stronger Zatch" reminded Kiyo

"Yeah" remarked Zatch

"Especially if we're going to beat strong Mamodo's like Brago or Zofis" reminded Kiyo

"Yeah..." sighed Zatch

"But, don't worry. As long as we work together and get more spells, we'll be fine" remarked Kiyo

"Yeah, you're right, Kiyo" smiled Zatch, but, he continued "But, you know, I kinda wish we could face a strong opponent before we go after Zofis, to get stronger, you know?" asked Zatch

"Yeah, that probably would help" replied Kiyo.

Kiyo looked out the window and looked up into the sky.

"Hey Zatch, you think there are other people out there that have had the same, or similar, problems that we've had?" asked Kiyo

"I don't know, Kiyo. Maybe..." answered Zatch

"If there are, I bet they're just as strong, maybe stronger, than us. Which is just another reason we need to get stronger" remarked Kiyo

"Yup" replied Zatch

As soon as they said all that, though, the same blinding, encasing light covered Kiyo's room.

"What's going on, Kiyo?!" gasped Zatch

"I don't know Zatch!! Just brace yourself!!" suggested Kiyo

Then, as expected, Kiyo and Zatch disappeared. This is starting to get annoying...

To be continued...

P.S.: Isn't it, though? >_>;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
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Um... excuse me, you were wondering where everyone had gone before, correct? I think most of us left when you told us you weren't describing the Pokemon characters and Legendaries, then called us lazy for not googling them, and idiots in the bargain. We aren't lazy, we just don't expect to do your job for you. It's the writer's job to make sure the characters in his story, original or no, are well-described. In addition to that, your chapters are repetitive. Yes, everyone's leaving to wherever they're supposed to go, but relatively little plot development has occurred. In addition, your title gives too much away. Why read if we already know exactly what's going to happen? In addition, the story itself is just kind of flaky. It doesn't look like it's going anywhere fast, and the concept is just kind of silly to boot. I mean, I'm wondering how you're going to justify fourth-gen legendaries pulling everyone into a room and fighting with them? And how on earth is cross-universe fighting gonna work? You can't seriously argue that physics in Ruroken and Bo-Bobobo are going to be compatible with each other, much less all four universes, and that isn't even getting into the fact that Kenshin wouldn't fight anyway unless something precious to him was being threatened. The balance of power between combatants is off as well. Beings that control time, space, and heaven knows what else squaring off with a few ordinary mortals with odd but much less powerful abilities and a Soul Reaper or two? We already know the logical outcome of the battle. In short, I think that in premise and execution your fic is a bit lacking. Please edit and come back soon with either an incredibly cool-sounding version or an entirely new fic. No offense to you personally, but you need a bit more to justify this fic then that if you ever want to improve as a writer.

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It's hilarious how you attack us before we even come and critique, and evade your duties as the writer with silly excuses and search engine references-- The plot is weak, weak in terms of tangibility and conceptuality. Please don't tell me that's all you got... The title itself is dull. The dialogue is monotone, ordinary and too casual... In other words, boring. Very little plot development took place and descriptions are fixed in and unnatural to me. Punctuation is horrible.

ACC's points are strong too.

This is now closed as it doesn't meet the standards of PC's writing sections.
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Ok this just needs a lot of work, i won't even go into detail, just look at it yourself before you submit. Hope you do better :P

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*Ahem*

MAJOR ANNOUNCEMENT PLEASE READ:

This fanfiction has officially been forcefully canceled by complainers (I won't mention any names *cough* *cough*) I have taken it off of ALL the sites/threads that I've posted them in. (If it wasn't already closed which it was/is in 2/3 areas I posted it in.) I've deleted the story itself from fanfiction.net. I will NOT screw around with this fanfiction. I truly believe it was fine as it already was.

Don't even try.

Just close it for good.

Thank you and goodbye.
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*Ahem*

MAJOR ANNOUNCEMENT PLEASE READ:

This fanfiction has officially been forcefully canceled by complainers (I won't mention any names *cough* *cough*) I have taken it off of ALL the sites/threads that I've posted them in. (If it wasn't already closed which it was/is in 2/3 areas I posted it in.) I've deleted the story itself from fanfiction.net. I will NOT screw around with this fanfiction. I truly believe it was fine as it already was.

Don't even try.

Just close it for good.

Thank you and goodbye.

Woah come down man. It just needed some improvements and I believe your cough coughing CWTA,P but hes really just trying to help out. If you have a piece of shlock, which i'm not saying it is, hes going to move it here. But if you really feel that were all complainers than fine, but this is how the fanfiction section goes here on PC.
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The Mega Champion, I deeply regret your entrance, your pride and your immaturity regarding this story. I don't appreciate the fact that you wasted our time and called us "complainers" when you're the whining coward that's unable to take constructive critcism unless it's positive to the ego.

People who want to help you won't take titles like those from you neither they will give you most sugary replies you seem to expect when they are to revise such work.

There is no excuse, your fanfic was horribleand I hope you grow up soon.

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